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gay
>>9305337cuck?
>>9305337is
>>9305422okay
>>9305436occasionally
(Probably won't post here often because I'm shy) If anyone is ever interested I RP as Nick Wilde a lot on shamchat. I use the zootopia tag. I'm not gonna be on there again till tomorrow but I would love to see another zootopia RPer on there some time. Thanks.
>>9305337>>9305410>>9305422>>9305436>>9305446gay cuck is okay occasionally
>>9305446if prey
>>9305472But not all the time
>>9305482is castrated
>>9305470If you ever come up with an OC or roll a Zoosona, that'd be fun to see
>>9305600ONE
>>9305611Sleep tight bunner
>>9305527Like I said I'm shy so I'm not gonna post often but we'll see.
>>9305607OF US
>>9305820IS WEARING
>>9305849A DILDO
>>9305857ON
>>9305849A PUSHUP BRA
>>9305874THEIR FOREHEAD
>>9305874THEIR
>>9305883IT'S LACY
>>9305195>/ztg/ - Zootopia General: Loving Quad EditionFucking seriously?Go fuck yourself.Goodnight you crybabies, I'm done for a while
>>9305884WELLTHE YEARS START COMIN' AND THEY DON'T STOP COMIN' AND THEY DON'T STOP COMIN' AND THEY DON'T STOP COMIN' AND THEY DON'T STOP COMIN' AND THEY DON'T STOP COMIN' AND THEY DON'T STOP COMIN' AND THEY DON'T STOP COMIN' AND THEY DON'T STOP COMIN' AND THEY DON'T STOP COMIN' AND THEY DON'T STOP COMIN' AND THEY DON'T STOP COMIN' AND THEY DON'T STOP COMIN' AND THEY DON'T STOP COMIN' AND THEY DON'T STOP COMIN' AND THEY DON'T STOP COMIN' AND THEY DON'T STOP COMIN' AND THEY DON'T STOP COMIN' AND THEY DON'T STOP COMIN' AND THEY DON'T STOP COMIN' AND THEY DON'T STOP COMIN' AND THEY DON'T STOP COMIN' AND THEY DON'T STOP COMIN' AND THEY DON'T STOP COMIN' AND THEY DON'T STOP COMIN' AND THEY DON'T STOP COMIN' AND THEY DON'T STOP COMIN' AND THEY DON'T STOP COMIN' AND THEY DON'T STOP COMIN' AND THEY DON'T STOP COMIN' AND THEY DON'T STOP COMIN' AND THEY DON'T STOP COMIN' AND THEY DON'T STOP COMIN' AND THEY DON'T STOP COMIN' AND THEY DON'T STOP COMIN'...
>>9305900AND CUTE
>>9305916(you)
is this what late night /ztg/ looks like?
>>9305952Not if you're in Asia
>>9305952we have games, movies, cucks, shiposters, aussies.
>>9305952Best thing to do is to go into the archives and repost content and discuss it.
>>9305976
>>9305952There's a stream, games, and probably discord thing going on so its slow, and there was a shit storm earlier in the morning that shit stirrer did well on and people are feeling salty about. Just post comf.
>>9306019>There's a stream, games, and probably discord thingNah, I'm done now, it's all good.
We have a million variations of Jack.Invent a variation of Skye.
>>9306039Skye bakes a pie, becomes new pie fox.
>>9306039
jack singing blue skies to skye who is in a hospital bed when ?
>>9305929I'm not going to lie: I really like Remmy and Femmy and their mutually-embarrassing incestuous overtones.
>>9306063
>>9306086>The mission was a success>The target was taken down>The organization was dismantled>Zootopia, even the world, was safe>Jack would never forgive himself for his failure if she didn't wake up>All he wanted was for her to wake up
>>9306060>Sky eats too many pies and starts to gain weight.>Her eating and baking fixation has led to her taking poor care of her fur, resulting in a mop of excess growing on top of her head that she halfheartedly brushes down the middle to save time for more pie baking.>The Curse of the Pie Fox has taken Skye.
>>9306132We need to hunt down the original foxpier! The one that infected her!
>>9306039The mad scientist who plans to take over the world with her mechanical creationsThe tough, dirty, foul-mouthed car mechanic who loves her car more than anyone else and takes care of it like a childSkye, the speed-demon drag racerCaptain Skye, the free pilot who travels the world using her personal biplane
>>9306182That third one is giving me ideas...
>>9305611
>When your story is STILL getting dozens or hundreds of hits but nobody wants to comment and say what they thought of itsadbun.pdf
time for me to sleep, hope you had fun with zootopia.have a good night and stay comfy, /ztg/.
>>9306039The ordinary witness to a massive case, who is placed under Jack's protection.Jack resents her because he thinks he's being wasted as he's a top spy.Skye just wants to get back to working at her dad's autoshop.They both wind up fucking like they're on the Discovery Channel after Skye saves Jack's life.
>>9306331You have a good night Trashy! Sad I missed half the damn movie but was still fun!
>>9306001Get a Gumnut up ya!
>>9306345I'm having trouble figuring out a situation where Skye directly saves Jack's life.What could she do as a mechanic to save him?Best I could come up with is that Skye rigs a car to work so that they could escape a dangerous area but Jack could easily do that himself with his spy training. Unless he was injured and Skye was the only person capable of getting them out.Other situations involve typical action-spy-movie cliches that are too unrealistic for my taste.
>>9306331Thanks for streaming! It's always fun.
>>9306512Doesn't have to necessarily be a car. She could be familiar with engines in general, and repairs a defunct fishing boat or something to escape while Jack buys time. Or does some fancy mechanic thing to the vehicle to give them the edge they need. Or just chucks the toolbox out of the car into the windshield of the chasing vehicle when Jacks numerous gadgets fail. Jack can make a comment being impressed by her obvious direct approach dwarfing his own training and cleverness.
>>9306329Yeah, at least if they hit the kudos button, yourself they may have at least enjoyed it a little.60 hits and nothing...?
>>9306580Damned auto word!
>>9306568>Or just chucks the toolbox out of the car into the windshield of the chasing vehicle when Jacks numerous gadgets failThis I like. Skye appears to be pragmatic and simple which can be a great contrast to Jack's flashy attitude. But I still dislike the super-spy premise. Never found that theme appealing when it comes to fanfiction.
>>9306512What I was thinking was that either Jack drowns or his heart stops, and Skye is able to resuscitate him.>Unless he was injured and Skye was the only person capable of getting them out.This works too. She's able to drive him to a ZIA affiliated doctor while he's bleeding out.
You guys ever seen Cats Don't Dance?https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qfeS9WCk0jE
>>9307026yeah a long time ago
>>93061822 & 3 inspired, excuse the shietness
Might take a request or two before I sleep, no promises though <3. I'm just not feeling any of my own ideas tonight.
>>9307211Duke sunbathing
>>9307026Yeah, one of my favorite movies. I'd love to get the laserdisc of it one day, but it's so rare to find.
>>9307205nice concept! not shitty at all
>>9307211Sharla the black sheep being sexy in some way, plz.
http://imgur.com/a/08uVs>Hustler Judy and Officer Nick>Reverse Bridge Scene
>>9307211Gud getting thrown off the cliff by golden eagleorWeaver identifying Wolter-being-gay as heresyorOttertons taking care of their flowers>>9307205das cute
>>9307366I'm gonna be honest, I've never drawn Duke before.
>Tubedudes love tubeshttps://www.youtube.com/watch?v=NCLNs3Rdm2w
There's a part of me that's tickled by the thought that /ztg/ introduced me to this song a year before Guardians of Galaxy Vol.2 made it popular:https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qBdFA6sI6-8
>>9307765This is a damn cute weasel.
>>9307765this is a pretty good wozzle
>>9307765There's a first for everything and it came out really well, I'm loving the scruffy fur detail. Thank you!
>>9306329>when you write a story but it's just an anon green on trash and the only people you know that liked it are the 3-4 other anons who replied to it
>>9307765Those eyebrow arches tho. Lookin' good.
>>9306710How about this: Jack Savage is a rich adventurer/archeologist who travels the world in search of ancient relics for his museum while battling secret organization who wants those relics for their mystical power. Like Indiana Jones/Lara Croft, but more eccentric. Skye is his assistant and mechanic and butler, and trained martial artist. She basically tries to make sure Jack doesn't die on his adventures.
>>9307205Glad my post inspired you to draw!Jack better be sure not to scratch her ride. Or else.
>>9308683That's speciest anon.
>>9308683>Skye is his assistant and mechanic and butler, and trained martial artist. She basically tries to make sure Jack doesn't die on his adventures.for this to work, the valet's abilities/skills are inversely proportional to the employer's
>>9308810Well, yes. Jack is good at booksmarts, archeology stuff and getting into trouble, Sky is good at streetsmarts, fighting, mechanics and getting out of trouble. And tolerating Jack.
>>9308683Now that's a better concept.But now that you mentioned Indiana Jones/Lara Croft, I think Jack and Skye's dynamic is more like Nathan Drake and Elena Fisher from Uncharted. Or maybe Sully is a better fit for Skye.>>9308810Not entirely true. Jack is the Brains and Skye is the Muscle. It's a common dynamic.
>>9308837Also, there can be a backstory to Skye, like she's a orphan, tried to make it by herself as a mechanic, but got shut down at every turn because muh fox prejudice until wealthy Savage family took her in, taught her butlering and martial arts to be guardian/butler for their super smart but also super eccentric son who's always get into trouble way over his head.
>>9308866I'm getting Batman vibes from this post.
>>9308837>>9308855>>9308866quite, but there's only so much one could do with just action as a theme, if you throw in comedy as a side dish you can get more out of the concept
>>9308875Kind of, but much less brooding and grimdark, more hilarious hijinks.
Anon...It's so cold and dark hereThe voices never leave me aloneThey keep scraping and scratching my earsThey keep telling me I hurt youI try to tell them that I wouldn't do such a thingI try to tell them how much I love youbut they won't listenI know they don't want me to be with youThey want to take me awaySomewhere I'll never return fromThey keep screaming at me that is best for everyoneThat I deserve itI don't think I can hold out much longerAll the screeching, All the pain in their voicesIt hurts so badPlease anonI don't wanna die like thisHelp me
>>9307205That's real awesome, akella.Reminds me of the old Need For Speed games. Think Skye would join an underground street racing organization?
>>9308893Jack is gotta be the comedy relief here. Always trying to be the action hero, but failing spectacularly in hilarious ways. Sky gets to facepalm and get him out of the mess.
Reposting for the daily crowd, since they are the ones who gave the requestsSnoring badger Bridget
>>9309330and Kris x Mrs. Otterton
Anyone ever read The Pursuit? A fic where about 75% of the plot could have been wrapped up in a single chapter with about 5 minutes worth of dialogue between two fully grown adults?Well, there's a sequel. And it's edgier and cringier and batshit crazy. Complete with fake-deaths. Fake-funerals. More hair-pullingly frustrating miscommunication. The idiot ball grows about five times as big. Oh, and body mutilation.Anyway, check out Winter of the Bear if you want to lose a few brain cells.
https://z-p3-scontent.ffor3-1.fna.fbcdn.net/v/t42.9040-29/10000000_307511909686441_3939762372360536064_n.mp4?efg=eyJybHIiOjg5MiwicmxhIjo0MDk2LCJ2ZW5jb2RlX3RhZyI6InNkIn0%3D&oh=6906390b21baaf87d705a1fcfcc50221&oe=591703A8>just a few seconds of zoot>cant even hear try everything jingle>no new animations
>>9309463I'm not sure what's happening here. Are you promoting his fics or saying it was bad?If the former, why would I want more bad fanfiction? If the latter, why not advertise just his good fic instead?
>>9309526that implies lagarde has a good ficbad fanfiction is my guilty pleasure. but it's not enough to just be plain bad with horrible punctuation and bad syntax and formatting. Like that Trials and Tribulations of a Different Kind. or Unbreakable. Or that fic where Nick is disfigured horribly and the only one that seems to give a shit is Judy.
http://neytirix.deviantart.com/art/I-m-sorry-Zootopia-Fanart-7-679992500>It was like the entire force was there,creating an impenetrable wall.>There was no escape.>She was the only one.>The only one that could reach him.>"Nick they're dead">"Please stop">"Nick">"I'm sorry"
>impure_bunny.jpg
>>9309551>those whole series
>>9309547I can't stand bad fanfiction, I try to take it with the same amount if heart the author put in it. For someone who always aim to give my opinion so the author feels like he didn't waste his time, I feel bad when the only thing that comes to mind to comment is "Hey! It's great! Not my cup of tea but keep up the good work!" since anything more honest would be just trashing it.
>>9309574I enjoy bad fanfiction the same way folks enjoy bad movies. I can compartmentalize it and laugh at it. And then I can imagine the characters reading said fiction themselves and reacting, which makes it even more hilarious.
>>9309561At least it cashes in on that, with admittedly little plot aside from people writing fics based on it. If it was pretentious I'd hate it, but it's just fun.
>>9309558>Judy is usual cheery pure adorable self in public>As soon as she and Nick are alone she turns into lewd lusty seductress>Nobody believes Nick about this>>9309574>>9309463I'm gonna shill this fic because compared to usual fandom offerings, Nick and Judy are extremely close to their movie characterization. Pretty much the most in-character I've seen them in fan media to date.Plus, it got interesting story and some humor as well.https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11917313/1/Partners
>>9309593Already reading it, thanks for posting anyway. I get a bit demotivated when I see people giving way too much attention to things they hate than what they love.
>>9309516At what minute?
>>93096218:40 for friends section, not sure when for love section.
>>9309593Apparently the author is working on a sequel too. Partners is one of the few stories that both Nick and Judy follow the personalities of their movie counterparts closely. And it has a great plot too.
>>9309625>Just the donut rollingNo surprise that I didn't see itAnd, if the love section means the one where everyone is hugging, it's at 11:04, just Judy hugging Stu and BonnieWhy Disney, why?
>>9309650>>9309625Holy shit Disney fucking hates Zootopia.
>>9309658This kinda reminds me of Mint
>>9309593I tend to not read fics where inter-species relationships are treated with open hostility by the majority of the Zootopia-verse population.
>>9309698That only comes up in the fic in theory, nobody actually gives them shit for it.
>>9309698They don't shit for it. Nick gets shit for being a fox, but that's expected
>>9309746He doesn't take it either. He actually gives it back.
>>9309712>>9309746The last chapter has them catching shit from everyone. It's nothing violent, but it is looked down on. It's alluded to that Judy gets called some very colorful terms. And it's implied that not everyone accepts their relationship.I'm not into that. I think after hundreds of years of co-existence there's more than one interspecies couple.
>People spoiling ficsSee yall next thread
>>9309760Coming from a city where 90% of the population thought 10% could just reverse back tens of thousands of years and go savage? Not likely for pred/prey relationships.
Judy looks pissed. Seems they're stranded. Probably Nick's fault.
>>9309755I'm hoping in the sequel Nick gets revenge on all the politicians and other officers that slandered him to the public. Bogo knows what he did so he probably trusts Nick a lot more now.
>>9309779Still hate that fucking low-hanging drama fruit of animals being against interspecies or pred/prey relationships.
>>9309801True, but the often the most hateful of people are the most vocal as well. And considering the state of the city, it seems that they're roughly the same as early 70's America for race relations.
>>9309817Not my cup of tea. Especially because you know that there's someone extreme out there that would probably target Judy or both of them just because they share feelings for someone outside of their species.Zootopia; love who you wanna love y'all.The rest of the fic might be amazing, but I have deal breakers. Intolerance to interspecies relations one of them.
>>9309787Reminds me of that "Change start with us" oneshot OJ is making an animatic of.
>>9309840To each there own I suppose. Do you recommend any stories? If I had to recommend one, I'd say Earning the Badge.
>>9309840And Greatest gift is You and its previous story
>>9309787People always portray Nick/Finnick being smokers, but wouldn't that be screwy since they are predators with an extreme sense of smell?
>>9309888Enough time smoking and they won't have to worry about having a great sense of smell.
>>9309574>>9309658source?
>>9309896http://lsw249.tumblr.com/tagged/zootopia/page/2
>>9309840In Zootopia it seems interspecies relationships are not uncommon (e.g. Priscilla and the hyena or SPOILER pic related), but, imho, probably there will still be someone against them, even if they are largely accepted, maybe the older mammals, a la grandpa Hopps
>>9309879Clopperella just wrote a quick one-shot called "It Could Have Been Worse." It's a nice little heart to heart. The only thing that bugs me is Judy calls herself Nick's senior officer, even though she would only have a couple months seniority over him at best.Fics that put Judy and Nick on unequal ground are also kinda deal breakers for me.There aren't many long-form fics that I'd recommend personally. Usually those might start off strong and have a solid satisfying conclusion. But something happens over the course or at the climax that just shits the bed.
>>9309921Don't forget Kris!
>>9309909thanks
>>9309937>couple monthsWell, between the breaking up after the conference and the bridge 2-3 months have passed, and academy is roughly 9 months, if I remember correctly. So it is at least a year>>9309945How could I forget
>>9309840Just from the Zootopia Crime Files game>Kris openly hit on Nick. (Otter and Fox)>Bridget loves Chuckles (Wolverine and Honeybadger)>Dinks and Donna date (Gebril and Mouse)Movie:>Obviously Clawhauser and Bogo both have a huge crush on Gazelle (Cheetah or Buffalo and Gazelle)According to an early interview with Byron and Rich, zootopia is very open minded. Animals fall in love with other animals and that's it.https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=XDisIKoGLQM
>>9309529Such little clickbait fanfare for these two. The first time a major studio includes a gay married couple and there's a big collective shrug. It's cool that this isn't blowing people's minds or creating controversy, I'm just surprised.
>>9309966Excellent points, and exactly why Inter-hate bugs me.>>9309965The exact amount of seniority Judy has over Nick isn't important. It just seems like whenever Judy is in a position over Nick it's because of their work together and not individual achievement. Or because Nick is a shifty fox and therefor doesn't deserve the same praise or something.
>>9310050
>>9309974I think clickbaits go for stuff like making established characters gay.
>>9309992>Giving praise to shifty foxesThe only thing they deserve is the lash!
>>9309966Not to mention Bucky and Pronk are married, despite being an oryx and an antelope.>>9309992I could see inter-hate happening in Zootopia. Stu expressed a distrust and fear of all predators before the pred scare and the scare itself is proof that there are some lingering negative feelings about other species. Even when interracial marriage was legalized, there were still people who hated it and even now there are young people who don't like it.But it being terribly taboo to the point that you'll be met with an angry mob for interspeices hand holding is a bit much.
>>9310063
>>9310094
>>9310099Great minds think alike!
>>9310076You talking about LeFou? What made him more special than Bucky and Pronk was the fact that he openly expressed his feelings. Though we see that the loud and horny neighbors share a hyphenated last name during the credits, they didn't express love or romantic intentions for one another.
>>9310116I was talking about a post I've seen a while ago about making Simba gay actually.
>>9310126Whaaaaaaaat? What post?
>>9310131http://www.pinknews.co.uk/2017/04/01/simba-will-be-gay-in-upcoming-live-action-lion-king-remake-disney-confirms/
>>9310136> april the 1sthmmm
>>9310149I know, it's just that it reminded me when you said "clickbaity"
>>9310149Thanks for pointing that out.>>9310165And I thought you were referencing how many real articles there were about the new Beauty and the Beast.
Oh my god I just realized two women had their pants down at the same time in a scene and one of them was Judy.
>>9310050>>9310059>>9310063>>9310068For now I like it, I want to see how Akirirc proceedsThe only little thing that makes me a little uneasy is the notch at the base of Nick's neck, it is a little deep
>>9310243I'm going with very unruly fur. Otherwise...
>>9309965>>9309992>>9309937>Clopperella just wrote a quick one-shot called "It Could Have Been Worse."She has an annoying propensity to have Judy be a stereotypical "strong female character", as in she props up Judy at the expense of Nick. In pretty much all of her fics Judy is a superior cop in every way and Nick is basically her sidekick, when she writes them married, Nick for some reason takes Hopps name, he's submissive to judy overall, etc. That kind of stuff is offputting to me, personally. And in this one-shot she has Judy basically tell Nick he's not good enough to be a cop because he broke an arm and brag about how badass she is and how she is "glad to be an idol".
>realized Nick probably already had the money to pay for the jumbo pop but since he saw Judy so earnest he misled her into paying for him
What if we made a story about a prey trying to fit in with a pack of predators?
>>9310667What an absolutely retarded notion.And who would it be, another bunny? Or maybe a sheep?
>>9310709>Or maybe a sheep?Great idea anon!We can tie it in with the bellwether conspiracy. Have some juicy drama happen when it gets revealed
>>9310087I could see isolated incidents of inter-hate happening. But not like every other mammal they pass on the street giving them dirty looks, or being asked to leave a business or restaurant or something.
>>9309463Ah, there are so many fics I could probably point towards for "fics that could have been shorter if people actually talked"; You know what they say about Foxes, Understanding and Regrets, that one chapter of "More than Yesterday, Less than Tomorrow", and Mistakes. But the Pursuit? That has a special place in my heart for just how much they stretched the misunderstanding. Impressive almost.>>9310526While Judy being earnest probably told Nick he could manipulate her like that, he most likely saw the "Fox Away" on her belt and thought "This little shit isn't helping out of the goodness of her heart, she wants to prove she isn't as racist as every other rabbit out there", giving him the motivation to actually mislead her.
>>9310929You Know What They Say About Foxes kinda gets a pass because it's not a case of "both people know what they want and just don't fucking talk about it" but more "Judy has no experience with love or relationships and doesn't recognize what she wants until it's almost too late"
>>9310315power trip judy is slowly becoming more annoying than manchildren nick in people misunderstanding characters
Man, Zootopia 2 is already looking great!
^that... I've seen people arguing that Nick owns an apology to Judy for fooling her into buying the JumboPop, not realizing that Judy did almost spray him just because he slightly suspicious and a fox.Judy was not earnest, she felt guilty and partially she deserved to feel guilty. Nick is not a nice guy for using that but then again, he really couldn't help it.
>>9310987At the very least, Nick knew what he wanted, and he never spoke up about it when they first had sex. Or the time after that. Or the time after that; then Judy mentions they were just "fuck buddies" leaving Nick without many options. >"Judy has no experience with love or relationships and doesn't recognize what she wants until it's almost too late"Honestly, when I first read it, I was surprised that it wasn't straight out "too late". I get love is strong and makes you forgive a lot but, if I were Nick in that situation, I would have been really hesitant entering a relationship with Judy after all that. I guess it would have been a bit too angst and tragic if Nick rejected her/moved on. Not to mention how embarrassing it would have looked for Judy if Nick said "No" when she confesses in front of everyone in the bullpen and says she already told her parents. I don't know, it is slightly jarring for me when I see the whole "misunderstanding" trope, and either Nick or Judy instantly forgive the other, getting together right afterward. At the very least Judy's neighbors were hilarious.
>>9311118>2 dudes in a pool sitting 5 feet away from each other because they're not gay
>Judy will never felch Taylor's cum out of Nick's ass while giving him a reacharound.
>>9311118Those paws are awfully close together.Think twice about posting filth like this next time.
>>9311332
>>9311317
>>9311386Keep this degeneracy off of this wholesome site!
Tell me about itThe comic/fic/project that you want to start, but haven't yet
>>9311532Too many to even get into it.
>>9311532Jack Nick Skye Judy comedy skits.
>>9311532>project that you want to start, but haven't yet>oneAhahAhahahahAHAHAHAH
>>9311580>started yetChapter 4 when?
https://twitter.com/dwdavison9318/status/863208286069415937Judy what are you doing
>>9311588Actually I wanted to finish it a couple of TTs ago, but work was extenuating this month. So I could only draw, not write, that for me it is much more difficult. ... And I'm still surprised that there are people waiting for the next chapter
>>9311687How is work and school going for you? You're doing your PHD, right?
>>9311532I want to continue my current ongoing project before I tackle something else.Unrelated but I had an idea of a somewhat horror and 4th wall stuff with Zootopia, but it would end up not really having anything to do with Zootopia (nothing about animals interacting).That or Littlest Hustlers stuff.
>>9311670
>>9311532An adoption AU fic where Nick runs off to the big city to find his biological mother, meeting and falling in love with Skye while he's there.A retro sci-fi adventure fic where species come from different planets and Nick is the captain of a smuggler crewPlus a bunch of other smaller scenes/themes in my head that don't have a full story yet.
https://piczel.tv/watch/nobbyshort stream, gimme some requests
>>9311801smols doing dumb stuff
>>9311801Opposite Day TT submission
>>9311801Babby slotho doing babby things
>>9311801maybe one of those >>9307762
>>9311801Nick Judy Jack Skye? OP image is comfy lewd
>>9311801Remmy and Betty watching some horrow movie.
>>9311801>>9311861*Remmy and Betty watching some horror movie.
>>9311801Rex melting.
>>9311703>You're doing your PHD, right?Yep, it is my work and school (since I'm basically a researcher that has to do a couple of courses). Going well? Eh, progress is too slow lately (reason why I had to put even more hours in it)
>>9311801Wolter hitting on V.While Al stand behind him.
>>9311801Nick and Judy taking a nap together but they're both restless sleepers so they're all splayed all over each other
>>9311801you eating an entire watermelonwhile wearing a watermelon
>>9311801Anneke and Wolter doing the tango
>>9311801Betty introducing her bf Remmy to her family.
>>9311848
>>9311986That looks like an emoji
>>9312025
>>9312062FuckNobby you're awesome
>>9312101I like this coupleBut I like it more when Jack flusters Skye
This trunker is going on break for a few weeks, but I'll try to drop some draws in when I can. Have a good summer, /ztg/!
>>9312190Take care PnP
>>9312190Have fun, buddy
>>9311580I know the feeling...Just finished the total page script for my zoot lewd comic. It will be 16 pages...Just realized 6 page of that is exposition and talk and slightly abloo... wonder if It too much for such a short comic. The rest 10 page is hot ... or at least it will be I hope.
>>9312252>Just realized 6 page of that is exposition and talk and slightly abloo... wonder if It too much for such a short comic.As long as you make sure there's at least something lewd or erotic, possibly hot in these 6 pages. I mean I don't really mind exposition and abloo to setup porn, but we have a comic where there is literally 6 pages of nothing remotely hot happening to suddenly ignore those 6 pages and jump to sex.
>>9312252You could always hit up the editors here. I think comic helps with comics.
>>9312276>we have a comic where there is literally 6 pages of nothing remotely hot happening to suddenly ignore those 6 pages and jump to sexI thought it was 4 pages? And either way Zaush did draw lewd things before we reach the fugging.
>>9311811
>>9312309THIS IS A NOT GOOD HUSTLING TECHNIQUE
>>9312309>You sure this is a good idea?She says, after having already fired 8 times
>>9311532A crisis in Tundratown is more than it appears. As they untangle the mystery, everyone from the greenest of rookie cops to titans of industry will learn that just because you can do something, it doesn't always mean you should - and if you're not careful, you can do as much damage as the ones you're chasing.scifi AU - When a mining accident puts an entire space station at risk, Nick and Judy the space cops must balance expectation with the unforgiving realities of scale and logistics on the frontier.Nick and Judy chase a mundane burglary case straight into the shadowy world of the exclusive art trade, where (almost) everyone plays by explicit rules. To get out in one piece, they'll have to team up with the same self-professed master thief they were after this whole time.With a little help from Nick, the arctic fox triplets have gotten well clear of Kolsov's sometimes-shady bathhouses. Now they're living the "high life" on the combined income of three apprentice massage therapists. On a jaunt into town, they run into Duke Weaselton, who's also busy getting his life back on track.Plus dozens of short story ideas and little domestic arcs, lewds galore and a couple of fun AUs like pro cyclists that need more development.
>>9311532A mouse named Mickey where I've come up with at least 5 different Mickey Mouse jokes and ideas about Disney World's inception. He's got a paw fetish because obviously and I wanted to analyze how small species have to interact with the world. A bit ambitious
>>9311887
>>9309516the link died, what was this?
>>9312396Amazing.
I can't believe how many fucking comments I see on this story about how Judy should keep the babies. What the fuck.
>>9312454really gets my discussions going*focus braincells*
>>9312454MUH DISCUSSIONS
>>9312405Disney fireworks show where Zootopia gets a grand 10 seconds where Judy and Nick are chased by a giant donut on reused animations on 1/10 of the castle then later shows a circle of Judy face hugging her parents from the movie.Yeah.
>>9312500
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I cannot WAIT to go to the Zootopia thread so that I can talk about abortion, LGBT, Trump, and the private lives of CCs! You know, things related to Zootopia!
>>9305600Woah, what's the context of this image?
>>9312535At least quote the mature philosophers when you're whining. I put hide + no stub and it is annoying when people don't link.
We need stories.Stories of getting /fit/
>>9312396Thanks Nobbo, now I have the perfect image.
>>9312503Ah, well I guess that's better than nothing but that is disappointing. Thank you.
>>9312603>Better than nothing.At this point I easily assume they actually didn't plan for it to have anything Zootopia and added the last moment.
>>9312512
What's this I hear about killing unborn children that are the product of unwanted sexual advances?
>>9312454If you didn't notice yet, there's plenty of retards in this fandom with no logical skills. They seriously think that leaving and raising kits conceived from rape by a psycho, who takes pleasure in the fact that he raped Judy and that she'll have his kits and they will constantly remind her that she was raped, is some sort of revenge on him.
>>9312649
I fucking hate this gay fox.
>>9311824
ahem. I think it's about time we get back to discussing the REAL issues here.
>>9312666(You)2/10 make me reply
>>9312699whoops, meant to link >>9311884
>>9312699>>9312714Thanks!This is awesome Nobby.
It's that time of the day again, this is become more certain to happen than TT. Let's browse other stuff until mature discussions die down, if I'm luck enough I'll find something interesting enough to keep me from ever coming back here.>>9312702Mohawk Judy.
>>9312667>using macro that makes fun of meme to support meme
Jack and Judy have to star in your next one shot.What do you write?
>>9312793Jack dies.
>>9312793cuck
>>9312793Jack trying to seduce Judy only to get shut down hard when she reveals that one of Nick's fingers is the size of Jack's entire cock.
>>9312793>writewriting is too hard unless i have addybut something with crossdressingand peggingdefinitely pegging
>>9312793Jack has intense jealousy over Judy being the first Rabbit on the ZPD and desperately tries to outdo her, but his pride stops him from succeeding and he has to be saved by Judy until he begrudgingly admits he has a lot to learn.
>>9312806I like this idea. Seconded.
Wow, it's super easy killing a thread these days.Almost as easy as aborting a fetus.
>>9312857pls, enough discussions, my brain can't take it, it's getting 2mature4me
>>9312793Both Jack and Judy make a bet they can seduce their fix partners before the other.Judy thinks she has it in the bag because she knows Nick has a thing for her but she's never dated before so she drops her spaghetti and weirds Nick out.Jack thinks he's hot shit but he's so smitten by Skye that he's too shy to even ask for a date.
>>9312793Maybe something about them bonding over their fox love interests? They'd exchange stories and tips on fox behavior and stuff. It'd be fluffy there'd be no cucking.
>>9312893>fixfox
>>9312840>He's tall, too. He'll be going at my mouth and then he'll lean over and fill up the rest of me. If one paw gets tired he'll just switch to the other. He's a walking, talking gangbang, and I don't even feel like a slut afterwards.
>>9312793Judy and Jack go drinking and try to one up each other with stories about their foxes.They're lying through their teeth the entire time, but their stories become more aggrandized and personal the drunker they get until they commiserate about how I'm love they are and how worried they are of fucking up their relationships.
>>9312793Judy and Nick receive visit from agent Jack Savage, responsible for solving a similar case of Zootopia where he went and revealed corruption at the top of ZIA with the help of his vixen mechanic.They find out they are forced to work together, Bogo argue that size would help.Judy is beaming over work with Savage, Nick not so much due to Oates flashbacks.Jack arrives only to show that he considers Judy his idol. Reveal most of the heavy lifting was done using Skye inventions and that he mostly did intel stuff and subterfuge to succeed.Both are slightly disappointed.His constant asskissing on Judy makes her boisterous. Then flattered. Then embarrassed. Nick starts to notice it and starts fanning Jack flames.>"Did Officer Hopps really take down a rhino?" "Yeah! On the academy she did! Two rhinos martial artists, with heavy gear!" "Then there's no problem here! Judy, go tackle that stampeding elephant!"They get locked down by the mafia due to Jack eagerness, irresponsibility and Judy and Nick get angry. Jack trying to grasp more than he could do while Judy and Nick relied on him.Judy runs her mouth and claim Jack is just a sham.Jack reveals her success on the mammal case (the conference) motivated him to be more of a desk jock and actually get stuff done, even if nobody believed him, and that Wilde becoming an officer later made him finally commit on going rogue to help everyone, even if everyone turned on him.With his help, they manage to escape and solve the case that had brought him there.Nick keeps teasing Jack over everything and Jack stop the embarrassing asskissing.They say goodbyes on the train and Nick glue a junior officer on Jack chest, everybody makes mistakes etc.He hugs Nick and Judy.He drops his pants and fuck Judy pregnant before dashing into the train and leaving station.Cotton's there too.
>>9311824>>9312699You don't know that Betty isn't secretly a baby about horror movies.
>>9313003Indeed, it was never shown in Pack Street. It's not OOC in this case.
>>9312994
>>9312994>He drops his pants and fuck Judy pregnant before dashing into the train and leaving station.For some reason I imagined Jack fucking a Judy blow-up doll while Judy watching, deeply disturbed.
>>9312630They don't usually make new animations for the clips in these shows
>>9312994I like the idea of an untested but eager Jack clinging too hard to the image of Judy and trusting Nick too much.
>>9312994>then TIWTLLL happens
>>9312994I knew rabbits were quick shots, but jesus. No wonder Skye doesn't want to date him.
>>9312994Ahhh, luring me in with actually well written setup and character arc only to drop everything in the last 2 lines. True evil just like the MassEffect3 ending! Well done good sir!
>>9312975>Nick and Skye come to pick them up and are mobbed by them abloo bloo blooing about how they're good buns and want them to know how much they love them.>Nick and Skye use this as evidence to continue their arguing that their buns love them more.
>>9312699Someone won't be sleeping alone tonight>"This is what you get for making me watch that stupid movie yarnball!"
Do people take ideas pitched here and do things with them or are they more just entertaining to read themselves?
>>9313370There's been instances of people taking ideas and making stuff out of them. I think that happens a lot less because most of our writers and artists gave long term projects they're stuck in.
>>9313370both
>>9312699>>9313312Someone please make a green of this!
>>9306117Incestuous overtones are always good. So long as they're straight. And between attractive people. And no pedo.
>>9309551Normally I can't stand edgy-on-purpose grimderp garbage. What makes this comic so different? Why am I actually enjoying it a little bit?
>>9313562I enjoy it because the author is making it for fun and the average monster story. There isn't a message or a fetish for suffering and whatnot.
>>9313370Yes, several times I've seen random art get greentexts and even fics. Same on the other way around, a greentext/fic or even just a post get art. There's also stuff like JiD who was just discussion that turned into a comic.
>>9313562I just feel tgere is a potential in a Robocop type story.
>>9313388still waiting for the original anon to cont this.>Judy raping the fox into her submissive husby
>>9313680>Only to ahegao hard on the fox dick and have the positions slowly reverse
>>9312806>"So, Officer Hopps..." Jack Savage leaned over Judy's desk, giving her a look that would have left most does swooning>She looked back with dull eyes, "Agent Savage.">"How about you and I go back to my place?" Jack flashed a smile, wiggling his eyebrows>"Wow, you moved on from the subtle hinting and straight to outright asking. I'm impressed," Judy's expression said otherwise, "But since you can't seem to take a hint, I'll be blunt as well. No.">Jack's face became sour, "Is it because of the fox?">"You mean Nick, my partner and boyfriend for a year? Yes, that fox.">"Please Hopps, you can't expect me to believe that he is satisfying you in the bedroom.">Judy scowled, at this point ready to tell Jack off and report to MR for sexual harassment.>But, an idea came to her head. One that would leave just as good a scar, if not better in her opinion.>The doe calmed, smiling sweetly at the agent while, out of sight, sending a text on her phone, "Really now, and why is that?">Thinking he found an opening, Jack continued, "No matter how much bigger he is than us bucks in a certain department, he can't keep up with a bunny. We were meant to run for hours, and that bleeds over into other tests of stamina. So why don't I show you what you are missing out on?">Judy sighed, shaking her head, "I'll admit, maybe Nick doesn't have the same stamina as a bunny, outside the bedroom or otherwise...">She flashed Jack a vicious grin, causing the buck to take a step back, "However, my fox does have more than one way of taking his prey.">Both bunnies turned at the sound of the office door opening, and saw Nick walk in, whose eyes darkened at the sight of the agent.>Before anyone else could speak up, Judy motioned Nick to come over, "Hey Slick, I need your help proving something."Cont.
>>9313701>Nick raised an eyebrow before nodding, "Ok...">When her fox was close enough, Judy grabbed his paw and brought it in front of her, "You see, Savage, your issue is that you are just thinking with your second head and nothing else.">Jack scowled, "The hell is that suppose to mean?">"It means, Nick has many, many ways of satisfying me." Judy looked up at Nick, smiling as she curled his fingers until only one stuck out.>The fox grinned as he realized where Judy was going with this, and let his bunny continue, "Tell me, do you think my paws wrapped around you would look anything like this?">Judy's paws gripped Nick's finger, only just barely able to completely circle around the thickness. Even with both paws wrapped around it, Nick's fingertip was still poking out.>Jack's slack jaw expression told Judy everything she needed to know.>"One finger alone is enough to fill me up pretty good, let alone two," Judy's paws started stroking up and down Nick's finger, much to Jack's horror and Nick's pride, "He still has two more fingers that he can use somewhere else. And that is only on one of his paws.">She gave Nick's dull claw a slow lick, causing him to growl, before releasing it, turning around and running her paws from her fox's chest to his stomach.>"He is also so tall, so long body-wise. That area that you mentioned before? Where he puts you bucks to shame in comparison?">"He can fill me up with that too, almost to the point where I feel like I might break. And while he takes his prey that way, his paws are free to move anywhere else on me.">Judy sighed, laying her head against Nick's stomach and looked towards Jack, whose wide eyes and open mouth was a sight to behold for the vengeful doe.>Judy still had one last blow to this buck's ego though, "Nick, dear, your tongue.">She watched in glee as the agent backed up and fell over a chair as Nick showed off what he hid in his mouth.Cont.
>>9313723>"Nick doesn't just use his dick to pleasure me," Judy said, deciding to be blunt, "He is a predator, he uses everything to take his prey. His teeth, his tongue, his paws, his skills, everything nature has given him to get his bunny. And he can do so for however long he wants.">"So then, look me in the eyes, Savage. Tell me with a straight face that you think bunnies are better than foxes. I dare you.">Jack's mouth opened and closed repetitively, eyes darting back and forth between the fox and the doe, before he shot up and bolted out the door.>As soon as the buck was out of sight, the pair fell down with laughter.>"Oh my god Carrots, I think you might have just broke him!">"Hopefully! I doubt I'll have to deal with his stupid advances again, now that he knows how much better my boyfriend is." Judy crawled onto Nick's lap, wrapping her arms around him.>Nick grinned, "I have to admit, that was one hell of an ego boost. And a hell of a show.">Judy grinded her hips against Nick's with a knowing smile, "I can tell.">The fox groaned, "Please don't do that. After feeling your paws, all that talk about me "taking my prey", I don't think I can hold myself back.">Judy giggled for a moment, and then looked up, "Well... don't.">Nick's eyes snapped down towards his bunny in surprise.>Judy smiled and motioned towards the door, "Why don't you close that, and find out if you can keep this bunny quiet, fox?"END
>>9313610That's a good way of putting it. The author is being edgy on purpose not to tell the world how dark and brooding and cool he is, but just to write/draw an edgefest for giggles and because that's what his artstyle lends well to and he enjoys it.
>>9313701>>9313723>>9313749Bless you Anon
>>9313385Can confirm, used to write greens about art, now all I do is peck at my stuff
comic based on imaged relatedhttp://www.deviantart.com/art/A-mothers-arms-680370107
>>9313836dawwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww
>people would rather read something bad and talk about how much they hate it rather than read something good and discuss how much they like itIs this true and why?
>>9313877Because it's easier to break down exactly why you dislike something than to explain exactly why you like something.
>>9313877Yes, because I feel better about not doing anything if I belittle those who tried
>>9313877Sometimes things are bad in a particularly fascinating way.
>>9313877I dont like reading. The bad stuff will be given full plot summaries that I can weigh in on. The good stuff...is appreciated secretly I guess?
>>9313877I don't know about "would rather", I'd rather read good stuff and shit on something bad. That said the amount of attention shit gets here is making me lose interest to create stuff, not mentioning people who created content for TT and got almost ignored while there was another shitstorm happening.
>>9313836oh geez
>>9313877There are amazing stories out there that get zero discussion.We talk about TIWTLLL every new page, even if it's just more of them staring out into space.I would legitimate be surprised if the majority of people here read fics in order to enjoy reading them and not hunting for cringe.It's also funny seeing dead writefags who haven't updated in months talking about what they don't like about fics.
>>9313701>>9313723>>9313749god please forgive me for the amout of sinful thoughts I'm going to have about this later
>>9312534I want to kiss this
>>9313877It's just how 4chan worksTake /co/ for example, they never talk about Nedroid even though it's unanimously seen as one of the greatest webcomics on the internetOn the other hand, they have constant threads for series they despise, like Assigned MaleI do think there's some point where hate genuinely turns into love though, like with Buckley, but you don't see that too often
>>9313981Eventually it hits Hellboy Syndrome where it's just so good there's not really much left to say. Also, shit stories tend to update faster because they don't care about quality, which gives us more content to shitpost about, generally speaking.
>>9313926>That said the amount of attention shit gets here is making me lose interest to create stuff, not mentioning people who created content for TT and got almost ignored while there was another shitstorm happening.This.I feel like shit when I spend a week writing something I hope people would enjoy but can't grab the attention of people who want to talk about the story where Jack goes back in time and fucks Nick's mom as she gives birth to him or some shit."Write for yourself", blah blah blah, whatever. If that were the case why should anyone upload anything at all.
>>9313877This is true for 4chan in general, for every fucking board. /v/ likes to bitch about games they don't like and borderline hope every new game is another TORtanic, /co/ likes to bitch about comics and cartoons they don't like, /tv/ likes to shit on movies. etc. Every time I shill fanfics I like in these threads, those are ignored. I guess people just find it way more fun to meme about cucking and mature discussions.
>>9314016There's just a lot of shit that gets in the way of writing bring an enjoyable experience.It takes a long fucking time to do right.Most people don't read. That's just a fact.Those that do are usually looking for very specific stuff. Certain page length, characters, most just want pure lewd which is fucking boring to write.Even if you write exactly what people want you'll at most get a "thanks". There's no write tennis because honestly that's not fun, it's less like drawing a comic one panel at a time and more like drawing a body part at a time, and that's a mess to compose.And yes, people will love to shit on you rather than give you feedback, if any at all.
>>9314062I wanna lay my head on his stomach and let him pat my head
>>9314062I just can't like Gideon, his design reminds me of Sheriff of Nottingham way too much.
>>9312793Jack cucks Judy with Nick
Also designed a friends zoosona
>>9314127
>>9314087I wanna add I can't write and be on the threads at the same time. I don't know if it's true for artists but I see people able to talk and post and bounce ideas off while working and I have to take vacations from the thread just to pump out a green. It makes me feel like I'm an outsider.
>>9313998I don't think shitposting is about the level of content in the source material, but more about the immediate reaction it invokesWe have been making fun of Loss for over a decade because it's easy to consume and doesn't take much time to understand the basic premise of the memeThere's also a recent phenomenon on /v/ where they shill Bethesda games using various pictures of Todd Howard. Anyone jumping into a thread can immediately recognize that they're all pretending that Todd is the one shilling for his games, and people have fun with the conceptSo what I take from these memes is that anything that generates discussion has to be short and simple, which stories generally are not, which is why we don't see much discussion of them
>>9313749>Seeing the advantages of the superior being, Jack is enlightened. >Roughly two weeks later, Jack is sighted with a white fox named sky.Talk about convincing.
>>9314127This bun seems fun.I'd order BBQ and watch football games with him.
That chubby bun needs fanart!
>"Nobody talks about my fic!"You have comicWe drawfags have noone
>>9314127he must be a big guy.
>>9314174Comicanon readthroughs are essentially the pity (You)s of fanfics though.
>>9314189He is. >>9314132
>>9313877I think (at least to me) it has to do with Catharsis.It's far easier to ingest a fun/enjoyable/entertaining fic, where after you are down reading it it leaves you feeling happy/engrossed/wanting more.Most of the times once you are down reading it or have gotten caught up to the most latest chapter, I would move on. Leaving a comment telling the author how much I enjoyed it along with things they could have possibly improved on.But bad/poorly written/weak? I want to talk about it with other's, seek catharsis in knowing that other's hate it just as much. So I either just want to seek validation for the dislike that I have in it, or I just can't keep what I am feeling bottled up.Is it a terrible mind-set to have? Of course, but it's tough to break it.
>>9314174I don't mean to shit on him because he helped me write almost everything I write but >>9314193 is kind of right.
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>>9314174The CC discord room has some of the most talented artists here who are willing to give advice even on nonZoot draws.Most writers will not read your fic even if you ask them because they're busy writing their own fic. I'm included in this btw. It takes a long time to read a fic and a longer time to write out feedback.
>>9314253You got an F. Time to spend detention with teacher
>>9314342Is the teacher hot?
Be honest writefags, do you insert certain things into fics to attract more peopleLike, say, a popular character or pairing?
>>9314374Bara teacher
>Sylvia Hopps carefully loaded the last of the blueberries into the small wooden box, noting with annoyance that a plank had come loose near the top. She whacked it several times until it settled back in place. It wouldn't be very strong, but she didn't much care. There was a polite knock at the door and he absent-mindedly yelled for the new arrival to come in, it was, after all, both open and unlocked. When the knock was repeated a second time about ten seconds later she sighed impatiently, put down her checklist and went to see who it was.>It turned out to be a fox.>More specifically she was quite sure it was the famed Gideon Grey who had recently gone into business with the family. His name was on her orders list after all. She spent a few seconds looking him over, unconcerned about the uncomfortable silence that produced. He was big, for a fox, in both height and girth, standing in the doorway somewhat presentably dressed and twiddling his thumbs with what could be seen as nervousness. All-in-all he was an underwhelming sight for someone her parents had objected so strongly about.>"Can I help you?">"Uh, is Mr Hopps in?">"You mean Tim?">Uh... yeah.">"No, his kid threw up on the school bus and he had to nip off to fetch her.">"I wuz kinda expectin' him.">"Well you've got me, unless you want to wait half an hour and then compete with a sick girl for attention.">"No... I just-">"Despite appearances I'm actually able to life these massively heavy crates of blueberries and carry them, oh, five, maybe six feet at a time. You're here for six right?">"Yeah, dun' worry I can carry-">"-Three of them. We can do it in one trip. Now that'll be cash, total of-">"SYLVIE!"
>>9314388Then I'm fine with dat
>>9314377Not really. But I'm a WildeHopps fag through and through so that's mostly all I write.
>>9314393>The conversation was interrupted by an ear-splitting screech, the sound of a car trying to take a gravel driveway too fast and skidding. A cloud of dust billowed up from outside as a familiar vehicle screeched to a halt. No sooner had it stopped the a grayish blur tumbled from it, hook its foot in the door and tripping. Stu Hopps half ran, half stumbled up the driveway, eyes wide. Without a word he gripped Silvia's hand and yanked her, protesting, into the storeroom, slamming the door loudly and throwing the catch.>"What in the wide, wide world o' sports are you doing dad?">"Saving your life! What do you think you're doing?! That's Gideon Grey out there!">"So I noticed. I'm just filling in for Tim while-">"I can't believe he'd put you up to this! Are you alright?">"Dad, I'm nearly twenty years old, I think I can look after myself.">"You don't understand honey, this is serious... hang on...">Sylvia blushed red under her fur, but not from embarrassment. She was a grown woman, not some little girl who had to be warned of stranger danger. Her father continued to rummage about in his pockets, seeking something. Finally with a triumphant cry he removed a small, oblong device. It had prongs at one end and a pointed cartoon fox head with a line through it on the side. It was, according to itself, called 'Fox off.'>"Is... is this a taser?">"Fox taser, just in case. You're lucky I had one spare. Now listen, stay here and I'll take care of everything.">With those words the taser was pressed into her hand as her father opened the door, dashed through, shut it, and locked it from the outside. Sylvia was left sitting in utter disbelief among the cabbages and beans, listening to the subdued mumbling coming from the other room. Very slowly she stood up and walked stiffly out of the room's open back door.
>>9314377I write what I think other people would like.I should add way more cuck and IRL politics though. That's how you get noticed.
>>9314377No. Not intentionally.This is one case where "writing for myself" very much applies. I'm telling the story I want to; if that appeals to people, great.
>>9314414>By the time she'd made it back around to the farm's front yard her father's truck was receding in a cloud of dust once more. A blue car, belonging to her brother, was just pulling up, he was back earlier than expected. Gideon was standing by his truck and she had to stop herself from laughing. He had six crates of blueberries, each of which he could hold in a single paw, yet he was trying to strap them to the back of his truck as if they were half ton crates of cabbages.He'd taken out a set of straps and was busily ratcheting one tight as she watched. The sight almost made her forget the utterly ridiculous altercation that had just occurred. She stepped up behind the fox and tapped him on the back.>"You know you can just put those in the back seat, right?">"Yeah, but if'n I crashed they'd fly through the front an' maybe take mah head clean o-! Miz Hopps... uh, I'm not s'posed t' talk to ya.">"Aren't you a little old for 'stranger danger'?">"Wha...? Uh, your pa said-">"Some stupid stuff I bet. Please tell me he remembered to charge you for that produce?">"Oh, uh, yeah. Look, your pa-">"Isn't the boss of me. Not under his roof, not under his rules. For crying out loud, did you murder someone while I wasn't looking or something? What is the deal?">"It's a bit complicated... If'n y' don't mind... y' don't seem to like him much.">"Dad? Oh I love the guy, it's just that... I have unresolved aggressive tendencies towards him due to a lack of positive reinforcement in regards to my ambitions.">There was a pause.>"Yer persnickety 'cause he don't take y' seriously?"
>>9314430>Sylvia was impressed; it had taken her weeks to come up with that explanation, which she was pretty sure was just psychobabble gibberish. She tried to hide her surprise by helping Gideon tighten the second strap on his utterly ridiculous setup. He still seemed very wary of talking to her, or even looking in her direction which was becoming increasingly annoying. As his truck slowly and inexpertly tried to reverse down the driveway while also avoiding her brother's car she made a mental note to find some reason to pop by his bakery in future, in sheer stupid defiance of her father.>While waiting for things to work themselves out she took time to examine the device she'd been given. It certainly didn't look that threatening; she could hold it in one paw and Gideon was a big guy, could it really do anything at all against a fox? After all,she'd licked an electric fence once as a dare, it had stung, but hadn't, as such, stopped her. What kind of a jolt could this deliver? She touched a finger to the two prongs and pressed the button.>The next thing she knew she was lying flat on her back on the grass, her ears ringing and every part of her body feeling like it was on fire. She couldn't move an inch and was either sweating profusely or had actually wet herself. She was vaguely aware of voices, and there were two faces obscuring her view, one rabbit, one fox. As two sets of hands helped her to her feet, her body feeling like a sack of potatoes there was only one thing she could think to say.>"Huh, guess that works!"
>>9313701>>9313723>>9313749ty :V
>>9314416How to write a fic /zoot/ will give a shit about:>Either 1,500 words or 150,000 words>Characters must act as paper cut out stereotypes>Movie events did not happen and no character development took place>However, the dialogue from the movie should be said at least every other time someone talks>Cuck is a MINIMUM, but more fetishes need to be added. The more fringe the fetish, the better>The fetish should be references as common and accepted, OR is the reason for conflict>Post with commissioned art by a 12 year old furaffinity fetish artist
>>9314393>>9314414>>9314430>>9314447watchu want this called bbq
>>9314492ummm "Is in their Biology?" ?
>>9314539here we fucking go
>>9314485I like this bun
>>9314539
>>9314393>>9314414>>9314430>>9314447
>>9314566
>>9314539Do you really gotta do it every single thread?
>>9314574
KEKED
>ywn write anything that gets more attention than a comic about a weird kid fucking Judy
>>9314581
>>9314539>>9314566>>9314574>>9314581>>9314583>>9314587>hooman
>>9314585The only attention that kind of shit gets is from that one shitposter who spams it occasionally.I'd wager the majority of people here have filtered that shit long ago.
>>9314576
>>9314627I keep forgetting about my 4chanx. Thanks again, anon.
>>9314627I actually have but I can't filter people complaining about it.
Anyone got a good remedy for cheerio burps?
>>9314648Recursive hiding
>>9314651I try just eating more.Usually 1 box = 1 portion.
>>9314657Not if it isn't being quoted.
>>9314651cum
>>9314677More stuff like this, pls.
>>9314692
>>9314016Agree tbqh
>>9314644Glad I reminded you, anon. 4chanX is truly a godsend for these threads. I've not seen any significant shitposting for a couple weeks now, just the occasional string of posts complaining about it, and even then, hiding/no-stubbing the root post clears that up.Maximum /comf/
>>9314107Also the Sheriff is the better character
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>>9314722>Filtered meme words like abortion, mature and jerboa>Filtered all PS character names>Filtered the word discord and the names of discord avatarfagsMaximum /comf/ indeed.
>>9314377No, not at all. I don't ship WildeHopps, I don't like Jack and Skye's popularity, and I try to reduce excessive/unnecessary relationship drama between bare minimum to none at all. I write for myself and the nonvocal audience lurking these threads cuz I already accepted being ignored for the same reposted stories/ideas.
>>9313389anytime man
Mother's Day is tomorrow, are you planning something, anon?
I really need more of these two sheepsiblings being uncomfortable together.
>>9314838Is the reason for the uncomfortable situation due to one's cum being in the other?
>>9314834want to make my mum proud>>9313836
>>9314817Maybe try creating a new story avatarfag
>>9314902wait, you're quirky?
>>9314878Not yet, more like the unspoken and suppressed desire for such an outcome.
>>9314943what a quirky couple
>>9314193>>9314219>spends an enormous amount of time helping writefags out of love>said writefags wish they could get the attention of someone elseIs he, dare I say, the biggest cuck?
>>9312252If you want an example of a comic that does lewd, exposition, and abloo, take a look at this:Frisky Ferals by Sefeirenhttps://e621.net/pool/show/1415(contains feral sex, dragons, incest: son/mom)Admittedly, it's super long and I don't know if you can apply anything from that comic into your 16 page piece, but it's a good read either way.
>>9314692This looks amazing.
https://twitter.com/_KING_GIDORA_
>>9313836This is good.And nice.I love this comic
>writefags unhappy>start leaving>no new interesting stories characters or AUsIf Comic isn't doing his job, how can we make writefags happy?
>>9315357cover their therapy expenses
>>9315357Give them (You)sthat's literally it, it's that easy
>>9315357Tell them they is smart, they is kind, and they is important.
>>9315357someone keeps asking to continue >>9313388I hope your happy I am now working on it
>>9315357I dunno, I praise stuff I like, don't see what else I can do. I'm not gonna excessively suck their dicks, if that what you're asking. they need to earn it.
>>9315443Godspeed, anon.
>>9315357>Comic isn't doing his jobWhat are you talking about?Did he leave?
>>9315357I don't know, all the most memorable characters on here were made by drawfags
>>9315357>>writefags unhappy>>start leaving>>no new interesting stories characters or AUsGood thing drawfags can do it too, then.
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>>9315469Yeah. VRbit totally blew up expectantly at Comicanon and he said was leaving the threads for a while.
>>9315487>drawfags>making interesting stories and AUs Nice meme
>>9315469I don't know, people were saying they were unhappy with him?
>>9315469He's on vacation, or something like that.
>>9315527What a monster>>9315541Where?I never saw something like that
>>9315469Nah. He's just busy with RL stuff so he can't do readthroughs as much.
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>>9315541No, people were lamenting that they don't have an audience, someone said comic existed, and writers said (poorly) that an editor is not the same as readers.>>9315469He's on vacation. He's posted every night to say hello.>>9315357It's not his job to be a therapist for people and it's pretty shitty to say that it is.
>>9315613I said interesting, anon.
>>9315613Clearly, Weaver did the entire story in comic form.>>9315630Preference is preference.
>>9315630I noticed, yes.
>>9315649>Clearly, Weaver did the entire story in comic form.The quote was:>drawfags>making interesting stories and AUs
>>9315615>It's not his job to be a therapist for people>I haven't written in months but I talk to him all the time to vent about RLI should stop probably...
>>9315663Whoops.I thought Weaver was equal parts writer and drawfag, though. As in, he started doing both at around the same time.
>>9315654So I'm still waiting to be proven wrong.
>>9315717How does one disprove an opinion?
>>9315710I'd call him a drawfag moonlighting as a writefag. Definitely not equal part.The point I was making was more that writing comics is still storytelling, just in a different medium. You need to create settings, scenes, characters, and dialog for both formats.
>>9315613Can somebody tl;dr Pack Street for me? What is it about? Why do people like it? I only see people discussing who should fuck who in these threads, is that the only appeal? Is there any tangible way it is even Zootopia-related? I mean, how does the city of Zootopia features in it? Is it even recognizable? Does it feature any characters from the movie?I'm only asking because there's a lot of material here for it, and I'm honestly not interested in some generic furry comic that pretends to be Zootopia material.
What is a first name mostly used for Nicks mom?
>>9315763Flatface, apparently.
>>9315753Pack Street is kinda like a standalone story, tied only to the events in the movie. To me, I started reading because it have a male prey main character, which you don't see often. The story is nice and it has memorable characters.
>>9315753Sheep moves to pred neighborhood during the savage mammal crisis and is sorta ignorantly racist but in an endearing way and he tries to fit in with a culture he doesn't really understand
>>9315753TL;DR:A ram named Remmy moves into a pred dominated neighborhood right as the savage epidemic picks up. It's popularity, depending on who you ask, stems from either weaver being the second coming of Pynchon or an attention whore who cultivates a cult if personality, take your pick. It's tangentially related to Zootopia.
>>9315753Someone else will answer your question so I'll address the part about people shipping the characters:If there's an update to the story, the next 2-5 threads will be nothing but talking about what just happened during the latest episode. We're you not around when Velvet mistakingly believed Remmy was in the wrong for enabling Ozzy's skipping of a session? Literally "Remmy did nothing wrong" "Remmy is a sack of shit" for a long goddamn time
>>9315763I've seen Vivian a lot
>>9315763Marian, Vivian, seen Elizabeth.
>>9315753>Can somebody tl;dr Pack Street for me? What is it about? A strange sheep with a limited worldview moves into a run-down neighborhood populated almost exclusively by predators. The series is mostly about him interacting with his neighbors and handling culture shock and social clashes, gradually coming to understand himself, his neighbors, and their shared world.>Why do people like it? I only see people discussing who should fuck who in these threads, is that the only appeal? It's a slice of life story with very comfortable overtones despite not always being friendly. It has an intriguing and diverse cast of characters with very distinct "voice" and lots of nuance and personality. The dialog is also believable and quite well-written. These are, of course, merely opinions, but it's what I like most.>Is there any tangible way it is even Zootopia-related? I mean, how does the city of Zootopia features in it? Is it even recognizable? Yes. The story is set in a slumlike area of Zootopia (named for one that actually appears on the canon map), and references many standards and locations, as well as incorporating various tidbits and lore from the movie and even the proto-script (including the "Bugburga" chain of bug-meat fast food restaurants). It's set during the stretch of months between Lionheart's arrest and Bellwether's arrest, when predator-prey relations are badly strained, hostility is more open, and species-ism runs rampant. The events are referenced numerous times, and become large plot points. In practice, the story reflects an exploration of the social climate the events of the movie helped create, and a look into the lives of Zootopian citizens affected by them.>Does it feature any characters from the movie?Referenced, but never met. I hope it stays that way, because I really don't want Nick and Judy showing up out of nowhere.
>>9315753>Can somebody tl;dr Pack Street for me? Sure. Sheep moves into an all pred neighborhood.>What is it about? Him learning to get along with the colourful cast of characters and fucking it up along the way.>Why do people like it? It's legitimately well written, in universe, and has enjoyable characters.>I only see people discussing who should fuck who in these threads, is that the only appeal?It's part of it, for some. I don't ship but I still like the story. >Is there any tangible way it is even Zootopia-related? Carries a lot of themes from the movie and pays close attention to the animal culture aspect.>I mean, how does the city of Zootopia features in it?Probably the second best aspect of it, first being the characters.>Is it even recognizable? Does it feature any characters from the movie?Events, yes. Characters, pretty much an OC driven fic.Give it a few chapters and see if you like it.
>>9315357I bet writefags would appreciate it if they could hear me laugh, cry, groan, and squeal like a fangirl as I read their fics for the first time.I can't really convey how I felt about a fic post-script. Especially the moment-to-moment stuff where emotional tone goes up and down a lot. At best, I only end up saying whether or not I liked it.
>>9315880This comic sort of captures the overall theme or feel in its own ways, and was a good primer. It caught me and I ended up enjoying the rest of the story.
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>>9315914>bought fuckload of carrots>still uses microwave carrots
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>>9315914>That random steamed tiny Nick
>>9315886I dont know why people shit on comic for doing that, gearing him actually laugh at a joke it legitimately be surprised by a twist is the best feedback I can get, but people said they hated it so I think he tries to tone it down
>>9314825u cheeky cunt
>>9315742>I'd call him a drawfag moonlighting as a writefag. Definitely not equal part.I would agree with this, but he's shown unusual prowess in his writing ability for that to just be a side thing, even in the days back on /tg/.
>>9315972>people said they hated itI never saw that
>>9315357armasyll here, i'm happy :v>here's a list of all my greens https://mega.nz/#F!ThVhjCZb!XHIzUtcqkHrmFLjLrgk9Ow
>>9316030Do drawfag and writefag have their basis in quality or quantity
>>9316065Quality. It's not like he writes often, anon.
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>>9316063>i'm happyYou're also thicc. Good on ya mate.
>>9313388>Judy smiles as she pulled a stolen cart>The two foxes tied in a blanket were still out as she left through the gates>She had to chase off some of her brother and sisters trying to take the two foxes which were hers now>Had they been anyone else then family they would have gotten a new breathing hole so it was put in the category of good fun>Loading a bucket with filled with random items made of precious metals and stones and some paintings that she liked for no good reason (the reason surely wasn't that a load of sexy foxes were painted on them naked)>The first day after a raid is the worst>slaves starting to cry and scream as the realization hits them like a mallet that they are now owned>But the fact that the ship is now way heavier to row against the currents was the biggest reason what Judy hates>On the way home they came across Asser the merchant with his ship the ‘Wench’>They sold to him most off the things they didn’t care about like 90% off the fox skins and all the fox meat and some other boring knick-knacks which some just took because there wasn’t much else>Home, home sweet home>She couldn’t wait to put her property to good use>They were welcomed as hero’s and the slaves followed their new owners in a sort of parade through town wearing heavy metal manacles>By the time Judy came home from partying in the mead hall it was late in the night>She saw the foxes still tied to the pole>It was time as she walked over to them and grabbed the male by the chin>Al he did was give a smirk as Judy started to check his features out following it by checking his gums>He seemed to be very healthy as she stepped back and checked his physique>The female was next>As Judy grabbed her chin she snapped and bit the paw>All Judy was raise an eyebrow as she closed her fingers around the lower jaw and squeezed hard
>>9316127>She lost the capability to maintain the pressure on her paw and started to cry in pain>Letting go as the female grabbed her jaw with both paws in pain>It wasn’t broken Judy knew but it would be painful to eat for the coming days>The male looked worried to the female>The male did look at Judy for a few seconds and the weird thing was that his eyes weren’t filled with hate or anything>Judy tossed them some blankets and went to bed>She lost her mood and the buzz from the mead was slowly disappearing
>>9316139>The following days she found out the names of the slaves were Nick and Vivian>Nick seemed to be the most relaxed as he did his things without much complaining>Vivian on the other paw was like an uphill battle she keeps on resisting>Judy was nearing the point she was going to kill her for her coat and be done with it but her mother gave her an idea that might work>Judy called for Vivian to come to her bedroom>When the vixen enters she saw Nick tied spread eagle to the bed poles and Judy completely naked but in her paw she held a knife>She ordered the vixen to kneel in the middle of the room which followed instantly>Judy raised her leg and pressed it against Nicks sheath grinding it back and forth>Nick let out moans as the soft yet strong foot rubbing his sheath slowly stirring his penis from his home>Judy harassed the sheath until she felt something wet press against her sole>That was the cue to stop and showed the vixen that she was arousing her son>Said member slowly grew and grew>Aiming it up Judy took it pretty much in one go beside the knot>Vivian seemed to get uncomfortable and started to fidget>Judy smiled as she stood up until only the head was still in her before plunging down again>Wet sounds started to fill the room as both of them were getting very aroused>Vivian seemed to be stuck between looking away or attacking Judy>”Don’t look away” Judy ordered as she went down one last time taking the fleshy ruby in her bunny cunny>Nick nearly screamed in pleasure as he was in a vice like grip>It didn’t last much longer as a warmth filled Judy before it seeped out>”Lick” it was all she had to say as the vixen was in a flash in between her legs licking her own sons cum from her masters pussy which was still filled with said cock
>>9315882>>9315880>>9315812>>9315807That sounds alright. I guess I'll check it out. I do prefer stories with a plot rather than slice-of life stuff, but if it's well written I'll bite.
alright thats it for now I hope someone can make a single thing off it and maybe add this image to the top
>>9314087>There's no write tennis because honestly that's not fun, it's less like drawing a comic one panel at a time and more like drawing a body part at a time, and that's a mess to compose.Is this really true? I thought writefags contribute to greens all the time
>>9316165Good work, anon.
NEW THREAD>>9316176>>9316176>>9316176
>>9316175I think he was talking about fics, but I may be wrong.Green tennis sounds fun, actually. If a little RP-ish
>>9315892>>9315897Not fond of that font, to be frank.
>>9315972I think he tones it down because he's trying to act more like a editor than a fan.I wish could record myself reading a fic, giving suggestions, and occasionally taking a moment to laugh or contemplate a scene. There have been fics where I literally stopped reading because I couldn't handle the feels and if a writefag could hear that and know how much of an impact what they wrote had on a person, I bet they would be over the moon.Not only that but, even hearing the parts where you struggled is beneficial to them. It could be a sign that they need to clarify something.If more people could do what comic does, even just as fans, a lot more writers would be happy.
>>9316212If you really want to help out writers, leave a comment on their stories. Most of them link to AO3 anyway. Even if you can't come up with anything they might have done better, saying what your favorite part was and why can really go a long way.
>>9316212Well, no one is stopping you.Do it.
>>9316258ThisHell comic goes over the moon whenever someone does what he does
>>9312396Even while melting... still chill. Cute badger Sothu!
>>9313388>>9316127>>9316139>>9316149>>9316165someone capcha this please?
>>9316204It's Weaver's handwriting.
>>9316249As I said, I have trouble writing about a fic post-script. I do leave comments when I can but they aren't as helpful.>>9316258Might give it a shot. I have a shitty mic, though, and no fancy setup like Comic does.
>>9315972I thoroughly enjoyed listening to comicanon read one of my fics, hearing when the'penny' dropped as he read through my plot twist..He giggled for a while, which gave me the 'my work here is done' feeling.
>>6438491>>6438888>>9316127>>9316139>>9316149>>9316296here, friendo :v
>>9316249Yes please, it's all we need.
>>9316372A fic post-script is super helpful but not necessary in all cases. If you want to, go for it, but seriously, if everyone who read a story could come up with one "I think this could have been done better because [reason]" and/or "I enjoyed this scene specifically for this reason" it would help immensely. If you want to write up a big thing for everything you read, and feel you can manage it, more power to you, but don't let the feeling of "I can't put everything into words at once" stop you from saying anything at all.
>>9307734N O I C EOICE
I want 4chan to break again so we can get 600+ posts
>>9315899>ニック......!Judy: "NICK......!">ニンジンNick: "CARROTS......!">ニッニック...Judy: "Ni- Nick...">ニンジン......Nick: "Carrots......">>9315914>ニック......Judy: "Nick......">ニンジン!Nick: "Carrots!" (TN: In case you didn't notice, there's kind of a theme here)>チンSFX: CHIN (DING)>ニッ...ニック...?Judy: "Ni... Nick...?">ニッニンジン........Lil' Nick: "C-Carrots........">さっきはわるかった...Judy: "I was bad a little while ago..."
>>9316149huh, not quite what I expected. I was hoping it to be at least a little bit emotion focused. Sure viking Judy is rough, and has to get them to submit. But force a mother drink her own sons cum is more then barbaric.Also the part where she considers killing his mother... she expects Nick to stay an obedient slave after that? Really makes this version of Judy cold blooded, not counting Nick as a person. I'm not aroused as I hoped I would be. thanks anyway for trying.
