/ztg/ - Zootopia General: Horrors The Mind Can Scarcely Fathom EditionPastebin: pastebin.com/iYDU8g2T/ztg/ CC List: derpy.me/ztgcclistArchives: ztarchive.com / desuarchive.org / archive.b-stats.orgPrevious thread:http://www.ztarchive.com/trash/thread/8890354Thematic Thursday: High SeasMore information on TT: derpy.me/trashthematicthursdaysTT Archive: t3event.tumblr.com
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2nd for cute unholy abominations
>>8898817The Charlie/Marty one is adorableWhat is he
Why is that every time I post online, mammals are all "SHOW US YOUR PSEUDO-PENE"?
>>8898833I don't think we've settled on a name for him yet.
>>8898833Fox plus stoat is... "Foat"? Or "Stox"?
>>8898902Just Sox. If he had a twin, there'd be a pair of sox.
>>8898712I've not checked it today, but I go to http://archiveofourown.org/users/PseudoFox/pseuds/PseudoFox a lot.
>>8898833A unholy mix of fox and stoat.....but mostly stoat
>>8898862Because it's a beautiful part of a beautiful cutie.>also insert joke about discord leaks here
>>8898833>>8898898>>8898902>>8898925>>8898936I used to dislike this ship.But even if it still triggers something negative, deep down, I've got to say that the two of them look damn cute together.
>>8898862fuck off with your shitty memedon't act like this is something we thrust on you when you're forcing it on uspseudopenis is trash
>>8898984It's because they're both horrible and this keeps them from bothering anyone else.
>>8897204>He seems like a fun dude, I'd gamble with him.He loves himself a good time.>>8897817>He's asian. That means he should be playing Pachinko. The Panchinko machines built around broken dreams from anime and video games that will never get sequelDas racist.
>>8898984I don't really mind it either.Just don't ask me to think it's better than vixen in the pasture, because it isn't
>>8899007wrongMarty is not horrible, he is a precious angry tube and he needs his loving.
>>8898898>>8898902>>8898925My take is: Alex, the saucy androgynous 'sox'.I'm not sure if it was me or Boney M who came up with the name and characterization, or if it was us together, but I really love it.Only five chapters in that thing so far, though, been meaning to come up with more. Kind of stalled with a lot of ideas for other things.
>>8899012Is he wearing a Fursona 5 shirt
>>8899024WrongMartina is a lovely tube and would make Charlene a wonderful wife.Marty is a salty little dilhole and Charlie is a kleptomaniac.
>>8899044He might be.
>>8899012I have a bad instinct to edit this so that it's= "You know, our ancestors used to eat out squirrels" and "Wanna have fun again tonight?"
>>8899039I pitched Oscar and he'd have Charlie's surname.It works both phonetically and so Marty could be smug at having a literary reference for a child.I'm not sure if it caught on, but a few people seemed to like it.
>>8899067Martina is not for Charlene.Martina is for asking Ozzy out on a date and eventually working up the nerve to kiss him, only for Ozzy to reveal he actually prefers her brother.
>>8898862>>8898981I want to dominate this cutie pie so badly...
>>8898984I just feel that we never get to have an inside on Charlie and Marty's relationship due to Pack Street being based on Remmy's perspective but I think that these two look good together and probably know each other more than the whole entire pack.
>>8899100I like Oscar. I don't think I had a strong preference for the sox in terms of names. It was more the Al and Velvet plus Sheepdog kids that I'd the stronger feelings about. Did you ever read the Pack Street: TNG chapters?
Can't you smell the drama that is cooking?You know I am all for biological children when it comes to Nick/Judy, but I also understand why people don't like it.But to have raving and insane rants where someone attacks and demeans authors choices and how they go about having children or staying together?Really now?I mean, is there anyone here that thinks Judy becoming a step mom and/or taking taking care of a child that is biologically not hers, wrong?To the point that it chases said authors (Or at least for certain one author) to leave the fandom/close down their account since they can't handle it?I truly feel that there is some messed up people in the world.
>>8898984I want to see Marty figuring out Charlie's suicidal thoughts and spending more time with her to keep an eye on her
>>8898591>>8898600Trick question it's both
>>8899018Too bad vixen in the pasture has pretty much being sunk by aardwool
>>8899152I did. I liked what was done with the kids, but not so much with the OG Pack Streeters. I'm leery of things involving strongly established characters.If the characterization is off, even a little, it's really noticeable.
>guy marries Martina>understanding is that Martina will be the dominant personality when he's around>Marty can show up when the husband is away, or during a specific moment where the "brother" is at arm's length>struggle within Martina's soul about whether her beloved feminine side will win out to the point that Marty only shows up once in a blue moonIs this... a good dramatic story idea?
>>8899108Right. Charlene gets the precious little tube, and Ozzy gets the furious little cinnamon bun
>>8899208Are you... writing them like a split personality?
>>8899195Somewhere, somehow, Jack Savage is sensing this and approving.
>>8899225Acceptable.
>>8899137This could make a lot of sense.
>>8899018But it really is tho
>>8899200Aside from Otterly, there is absolutely nothing that can make me think that Remmy/Anneke (or Remmy/Woltor for gay ships) is actually appealing.Remmy with:Charlie, Betty, Dora, even fucking Avo or Martina, yes.But not either of the Aardwolves.Fight me.
>>8899018I don't think of ships being competing either.I'll enjoy reading about Aardwool without feeling like somehow other ideas involving Remmy are sunk.
>>8899208>>8899228Or does Marty seriously think that he's being sneaky and that no one knows that he's actually Martina? Like it's the worst kept secret in the world to everyone but Marty?
>>8899228I had the thought that it starts that Martina is Marty being adventurous, but then it evolves to where Martina is the standard and Marty is more like a leftover husk, if that makes sense.
>>8899272Still number one in my book.
>>8899308I liked that idea. Everyone in Pack Street is going along with it. Al's reluctantly playing along, but he gets super uncomfortable whenever Martina hits on him.And Remmy's 100% unaware/
>>8899332I think this is the best, most hilarious scenario so I approve of it 100%.To be fair it's mostly because it makes Remmy come out looking like even more of a fool, and I can't seem to get enough of that.
>>8899203I've thought about that a lot, but then I figured that if the 'Sheepdog Family' concept is going to be the anchor of the whole thing, then I need to explore the dynamics in both Betty's mind and Remmy's mind. Still, that's a great point. I'm conflicted.I've wanted to do for Ch.6 something involving Velvet and her daughter since the former isn't really characterized in the original stories and the latter could be interesting to blow up. Not sure, though. I need more ideas.
>>8899332Is he uncomfortable because a pretty girl is hitting on him while he's engaged, or because a tube the size of his dong wants to wang chung tonight?
>>8899380He's uncomfortable because he's straight and he knows Marty has a donger.There's actually a Weaver pic that sorta shows this.
>>8899308>>8899332Seconded. Or thirded. Or four...ed.Only thing is that we can have all that but still a notion that Marty's depressive side has a split personality aspect to it, like a soft edged 'Dr. Jekyll and Ms. Hyde'.
>>8899368Personally, I think the major focus should be on the kids. Tabula rasa, and all that.
>>8899358It would be even funnier if also Percy has a major crush on Marty that Marty's oblivious to.
>>8899439What would you want to see with Al's daughter in the future?
>>8899446Percy is for whoever happens to be standing near him at any given moment
>>8899410I like what... was it BoneyM that did this?Marty's a smol predator, so he needs to be on his guard all the time. But as Martina, he's a girl, so he doesn't need to have as much of a "don't fuck with me" aura and can actually be happy and free.
>>8899380>>8899401Big Straight Al
>>8899284I would like Charmy if Remmy actually shows signs the he likes her or at least found her attractive (not saying that she isn't). I mean for god sake, Charlie slept in his bed naked but Remmy has sexually fantasize about Anneke and Betty yet not for the vixen that slept naked in with him. Not that I discouraging the ship or anyone who ships but I just can't see it
>>8899446I c wut ur doinMarty's too 'scary' for Percy to crush on.And by that I mean he's a swell guy, but his brand of enthusiasm would probably startle Percy too easily and take a long time to get used to.That said, Percy develops crushes pretty damn easily.>>8899480This is so funny it hurts.
>>8899410Martina could be a personality he uses for escapism? Something he can't keep up but allows him to relax, be kind and friendly, and all the things he can't be because of the mask he's built up for himself over the years.
Just a reminder that crossdressers are generally straight.You can wear a skirt and not suck a dick.Seriously guys.I know I shouldn't keep bringing this up, but I like to inform mammals.
>>8899555Yes yes yes Marty is straightBut so is "Martina" if you get what I mean
>>8899482I'm not sure if Boney M invented that idea, but he sure did write about it in a great way, yeah. Glad that he got plenty of (you)s for his take on the Martina/Marty situation.
>>8899555Yeah, yeah. Of course.Whatever you say, Marty...
>>8899555Marty is straight!Straight under the table at the first sign of a dick!
>>8899536You could make that argument about nearly any ship, tho.Avo/RemmyGazelle/NickSharla/Gideonand so on. The attraction that the characters have towards each other can be incidental.
>>8899477I'd like to see her battling with herself about which of her parents to idolize. Is she more like her father: strong, fierce, and protective, or like her mother: kind and nurturing? Moreso, she physically resembles a deer far more than a wolf (save for the teeth, probably), but what if she behaves more like a predator?
>>8899536I think "sexually fantasize" was too strong of a phase for me to use but he has "erotically fantasize" about them
>>8899543>>8899555This reminds me.If Percy dated Martina, and Martina is actually Marty and Percy knows it, would they actually be a good couple?
Why people dislike this shipping so much? They are both rabbits, it's natural, not like a Rabbit and a fox , that is unnatural, like a Chinese with a black lady, it just doesn't match
>>8899543Percy finds Marty intimidating. Exactly. But then, after seeing the stoat sucking down a particular kind of soda before making a joking remark, Percy spends the rest of the day fantizing about "grape-flavored French kisses".He might be tossing and turning in bed a little bit, face rubbing on the pillow. Thinking about whether one part of Marty's mouth would be more sugary than the other. Then, knowing that he has to be at work before too long, Percy curses his "luck".
http://games.jackbox.tv/artifact/DrawfulGame/BdBaZPBi3dUOnJxJ6fB2ykiR09c9JO3Y/well, that was fun
I had fun drawing with you guyshere's the results of the last game!http://games.jackbox.tv/artifact/DrawfulGame/BdBaZPBi3dUOnJxJ6fB2ykiR09c9JO3Y/
>>8899555>You can wear a skirt and not suck a dick.Yeah, but why wouldn't you?
>>8899555He's a faggot.
>>8899628I have a hard time answering that.Probably? Personality-wise it seems like a good match based on what little we know about her.But that all depends on whether or not Martina IS actually Marty of course.>>8899662Why do you do this.
>>8899658Fuck off rasist
How can anyone say Marty is a bad guy when he's best friends with Ozzy?No ulterior motives, no manipulation, they just enjoy each other's company
>>8899610Yeah, for what I've written so far she's a character that has the personality of her father in kind of the worst ways. Despite her appearance being so standard for deer, she wants to be A-#1 the best in everything that she touches. Immediately steers new mammals to treating her as the alpha.Thing is that I'm not sure what kind of scenario to write that out in. I thought about showing her at like a school track and field competition. Rubbing her victory in other girl's faces. Bullying a fennec fox with the help of some far bigger fox friends in her kind of gang.But how do you do all that and keep her sympathetic, though? I'm not sure. Honestly, I originally thought of this scenario as a one-shot, one-chapter piece. Not a multi-chapter saga kind of thing going over 17k words.
>>8899658Jack Savage and Judy Hopps are like negatively charged magnets. They repel each other, but are drawn to the positively-attracted fox cock.
ARE YOU TELLING ME THAT 9SARI IS VISITI?!
>>8899603Hold up, Gazelle/Nick would work great under certain conditions.Nick would have been, if he was accepted, a genuine Ranger Scout at heart. Honest. Trustworthy. Loyal. Kind. And when Judy brings all that back out in him, he returns to that kind of do-gooder personality.And what is Gazelle if not totally on board with all of those traits? She probably was involved with all kinds of charities and things before the Bellwether crisis. And she spent that situation going out of her way to promote kindness.
>>8899816No, I am.
>>8899834I think anon meant in canon, not in a what if scenario
>>8899628Maybe.
>>8899555>being straight >sucking dick pick one
>>8899839...Who......is 9sari? I mean, I know who she IS! She writes Sorbune!But-- is-- Is she not Visiti?...... I'm so confused...
>>8899834Bruh.You miss my point entirely.
>>8899658ew
>>8899795Complex characters are hard, man. Since she's still a kid and could be a straight up bully, Al could notice her behaviour and try to rectify it himself. The pack Alphas used to be the mom and dad, after all.
>>8899839>>8899877I too am 9sari
Percy sodomizes all of Pack Street when?
>>8899745Percy laying back with the fan going off overhead.Needing to rest so badly.But the moment he closes his eyes, the male-on-male eroticism fills his mind.>sparkling sensations from that soda-flavored tongue wiggling in his mouth>smooth waves of bliss from the stoat's tight cuddling during the kiss>little droplets of the grape soda slipping onto his own lips from the stoat's wet lips in the most amazing way
Oh boy, Oh boy, Oh boy!I can't wait for Zootopia to be popular!Just imagine the franchise: cartoons, shorts, comic books, toys, merchandise!!http://www.ebay.com/itm/DISNEY-Zootopia-Night-light-Movie-Toy-Action-Figure-Nick-gift-Judy-Table-Lamp-/222484128288?var=&hash=item33cd166220:m:mvffzQRYsCIXcEJidSCuk5Q
>>8899536I honestly see Remmy and Charlie as friends more than potential lovers just for the same reason that Remmy really hasn't shown any signs that he likes Charlie in that way and vice versa. This feeling because more clear to me after Savages.
>>8899867>implying it's gay if it's a feminine penis
>>8899914...Please someone tell me who here isn't 9sari.
>>8899914I'm 9sari!
After a careful analysis of all social interactions between Remmy and other members of the pact by a team of psychological experts as well using statistical data gained from conducting an advanced IQ test on different sample sizes representing various shipper groups and even consulting the magic 8 ball I do believe what we have here is the most accurate chart ever devised showing the worst to best and most likely to occur ships possible.You may not like it but it has been both scientifically and mathematically proven.
>>8899867IT'S JUST A BIG CLIT
>>8899943everyone but you, i'm afraid
Opinions?
>>8899978She has the biggest clit you ever did see
check'em
>>8899963>Remmy x Big Gay AlI'll take it
>>8899916Never. That's much too lewd.>>8899920DO NOT.>>8899943Don't worry. I'm not 9sari.That would require writing skills.
>>8899963Heh I like the first brain image. Stealing it.
>>8899943I'm notIm comic anon
>>8899936They strike me as more friends and partners-in-crime than lovers too. I do like well-written takes on them being a couple. But I'd rather see shenanigans planned by them.
>>8899999who gettem
>>8899963Where does RemmyXRex fall in these categories?
>>8899997She's cute
>>8899963The rainbow font really sells it>>8900019>That's much too lewdNonsense, Percy can't get enough dick
>>8900031>>8888888
>Grape>Flavored>Kisses
>>8900042slep tute bunnr
>>8899996You are posting an illegal image, so I won't trust you.>>8900019Inky you have wonderful writing skills! You wrote Shorty Squad!Although you would like Sorbune: its very cartoony!>>8900024Hello comicanon! It's me, VRbit! Big fan!>>8900042Sleep tight, bunner!
>>8900019Jeebus, I didn't know Percy was related to Mr Mackey.
>>8900040Rex can do better
>>8900087>>8900095
>>8898772Man... I'm coming to terms here. Maybe I'm just looking for validation or making sure I'm still sane, I don't know. Ever since diving into the fanfics and the movie I have had the gayest yet deepest spiritual connection with none other than Nicholas Piberius Wilde. His pain, sorrow, guilt, and pretty much his entire existence relates to me on a level many times beyond me. It's honestly kinda indescribable yet I know that it is the purest love I have ever felt. He is a world weary and depressed and hurting soul, yet I am the one giving compassion and love. He has revealed his inner most self and everything he is, maybe expecting a ridiculing but I cannot help but accept. Why is this? Am I looking for some deep, philosophical answer that will solve mankind's (or if anything mine) problems or am I just being autistic?also with this being said is there any fics without that fucking rabbit?
>>8899895Yeah, probably Ch.6 of my thing will be backstory with Al's daughter being a super femme jock with an alpha complex at school, Al witnessing some of that directly without reacting at first, and then bits of how much Hugh from Shorty Squad is struggling with his mom being sick and him having money issues.I need a much better notion of the overall story arc stuff that I'm working on here, though, for sure. I want everybody to grow some. But then I don't want this to be too serious. It was meant as a low-key comedy, you know?
>>8900054>>8900075Stop slandering his good name!>>8900095>You wrote Shorty Squad!True, but it would be a grammatical nightmare without the help of a fine editor. Even I can admit that.I form sentences like a damn jigsaw puzzle.>>8900103kek
>>8900027Exactly what I though too. I actually like then more as partners-in-crime than potential lovers because it fits perfectly with their personalities.
>>8899658I mean, it is less of a ship and more of masturbation to be honest. Jack's concept character slowly morphed into Judy, so it is like she is fucking a literal male version of herself, just with a lot less personality. Hell, since he has only a single piece of art, Jack has no character traits; Judy might as well be fucking herself with a dildo and it would be the same thing. It would have the same amount of emotions as Jack, and would probably be more energetic than the James Bond bunny.
>>8899943"Forge my faces to greet all the faces that I’ll meet.">>8900019If you're blinky, I really like your comic
>>8900095Hey, VRbit, I'm really curious what you felt about the past SciFi TT. And what you're having up next.
>>8900134So more like After School Special than HBO series?
>>8899935
Shit... i think i know this one...
>>8900140Ahh, don't get yourself hung up on the surface level things like grammar! I couldn't explain how to use a semicolon without the help of Google! You're a great storyteller: you have a wonderful creative construction of characters, narrative and an awareness of audience experience: that makes you great, so you should feel proud!
>>8900040it was concluded that rex was too good for Remmy, he's to good for anyone
>>8900195is this loss
>>8900188I'm inky, and if that' what you mean then thank you very much!If not then I'm sorry I'm not blinky.>>8900199This is a very kind thing to say, but it's still hard to consider myself a good writer with lack of experience (and knowing many better ones in person).However I'm still glad you think that way about me, and I thank you for it! I can't improve if I don't continue trying after all.>>8900200Rex is but an untouchable god which we can only gaze upon in splendor.
>>8900040>>8900107>>8900200Rex is for that hot hyena babe that works at Bug Burga that may or may not be Ozzy's mom.
>>8900133Nah its normal dont worry.
>>8900271He used to love her but he had to kill her.He had to put her six feet under, and he can still hear her complain.
>>8900193Pack Street: TNG was designed as a Zootopian version of Family Ties slash The Middle slash Modern Family etc, basically, in the form of a one chapter thing. Like a single TV episode. Fun writing.This ballooned to a three chapter short story arc that was going to have a little end bit wrapping up loose ends. Like a two-part TV movie. Also fun writing.But now it's kind of unwieldy in my mind. Going into something like a full series, more like a soap opera almost... maybe? Writing that's somewhat fun and somewhat tedious. The fact that I'm now emotionally invested in wanting everybody to have a happy ending plus that I don't have a clear idea for what should happen... that's a big problem.Sorry, I'm kind of just venting here a bit. I'm hoping that in the very near future I can talk to BoneyM some more about what he'd personally like to see me do. That could be interesting.
>>8900339
>>8900271NoRex is for her son
Hello /ztg/, Judy needs a shirt and only you can design it!You do not need to have this game. All you need is a phone, tablet, or your PC browser and to visit http://jackbox.tv and enter the code PQVS and your nameI also recommend you watch https://picarto.tv/caninae so you can get more context on what everyone has drawn!
>>8900188GAHHHHHH! I'M SO CONFUSED!!!9SARI IS EVERYONE!!!>>8900192SciFi was a lot of fun! I got to read a wonderful piece by Clunk and Writeyote, and I got to read a wonderful piece by RT_Pilon! And there were great comics and pictures posted throughout the day!My schedule is to get my read throughs finished up for Duke Anon, then to tackle the blind read throughs coming up, and to also get another chapter of WUTB out. As well, I need to finish writing the next history lesson.>>8900267We'll be with you while you improve to tell even better Shorty Squad Stories!... Shquorties!
>>8900195Its an awesome possum!
>>8900345No worries. It's more than what I could have done, which is basically shitpost about characterization like I've been doing.
>>8900345"What do I do, lord weaver?">Destroy the child, pseudo.>Drink the blood of the hybrids.P.S. Will the real 9sari please stand up?
>>8900267Rex has already been appeased by his lovely tube.
If we're talking about this, I'm still not sure about species names.Stoat + Fox = Sox? I want to go with that. It sounds right.Sheep + Wolf = Not sure. Weep? Sholf? Solf?Deer + Wolf = Weer? Dolf? Delf?
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>>8900479Rex fucks who he wants, when he wants. Yet sometimes a particular mammal will strike his heart. This is one of those days.
Any idea when/if the Nick and Judy revoltechs come out?
>>8900574my bet is winter.
>>8900465Hey, I'm glad to have gotten the response that I've gotten a lot too. Good feelings all around.
>>8900529Cool... i'll bring a date (don't worry she's off duty)
What fun!
>>8900517The sholf, the dolf, and a pair of sox.
>>8900789I like it.
>>8900779>>8900785I want both of these shirts
>>8900399I think that possum has too many battle axes.
>>8900619i don't see why not.
>>8900841Tail > paws
>>8900883Battle axes are a sign of maturity in possum culture.
>>8900517I would keep it wolf, doe, stoat.They look like one specie anyway and would probably like to identity like that aswell. It could feel humiliating being called like shoolf and such.
>>8899963This is best analysis
>>8900915The other kids probably call them those anyway. Except for Al and Velvet's daughter, who probably embraces it. "NO ONE MESSES WITH DOLF! NO ONE!"
>>8900893Nice. You're in good company.
>>8900841>>8900904There is no reason we cannot have paws wrapped in tails.
This is Mr. Big.Say something nice about him.
coming june 2017
>>8900994I like your rugs. What are they made out of..?
>>8900953I wish I was a drawfag and could do things of tween Al's daughter being such a wannabe alpha, bully girl in middle school.Right now, though, I'm just mentally sketching out scenes where she does stuff like pretend that she likes what a sucking up friend got her for lunch before grabbing a pack of pudding and then pouring it down the back of the poor girl's dress shirt. Other stuff like that. I'm wondering if I should look up "Whimpy Kid" style memoir things for inspiration.She would totally be winning the track and field competition in her slot, then spiking a water bottle on the ground or something yelling: "This is what a dolf does! This is what a dolf gets! Gold, you clods! Nothing but gold!"
>>8900994He does a good goatfather impersonation but really, he doesn't have to cosplay at work everyday in order to be taken seriously.
>>8900938
>>8900779http://games.jackbox.tv/artifact/TeeKOGame/2NZce6KI5I25zKNnPuJBtUoe09c9ZVFq/
>>8900994He was voiced by Egon from the Real Ghostbusters, Maurice Lamarche, and that's awesome.
>>8900994He knows good people.
>>8900619
>>8900095Nice to see you two finally make up after that ugly public falling out.
I really want to get that 60 cm tall Judy... and this one:
>>8900994He has beautiful eyes.>>8901103Damn it, I was gonna say that!
>>8901335so you can fuck it right
>>8901360You could always make an "addition".
>>8901360
>>8901360cut hole in crotch, nestle your bun-puss sleeve amongst the internal fluff, and go to town
>>8901566Why are some of them angry for whatever reasonInky looks like she's about to slap somebody's shit
>It was around midnight when Judy woke with a thirst.>Nick was laying beside her, nestled comfortably on his side with his top half under the covers, naked bottom half just barely covered, and head resting on a shared body pillow.>The glass on her nightstand was empty.>Slowly sliding out of bed, she grabbed the glass and glanced back at Nick.>The fox had rolled on his back, reclaiming some blanket, and was pitching quite the tent under the covers.>Thirst for water came first, she decided, and quietly tip-toed out of their room, leaving the door cracked just slightly.>The hallway joining their room with the rest of the house was cast in muted grays.>Down the hall, past the dinning room, she managed to get to the kitchen without making a sound.>Slipping her glass under the fossit, she twisted it gently, and the sound of rushing water immediately followed.>Turning the water back off, she gave the glass a sip, which turned into a gulp as she managed to down half of its contents.>After another refill, she turned on her heels, and came face-to-chest with a pelt of coarse, light fur.>She was almost surprised, but she was also tired.>Her face pressed into his chest, rubbing against a dress shirt.>Breathing deeply, she brought a paw up the smooth pant of a leg, and pushed it between the hem of his pants and his waist.>She mumbled tiredly, "Mmm, musky fox, still feelin' frisky?" and gave his pants a slight tug down.>A belt had stopped them from slipping away, and she let out a yawn.>A paw pressed against her back, and guided her out of the kitchen and dinning room, and back down the hall.>A single pair of footsteps sounding as she walked.>Opening the door, she let out another yawn, and continued past the bed.>Placing the full glass on the nightstand, she slipped back under the covers, and wrapped her arms around Nick's side, closing her eyes.>The door to their room quietly pressed against its frame, and the doorlatch clicked.
>>8901564see this guy gets it
>>8901630>fossit
>>8901630THEN WHO WAS FOXE
>>8900366Ozzy's mom is for her son.Ozzy and his mom had an incestuous relationship and the psychological damage it caused him is the reason for his visits with Ms.Roe.
>>8900999Who will use this to knit tho master the skill to knit their zoosonas?
>>8901630>Her eyes snapped open, and her ears perked up as she sat straight up in the bed.>She stared at the closed door for a moment before turning to Nick, still sleeping beside her.>There was a creak outside the door, far down the hall, and she grabbed Nick's shoulder and shook him, hard.>He woke instantly, and opened his mouth as Judy latched a paw over his lips, staring him right in the eye, with a finger her over mouth.>There was another creak, and another soon after.>He stared back at her with wide eyes as the creaking of the floor outside their room continued.>In the space of a second, it sounded like someone started running in their home, as the creaks turned into the plodding of paws on hardwood.>She turned over to her night table, opening it to reveal her personal tazer, which she grabbed.>Turning back over to Nick, she was stunned->Nick was gone. But she hadn't even felt him leave the bed.>Just as a feeling of despair started to well in her chest, she was jolted awake.>For a moment, she stared at her ceiling, confused.>Her heart was racing, and she felt drained.>Looked to her side, she saw Nick, head resting on their pillow, facing her, sleeping soundly.>It filled her with a sense of relief.>Looked over at her nightstand, she saw her glass, empty.>She felt thirsty.
>>8901925>nick's cock first
and time to sleep for me. stay comfy /ztg/
>>8902151Sleep tight, bunner! Had a lot of fun watching it, even though chat didn't work for me!
>>8900529Thanks again. Watched this twice this week so far. Feels always gets me during bridge scene.
>>8901566happy sparkle long neckhe good long neck sparkle sparkle
>>8901630>>8901925That was honestly rather creepy. Thanks for that, makes me wonder if this is a repeating dream or something.But how could she had ever felt that other being's fur if it was a ghost or something? Makes me also wonder how it had the ability to give off a scent and have her physically feel it, yet not give off sound for when it moved.
>>8902151thanks for the comfy streams. sleep tight, trashy!
>>8901925>Before she could slip out of the bed, she watched as Nick had turned to his back.>His cock was pitching quite the tent under the covers.>Her poor, verile fox needed relief, she decided, and quietly snuck under the covers, and crawled towards him.>The covers were thick and dark, but she knew the anatomy of her fox.>Brushing a paw along his pelt, she felt down his lean abs, and sifted a paw through the thicker fur of his treasure trail.>She sometimes wished he would trim that thing, but other times she found she enjoyed how it felt.>It did its namesake well, as her paws trailed down it, to his bulbous knot.>With one paw cupping the knot, she used the other to fondle his balls, and quickly took his tip into her mouth.>Rubbing and squeezing at the knot, fondling and brushing fingers against his sack, and quickly taking his length down to just before his flared knew, she worked him like a pornstar in those eweporn videos she sometimes watches.>Every evening, in the guise of talking to Violet.>Except that one time where Violet called while she was slapping the beaver to a tranny corsac vixen face-fucking stripped rabbit buck.>That was a memory for another time, though, as she felt his cock throb along the roof of her mouth and the back of her throat.>His footpaws started twitching and kicking as she heard a low groan.>Pulling her head back just far enough that it was only tip of his length resting on the tip of her tongue, she sucked gingerly, and was rewarded.>One ejaculate, and mouthful of fox sperm was swallowed a second later.>Another throb, and another mouthful past down her throat.>And another.>Guiding her paws up his length, she squeezed a few last drops out of him before letting his still hard lenght slide from her mouth, as clean as could be, to rest against his bare fur.>Now she could really use some water, she decided, and rolled quietly out of bed.
>>8899610>Is she more like her father: strong, fierce, and protective, or like her mother: kind and nurturingare we talking about the same remmy and betty here
>>8902296No, of course not.Because they're talking about Al and Velvet.
>>8902319I KNEW I WAS MISSING SOMETHING
>>8902296The talk is about Al and V's daughter not Sheepdog son.
>>8902333Nice trips.Will you ever draw those cute heresies?
G'night zootopia.I had a blast with y'all tonight!
>>8902450Have a comfy night!
That was super fun playing Jackbox with you all!More read throughs coming, as well as continuing writer's workshop!>>8901310Buddy, there's nobody here who could do anything to me that I wouldn't be able to forgive them for! Grudges aren't comfy, and comfy's kind of my jam!Goodnight magical and wonderful /ztp/ threads! I hope your shirts all have the best graphical designs and the wittiest catchphrases, and are comfy enough to use as pajamas!
>>8902486Sleep well bun bun, don't let your fox bully you out of snuggle snoozing. It's your right as his bun.
>"And mom said it was hard raising a family, ha!"
>>8902263>She grabbed the glass on her nightstand, and glanced back at Nick.>His cock had been tamed, just barely, as it throbbed gently under the covers.>Thirst for water now came first, she decided, and quietly tip-toed out of their room, leaving the door wide open.>The hallway joining their room with the rest of the house was cast in muted grays.>Down the hall, past the dinning room, she managed to get tot he kitchen with just the barest of creaking floorboards.>Slipping her glass under the faucet, she twisted it gently, and the sound of rushing water immediately followed.>Leaving the water on, she gave the glass a gulp, washing away the thick feeling of cum coating her tongue, as she managed to down half of its contents.>After another refill, she turned the water back off, and turned on her heels, and came face-to-chest with a pelt of coarse, light fur.>She was almost surprised, but she was wake.>Her face pressed into his chest, rubbing against a dress shirt.>She stopped.>Jumping to the side, by the kitchen corner further away from the door, she stared at the creature before her->A male fox, Nick's height. wearing a dress suit with the shirt open.>The fur pattern was almost exactly like Nick's, except the muzzle was splotched with what was obviously grey, even in the moonlight.>He stared at her, with sharp, colourless eyes.>She threw the glass at him, and screamed, "Nick!" as she grabbed a pot from the sink.>Rustling and crashing could be heard in the distance, and she quickly blinked.>The fox before her was gone, and in its place was a naked, wide-eyed, heavily breathing Nick, staring at her in fear.>Alarmed, he asked, "What's wrong?!">And frightened, she told him, "Th-there was a fox in here a second ago- in a suit, open shirt, your height,">He swiftly stepped into the kitchen, pressing against the wall by the door, and quietly he said, "I didn't see or hear anyone run out of here,">He gave the air a sniff, and shook his head.
>bought new tablet>suddenly no idea a what to drawGimme some ideasI won't draw them immediately, but I want to break this thing in.
>>8902552Judy watching over her nephews and nieces? Or maybe Nick spoiling them?
>>8902521The best/worst thing about this is that's exactly something I could picture her saying in such a situation.
>>8902552Zootopia pool party!
>>8902571Oooh, second this. Some rabbits bustling around Uncle Nick would be fantastic.
>>8902577She's a good bun
>>8902552Desmond and Molly at a restaurant, maybe?
>>8902552sample illustration from "55 Ways To Get Killed On A Farm (Or How Not To Die Like A Village Idiot)" by Jeremiah HoppsJudy dropping spaghetti hard in front of Gazelledrunk Honey feverishly explaining to Nick and Judy about sheep conspiracy
>>8902552Popular OCs that have tons of references:Pack StreetShorty SquadHenriettaMoped and DonkPizza Crew and Little HustlersDesmond and MollyJack and Skye (soft canon)
>>8900994His hair looks...small.
>>8902669>Henriettaliterally who
>>8902545>"I don't smell anything but us," he added, but stilled kept himself pressed against the wall.>Her body started quivering as she stared into the empty dinning room, and glanced at Nick.>Taking a shivering breath, she feebly said, "I saw him, Nick- he was standing right in the middle of the kitchen, I threw my glass right at him,">She looked around for the glass shards, but saw none.>Nick looked up behind her, and her eyes followed.>It was her glass of water, the only glass out on the kitchen counter.>She stared back at Nick, with the pot in her pands shaking.>Pleading, almost with tears in her eyes, she uttered, "Nick, please, I know- I know what I saw,">He nodded, and motioned her to follow.>They spent the new few minutes, going through the apartment, turning each light on and checking every room.>He checked the deadbolts on the front and back door, and the locks on the windows.>Nothing had been unlocked, and he told her he couldn't smell another animal in theor home.>Nick left every light on in the apartment, and closed every door.>She tried to take her tazer out when he finally convinced her to come to bed, but they agreed on setting out on the night table.>He wrapped himself around her, as she fell asleep staring at the locked door to their bedroom.>There was the plod of a paw against a floorboard, and a creak.>She screamed, and thrashed out of Nick's embrace.>He shot up, and staring at her with wide, concerned eyes as he asked, "Judy, calm down! What's wrong?!">Turning around to him, she grabbed at the tazer as she cried out, "I heard someone! In the hall-">She heard another step, and another creak, "There it is again! You can hear it!">Nick frowned at that, and watched as she pointed the tazer at the door.>In a soft, concerned tone, he spoke to her, "Judy, I can't hear anything but us,">She just stared at the door with wide, frightened eyes.>She watched as the doorknob turned.
>>8902713https://tjhcomic.tumblr.com/Henrietta is the MC of Things Just Happen, a story about a couple of preds during the Bellwether Crisis. The MC is kind of like a neurotic Mae from NITW.Artist is Sherry, she's cool.
>>8902751>She woke with a start, as a bright beam of light hit her in the face.>It was another night of nightmares of the one mammal she couldn't save.>She begged Nick to call off work for the both of them.>He promised to do so, if she would finally seek help.>Bogo was sympathetic, and pushed for the same thing when he'd called.
>>8902950
>>8902669>all of thisI literally have no idea
>>8902486>That was super fun playing Jackbox with you all!What did I miss while I was asleep?
>>8903101>not knowing Desmond and Mollyliterally how
>>8903135They've been here since like April.
>>8903129Rose did a stream and suckered people into playing Jack games together. Was a lot of fun especially since she made some zootopian flavored prompts for it.
>>8903171we're still going
>>8901630>>8901925>>8902263>>8902545>>8902751>>8902950What >>8903014 said.I think you might have missed Halloween time. Seriously. So she ended up not being able to save a fox that looks like Nick, feeling she could have, her mind instead persecutes her.Along with thinking that Nick was the one to have died.That's a pretty sad outcome, so a damn good job at making me feel things.(Am I a terrible person, that when a fox that wasn't Nick was around and such. I was first expecting a thief/home invasion gone wrong, where the fox would have gotten caught and then try and assault her or something?)That or it was Nick's father/brother or something.
>>8903275
>>8903275You're good peeps
>>8901566Who's the badger on the bottom right? Labger?Also, is the scribble on the center FinnickFag and the bottom center fox Moped?
>>8903353middle is Tegaki
>>8902296>>8902319>>8902333AU of a taller horned strong Remmy white knighting for a more timid and kind Betty when?
>>8903382I could see a more kind Betty, but timid or frail just doesn't compute.
Hey Anons, Didn't get to draw today due to being dragged all over town by friends. Looks like missed some streams too.
>a thief sneaks into the thread and starts stealing everyone's porn while they are not looking
>>8903551>He who sees all porn
>>8903531honestly I wish Nobby did a non-lewd version of this
>>8903531>>8903555I wish for an even lewder version
>>8903555
>>8903553>>8903551The pornomancer!Or is he more the blueballs-omancer
>>8903555ask and you shall receive
>>8903593Woof, that antelope fucking loves his popsicles.
>>8903611I appreciate your effort anon, have a (you)
>>8903551>>8903553>>8903593Or we could.You know.Go to PornHub like normal people and fap to our females.
>>8903620thanks i put a lot of work into it>>8903621that's the stupidest thing I've ever heard
>>8899080You know what FUCK IT.
>>8903671About as well as his acting.
>>8903621>>Go to PornHub like normal people and fap to our females.>Implying any female is as hot as Mrs. Wilde
>>8903687
>>8903684How dare you. Jaden Smith is a genius.https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=R2SP9EO3FfM
>>8903687I notice the 'cartoon' section of pornhub is growing.
>>8903700
>>8903710
>>8903700Weavers raggedy milfs are a thing o beauty
>>8903713>>8903710Lucky motherfucker....
>>8903734There is something just so beautiful in the way that Nick loves his mother so much.
>>8903687gross
>>8903738It makes you appreciate the moments when he isn't fucking her senseless.
>>8903734>>8903738let's not forget about fanfics http://archiveofourown.org/works/7408912/chapters/16828165
>>8903755Or greens
>>8903660You indulge us too much Inky.You wonderful pigu.
>>8903752>>8903755And she's so supportive of Judy being in her son's life, that she even shares her love with the bunny as well.
>>8903774Then again, it could be argued that Stu & Bonnie are JUST as loving to Nick, if not moreso.Whether or not that's a good thing is in the eye of the beholder.
>>8903671they don't?zootopians don't wear shoes Jaden, JFC watch the goddamn movie
>>8903780But hey, it's always good to know that both sides of the family get along great, right?
>>8903660Have you ever drawn Mrs. Wilde Inky?
>>8903780>Imagen that they do that to all boyfriends/girlfriends of their children.>Children actually take it as a compliment when their parents want to try their mate for a round.>They compete who's bf/gf/husband/wife mommy and daddy enjoyed the most.
>>8903793i second this question
>>8903805Sharing is caring. I wonder how many brothers Judy has had inside of her.
>>8903805>Judy flips, when she loses a bet because Bonnie says that Nick isn't the one she enjoyed the most>Judy scolds Nick for not pleasuring her mother enough>Demands a "double or nothing"rematch and pushes them into the bedroom and closes the door on them
>>8903784But Spidey, I see the goat lady wearing shoes right here.
>>8903793>>8903816Only once, dressed as maid Marian.She is quite lovely, especially Weaver's depiction of her.I think I'd want to put my own spin on her if I did though.Plus I usually see her in incest and that isn't really my bag, even if I don't find it particularly gross.
>>8903784Well the creators said it was just a visual design. That if the world was real they would wear shoes.
>>8903773Thank you!
>>8903835My idea of her is that she owns a Bed&Breakfast as a buisness. And sometimes helps young foxes down on their luck.
>>8903835You should have her with Judy instead. WildeHopps is king after all.
is it this time again already?
>>8903856Source?
>>8903858>WildeHopps is king after all.But I don't ship WildeHopps>>8903856That's actually really cute and and sweet.I sort of have this mental image of her as a loving, down to earth, hard working woman.Don't get me wrong though, I'm also down with the comedic sultry Mrs. Wilde as well. Especially when she's depicted with fine hips.
>>8903888Well true enough, I just figure Judy ending up hooking up with Nick's mom would be a comical image.Especially if they don't realise, and Nick happens to walk into Judy's apartment one morning to get his partner, only to find her in bed with his mom.
>>8903888>not shipping WildeHopps heresy
>>8903884looks kk
>>8903888Inky if this is you, then I want to apologize for asking this again, because seriously I believe I have bothered this thread long enough with this. But.Did you had time to read my Story from Pastabin (the second part about Anon and Cynthia.)
>>8903909>Not shipping WildeWilde. Even more heresy
Wilde [Clover] Honey is the best ship.
>>8904018Honestly, Wilde Honey is the best ship, regardless of gender.
>>8904018FemNick looks hot. I'd fuck her.
This is so fucking hot
found aa couple dressed as nick and judy for grand prix.
>>8903901>>>8903935I'm sorry. I still have it open, but I've honestly not been around much these past few weeks.I feel sorry to make you ask again. I'll try to read it tonight.>>8903909Never shipped it, likely never will. I do see the appeal though.
>>8904078Let me tell you about Zootopia
>>8904106"Would you like to join us Nicky?"
>>8904106vicelike + garden of eden. Nick's a lucky fox.
>>8904106How would Nick feel if Judy continues to be with his mom?How would he be able to treat Judy knowing his best friend would also technically be his 2nd mom, if they were too marry?
>>8903830He wants those shoes!
>>8904106It's beautiful!
>>8904151>2nd momhttps://m.youtube.com/watch?v=I19wgjB36-o
>>8904176>obligatory
>>8904176That's pretty disgusting.
>>8904187
Two mothers judging this thread's taste.
>>8904249
>>8904253
>>8904263You just KNOW
>>8904263who's that pokemon?
>>8904276IT'S PIKACHU
>Nick's mom had always told him never to trust bunnies.>But she'd never told him that it was because they'd break your heart.>When she was younger, Mrs. Wilde had been in love with a wonderful rabbit, and would have done anything to be with her.>But in the end, she'd had to go back to her family's carrot farm, and marry some doofus.>Mrs. Wilde never forgot her, even after she married Nick's dad.>She was very shocked to discover her son was dating her former lover's daughter.
>>8904038>FemNick looks hot. I'd fuck her.you're not alone
>>8904296>"Eiffel Tower?"
Just stumbled on this, and was surprised it never came up for Easter, Sci-Fi, or just because it's an early Howard while planning Zootopia;
>>8904263>>8904253>>8904249enough with the milfs already. Look how disgusting they can be. There's a reason nature makes them less attractive as they get older.
>>8904351I don't know what you're talking about.I'd fuck the shit out of that milf.
>>8904325Eh, I dunno, just seems like a random movie with furred animals, I could see it coming up on the scrapped concepts TT but not people using it for something like Dinosaur or Space TT for instance.There was also the bounty hunters concept art for Sci-Fi but nobody did it either.
>>8904379You know, it is kind of funny of how Jack Savage gets all the attention of being a secret agent when he has only a single piece of concept art...while Nick has at least half a dozen pictures of being an agent.
>>8904404
>>8904404What a lovely maiden.Goodnight thread.
I wonder if Joshua/Collin will ever wonder about his paternal grandparents. I feel like Remmy would be the type of father to change the subject when it comes up not for his benefit but to protect his son's feelings
How do writefags/drawfags realize they are trying too hard? I'm on a conundrum where I'm afraid I might be going too hard on the sad which may end up coming the inverse direction.>>8904446Good Night piggu, rest well and take care of yourself.
>>8904452I think even Betty would help misdirecting whenever the issue came up.
>>8904106No don't be, I just hope I wasn't annyoing with it. Also I hope I'm not stressing you, take your time
>>8904176Would you believe I've never seen this video until now?
>>8904482No.
>>8904455I dread that moment in my own work. I know it's going to come, but I need it to.I'm worried that if I fuck up I'll be considered the next zistopia or interschmiter or whichever other story people say went to shit.
>>8904446Goodnight Inky! Hope things go well for you!
>>8902652Disney mock executions when
>>8904490Same, I know it will happen even if I don't screw up because different expectations on the story and whatnot. You should at least make sure it both makes sense and you acclimated the readers to it. That said I was more wondering on not plot-wise but portraying wise, characters looking sad is cheap as fuck if your story didn't set the mood correctly.
>>8904482I love everything about this pic.
>>8904534Perhaps reread the story up to that point, or ask someone else to, and see if they could see it making sense with the mood. That's the only thing I can think of right now.
>>8904452>>8904462>"But mom why can't dad tell me about grandma and grandpa?!">"Look Joshua, your father......doesn't really have a good relationship with his parents>"But why momma?">"Let just say his parents weren't too...happy with him being with me">"But why?">"Its complicated sweetie"
>>8899183I was following a string of quotes and just saw this.0w0 whats this
>>8900194>Tiny Ms Otterton
>>8902577Disheveled hair Maxine is better than her normal hair desu
>>8899183>I mean, is there anyone here that thinks Judy becoming a step mom and/or taking taking care of a child that is biologically not hers, wrong?>Every single fic where Nick is the stepfather for Judy's children, or they adopt.
>>8904741>>8904736I'm still amazed how fetishy this movie is and that it would be even harder on Proto version (diaper finnick, more clawhauser fatting around).I mean I'm sure that wasn't the intent of the authors but still, even the Naturist club seem a bit furry fandom to me.
>>8904769There are times where I want to believe some of that is an honest oversight, and some of it most likely is just things they didn't think about.And then there are other parts of the movie where I am of full belief that the team knew exactly what they were doing.
>>8903843This guys going to end up with a couple of broken knee caps one day.
>>8904754
>>8904441Looks like a Birchly?Source?
>>8904827someone on /co/, cause that's where i found it
>>8904792When you're an animator who's entire life for the lengthy production cycle of a film involves perfecting Judy Hopps ass. Ignorance is not really available I would think.
>>8904826Is TIWTTLLL over?Is IT over?
>>8904792True, though I remember someone saying that Judy design (including her clothes) got changed as to make her more feminine as originally people couldn't tell the bunny was a she.>>8904815Maybe he'll end up joining yakuza group in Zootopia.
>>8904826The bunny cunny is hard to resist...For some reason, I am reminded of some fic where Nick and Judy were dancing around their relationship, Judy goes to BunnyBurrow because her parents want her to seem some suitor buck, everyone got drunk and Judy ends up pregnant by the buck, and Nick was...ok with that? Or something. "He loved her so much, he pushed away the pain." or some shit like that.>>8904851Seeing some of her concept art, that is a possibility, though if we consider Proto-Judy with her slightly open jumpsuit and busty figure...
>>8904846Unofficially killed. Heard even sprinkah got sick of it, but it was never "its dead" by him either. Assumed he tried so hard to make the comic seem less weird than the one-shot but eventually gave up .>>8904897I think busty Judy was a reaction of "how far on the spectrum can we go" regarding making clear the bunny was a she. Judy is kinda a blend of the original featureless bunny that probably was too androgynous for the audience (No hair, too animal, eyes more to the side, hidden nose) and busty judy (extremely sensual, skin tight clothing, extremely feminine face features)
>>8904846https://e621.net/post/show/1122212/2017-anthro-canine-clothed-clothing-comic-dialogueThe latest "entry" was uploaded 2 months ago and, natch, the sole voice that spoke of how absolutely shitty this story and the universe it takes place in was downvoted below threshold.I know that feel very well, I made the mistake of trying to warn people of the same during earlier pages.
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>>8904892What's depressing is that, while EWS isn't as "artistically pleasing" as Adam Wan is, I have little doubt that a nudist comic coming from him would actually be pretty good.It wouldn't be an excuse for Nick touching other peoples' dicks and (possibly) Judy getting fucked by strangers.
>>8904018>>8904038>>8904296"Clover" sounds even more feminine than "Honey"
>>8904919It all falls into place.>"Nickie! I needed that notebook for work."
>>8904106"I was just keeping it warm for you, Nicky!"
>>8904942>Assumed he tried so hard to make the comic seem less weird than the one-shot but eventually gave up .>less weirdIs that what adding 10 extra pages of Nick being sad and Judy being sad was? An attempt to make it less weird?Like just seeing more abloo-bloo-bloo would give the readers more pathos for these shitty characters?
>>8904959Lewd
>>8904531Soon.
>>8904981I believe so. The original simply stated that Judy was scared, and Nick replied with that he would like that the children were his but would still love to raise them with Judy. The comic added the bit where Judy thought she messed up and Nick tried supporting her, him cheering her on and even the more lighthearted jokes. The second sentence is what I meant about giving up, people already were miffed by the previous pages. Some people were already angry because there were two pages of no text and just them looking sad at each other every two weeks. And some had lost the interest due to how aside from the first pages it had developed very little.I still thought he had a solid following supporting him but I guess eventually there were too many 'haters' and he became demotivated.
Just woke upGoodnight!
>>8905014What's utterly depressing to me is that it was popular in the first place.With Zistopia, I get it. People thought that NW had a direction for things to go, and then it started crumbling like toast.Same with I.S., that drama of interspecies dating at least seemed /half/ plausible at the time and Max was just a plot device. People just thought that Spin needed a bit more time to refine, before she jumped headlong into BEAUTIFUL FURRY MAN.And if it weren't for us seeing Jack Savage used as a Nick & Judy romance iceberg about 1000 times before, most people would've probably been on Black Jack's side a bit longer than they did in actuality.But True Love? No, I just can't.
>>8904981>>8905014Hell, I think they just outright changed the second part of the comic really. Once it gets past Judy's kits being born, it shifts direction from Nick being sad that he isn't with Judy to him trying to make her see that being a single mom, while tough, is doable, especially by a strong woman like Judy. The issue is that the title, and the original premise, no longer fit the comic. It wasn't about "This is what True Love looks like" at that point, since Nick wasn't trying to come onto an emotionally distraught Judy, though she did really oversell the whole "what am I going to do as a single mother?!"
Were all sheep police arrested that they had to disguise their regular officers as sheep?
>>8904455Proper build-up and setting is key.If a character is going to be sad, it should be obvious as to why they ended up like that; and if they are going to continue to be sad, there needs to be a reason why they can't make things better for themselves.Using the comic Pack Street: Absence as an example: "Day One" shows how the twins became sad. By "Day Two" it shows that they want things to get better and are willing to put the effort to do so. However, a series of unfortunate events and misunderstandings leads to even more sadness. Afterwards, it required outside intervention to solve the problem.If you can lead your audience into the proper mindset and make them believe that "this is how it's supposed to be" and give them no reason to say otherwise, you got nothing to worry about.
>>8905106It's unlikely that Bellwether managed to turn every sheep police against preds. Maybe they were all brought in for questioning, but arresting every sheep officer just because Bellwether's co-conspirators we're mostly sheep is just racist.
>>8905096>BEAUTIFUL FURRY MANI am still really annoyed at that, Max was a decent character overall at the beginning. Maybe a little "edgy and cool", but he was a plot device who could also be silly and didn't take up the spotlight that much.>And if it weren't for us seeing Jack Savage used as a Nick & Judy romance iceberg about 1000 times before, most people would've probably been on Black Jack's side a bit longer than they did in actuality.I basically jumped ship once I saw Nick act as a jealous teenager straight out the get-go; back then, if someone wanted to use Jack as a romantic drama plot device, sure, go for it. At least have some fucking build up to the damn thing though; I can see Nick being a little annoyed at the beginning, but not too worried. Slowly, though, Nick becomes more and more jealous and irritated as Judy and Jack get closer, which would have been proper escalation. Instead, we get Nick being a pissant when Judy is excited on seeing her hero (the whole Jack being a super agent is a whole other issue that people like to ignore), acting like a child who doesn't want to share his toys.
>>8905205My god.I know that canon Gazelle's got long legs, but damn.
>>8905096Art alone is able to make people interested on something, since even a single picture with enough information conveyed can tell a story (See: Cyborg Nick). Zist is still popular even though it got shitcanned, IS is aswell and I've read on reddit people loving Black Jack despite everything, I believe most of the negative reaction comes from these threads since people are not afraid to say things and get swarmed by others. It's kind of the reason people ask for commissions of their fics.>>8905104He did, he ended up in a corner. I could see a solution being him showing both eventually falling in love much later with Nick/Judy having hangups due to the whole Jack pregnancy thing but overcoming it because they really feel they love the other, but that'd be a lot of work for a fan comic of a oneshot.>>8905193>"Oh my God, Hopps and Wilde are at it again on the streets."
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>>8904892I miss comics where Judy isn't a bitch and Nick isn't a prick when talking to one another.
>>8904993Officer Joseph(ene) Starlin Hopps.
>>8905096Talking IS, was just checking DA and found the latest release of IS being dubbed for YT.Just had to close the window after only a few minutes, painfull.
>>8905032source?
>>8905487That's Lenin actually. You can't make a revolution in white gloves.
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