Zootopia General: Fox Porn EditionPastebin: pastebin.com/iYDU8g2TZTG Creator List: derpy.me/ztgcclistArchives: ztarchive.com / desuarchive.orgPrevious thread: https://archive.b-stats.org/trash/thread/8411732Thematic Thursdays: "Can I stay at your place?" (due 30/March)More information: derpy.me/trashthematicthursdaysTT Archive: t3event.tumblr.com
First for MILFs.
Reshilling for new threadHere's the fourth adventure of the Shorty Squad:Historical Dramahttp://www.philome.la/tomoesgrudge/historical-drama/playHope you enjoy!
guess we're going with this one
>>8418175Who else thinks that, from a distance, that looks like a musical instrument?
:)
STOP! You're under arrest!
>>8418206(:
odds write my TTevens sub come to depression
Requesting an Ozzy version of this.
>>8418206>>8418240:3|c
Is there a special tiger in your lives?
>>8418237>implying
>>8418206>>8418240>>8418258:x
>>8418261no
>>8418206>>8418240:) :) :I:) :> :) ()_()
>>8418206>>8418240>>8418258>>8418284>>8418291>:(>>8418261no, but i wish there was one, like her
>>8418261Dora from Pack Street
>>8418247Yessssss
>>8412575>Do you consider yourself a successful writefriend? We all know one can never have enough (yous) and kudos, but what's your feeling all in all?No. No. Not even close. I haven't even said a quarter of what I want to say. Not yet. I'm writing at a chapter on a biweekly basis, which is a moderate speed, but not fast enough. Every time a new thought pops up, I want to share it with the world. Sometimes, I'll get an idea that I feel that readers will love, but I also realize that the idea won't be applicable until several chapters later. Sometimes, a memory or idea will sequester itself within the recesses of my memory, in which case I will have to trudge it out, like a bottom-trawler.>Have you written prose before? For how long? Have you ever educated yourself on the art of writing, be it formal courses, books or reaching for professional help?I wish I had done more writing in pleasure in High School, but I mainly dedicated myself to clinical essay-writing. >Are there any books/guides/online courses you can recommend? Read fiction and non-fiction. The best way to write well is to neither to just devour books, nor to cut a hole in the paper lining, and insert a fleshlight inside the book (lest one obtains paper-cuts on his urethrea as a true bibliophile would), but rather to analyze the writing: how does the author describe the scene? Are there any symbols or overarching themes that shape the work as a whole? Having a basic understanding of plot and command of language will set one on the path of excellence. V. by Thomas Pynchon is a good book. His zaney digressions are absolutely the best, and I love the way that the plot hops from one story to another.1/2
Requesting more beavers.
>>8418175Read this earlier and was waiting for the new thread to give it a (you).Really enjoyed this installment; the unspoken history of Percy and his sister has probably been the most intriguing thing for me that you've presented in the past months since you've started drawing little hints here and there (moreso than Hugh's job, because it's pretty obvious his full-time employment is operating a booty that don't quit).Looking forward to the next chapter.
Here's something for you and/or the characters you write.
>>8418261Tigers are pretty great
>>8418261yesit's mei'm a special tiger
>>8418314ok
Was there ever a full story decided to Pack Street Bad End?
>>8418247>sub comenodon't let the sub have releaseyou must blueball the subyou gotta
>>8418175>"My car isn't THAT small. You could fit in it no problem!"
>>8418313>>8412575>There is a reason why you write. What is important for you? Do you want to tell a story? Share your own experiences? Entertainment? What is your motivator?I first formulated my current idea as a Senior in HS, working tirelessly, trying to perfect my creative writing essays for whatever college I desired. I realized that I had been, from 9th grade on, paralyzed within the scope of analysis and rhetorial essay-writing, as I was not able to formulate a cohesive story, even if the word limit was 650. But in truth, I wanted to share my experiences and grief with the college admissions system by writing a story about college. It's a strange overgrowth that happened after I was done with admissions.(this reminds me that all my college admissions decisions come out on march 30 FUCK)>How do you identify faults in your writing? Self-reflection? Feedback? Critique requests? Other? How useful do you think they are compared to each other?Comicanon reads my stories when he has time. He gives excellent feedback and critiques, although I haven't gotten to implementing about 25% of his edits. I've edited the other 75%, though!Some anonymous replies to my work will tell me that it's pretty good, and I'm pretty excited and motivated whenever I read them! However, I also have a strong suspicion that these replies are subject to voluntary response bias, mainly because the people that like my work will be more inclined to reply then people who don't.
>>8418340
>>8418369
>>8418340>>8418369
>>8418384
>>8418384I know it's not loss.I still see loss.Fuck.
>>8418261
>>8418349Sorry for shitty picture. Im on my phone. Weaver himself wrote this.
>>8418237
TRANSLATOR-ANON!TRANSLATOR-ANON!
>>8418404
>>8418433... dear God what?
>>8418314
>>8418467I chuckled.
>>8418466YOU!YEAH, THAT'S RIGHT, PUNK! I'M TALKING TO YOU!YOU BETTER SLEEP TIGHT TONIGHT!OR ELSE!!!
>>8418504Off to bed!
>>8418349Recite with me the Sheep's Prayer in this ram's time of need:The Lord is my shepherd, I shall not wantHe makes me down to lieThrough pastures green he leadeth me the silent waters byWith bright knives he releaseth my soulHe maketh me to hang on hooks in high placesHe converteth me to lamb cutletsFor lo,m he hath great power and great hungerWhen cometh the day we lowly onesThrough quiet reflection and great dedicationMaster the art of karateLo, we shall rise upAnd then we'll make the bugger's eyes water.
Evens go and eat something.Odds ask for more opinions on my in progress Shorty Squad meets Pack Street thing.
>>8418313Keep at it, anon.
>>8418504Y-yes you too
>>8418526Real best girl reporting in.
I appreciate you, new beaver poster.
>>8418559"Martina"?Anon, you've mis-spelled "Anneke."
>>8418385That is .... something. Also, beaver and otters lewds when.
Bye everybody.
>>8418559Aint even real. Just a tube dude wearing a dress.
ANON!DON'T GIVE UP!I BELIEVE IN (YOU)!
>>8418622can i give in instead?
I need music!MUSIC TO COOK TO!https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Fl-lPihWfkAMan I love this band...>>8418622Thank you, Judy! I believe in you, too!
>>8418598>10outta10>would witness his rapemaul again
>>8418641https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=bZskGAxQkgY
>>8412575Pastebinning it...https://pastebin.com/gRpjMc9c
>>8418641https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_b3BBP_jcdI
>>8418622Thanks, anon. I believe in you too!
>>8418449I SAWIT'S GREAT
>>8418622thanks!>>8418641Mike Patton being Mike Patton and Mr Bungle being Bister Mungle. Epic songhttps://www.youtube.com/watch?v=uK8O5UgX8Z8
This post will probably get lost in the sea without an image to grab attention, but next chapter of a world all her own is going to be delayed just a bit longer. It's in for some moderate rewrites.
>>8418798Take all the time you need
>>8418741thanks for reminding me that i need to download that sweet Benny Goodman song!
>>8418175Shorty Squad still amazing.Spoil who the next chapter's about, who is gonna be under the spotlight?
I need it ztgGive me what I need
>>8418899
>>8418899the roof of the apartment is high enough to ensure an adequate chance of death
>>8418912
>>8418899is this what you wanta cute, unsure sheep
>>8418912This guy right here^Looking out for those with autoerotic asphyxiation.You're a champ
>>8418298She's already taken, anon.Taken over by savage bloodlust.
is this what being a tripfag feels like?
>>8419004What if the Tiger Oil comic is just Pandora's dream while she recovers?And when she gets back she's gonna fulfill that dream and go to town on Remmy...
Thanks again for the feedback guys.>>8418319>the unspoken history of Percy and his sister has probably been the most intriguing thing for me that you've presented in the past months since you've started drawing little hints here and thereI'm glad people are enjoying aspects of the story. The ideas I've heard from people on the subject have been pretty interesting, in complete honesty.>>8418186Even with a reference I can admit I'm none too skilled at drawing inanimate objects, bottle openers included.>>8418357You can tell she just wanted to be REALLY close to him.>>8418896Maxine is the main focus, but Hugh plays a decent part in it too.The next episode might be a bit longer than the others (or maybe not), so I hope you won't mind having to wait on it.
>>8419004If your tiger doesn't enter a bloodlust while you passionately make love, she's not a real tiger
>>8418964I want a sheep unsure of why the dick inside him feels so good
>>8419079i'll stick with my fox, thanks
>>8418766Translator-anon! HC here, and i must keep my promise of posting an early sketch!I used some of your feedback and went for a comfy fox in a bear's hoodie. Gonna post something decent tomorrow. I'm gonna work hard to do my best on this one!
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=QmhhMYRFCLc
>>8419187Oh hey, awesome.
Share a happy memory with me anon.
>>8419212ok
>>8419187Aw he doesn't even show you how to break her down in shapes.
>>8419212One time I didn't fuck up every relationship I've ever had with other human beings
>>8419212>4 months ago
>>8419212Actual movie discussion, like>The gondola scene vs train scene vs apology scene>>8419281That was a fun thread
>>8419076>is that Merlot?
>>8419212
>>8419212i loved this february, never stop being so awesome ztg
What went wrong?
>>8419517G-A-Y
>>8419517Weaver tried to fight back, but it only made the gays more violent.
I hate Wolter.
After the revival the meme has gotten, I am heavily disappointed we've yet to have a picture of Nick riding on the back of the jokemobile asking Judy if she wants him to knock her up, to which she replies, "No way fag"
>>8418899>The ram ached. He couldn't see through the blindfold they had wrapped over his eyes.>He tried to move, only to discover that his hooves were still bound>He couldn't remember how long it'd been.>And as a shudder racked his body, how many times he'd been made to cum.>He swore he'd checked the road eight times before he passed.>That he'd been incredibly stealthy in moving around, ever since that incident>That night, he'd heard a noise. Wasting no time, he broke into a full sprint.>He could hear their pants. He was so close to escaping. Maybe that was why he didn't see it coming.>Then he woke up, blindfolded and strapped to a flat, ice-cold surface.>Maybe he shouldn't have kept his wool shaved bare. >But then again, less wool was useful when one needed to hide in a small space.>A hiss of disapproval sounded close by. They wouldn't get the pleasure of shaving him.>Before he could choke out a defiant remark, a furred hand touched his body.>Judging from the power behind it alone, this belonged to a larger pred. One he had no chance of fighting against.>There was no escape.>His mounting fear was only heightened by the slow dragging of the mammal's paw along his body.>It almost felt deliberate, the way it slid between his legs.
>>8419554
>>8419517Weaver made the mistake of making the fujobait straight
>>8419535Everything changed when the Flaming Nation attacked.
>>8419517I told you back when the fags forced Labger to be gay that they'd never stop. Now they've driven off every decent drawfag we've got.
>>8419576>fujobaitAre you a girl?
>>8419517Memes
>>8419450How was that already more than a month ago?Man, time really flies.
>>8419586Weaver's still here anon
>>8419571>The ram gave a hard bleat at the new contact. It was at this point that his cry was met with varying degrees of growls, and other similar noises.>His attackers, it seemed. The paw began to slide along his hardening length.>So much for an aggressive mob. So it began.>At least enough wool had returned on his back to shield him from the coldness of the surface.>It was probably a table of sorts. Didn't have much time to consider the cell, when the jailers made regular visits.>He didn't know how many of them he'd felt. How much fur he might've coated, how many holes drained him dry.>He knew, if he ever escaped this, that he would be a changed ram.>But how much?>The thought frightened him, even as another climax threatened to take him under.I wanted to give you something, but then that something...became...more.What have I become?
>>8419599No but there are many legitimate fujos in the thread
>>8419361I've always been a Cab Sauv man myself.Reminds me of when me, Comicanon and Bore were out drinking NYC.Before hitting a shot bar I knew, Comic saw a winebar and almost insisted that we check it out.No sooner did we sit at our cramp and awkward seats, that Comic turned to me, asking for a recommendation.He almost never drinks wine (nor did Bore)."I dunno, I don't care much for white wine, so I usually stick to Cabernet Sauvignon or Pinot Noir."Taking my suggestion into consideration they proceeded to instead order a variety of white wine I've never heard of.The Cabernet was otherwise rather good.
>>8419341>Actual movie discussionEvery once in a while we will discuss something from the movie. We have mostly talked the thing to death, but there are times we will find a new angle; character motivations, a detail someone missed, etc. There was a bit of a talk about the in movie time stamps, like the Mr. Manchas chase taking place at 11:30pm.
>>8419571>>8419610lewd / 20
>>8419637I'm a whisky man myself, though I never order it in bars. Too expensive and there's never anything good.Pinot is usually good, but if the bartender knows what they're doing they can recommend a good cocktail. There's something so ephemeral about a well-crafted drink.
>>8419637I want to go drinking with Comic Bore and Raccoon...
>>8419783I want to drink Raccoon.
Good night, ztg!Don't forget to praise our Lord Byron!
>>8419856>liquid tf + vorekinky
>>8418261Yes. Mr. Stevens.He won't leave me alone, but he's fairly harmless. Charming, even.Just another well-meaning, if disorganized, assistant.
>>8419896It could always be Shrink + Vore
>>8419361Don't drinkshame.>>8419618Hey now, I prefer Anneke.
>>8419783Go drinking with Canidae. Just one and she's down for the count.
>>8419895have a good night
>>8419999HE DID ITI'm so proud of you, lion guy! Checked!
>>8419999
>Draw Judy as a participatory thing to get people out of their shells and draw>Positive comments keep me in the drawing mood (thanks again)>Try to draw an accompanying nick>Literally trace source material, still can''t make his snout fox-likeListen, it's almost 1:30 AM and I have classes.I'll try to git gud tommorrow, but I wanted you guys to know that I appreciate yer memes>>8419999>Only quadsMediocreBut really, nice meme anon, congrats
This fox is fucking making me gay. Every time I see Wildehopps I get off more on knowing how good his dick must feel than anything else.I hate myself.
>>8420147Nick would hate you, too, anon.
>>8420147Too bad you're knot a bunny
>>8419683every time i look at that picturei see this
>>8420231Remmy, you're turning violet!
>>8420252I wonder how many inflationfags were awakened by that scene
>>8419073If by "go to town" you mean "bite his neck to asphyxiation" then yeah.
>>8419758>There's something so ephemeral about a well-crafted drink.Too true.Probably the best cocktail I've had was at a place in NYC's Chinatown called Apotheke.Very overpriced, but you were paying for the quality, and this was a very lovely mix of rum, lime, pineapple, ginger, and a few other herbs I can't recall.The first sip was like getting slapped in the face by a talented dominatrix; just that right kind of sting.>>8419783>>8419856I wish I could go out drinking more often.>>8419918>"Dammit Percy, you grabbed your butt-plug by mistake again.">"O-oh, sorry...">"...Why are you putting the bottle away-- Oh.">>8419936Comic too.They should team up and battle the Shorty Squad as the Lightweight Legion.
>>8420354i kinda remember feeling weird watching that scene when i was little :x
How do I get a cute fox bf ztg?
>>8420423God damn it I laughed.
>>8420439step 1: go to zoo
>>8420411Oh dear god please tell me Hugh isn't that desperate for Roxy
Is it true that when you die you go to Zootopia?
>>8419153Holy shit, just the fact that you're putting in this much effort is awesome
>>8420472you get deported to aviantropolis
>>8420462Nah.I just think the idea of drawing this woman in increasingly desperate situations is hilarious.I'm sure at most she just oggles him in a cheeky manner and he's aware of it.
>>8420472Yes
>>8420489It's still such an awkward position for Hugh to be in.I'm thinking that I have a grasp of the themes represented by each character. Either that or I'm reading into things.
g'night /ztg/!heres hoping that i'll wake up with talent tomorrow.or just not wake up tomorrow.either one's fine by me.
>>8420502I'm intrigued anon. I'd ask you to discuss them, but I also don't think I can disclose anything whether you're right or wrong.Still it's nice to hear.>It's still such an awkward position for Hugh to be in.He's good at taking things in stride. Probably. Maybe.It's possible.
>>8420502Where do these characters come from though I've seen them a lot but I go to no clue
>>8420558They come from a Pig's mind.A pig who loves an ant.
I need that picture of all the different animal dicks.Because I haven't decided between animal dicks and humans dicks.
>>8420354Pretty much all of them.e.g. >>8420382
>>8420411Whoah, sweet momma trash panda.>411Yeah she's definitely giving someone the 411 in that getup.
>>8420558http://inkytopia.tumblr.com/tagged/comic/chronoTechnically they're from the thread. I randomly generated their species and home/work locations and built a story around them.The link is the easiest archive though.>>8420575>A pig who loves an ant.Like a mother loves her child. Don't listen to anon's lies.
>>8420589My bad, I meant this dude: >>8420426
>>8420588>I haven't decided between animal dicks and humans dicks.What if I told you there's a third option?
>>8418964i want a cute, unsure smol sheep naked with an equally unsure wolf
>>8419571>>8419610
>>8420439Science.
>>8419212 good times
>>8420888Nice trips.I heard you're back to writing?
>>8420602>Like a mother loves her child.:^]>>8420725I consider that on the side of human dicks. The Japanese have been drawing featureless breadstick dicks for years, though that's more a result of their censor laws...
>>8420924not bunanon, i just remember having good times with all of it.forr all i know they went back to writing
>>8420588Go for animal.Variety is the spice of life
I for one don't like drawing breadstick dicks.I don't hate them and I think other artists draw them well, but they're boring for me to actually draw. As much as I suck at drawing animal dicks I'd draw them over featureless dicks.Of course the best dicks are human dicks, if I had to choose. Still animal dicks have gotten fun to draw.
>>8421026There's so many delicious eclairs! Sign me up!Is there a vagina equivalent of the breadstick dick?>>8420997Why does the fossa penis have holes?For bees to come out?
>>8421083>Why does the fossa penis have holes?They're spines, like a cat's.That's right! Fossas not only have TWO KNOTS and a PLUNGER LIKE HEAD, but they also have SPINES!
How's everyone going? Working Hard on Thematic Thursday, I sure hope you are and haven't procrastinated and left it to the last minute like me!Anyway, I'm just popping in to repost the new and grammatically improved version of Chapter 7 of Wandering Paw Prints through the Mulberry Bush. http://archiveofourown.org/works/7666555/chapters/22418327Post whatever you're listening to!https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ZyBFxjmJPqk
>>8421115What a wacky animal
>>8421083Honestly in general people draw vaginas pretty similarly unless they want to add variety. Different lengthed labia, different clit or hood size.Animals have varying vaginas, but I'm not cool with drawing that. Probably because I'm a woman, or because I'm super into women. Take your pick.Point is usually vaginas are drawn pretty plain and innocently in general.
>>8420997What this chart doesn't show is that the elephant's turgid length is also prehensile. It's only slightly less dexterous than their trunk!
>>8421148what the fuck i love elephants now
>>8421125Heyo Magonel!Glad to see the new edits up!https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=HkskXt4yqvI
>>8421154>gay elephants wrap their dicks around
>>8421154That's also the sole reason they're able to procreate at all. You try lining up ten tons of elephant and hit a relatively tiny hole.What they do is just mount up and flail it around a bit until it goes where it's supposed to.
>>8421026Percy really needs to get himself one of those, next time he's down at the market maybe he can find one on sale.
>>8421143As a woman who is also super into women, I can't help but agree.>both images have dick in them tooWelp
>>8421190weaver you are not a women
>>8420997Thanks!>Go for animal.>Variety is the spice of lifeAs much as I enjoy how animal dicks look, I might have to talk with RF to see which he would prefer.Also human/breadsticks are easier to draw, so that might tilt my decision in their favor.>>8421125https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=k1Csif5l_6c
>>8421203Isn't he though???hnnngh
>>8421221no he's a guy with disintegrating teeth and a dire lack of money.
>>8421148That chart also doesn't list which ones have dick bones, or where the urethra should be on doggo dick
>>8418175I read it. I liked it.I particularly liked the way you handled Percy's family history, via both the title and the silence between the siblings, for the most emotionally powerful things are the one left unspoken.If I have a critique to do, one thing I didn't particularly like is how you described the characters' behaviour in the first part.Phrases like 'Maxine gives him a pointed look.' or 'Hugh shrugs.' These phrases are too short and/or in the wrong places, enrich them a little, otherwise they seem like 'obstacles' in the dialogue, rocks that break the flow of the conversation. Describe a little more and/or go with the flow (e.g. "...says the guy who always suggests cartoons" said Maxine, giving Hugh a pointed look' or 'with a shrug, Hugh added "S'your house, man."), you need to mix action and dialogue in the same phrase. Also usually it is better to put verbs that describe the act of speaking near the dialogue (e.g. 'After what feels like an eternity, placing the bottle opener on the couch, Caitlin is the first to speak up.' instead of 'After what feels like an eternity, Caitlin is the first to speak up, placing the bottle opener on the couch.').I hope this helps
>>8421255What a catch!
>>8421264
>>8421255Weaver, just let us know how we can help.
>>8421290Do you have $20,000?
>>8421219Well, hyenas' and raccoons' dick are not much more than curved breadsticks with a little tip, but obviously the final word is yours and the badger's
>>8421287Nice
>>8421308Is that how much you need? By when?
>>8421315>breadstickYou take that back
>>8421353>Remmy sweating intensifies.
>>8421353thats actually kind of hot
>>8421287Also reminder to everyone that the knot does not go in big at the end of sex; it goes in at the beginning and then inflates, locking them in. So Judy would take in the smaller fox dick, and then feel it literally grow and stretch her from the inside.
>>8421482The knot doesn't have to be in anyone to swell, though. Enough stimulation will make it happen regardless.
>>8421183>>>8421190Such is life.
>>8421353>Wanting to deny that goodness for breadstickYou monster
>>8421522>Intelligent koala!>RARE!!!Perfect.Also, is this the first time we've seen his last name?
Its time to go to sleep once again.Today was such an awesome day... Writers giving their personal experiences to others, new episode of Shorty Squad, Lulu drew someone awesome for Translator-Anon, Rose attacked someone with a t-rex grabber for no reason, and Jack and Skye wore comfy fashionable clothes.Just another day in the Zootopia threads.Goodnight, magical and wonderful /ztp/ threads! I hope that you keep making headway on that long-term goal you've got way off in the horizon, and find yourself closer every day.
>>8421522>1200 $He is worth no more than 12 $
>>8421598Sleep tight bunner!
>>8421522>Intelligent Koala RARE!And you say I'm mean, well I hope Percy can doll up the cash... though if he can't I guess he's still got the badger.You are a treasure Piggu.
>>8421522I'll pass on Clancy but when does the bidding for Agnes start?
>>8421266>you need to mix action and dialogue in the same phrase.If I weren't writing it in a script format I'd agree with you 100%, however given the format combining the two isn't very viable and would read awkwardly. The actions and the dialogue are meant to be separated; it's intentional.I'll also admit I'm hardly the most colorful person when it comes to behavior. I actually have to give a lot of credit to my editor for that, as I personally feel my strength is more in dialogue. Had I not had help it would likely read even clunkier than it currently does.Again were I using a non-script style format I'd agree with your criticism, but I personally don't feel it would translate well. I feel like an ass for 'dismissing' it, but I disagree with it given the format. I may just be misunderstanding what you mean, though, and I'll admit I do that quite often.>Also usually it is better to put verbs that describe the act of speaking near the dialogueThis however makes a lot of sense to me, and if that's what you meant in line with the above, then I may understand it better. Thank you very much.>I particularly liked the way you handled Percy's family history, via both the title and the silence between the siblings, for the most emotionally powerful things are the one left unspoken.Thanks. Honestly that scene was the most important one to me, and it had to be reworked quite a bit. It was one of the things holding the update up, and with good reason.Thank you for reading, and thank you very much for the critique.
>>8421598Good night, bunner. Good night, sweet bunner. Good night, good night.
>>8421598You have a good night bun bun, I hope you're feeling better and that your predator has been kind to you.
>>8421570I've only ever put it on a bio page on my blog, so yeah.It's a mashup of 'Phascolarctos cinereus' and 'gum tree'.>>8421599Hey now, a koala with a high IQ is hard to come by. That's where most of his pricing takes place!>>8421616Thank you!>>8421617When I'm not too lazy to do more of these.
>>8421522But is he chlamydia free?
Nick
>>8421680No.Chlamydia costs extra.
>>8421680I'm gonna say yes.>>8421696Oh my fucking god.
>i missed best doggo artThe archive isn't loading for me. Anyone have the full sized one?
>>8421623Ah, if you meant to have it read in a script format is another matter entirely. I personally thought it was more akin to a greentext.Also, yes, I meant that some verbs like "added", "answered" and such can be useful in making the jump between description and dialogue less sudden, making it flow more fluidly. And this should be also possible maintaining the same format you have done until now>>8421723Here you go
>>8421775Awesome, thanks! I love that they even got the rounded ears right, that part seems to get left out with most art of AWD's
>>8421723>>8421775
>>8421686
>>8421686Is a good doctor
>>8421811>implying
>>8421775> I personally thought it was more akin to a greentext.Nope! It's meant to be read like a script or a simple storybook. It's not written in prose.I've written a greentext only once, and I wrote that in prose. This was meant to be read more like a script, thus why there are names above the dialogue.>>8421816This is a very handsome Nick.
>>8421816
I hate women -- Comicanon 2017
>>8421617Fine, since you asked so nicely and I had no other ideas.
>>8422089This is great and all but cards on the table I'm going to ask the question that everyone here is thinking but too afraid to askHow much for the ant?
>>8422089>$3500Hoo... Hrm... I dunno...How about... Umm...A dollar?
>>8422135The ant is not for sale.Get your own.>>8422140There's a reason these are black market prices.This is a damn good deal for a ewe. She's even been reduced in price for having no obedience training!
>>8422140Come on, you're bidding on an ewe not a stink twink.
>>8422149If you squint it kind of looks like your head is being eaten by an ant and chomping you in its mandibles.
>>8422151I'd buy Hugh in a heartbeat, and I would give him all the love and affection I have to offer.
>>8422149>This is a damn good deal for a ewe. She's even been reduced in price for having no obedience training!Ooo... Ahh...I see where you're coming from, but...How about a dollar?
>>8422151>Maxine's price rises for being relatively unused, but lowers for being a rabbit and close to middle aged.>$1300>Hugh's price rises for obedience and other benefits but lowers for being a skunk and used>$600>Percy's price rises for being relatively unused, obedient, and a polecat, lowers for being small>$2700
>>8422225>Edy is the most expensive
>>8422225>>8422233Fuck it let's go full autismo>Caitlin's price rises for being unused, young, and a polecat, lowers for being small and disobedient>$3000>Edy's price rises for being large, young, and unused, lowers for being disobedient>$5300>Roxy's price rises for being unused (by men), lowers for size, being a raccoon, and only moderate obedience>$900>Clancy's price rises for rarity and durability, lowers for being used, a koala, and lack of obedience training.>$1200
>>8422225>>8422277>Being small lowers the priceWell, better for me, more small girls
>>8422370Well you have to pay by weight and rarity.A small exotic predator may be worth more than a large common ungulate, depending on weight.>tfw when arguing logistics for an imaginary mammal black market sex slave ring
>furry mess iphone ad general that is Zootopia™ still going on
>>8418261Always love me some Fem-Fangmeyer.
>>8422089I love you Inky.......... but not enough to bid $3500 on a racist ewe
>>8422474Maybe you could do a trade in? How much do you think Puzzacolt is worth? Can't be to hard to catch him...
>>8422492I thought I would be more focused on Nick's expression, but I can't stop staring at the rabbit Jesus.
>>8420411>>8420489I'd still like to see them pull a "Graduate", if you've ever seen it.https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-3lKbMBab18
>>8422501>>8422089How about Remmy and $300 for Agnes. That's my final offer!!
>>8422532While I've never seen it I know the reference.I may try to do it tomorrow. I think I'm done drawing for the night.>>8422541I wonder how much Remmy is worth on the black market. You'd have to ask Weaver about pricing.
>>8422558Cool! Thanks in advance, and have a good night, Inky.
>>8422502Dammit Nick why didn't you listen to Stu's warning
>>8422558Come on Inky, we both know Remmy can't be worth no more than $1000 and that's being generous
>>8422598I wonder if his diet would drop the price, of him and his wool.
>>8422641I think it might do the exact opposite, actually. A meat-eating sheep can be seen as a rarity, which would be a plus on the black market
>>8422592>'Oh god, Judy's pregnant!'>'Crap crap crap, are we prepared for this?'>'How is this even possible? I'm a fox and she's a rabbi-'>'...and part hare. From 'cousin Tom'. And Bonnie.'>'...Shit, Stu warned me about this.'
>>8422502DIDN'T SHE TELL YOU THAT RABBITS ARE GOOD AT MULTIPLYING! Guess they just evolved to accept any new gene that comes across... and inside
>>8422722Nick, please. You are suppose to be slick.
>>8414374Sorry you were waiting so long I fell over and went to sleep in the middle of making this
>>8422735I think you're hiding more talent than you let us see. I've tried doing stuff like that in paint, it's harder than I thought it would be.
What can be a Zootopia equivalent of Whatsapp/Telegram?I need this, but I can't think about a good name
>>8422732Yes but then both Judy and Nick are going to be perfect and their interaction will be boring, and you can't seriously expect people to make Judy faulty.
>>8418175I really liked this - it's my second favorite installment thus far.The topic matter struck rather close to home for me, so narcissism is a part of that equation, but beyond my prejudive it was very nice. Thank you so much, Inky!>>8422735This reminds me of that Soviet knockoff of Itchy and Scratchy, in a good way. Silly and nice, dawg!
>>8422735I'm here! It's lovely, thank you kind shapes anon!
>>8422774Antelogram.
>>8420737I want more of this
>>8422783>and you can't seriously expect people to make Judy faulty.I want to both laugh and cry at how true this is.Joking aside, Nick has had some slick moments and fumbles in the comic. Nick's nonchalant telling Judy to get out of his room, his turning on the lights on the bear, and being able to grab the vixen and nearly everything she dropped...except for the coffee. I guess Judy's fumble would be stepping into the coffee? She hasn't been "on screen" that much so she really hasn't had the chance to do a whole lot.
>>8422805Thanks!
>>8418261let me just save this as 'catchingatigerbytheknot2'
>>8422732
>>8422845I wouldn't consider him turning light on the bear and the vixen grabbing slick moments, you don't need to be squabbling or pulling sweet moves to be slick. In this comic he's Nick the funny cop rather than Nick the conman turned cop.
>>8422760>>8422792>>8422796thank you so muchand you're welcome
>>8419999You're the mayor of my heart!
bun
>>8423425Sexy bun
>>8423580
Just a little question. How is the thread reacting to story/worldbuilding of a Zoosona?
>>8423580>>8423585Kek>>8423644I'm all for it, but will there be lewds?
>>8423644depends on the story
>>8423644For me it is give, give.Interesting stories are always appreciated, if there is worldbuilding and characters' development it is even better.
>>8422641>>8422685Lets not forget the 9.5 he's packing.A desirable start for size queens.
>>8423682centimeters.
>>8422598>>8422641>>8422685This >>8423682>>8423698meters
>>8423707I still love that pic
>>8423712>stillLike if you could ever stop.
>>8423712I still love nobby's slothboi.I'd give him headpats all day.
>>8423717I think he would prefer a pizza
>>8423737I'd give him both.
>>8423652>>8423669>>8423658It would be a comedy/scientific storybuilding.
>>8423644where?
>>8423764Zootopia.
>>8423762>comedy/scientific storybuilding>comedy/scientificTell me more, anon.
>>8423769Oh good, so long as it's not here.
reminder: focks but
>>8423780
>>8423762These threads are very welcoming to OCs. If you're new to this place, here's a few general suggestions to keep in mind:>Stick to the lore and aesthetic of the canon material. This means mammals only, no primates, animal biology. >It's best to avoid self-inserts (literally me in Zootopia) unless you have an idea how to make the character interesting. It's less important if you're just rolling up an OC, but for story telling purposes the character needs to be well-developed.>Avoid interaction with protagonists/major canon characters. The temptation to put the OC in the spotlight or between the protagonists is often irresistible so you're better off not doing this in the first place. >Don't be afraid to ask for feedback and don't get discouraged with the reception. We love worldbuilding and well-designed OCs (and indeed a lot of characters have comics/mini stories about them these threads love and discuss).We have a list of people's online personas here http://ztgcensus.tumblr.com/ - I'm not going to grade them because it's all subjective, but do take a look and see what you like and what you think you could do better. Best of luck with your work and looking forward to reading it soon!
>>8423820>very welcoming to OCsSpeak for yourself.
>>8423826Now you have to follow up with an argument.
>>8423826I know what you mean, but I don't feel the need to add useless disclaimers accounting and define terms like "majority", "primarily", "most often" because it's fairly obvious innit
>>8423808I'm confused to what's happenign here.
>>8423843It's a collage of separate requests.Nick's butt is in the corner, that's some guy's oc wearing the collar, and then you have Bonnie and Judy.
>>8423860Wait, it's femNick's butt, actually.
>scrolling through FF.net>purely random, sometimes lewd "extras" fic is updated>swingers>Judy spends the whole episode comparing dox fick to painted wolf cock>do a little deeper investigation into author>Judy can't keep her legs closed for more than three seconds>has feelings for Nick, is finally able to get with him, but still wants to pursue a lesbunny relationship>also makes eyes at anything with a dick and a pulseLordy. Sometimes authors can really just nail a character.
Reminder you will never draw like this**unless you work hard and practice every day
>>8423865Could be crossdressing Nick.
>>8422502I don't know exactly where this comic is going, but I kinda don't like it already. Especially the guilty look on Judy's face.
>>8423881Or if you have a copy machine
>>8423946https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=F4g32V8YwXs
>>8423942It's just unplanned pregnancy, and the default reactions when it happens with a couple who isn't serious about it. It haven't even got a chance to turn to shit yet, I know i's Borba but to hate it before it shits the bed is a bit unfair.
>>8423949Oh I dont doubt he actually drew it, its just pointless because hes just copying the promotional artwork. There's nothing new here.
>>8423942>>8423957
>>8424031Cute.
Hey, /ztg/ l'm making a comic.It's a short-ish comic with a total of 6 parts which will take me 2-3 weeks to finish.I'm wondering if you guys prefer that I post it when everything's done or post each part as I finish it.
>>8424026While I, since it is a copy of the original, cannot say nothing about the ability at drawing anatomy and pose, I can say that I admire greatly the coloring ability of the author of the video.It requires many, many hours of experience to reach that level, especially with pencils.>>8424049Posting in parts seems more interesting imho.
>>8424049When I do it I try to post it all together because it's easier to not get cold feet and change it midway.But the thing is you should probably do whatever you found easier and most enjoyable.
>>8424031>"I've seen this before and I didn't like how it went."
>>8424049partsarts
>>8424049Depends on how fast you finish. If youll be done all at once, post it.
>>8424077>>8424064>two for parts>always posted dumped everything together
>>8424085parts!
>>8424071I got everything sketched-out and I'm sure nothing's gonna change. The 2-3 weeks is just for linework. Though I do prefer dumping it all when it's done. That's what I did with my last comic>>8424064>posting in parts is more interestinghow so?
>>8424124>my last comicwhich one was it?
>>8424124The remmy one where he walked upstairs?
>>8424099>Those teeth
>>8424077Nick's nose is awfully blue here
>>8424085>>8424124>posting in parts is more interesting>how so?It really is your preference and how the comic is structured. Take as example the Borba comic above or Mead's comic.They both post in parts, mainly because every page can create a little expectation for the next and contains an integer number of interactions. This means that, while there is a discussion moving through more than one part, the "banter" is self concluding in that part.Every part still creates expectation for the next, this is what I meant with "more interesting".It is my personal opinion, but I prefer following a work in the span of days than having a huge dump all at once. Pauses between parts create introspection, reflecting about the story, thinking about the characters, and, in the end, getting more involved with the work. But this is only my opinion
>>8424163>in the endIT DOESN'T EVEN MATTER
>>8424143Yup. Hi, this is Pho.I decided to finish that before posting because I think it would lose a lot of the tension if I posted it by parts.It was supposed to be one super long strip but I had to cut it up due to size restrictions in 4chan.This one, however, has defined cut-off points which is why I can so it in parts.
>>8424124Pho?I think posting each part is better, to build expectation>>8424064yeah, start tracing is a good practice, i think is the forced way to learn muscle memory. Just try to move on to start making references quick.
>>8421154all is going according to plan...
>>8424206Actually I was talking more about the colouring, which the video was all about. I personally find tracing as a practice one has to distance themselves as fast as they can, since it can lead to dangerous addictions (see Porn Detectives).I'm colouring my TT entry these days, and even digitally is a real time consumer and certainly not easy. Even less with pencils, where you don't have layers and you need to incorporate both shadows and reflections with the base color. The fact that 90% of the drawing is fur (a very hard subject to tackle realistically, with the multifaceted reflections) increases my admiration for the author even more.
>>8422735noice
>>8424259also, I still need to draw scientist jackal anon, so if you're still here, know that I'm working on it!
>>8424296Hey sup, glad to see you here. Can you try copying these faces when you're not too busy?
>>8424296Thanks. Im working on the worldbuilding and some greens for him. Didn't thought you would actual draw that request.
>>8424305yes! thank you for the practice. I may be busy for a little while--school is kicking my ass right now.
Teenage Nick strikes me as kind kind of a person who'd listen to Linkin Park. Thoughts? His spotify playlist is full of vintage pieces, but what do you think young Nick was like, his rejection issues considering?
>>8424323>>8424305woops
>>8424163>>8424206Thanks for the input. Since the comic does have proper cut-off points, I will post it in parts. It'll be a nice to know if people will react differently.
Zwierzogrod!
>>8424345>CRAWLING IN MY SKIN>THESE WOUNDS THEY WILL NOT HEALYup. Nick can definitely relate to that. But I don't think he actively showed his edgy-ness because he needed to appear decent if he was already hustling by 12 years old.
>>8424424Oh yeah, I was thinking it'd be one of his guilty pleasures, like he can relate to the lyrics but would never admit listening to "this whiny crap haha"
>>8424447>>8424345>I tried so hard and got so far>In the end, it doesn't even matterNick the closet edgelordThe more lyrics I remember, the more they fit in with Nick's personality.
>>8424490>Nick the closet edgelordthis is funny, but also sad>I've become so numb, I can't feel you there>I wanna find something I’ve wanted all along>Somewhere I belongoh shi-
Any reference of angry Nick or Snarling Nick or whatever? Pls.
>>8424566
>>8424566>>8424578
>>8424578Thanks, if you have one with teeth even better, I'm just realizing I have never drawn Nick fucking mad.
>>8424566>>8424596
Hot Night Crash (and the whole Elective Amnesia series) just went on indefinite hiatus. Fucking RIP, out of dozens (hundreds?) fanfics that i've read, this one was in my top 5 no doubts.
>>8424659What made it good?
>>8424595>filenameYou have a folder of Nick faces on your phone, don't you anon?
>>8424622I think this comic is one of the best when it comes to furious Nick.As well as art generally if you ask me.#have a better crop
>>8424702I have a few because I need references for draws, anon.
Does anyone know what"Take a Stand" is about? The seems to be so much fanart of it commissioned, but I'm still no cost to knowing what it's about.
>>8424832From what I gather>Judy and Nick get assigned a case vs Zootopia Merry Men including a fox Robin Hood and his Marian>Nick has a kid with a vixen>Judy and Nick are together>Bellwether has an evil plot that involves Judy and Judy and Nick fall for it because it would supposedly to help them catch the merry men (?)>Judy's mom hate Judy relationship and Ms.Wilde>Judy gets a BFG at some point of the story>Jack and Skye are there too
>>8424872Meanwhile in another universe...
>>8422714(you) bastard
>>8422714Asari bunnies
have this rare tumugi
>>8423780the tail is still in the wrong position
>>8424914that's a pretty cute bun
>>8424872>"Huh. It's titled 'Judy's birthday present'. I wonder...">"No, Judy. You're a big girl and you won't invade your boyfriend's privacy.">"But it is meant for me, so..."
>>8424901Judy, dont be so bigoted and closed minded about fox culture.
Hello /ZTG/ I hope you all are doing fine. I wanted to ask if I might write here about my Zoosone.But I probably will do that in the next threat since we are here already on page 9
>>8425076Well, don't do it here, use a writing program like word or Libra. 4chan is terrible for writing/editing
>>8425076>Zoosone
>>8425063you call inbreeding fox culture? That's degenerate.
>>8424415source?
>>8424152Nick's nose is actually a deep purpleIt's less accurate than just drawing it black, but I see where he comes from.
>>8425133Its for educational purposes only, not breeding, you bigot.
>>8425137Why would you scar a poor kit for life like that? Nick will be mentally fucked up.
>>8425141Not like it changed anything, he's been damaged since the scout incident.
>>8425150Jesus Christ, Anon. You're walking on thin ice
>>8425141How would it scar him? You teach your kids all sorts of things when they're young. It's like taking them to little league. They might get roughed up a bit, but they learn and grow from the experience.
>>8425076One day I'll write about my oc who I plan on using solely for fetishes
>>8425184Nick is a whiny lil bitch like all foxes, deal with ithaha stupid fox hahaha
totally gonna drive an hour just to get this pin fuc kwhen is disney gonna put out any fru fru merchandise but this
>>8425283light doesn't work that way on furthey all look like they're covered in oil
>>8425279specist.
>>8425308it's just a prank bro
>>8425316*stabs someone*Its just a prank bro.
>>8425327*causes race war*lmao just a prank chill chill
>>8425279Weaselton is obviously a slut for that fox dick
>>8421804>>8421811i'm glad you all enjoyed it, i'm happy it came out well. definitely not the last. seeing this really brightens my day.
Bremby Coro
>>8425076>next threat
>>8425341>definitely not the lastGood girl
>>8425344>>8425337>>8425350Please stop.
>>8425303Any time I see palcomix I can only think of the Pikachu "cccuuuuuuuuuuuuummmm" comics.
>>8425357I want to smooch this fox.
Bremmble Cordon
Page Ten.
>>8424675(regarding whole EA series):>criminal case that i was actually interested in>good characterization>mandatory Wildehopps>great banter and overall dialogue
>>8425371Desist. He's mine.
New thread>>8425423>>8425423>>8425423
>>8425418First for Nick
>>8425279>>8425338Only cuz all foxes are bred for being sluts in return
>>8425398No
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