Zootopia General: Ye Olde Dumb Bunny EditionPastebin: pastebin.com/iYDU8g2TZTG Creator List: derpy.me/ztgcclistArchives: ztarchive.com / desuarchive.orgPrevious thread: archive.b-stats.org/trash/thread/7519127TT theme: Medieval (Due any time, like RIGHT NOW)More information on TT: derpy.me/trashthematicthursdays
Let's talk about Pack StreetWhat are your hopes for the direction of the series? What are you afraid Weaver might do? Who do you want Remmy to end up with? Who is best girl?
>Nick and Judy are alone in their apartment, two two dating for several months now.>Nick's cleaning up around the house, trying his best to make Judy happy.>Judy, uninterested, lays back against the bed, pulling out her phone and scrolling through her contacts.>She taps one and brings the phone up to her ear, the person on the other end eventually picking up.>Judy speaks up, seeming to not care that Nick was in hearing ramge."Hey, Manchas, you doing anything? Nah, I'm just at home. Yeah, Nick's here too, who cares? Oh? Mmh, God you always know how to talk to me~. Sure, I'll be right the-, oh, of course, I'll bring those panties you like so much too.">Nick pretends not to hear any of this, currently in the process of making them both dinner with what little they have at the apartment.>Judy gets up from the bed, reaching into a drawer for a lacy pair of red panties, stuffing them in her pocket before heading towards the door."I'm going to Manchas' place for dinner, don't wait up for me.">Without looking nick in the eye, she leavs the apartment, Nick staring blankly at the now closed door, the microwave beeping as the dinner he made for her finished cooking.>It's okay, he'll just put it in the fridge for her to eat later.>She didn't eat his dinner for the past week or so, but it was okay. >She's just too busy for dinner.>Nick slowly starts to tear up as he slides the tray in the fridge, before collapsing onto the bed, sobbing into the pillow."Sh-She loves me...she still l-loves me..."
this TT is amazing
>>7523402I think remmy is going to get jumped after the news breaks, but Al and co. will save him at the late minute. Maybe them visiting him in the hospital, if it's the attacks enough.
>>7523416All this needs is the special languages and this is Fluent Part 3
>>7523402I don't have any real wishes for the story. Just more of the same. I'd like betty because it'd open the most story directions. And Martina is best grill, shame she's never around her brother.
>>7523402Is it wrong if I'm secretly hoping someone will get killed?I just binged on NanQuest
>>7523416somebody please, write some nick abusing judy to counterbalance all this nonsense
Manchas needs more lovehe's a caring cat with a nice accent
>>7523402I think Weaver's about to shift focus over to the real hero of the story, a plucky little wage slave who remains undaunted by life's vicious ride.
>>7523462Don't bully the Jude because of cucking.
>>7523545The cosmos demands balanceJUDY MUST BE ABUSED
>>7523430I honestly think the first comic is going to get left by the wayside. A lot of the stuff in it doesn't line up with how the story has progressed since then. Some of it does, mind you, but reading it again after all the chapters just makes it feel odd and out of place.
>>7523545i wish the cucking meme would die
how about no one gets abused except for gideon.
>>7523598Finally, an anon that makes sense!
>>7523589We all do anon, but the meme has grown out of control. Now actual cuck fetishists think they're in good company
>>7523589me too
>>7523607BUNS MUST BE BULLIED!Otherwise you end up with cosmic horrors that are against lewding, like Comic.
Well, I did this edit.Enjoy.
Hey thread, Magonel hereJust posting to let you guys know I'm not dead and that work on Wandering Paw Prints, although going through a slow patch, is going. I haven't been here since Sunday, anything I missed?
>>7523462>>7523554>>7523631BUNISHMENT TIME GO
>>7523424I would so kissu that bun-bun.
>>7523592I honestly really want to fuck Travis as well.
But anon, weasel getting dicked/doing the dicking is my fetish
>>7523709Everyone does, anon.
>>7523683My god you bunished her eyes out
>>7523670All of TT. This one is fucking lit. Also mother fucking Scoutmaster AU. Falke I keep on rereading it man its so just fucking good. Also shit tons of sweaters and lots of lewding VR.
>>7523611The real problem are the one's who think it's a lifestyle or the next stage of evolution(not a joke) and not just a fetish
>>7523631Beavers too must be bullied, lest their hormones get the best of them.Beaver lusting for tube dude?Bonk him with a tube, dude.The alternative is to tie them up and deposit them at your local Raccoon Rehabilitation center, where a helpful trashpanda will cuddle them into conformity.
>>7523730
all this gideon travis is reminding me i still need to finish my picture...but man headache plus being tired, i've just been doing nothing.
>>7523793
>>7523578I've repeatedly advanced the idea that it should be treated as a pilot episode rather than a goal to be worked towards.
>>7523631That's... so kinky of you, Beav.
>>7523793SOONOON
>>7523794Try to draw it, FF. If it doesn't come, go to bed.
>>7523805
>>7523889
Sorry this doesn't look nicer but I seriously gotta go to bed now.Will maybe draw more Dark Souls shit tomorrow.Goodnight, ilu all
>>7523424fuck off
>>7523927You have a good night
>>7523912this is what happens when you don't bully your bun
>>7523416why do you do this
>>7523975See you tomorrow, anon
Any requests for tomorrow?Good night /ztg/.
>>7523726Dude tubes go inside of tube dudes.
can someone post the name's of Inky's Shorty squad (whatever they're called, the bunny skunk and polecat)
I'll post this again because, well, why not?http://pastebin.com/TSx4mZDzI did a Medieval based writing. Am looking for all kinds of feedback. Thanks a bunch, guys.(Hope that Labjer doesn't mind me using his image as a little illustration for a moment.)
welp, i finally did some semi-productive stuff today.if this post gets dubs, i'll shoot for doing more stuff like it tomorrow.i'll probably get off my lazy ass and finally learn to draw for you little shitsi dunno.g'night all!
>>7523785>>7523824;^]
>>7524158Sleep tight!
"Fox" brand condom's? Never really noticed it until now, but Zootopia has got to have some crazy amount of condom types and company's that make them.Considering the insane amount of dick size's and shapes. Along with morning afters and birth control. The dosages have got to be insanely varied depending on the mammal.Of course I can just be stating something that has already been talked to death. Don't mind me.(No idea what the source is. Nor who the artist is. If anyone knows you would be amazing.)
>>7523402Al's dad gets paroled.
>>7524222This is a sign learn to draw anon
Why is the ewe literally cuter than bunbun?
>>7524227Yes, there would also have to have specialized condoms that would probably cost more. Condoms that resisted knotting or didn't squid around it, condoms specialized for horses and zebras, condoms that didn't get scraped open due to friction + cat dick, condoms that were easier to use for pigs, etc.
>>7524227the argonomics industry in Zotopia must be a fucking multi-billion dollar business. IRL, there's somewhere around 5000 different mammalian species. Take into account all the different sizes every individual of each species could be and you've got a hell of a business. Not even just condoms but office chairs, shoes, clothing, sports gear...
Reposting for the new thread:Josiah's got a task given to him by his elder-- and a dagger to keep him safe along the trip. He'll need it, too: his father befell a terrible fate along these very roads! But does an even worse fate lurk in the shadows of cave? Or is this all a chance meeting in the dark? Can we get a tier list for ne'er-do-wells in how unsympathetic they are? Find out in Older Times, Older Ways, by PseudoFox!Text here:http://pastebin.com/TSx4mZDzBlind read through here:https://soundcloud.com/comicanon/olden-times-olden-ways>>7523424It sure is! People getting back into the swing of things!>>7523631Off with his head.>>7523670Hey there Magonel! Man, feels like a ton of stuff's happened... You're going to have a ton of bombshells looking through the archives.You doing well? Enjoying TT? School going good? No problems with the fic, yeah? Just chewing on ideas?>>7523785HA! JUSTICE! SEE HOW IT FEELS?!>>7524220Don't bully him anymore. Don't bully him anymore.>>7523683>>7523793>>7523889>>7524010Hey! Judy's becoming ju̷ͣͪ̾͛s͒̌͊ͮtͩ̑͌̀͛͊ ̎ͦ̇ͤͤl͛iͬ̈́ͧ̋̽̚kͤ̎̕ê̇ ͊̓͊mͤ̆e̿̈̅̉!̛>>7523927There's no need to apologize, it looks great! You sleep tight!
>>7523462Writing spite-fics doesn't help, it just means there's more shitty fics.
>>7524130Night!
>>7524345Yeah, just scratching the brain for ideas
>>7524220*UMF* / 10
>>7524345Ooooh, you already read my new thing? I should check it out in just a moment!
>>7523554>>7523683>BUNISHMENT TIME >GO
>>7524482N OTHIS IS TOO FAR
Well, ima go to bed everyone. Pleasant dreams!
>>7524482>Replyanon is drawing porn againp-plz take request again soon you absolute crazy diamond
>>7524533Sleep tight, bunner!
>>7524549>inb4 Zootopified version of pic
>>7524220>>7524345No tears please.It's a waste of good bullying.
>>7523683>>7523793>>7523889>>7524010Please give bigger version?
>>7524482Reply. You are a fucking mad man. It's amazing that everything is implied, nothing is shown. Yet it takes you less then a second to understand what is happening.It's like fucking magic.
This fucking movie made me buy a hawaiian shirt.
>>7524533Sleep well!
>>7524482Are the guests aware of what's going on under the table?
Anybody need something translated? Someone posted stuff earlier but I didn't have time then
>>7524647Do you wear it?
bun boy!
>>7524482Goddamn is this nice
>>7524677I want to, but I am scared.I'm not nearly as handsome or confident as Nick.
>>7524565Well, if he does, I got something in mind.
>>7524678Hahahahaha
>>7524678Gud and Nobbo seem like they'd axtually murder him.Also talking about poor little bunboys, RIP BB.
>>7524740>>7524727>speciest skunk getting loodsIs it their sona?
>>7523402>What are your hopes for the direction of the series?Nothing in particular.>What are you afraid Weaver might do?I don't live in fear of a content creator on a Jamaican bobsledding invisionfree not doing what I wanted him to do exactly as I wanted him to do it.>Who do you want Remmy to end up with?Burga.>Who is best girl?See above.
>>7524678I wish I had an adorable Okapi to snuggle...
>>7524740Is it sad if I immediately thing this'd be hotter in one of those dumb meme sweaters?
>>7524740there's just something other people manage to portray in their art that i can't figure out how to produce...
hey guyswhat would you sayto some fresh pack street tonight
>>7524801YES.
>>7524801Naw I'm good for now
>>7524801DO IT!
>>7524801I would be quite happy with some more pack street
hey dudes, sorry I was asleep for so long gimme a couple hours and Ill toss another drawstream up
>>7524801How the hell did you do that?Also if its Medieval themed I will be fucking shocked.
>>7524801Like 1 AM here. I mean sure but I wouldn't post it dead hours.
>>7524863Early cheeky request for a Medieval Sloth?
>>7524801I made this, for some reason.
>>7524863>A couple hoursYou are a heartless sloth who hates my sleep schedule...Btw how long did you last yesterday? Beat your streaming record?
>>7524801it would make my pee pee pop a wheelie
>>7524863Nobby sloth sloppily making out with a pizza hot pocket when
>>7524801Yes yes yes!!
>>7524801>ever asking an anon their opinion on anything>for any reason
>>7523402I'm terrified he's gonna end this thing too soon, or lose interest. Or, you know, have Remmy end up not getting a waifu at the end. Even worse, he could end up with the wrong waifu like Betty or Avo. I'd like more of what we've got so far, though more Martina is nice too.
>>7524801
>>7524863Requesting a Marty version of this with him saying something horny.
>>7524948AAAAAAAA AVIANTROPOLIS INVASIONATTACKS ON MEDIEVAL BUNNY CITIES EAGLES TAKING YOUNGS TO THE SKYMACHINE MARVELS CREATED BY CROW SCIENTIST, SPREADING PLAGUE BOMBS ON FOXES DENS TO AVOID COMPETITIONVULTURE SOLDIERS WHO'D SCAVENGE ROTTEN MEAT FROM THE BATTLEFIELD
Well then. Thank you all for your patience! I know it's been an exceptionally long time since the last chapter, but I thank you for sticking with me.Without further ado, I give youPack Street:SAVAGEShttp://pastebin.com/bMeRvJpjStarring Remmy Cormo and his neighbors.I hope you enjoy it. I sure did.As always, please let me know what you think. Thank you.
>>7523578I was about to say, this comic has Marty inviting Remmy to a BBQ he and HIS SISTER are hosting. Not sure how the two of them are supposed to attend the same function without getting caught mid outfit change, unless they were originally conceived of having been two seperate characters at some point.Or there's a big twist where it turns out they really are separate people. Which would be kind of disappointing.
>>7525008Oh god
>>7525008Oh no.......
>>7524948I just don't see beaks as very attractive for oral.
>>7525025Don't knock a good beakjob until you've tried it
>>7524948I guess wolves will fuck anything..
>>7525008Ooooooooh
>>7524740>>7524727Will racist skunk agree to the Fox/Rabbit threeway?
>>7525013or maybe the invitation to the BBQ was the joke all along only for the "lambchops"...
>>7524900yes, trying to hang out with nobby is like slowly dying of sleep deprivation because his hours are whack
>>7525008Oh fuck.... The ending
>>7525013>>7525132I will probably lose what little interest I have in Packstreet aside from the pleasing character designs if Martina is just Marty's sister.
>>7525187It's good, but... yeah. Not really emotionally what I needed to read lately.
>>7525008Holy shit weaver, that was depressingWere the casualties in the store just random animals?
>>7525204as much as i am drawn to depressing things like a moth to flame, i will sit this one out for now too. been especially down today and also trying to work on this image. though i am behind on all packstreet...has there been any involvement with martina in latest chapters?
>When TT is nearly cucked by a new Pack Street that's depressive.
>>7525253>when cucked is cucked by cucked that's cucked
>>7525250She was in Sheepfacts, the chapter before this.
So what does Charlie look like with her eyes open anyway
>>7525008Wolter is amazingOther than that, holy shit that was a depressing read, good of you to show off the stresses and the anxiety of the predators trying to cope with something that is entirely unknown. Its a shit situation and you expressed that really well.
>>7525008Annie's my girl for totally having the same fear as meSuddenly having everything that makes you an individual stripped away and being unable to control yourself, shits scary
>>7525008The conversation with Charlie seemed to be cut a little too abruptly in my opinion. Given how uncharacteristically shaken she was, it just kind of seems weird that, even though (or especially considering) she'd been draped over Remmy for quite a while, that she'd just calmly get up and go upstairs upon Remmy's gentle insistence; even if he did help her up while doing so. This is more an opinion than a critique, so take it as you will.
>>7525302I think I agree with this mostly.
>>7525269My guess is horrifying or Anime. Seriously for a second though, I hope she found someone else to lean on. That is some heavy shit that I would hate to have to internalize alone.
>>7524615sorry, low kilobyte man is limited by pixelsgood night thread
>>It's difficult to be happy about someone dodging a bullet when the bullet ends up hitting someone else.Cheeky
>>7524900nah, I think I was only on for like 22 hours
>>7525340Mango, actually
>>7525302That whole thing she talked about was really hard for me to read. Reminded me too much of my brother's suicide attempts. I never though a furry fanfiction would bring me to tears. 10/10
>>7525358Japanese comic books?
>>7525008Well, that was pretty goddamn depressing.
Its time for the bit to bid farewell. This was an awesome TT. I'm glad everyone had a ton of fun today: the art was amazing, the discussion was great, and the threads were amazingly supportive of awesome ideas.Check out the fics today, and I hope the writers still working on their Medieval fics take care in finishing them.We even got a new Pack Street, too!Goodnight, magical and wonderful /ztp/ threads. I'm glad we live in a time where we can have these threads, rather than having to scribe texts in manuscripts and wait six years for artists to make a painting of a fox and bun.
>>7525368Indeed.
>>7525269>>7525302I also agree with this, for the most part. I feel like the first half of this chapter was absolutely solid, I was invested and emotionally tied to the characters, but towards the end I started loosing interest. Not sure why that is, maybe the dinner scene was a little rushed, I think it could have used a little room to breathe. But overall another great chapter. Also I'm going to draw the crap out of that Charlie scene
>>7525376Goodnight bun bun, dream of warm and inviting predators.
>charmyfags BTFO>sheepdog is master OTP, forged from true glorious shippon steel
That standoffish wolf is the one whose going to kick Remmy's shit in when Bellweather's George Soros tier conspiracy is revealed It'll be great. I hope he breaks one of Remmy's legs
>>7525420I've got a couple Punished Remmy pics ready for when he claws out his eye
>>7525420Stop it.Get some help.
>>7525008The whole display of worry on the characters including even Don builds up the scenario amazingly, including the population view of Bellwether and how predators themselves were reacting to it. Charlie was pretty heartwrenching.Also I honestly skipped a beat over the red fluid on the floor.>>7525302I thought it was meant to be abrupt, they've been sitting for a while there and Remmy needed to get ready. There was no way to get out of that situation but that. If anything I'm slightly disappointed Remmy was still thinking of the date after the whole discussion, especially because Charlie was in shambles completely uncharacteristic to her.
>>7525379Sleep tight, bunner.
>>7525420>wolf beats up Remmy in a revenge hate crime>thinks the other preds are gonna thank him for removing prey kebab>Al's fw some upstart nobody thinks somebody could beat the shit out of one of his pack members and get away with it
>>7525434
>>7525420Considering how much the whistle has been mentioned, I assume a situation will rise where he needs to use it. And at that moment he will call and nobody will come and he'll get his shit beat.
>>7525302>>7525394I actually completely agree with your opinions, even if not the summary conclusions you draw from them
RemDora fags... b-btfo?
>>7525469All both of 'em, yep.
>>7525455Oh god man.Why do you do this to my heart?Seriously though, the best quality of a good story is it's ability to inspire complex emotions. If this was all Remmy's Sunshine Pack Street Harem Shenanigans no one would be interested in reading. You done good boss.10/10. Would read again.
>Pandering to filthy fucking homosexualsFuck you Weaver, you wasted so much time on this SJW bullshit you didn't fucking accurately write the date.
>>7525455I need to know man, please…How does his move in story end?! HOW DOES IT END!?!?
>>7525469:(
>>7525498>>>/5N@F/Back to your containment thread please
>>7525469They can make it work! They just need to change a bit of their lifestyles around. Remmy needs a nice tiger proof suit and Dora... might need some chains, armed guards and a muzzle. But hey maybe shes into that kinda thing!
>>7525498
So I guess that answers my question about Cliff and Neil's relationship.
>>7525515She's a kinky gal! Totally used to chains! She'd be proud of Remmy for committing to the roleplay as sincerely as her!
>>7525525Why was there even any doubt?
>>7525525Yup.Good platonic pals.
Good Night, /ztg/.
>>7525573good night
>>7525525What? You didn't think they'd be Maximum Bros?
Remmy is kinda cuteFor a guy
>>7525629
>>7525649>>7525649>>7525649>>7525649
>>7525008>I wake up to thisthis thread just got a whole lot more concerning
>>7525302>The night was uncharacteristically cold, which doesn't help Remmy much.>Lying in bed, staring out the window at the lone, flickering street light, when a familiar sound of moving tumblers reaches his ears.>His front door opens and closes. Then his bedroom door.>She stands there, visibly sagging with a pillow in one paw and the other touching her arm.>"Cormo…">"Hey…">Quietly he scoots aside as Charlie slips beneath the sheets, trembling paws reaching out and wrapping tightly around his wool.>She let's out a shaky sigh, and he can see in his periphery red eyes that are soon buried in his neck, along with the rest of her face.>For a moment, she simply breathes. Heavy, shaking breathes.>"Cormo…" her grip tightens. "It should have been me...">She's still there the next morning, as the sunlight slips into his bedroom.>Drained and exhausted, in mind and body as she holds onto his wool.
>>7525664The thread has been fun all day. We saw the complete meltdown of an author on AO3, and now we got >>7525008 so entertaining day.
>>7524863Hello Nobs, maybe Nick and Judy as detectives at a crime sceneAnd of course, a sacrificial tune for yahttps://www.youtube.com/watch?v=HKtsdZs9LJo
not sure i'm pleased with gideon's result, but hey.
I'm gonna say it since it seem's no one else is. Remmy fucked up hard today. Possibly worse than in Fall Back.
>>7525680>complete meltdown of an author on AO3was that in previous thread or could you direct me back to it?
>>7525629Super oblivious Remmy x Wolt when
>>7525694This is super cute
>>7525695Yeah, I can't believe he spilled his spaghettios all over the Wreck's carpet and got thrown out. He had no right saying that stuff to Cheeky and Bonworth, the autist sperg.
>>7525680>We saw the complete meltdown of an author on AO3What?
>>7525695I know right?Wolt and Charlie were totally gunning for a piece, and he goes with Anneke instead!
>>7525708thanks anon!
Are there porn images of Wolter being screwed?
>>7525696>>7525716It was discussed in the previous thread but here is the fic and author in question, http://archiveofourown.org/works/9489731/chapters/21472946Long story short, the author had a story called "Fluent" which was a mainly WildeHopps one-shot collection where their universe all animals, while sharing a common language, also had their own private languages and cultures. It is taboo to teach other species your language; Nick and Judy didn't give a shit. It was cute and funny at times, with some...missteps here and there. Then, in an act that could have only been sheer brilliance, the author decides to make a story tied to that fic where bunnies practice polygamy, Nick knew nothing about it until he was already mated for life to Judy, is told he will never be able to completely sexually satisfy Judy because "she is a doe", and guess who the author was going to put them in a polygamy relationship with! Jack fucking Savage!
Good morning /ztg/! How's going?>>7525008My first comments after reading this then.All in all a pretty solid chapter. I like how you were able to represent effectively the different ways the predators in Pack Street cope with grief and how the loss affected the entire community.Anneke dialogue at the dinner was eerily similar to someone who has been diagnosed with Alzheimer or cancer, it sent a shiver down my spine. Also I liked how Remmy still hadn't recognized the behaviour of the preys is a mirror to his past self.It was something that was bound to happen, considering how in the film they said that the attacks became very frequent. Still, it hit like a truck, very good.For a little critique:I personally would have cut abruptly midway the phrase "Oh, shit. Cliff's a tiger too!". This way it gives a better sense of urgency. The reasoning is fast, but the cascade of events is even faster.I liked a lot the part with Charlie, even though it was cut in a somewhat rude way. I hope in the following chapters Remmy remembers the saddened fox and that there was also Marty for her in the meantime.Also very interesting would be to see how Al is managing all this chaos.Always glad to see more Anneke, even in a state like this. The dinner part lost some steam (in respect to the previous) imho. Certainly Remmy needs to visit Anneke again. Also I'm wondering about her feelings for him (given some of her phrases) and the locker. Certainly a lot of things to talk about.Also curious about the badger, if he will have a bigger role or if he will remain in the background.And Don behaviour is certainly something that piqued my interest. The ending was maybe a little bit rushed in my opinion. The red fluid could have been an occasion to further delve into Remmy's thoughts, to see the fear moving inside him.Still, one of the best chapters for me.>>7525694Nice work FF!>[...] gideon's resultMaybe is the separation between red and cream fur? It needs a more fuzzy line
>>7525772A few. Mostly based on greentexts.
>>7525772
>>7525694YES.
>>7525250Who's the one next to Finnick?
>>7525779I'm feeling good!Comic did a read through of my TT piece already, going through pretty fast, and he liked it a bunch!Main thing is, though, he did state that I seem to be unclear about if I'm going for just porn or something dramatic but with lewdness... heh! I think it's the same piece that you've also read?
>>7525008sometimes i forget your power level is beyond imagination
>>7525778Hm, looking at this now, it's hard to tell just what the fuck is going on.
>>7525810his slutty incest cousin
>>7525810my oc whose name actually got snatched by my zoosona as far as i can remember.
>>7525694>Finger beanGood. Now show us his whole hand
>>7525779*locket>>7525811Oh yes, I still have to read the complete version because I've had to sleep, but doing this as soon as I can!But from the prototype I could already see that there could be a big ambiguity on where you were going. What have you decided about it?
>>7525831She looks like a pokemonI love her
>>7525787Holy fuck is that nice
>>7525784Pigu! You've been too quiet! Good to see you're still alive.
>>7525695>>7525695He fucked up with the Charlie bit, certainly. At least, I think. Maybe it's the Charmmy shipper in me, but I wished he'd stayed with her.As for Anekke? I doubt he could have done much different. He handled it pretty well, I think.
>>7525823What had happened was that everyone who had enjoyed Fluent was pissed that this story was part of that series. Fluent had no hint of bunnies being polygamy, and the author tried twice to add polygamy to the story, both times the reactions to the chapters were negative; one was so bad that the author immediately backpedaled and rewrote the ending.Everyone is calling out the author on how the story is complete cuck, the story makes no sense, goes completely against most of the chapters of Fluent. The author, instead of responding to the pieces of actual criticism (and there were actual thought out pieces that weren't just people screaming "KEK KEK!"), decides that they are going to completely rewrite Fluent in order to fit their new cuck story.
>>7525855Oh, go to: >>7524345I'm really happy with this. However, it's also crying out for more details in the Ch.2.My thoughts were that probably lion boy would force himself on the antelope a bit more but finally the little soft boy would fuck off and leave the lion kind of hanging. Fourth main character comes in. Prey boy high-tails it to the bunny village and asks about details for the whole 'sexual hunting' thing that's news to him.Still, though, I'll likely have private message exchanges with Comic on what he thinks. Do detailed revisions before I complete Ch.2 and then put the chapters on Archive of Our Own.
>>7525897>He fucked up with the Charlie bit, certainly. At least, I think. Maybe it's the Charmmy shipper in me, but I wished he'd stayed with her.She needed him and he just kinda said yeah, whatever, see you later, gotta go. I've never seen her open up like that before and now I wonder if she ever will again. After Remmy shut her down.>As for Anekke? I doubt he could have done much different. He handled it pretty well, I think.It was a disaster. Serious?? He did so bad.
>>7525904>"And before you think anything Slick... I'm practically swimming in suppressants right now. I don't think even you could get me in the mood."I really do not like this "bunnies are whores so much that they get doped up" meme.
>>7525779i do think that would help, but it's more the face itself. i just...didn't quite nail gideon this time. i don't think it looks awful as a drawing or anything, just not the look i was aiming for.>>7525797glad you enjoy it!>>7525852you've had your ration of beans, anon. >>7525862haha, kinda where i took some inspiration. i love braixen.
>>7525924I never understood that meme honestly; do those people not realized that there must have been a time without drugs? How did rabbits function without them?
>>7525892I don't mean to be! I haven't been making a lot of content, due to time or whathave you, and I lament not having a solid idea for TT.I have been working on something though. I'm not sure how quickly I can deliver, but I haven't been a complete lump I assure you.
>>7525957As much as the giraffe is an asshole, in her defense Hugh acts like a stupid jerkoff a lot.I wish that we had more emotionally soft stuff with Hugh like cuddling, hugging, sleeping, and so on.
>>7525957Good to hear, is it your comic you're working on? Chapter 3, where we finally get to meet Hugh's employer?
>>7525918How exactly could he have handled things with Amelie differently? Calling off going out when she clearly wanted to get things off of her mind would have been rude, and she needed to get out. He couldn't have stopped the siren from happening, and that's what sent her over the edge into despair and ruined the meal.But yeah, shoulda stayed with Charlie. Because mah ship.
>>7525995Anekke! Autocorrect is a bitch.
I really hope that Remmy's abrupt abandonment of Charlie gets addressed. I mean sure he had his reasons and Charlie recognized that, but It doesn't mean that it wouldn't effect her.>>7525918>It was a disaster. Serious?? He did so bad.Yup, Remmy just gave a bunch of nods and "yea's" and then they called it off, not exactly the best at providing comfort it seems. Though, I doubt Annie really is going to let that get in the way of anything. She didn't do much better.
>>7525981>Hugh acts like a stupid jerkoff a lotI mean if you asked him he'd probably admit he's a stupid jerkoff as calmly as he possibly could.>I wish that we had more emotionally soft stuff with Hugh like cuddling, hugging, sleeping, and so onDespite the lewd stuff I draw with him he's actually a pretty distant guy. He's still chummy with friends and will hug them quite a bit, but that's about it.>>7525989I'm working on my comic, yes. Or rather my storybook now, I guess is a more apt description. Answer's still the same.>filenameEvery time I kek.
>>7525955I can't explain it. I find it as shitty as everyone else.
I watched Moana for the first time yesterday, and although pretty in some parts(sand animation, water animation), I think it truly fell flat. Besides the forced songs that Zootopia thankfully didn't have, Judy was a protag with much more agency than Moana.Even Bellwether was better than the non-villain that they used.
>>7525906Good! Reading this as soon as my supervisor leave me a moment to breath.Damn, I should also make an ao3 account too.>>7525925Maybe make the face more rotund?Still, very good Gideon>>7525957Good to see you piggu!
>>7526019I want Hugh to get a boyfriend.
>coltairefucking weaver you're great
>>7526086Moana seemed to me like a response to all the complaints that most frequently get leveled at Disney, except they took it overboard.>Disney Princesses don't have agency! Here's an action princess who saves the MAN more often than not!>All the princesses are white (except they aren't)! Make her a Polynesian!Which is kinda sad, because Maui is really cool in the original myths, and is THE big cultural hero. It's like gutting the story of Odysseus so that Penelope really won the Trojan War.
>>7525995Like this person said: >>7526012She came out to get her mind off things and Remmy didn't help that at all. She repeatedly tried to engage him and he didn't pick up. Near the end he literally stops responding and she's the only one talking. It's fucking dead air. Also he basically tells her to keep being scared?? Who does that??>"I feel like it could be me next!"Right answer:>"Nothing is going to happen to you."Wrong answer:>"YEAH IT TOTALLY COULD, YOU SHOULD PROBABLY BE SCARED!"
>>7526094Thanks!>>7526102Honestly I think a lot of the cast could benefit from having a relationship, but unfortunately things like that don't just magically happen.>>7526115Holy shit I fucking missed that.
>>7526094Good luck with your own stuff too!New content is always great!
>>7525778 You know? I can't for the life of me EVER remember that suppressants and shit was ever talked about within Fluent. Even though I may love it I can't be asked to read it again. It's really soured everything because of Eloquence.Was that an actual thing? Or was that pulled out of their ass?>>7525955>>7526056It's quite simple really.>Judy makes a joke about "bunny's are good at multiplying".>Rabbit family's (or at least the Hopps family) have a large number of children.>That must mean they really like to fuck a whole lot.>Drugs are needed to stop them from fucking.>Because rabbit's are horny little fuckers, and they can't function without sex.It's dumb and stupid, and great Fic's are ruined with it. Because drama, it's nothing more then a headcanon that has taken off, and it's turn into a fucking monster.
>>7526119What really bugged me about the movie was how the ocean was just hand-holding her the entire time and protecting her, it made her character dull, and more like a walking plot device than anything else. Maui was definitely the best character, didn't know he was big in polynesian mythology.>Moana's trender equality, >All the chiefs in the past are men>No men in the movie make any moves on her, and she has no kids. The chicken was probably the most insufferable animated character I've seen this decade.
>>7526172Thanks!But I'm a little unsure if I have to drop it today.I'm going for some weapon-grade feelium>>7526180What really seemed strange to me was how the ocean was literally a deus-ex machina, but only when the situation was irreparable. Seriously, a wave here and there and it could have potentially leveled almost all the danger. The problem with having a too strong character.Also, damn, those feathers look so bad after the fur in Zootopia.
>>7526180The chicken served to be the cookie cutter comedy relief "character" that gets forced into every Disney film by the marketing department. Though This time they forgot to make it actually do anything relevant other than waste screen time.
>>7526240Pig was better
>>7526180Haven't seen it yet, is the chicken worse than the fucking snowman from Frozen? Such an annoying little eye soar.
>>7526177Yeah... I've got to say, the contrast between WildBurr's newer thing and what I'm reading now of the earlier story is like night-vs-day.[Spoilers]It kind of hits me hard because within the past few months I've written things that are just piss-takes for goofy fun... and also things that I meant to be genuinely sweet and heart-warming. As a fellow author, I feel freaked out. It also makes me think of whether I should have just kept my piss-take writings to myself.[/SpoilersDon'tWork]
>>7526257It just walks around, pecking at shit and jumping into the ocean to die. It's a prop with no self-preservation.
>>7526180>No one bats an eye when she's named the next chieftain, even though that wouldn't be the case.>Even though she's clearly uncomfortable with the role and doesn't really do much, people still comment about good she's doing.>Does everything effortlessly. Wanna be a navigator, the kind of thing Maui probably practiced for years? She picks it up instantly! Same goes with the swashbuckling oar combat.>All of the wise people, or even just the sensible ones, are women. Not exactly gender equality when all the men simply exist to be wrong in a story.Despite all the bluster about cultural appropriation these days people are raving about the film, despite the fact that it guts Polynesian myth and its hero for a glorified self insert. They're pissed about this movie out there.
>>7526257The chicken did significantly less for the plot than Olaf ever did for Frozen.That said I still feel like Moana is a better movie. Didn't like it as much as Zootopia, or hell even as much as Sing.
>>7526271To be fair, she sucks at sailing, and it was Maui who taught her. The oar combat and running around like Tarzan was just forced, they didn't establish early on in the film whether she actually lived a life that would make her that athletic.
>>7526269In fairness, real-life chickens are extremely fucking stupid, and that's in character.Not that it would make it any happier to watch.
>>7526271>Despite all the bluster about cultural appropriation these days people are raving about the film, despite the fact that it guts Polynesian myth and its hero for a glorified self insert. They're pissed about this movie out there.This sentence seems to be at odds with itself. Do they like the movie or not?
>>7526331People in the West like it. People in Polynesia, Hawaii? Less than impressed.
>>7526086>>7526180>>7526271>>7526310So who were the little coconut guys that tried to steal the Heart?What was the deal with the Underworld and the not-dragon crab?If the lava demon was actually the goddess the whole time, merely transformed after her Heart was stolen, then how the hell did people know who she was or how did they NOT know she was the goddess?If I'm expected to understand this Polynesian myths, at the very least explain that shit.I felt that Book of Life had some issues with it's explanation of Mexican beliefs/traditions, but it explained itself a hell of a lot better than Moana did.Shit, I still think I enjoyed Pocahontas better than Moana, and that was a butchering of a fairy tale that was loosely based on real events.
So when is the lion going to lay down with the lamb?
>>7526262Eh, it's all good. That's the thing though, whatever you are writing is just for, as you put it, "goofy fun." It's not meant to be taken seriously in that case, and those things that are generally sweet and nice are your "real" works.The thing with Wild Burr, is that they are serious, like drop dead serious with what they want to do. They are alienating SO many of their readers for things they SHOULD have known would happen. They have already tried it before, with that Nick/Finnick Fling (Which seems to be retconned AGAIN within their new work. In which it DID happen.)Equally with that Judy/Nick/Gideon thing. At least they had the decency to make it an AU and not make it canon or some off-shot of the main Fic.Honestly I am at the point that I think WildBurr is TRYING to start something, doing everything they can do to make their readers angry. They are militarily taking EVERY SINGLE DAMN trope and meme that many hate, at put it all together. Just so they can have an excuse to leave this fandom or something.
>>7526369That's a good point that I never really thought about. How did people know this lava demon's name and how did it acquire a reputation if it just kinda spawned when the mother island died?It's as if they were doing the Disney princess template, then just slapped in random Polynesian stuff to fill in the blanks. Maui was just in there because he had to be. The film makes it perfectly clear that he's barely even a character and it's all about Moana all the time.
>>7526177>You know? I can't for the life of me EVER remember that suppressants and shit was ever talked about within Fluent.Because they weren't, at all. There was never a chapter that hinted that bunnies needed hormonal drugs or were polygamy. Hell, there was a chapter in Fluent where Judy tells her sisters, and demonstrates, that Nick is a much better lover than any bunny with his tongue alone, and that she is completely satisfied with him.Eloquence basically took everything in Fluent and threw it out the window, pissed on it, and lit it on fire. >>7526262I would say don't be afraid to post your "piss-take writings", some people might enjoy them, some might not. The one thing to take away from this whole thing with WildBurr is don't ignore feedback. Ultimately what you are writing is yours to write and you shouldn't let anyone tell you differently, but you should also accept criticism as well. WildBurr isn't doing that, so far they are only replying to the comments that basically kiss their feet, ignoring the posts that are giving actual criticism (Judy not telling Nick about rabbits practicing polygamy, Nick being emotionally blackmailed, etc).
>>7526408>The lewd Waga doesn't want you to see
ok so to draw a musk deerevens dressodds lingeredoubles nudei'll do at least two of these anyway... just which will i do first?spin the wheel, o fate.
>>7526430Does my post count as the second one?
>>7526430Remember: extra soft.He is a soft boy.
>>7526430Requesting a musk deer pressing his dick upon his dress and cumming on it.
>>7526415>It's as if they were doing the Disney princess template, then just slapped in random Polynesian stuff to fill in the blanks.If anything I have a feeling its the other way around. The creative team most likely wanted to make a proper film, but then corporate came in and shifted things around. They just couldn't help but say "she's a princess right? close enough" and went crazy with it knowing how much money that kind of thing brought in for Frozen.
>>7526452the third option was just bait for nobby, i'm going to do the first two.>>7526460that's the way i like them>>7526463no can-do anon, i promised nobby no explicit lewd.
>>7526411>>7526428Yeah... I guess I'm having a lot of "two cakes" as well as worry about how I've got so many incomplete things uploaded. I can say to my credit, though, that I strongly take in feedback.
>>7526430This reminds me that we still need to see Artemis dominated in bed by his tigress gf.
>>7526428Hah, thank you. It's nice that they are tearing apart their own work for a possible fetish that they have.And ya that was "Once you go Fox..." Easily the shortest but one of the best chapters they had, within that work. But in his newest explanations when he was taking about changing those things they say: >While I may be proud of The Tickler, that whole scene wasn't planned out at all.That's a bold faced lie. All of the comments that they have replying to others, has WIldBurr being glad that it came out so well. Who would be glad that something they didn't plan out well, received a massive positive reception?They are realizing that they pulled this new shit out of their butts, and they need to work as hard as they can to retcon it.>>7526262From the same "It's all good, Anon."Just as >>7526428 says.Post them if you want to, just make sure that either it comes across as not serious or just tell your readers it's 'for the shits and giggles'And don't ignore criticism and feedback! Take it all in and listen to your readers, so what you can improve with and so forth.
>>7526484>DominatedAnyone else getting tired of BDSMfags pushing their fetish onto literally every couple? Not every person gets off to being mean to their lover in bed, and not everyone gets off to pain being inflicted on them.
>>7526472Are you streaming right now, FF? Or just prepping for the weekend?
>>7526561I think you're the only one that jumped from the word "dominated" to full blown BDSM stuff dude.I was just saying that I wanted the tiger to ravish that soft little boy.
>>7526561I think they are talking about being dominating in bed. Not full on master-slave.Don't filter everything you see like this.
>>7526576not streaming, just getting started on artemis sketch. was hoping to catch nobby's stream, but i gotta be in bed in less than an hour so there's no point in starting streaming now.
Is the archive down?
>>7526675Nope, desustorage and ztarchive are both working. looking for anything in particular?
>>7526675Both Desu and Ztarchive are working for me
>Read "Fluent">Find a lot of it crude yet enjoy it a lot>Come to the end>"So if you like this fic as it is now, I'd recommend saving a copy. In a weeks time I'll have saved all of these chapters and deleted the fics while I work on improving them!">Know that cuckfests with Jack Savage are comingGod, it's like watching the Hindenburg collapse.
>>7526704>This is your captain speaking>I hope you were enjoying the flight>We're going to make it a bit better by lighting it on fire and crashing the son of a bitch into the ground
>>7526704>>7526721>Oh, the Humanity!
>>7526704It's times like this where I'm glad that the deleted Zootopia character that I grasped onto was Honey as opposed to cuckboy.True, she hardly ever gets any love, but at least she doesn't cause disasters like this.
>>7526778Judy cucks nick with honey when?
>>7526820Beav pls
I want a Zootopia version of this:https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qkc8YduPnOM1:10 on is the actual dancing
>>7526704>>7526721>>7526758https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_DXv0lmFS14
swing and a missi dunno if i'll ever get the hang of zootopia anatomy. hell, i don't have the hang on any type of anatomy. and of course i chose a dress that i can in no way draw. so this is pretty shitty and i'm too tired to do anymore.
>>7526561Take what you just said and replace BDSM with cuckolding. Bam. You've just described how I feel.
>>7526962Das a cute boi!Particularly like the fluffy head.>i dunno if i'll ever get the hang of zootopia anatomyTo me it seems generally good, maybe I can try to give a couple of suggestions if you want FF
>>7526962NOICE
>>7526962Soft Boy / 10
>>7526998sure. i mean to be fair it is rushed, but lay that crit on me.>>7527001>>7527006soft enough for you?
>>7525008Great chapter!Loved that you finally touched the topic of how predators must feel with the "plague" they have. It always bugged me before that you always mentioned the protests and how it is on news all the time, but none of the predators we saw gave two shits about it.Some people say that Remmy was rude to Charlie but honestly you cannot expect your friends to cancel their plans only to comfort you. And he was with her for some time.And Remmy was again cockblocked. Now he can't even get his toy. Why does he not just wrap his hoof in some cloth ot something soft?I hope he and Annie will have another date soon, with happy ending hopefully.
>>7527011I suppose I'd say that the dress appears maybe too 'poofy' and should follow the natural contours of his body more. I think also that maybe his arms and legs are shaped in a way too different than his head. Like maybe his head's posture in leaning off and looking to the side is too forced. That make sense?
>>7527045well the dress is actually supposed to be poofy.i was going for looking away in embarassment but yeah, everything is fucked. it's because i don't understand zootopia bodies, and there are only good refs for the main species.maybe i just need to go back to studying and not draw for fun for awhile so i can improve more.
>>7525008So will we get back to one - two week waiting periods or should we expect another month?
hey there /ztg/, neoTT here!I've finished adding your beautiful submission to the tumblr and will post it before I head off to sleep, but before that, I want to thank everyone who participated!seriously, you guys add so much world-building that it must inspire other anons to work their own ideas!and those of you who DIDN'T submit your works... don't worry!If you feel that you won't be able to finish by the weekend just post it anyway when you're done!just be sure to add the TT tag to your post or file so I'll be able to see it!see you tomorrow /ztg/!https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Ga3_HQ6mt_k
>>7527093You a cool duder neoTT, have a good night.
well, i can't stay awake any longer. goodnight everyone! sorry for the shitty quality, nobby. i'll try again another time. this cutie deserves better.
>>7526962OH SHITTHANKS DUDE!!!!!
>>7527093Godspeed, neoTThttps://www.youtube.com/watch?v=dYsD4DPg4ls
>>7527141this is only the beginning my friend
>>7527011>sure. i mean to be fair it is rushed, but lay that crit on me.No prob.Starting from the head.From what I've seen, Nobby draws him with a little bigger ears and more "deer-like" (rounded triangle instead of simply straight).Then, going down it is in general good, maybe widen the neck a bit.You did get the typical zootopian slouched shoulders good, maybe widen a tiiiiny bit, because of the arms going inward.You need a little work on his right paw, make the foremost finger more "visible".The dress is good, you only need to straighten a little the corset-like part, since i seems elastic, and be careful of the two most bulging parts of the gown, since they seem the knees (making contrast with the legs below).All in all very good for a quick sketch, you only need minor adjustments.>>7527075>maybe i just need to go back to studying and not draw for fun for awhile so i can improve moreDrawing should be fun, so it is good to divide training and free-drawing equally.Don't get yourself down so much, or I am gonna have to spank that ermine butt.
>>7527171I want to pound that musky butt. Jesus christ, he shouldn't flaunt it like that.
Link to TT tumblr?
>>7526561- dominating doesn't refer only to bdsm/pain/degradation my favorite doms are gentle, it's more just about letting them lead/take control than it is about subservience or punishment-"not everyone" that's fine if youre not into it. but it's not being pushed on them at all, I made Artemis to be primarily a sub, and it's totally in character for him to enjoy gentle femdom it's okay not to like things, I have my own interests when making characters and I realize not everyone will share it. you can either ignore it, post content you do enjoy, or even create your own content that match your interests>>7527195let my boy sleepp
>>7527211http://t3event.tumblr.com/
>>7527220No sleep for fat-assed deer Nobby.
>>7527231Thanks
hey /ztg/, before I go to sleep, could someone help me identify the CC of these submissions?>>7527142>>7527114ty
>>7527268
>>7527268That's Gerardson
>>7527274
>>7527285and lastly, the image used in the OP?
>>7527268That's geraldson, but it wasn't really a TT thing. That was a request from days ago.Though he did do a TT entry, >>7527285 that one.>>7527274That's A-signature
>>7527171thanks for the crit! hopefully the next one will be even better.and you can spank away, that's almost one of my fetishes.>>7527195>>7527232do not assault deer. they're for tender loving. all tucked in so i'm off to sleep. nobby you better stream this weekend while i'm awake.
>>7527274That was me, a_signature and it was a request more than a submission.But you can add it as submission, why not>>7527285Gerardson again>>7527290The one in OP I don't recognize, sadly>>7527297>and you can spank away, that's almost one of my fetishes.Errr...
>>7523416Please continue....
>>7527297stop sleeping you dweeb
>>7527376>Gideon with brown eyes instead of blue>Finnick with red eyes instead of brownDid the nips even watch the movie?
The patootiest
>>7523413I like this image far more than I should.
>>7524948
I think I like Charlie way too much.When I try to think happy thoughts she is all I see.Whenever I talk to real women I cant help but to compare them to her.Why has weaver cursed me so!send help.
>>7527590You can't blame Weaver for your autism.But you are still right, Charlie is best girl.Though Martina is best "girl".
>>7527590What would you do if she approached you, as she approached Remmy in today's Pack Street?
>>7527630Reassure her of her worth, hold her tight, and call off the date because clearly She needs the support.I'm scared to think of her tearing herself apart mentally while alone.
>>7527691>>7527630>Remmy said "people would miss you">He didn't say "I would miss you"
>>7527712Remmy seemed really out of it for most of the chapter. I guess its hard to come up with the right words when you are also going though pain.
>>7527732Remmy really fucked up with both Charlie and Anneke but I think they let it slide because they know he's hurting too. Still, he really shouldn't have reinforced Anneke's fears.
>>7527748I do not think there is anything they have to forgive him for. They just had a conversation and both of them said mostly the same. He seemed to me really sympathetic, he did not push on them and the date ended on good terms.
>>7527787>both of them said mostly the sameYes but they are very different people in very different circumstances.Her: "I feel scared that as a predator I could lose myself at any second in a fate worse than death"Him: "You sure could! That must be really scary!"
>>7523402I want Remmy to end with nobody so that we're free to ship him with whomever we like
>>7527800No. Go away.Remmy needs to get laid.
>>7527787All Remmy did during the entire dinner was psyche her out more and reinforce all of her fears.
>>7527799What should he have said? "Yes, I understand exactly what you mean?" That'd be really fucking dishonest and he knows it.
>>7527800>I want Remmy to end with nobodyI don't think that he is into sloths!....ok, I'll see myself out
>>7527817>What should he have said?How about "you have nothing to worry about, you're going to be fine, nothing is going to happen to you?">What should he have said? "Yes, I understand exactly what you mean?"That is what he said!! He agreed with her that it was scary and told her SHE SHOULD BE AFRAID!
>>7527799>>7527810>>7527847I think you are overdoing it but yeah he did say something similar.But if you you look at it she was psyching out herself since the siren went out during the date.He just sort of replied:>"...I don't know.">"I don't think there's much warning, no," I finally admit at length. "It seems like a... a sudden kinda thing."(after she ask where he would hide)>"I don't know. I don't know, like... I don't know if you could hide FROM a savage predator. I saw the damage done to the shop, it was..." I shake my head. "Someone small like Marty, sure. If Al went savage, well..." >"I know.">"I know," I agree quickly. "I was just thinking that earlier, myself. She was so polite, so calm. She was one of the good ones.">"No, no no no, I just meant before this. She didn't have any signs or anything. It was -- I mean, no one could have seen it coming.">I reach out, putting my hoof on her paw. "I'm really sorry, Annie. That must be terrifying," I agree, gently. "I can't even imagine. You have every reason to be upset."Yes he should have tried to console her more but he obviously is not good at it.It's not like he said: Whoa, I sure am lucky I am not one of you savages! Good luck sleeping you ticking time-bomb.
>>7527868>It's not like he said: Whoa, I sure am lucky I am not one of you savages! He did say Pandora was "one of the good ones" though, which I mean... damn.
>>7527868>It's not like he said: Whoa, I sure am lucky I am not one of you savages! Good luck sleeping you ticking time-bomb.The first part not so much, the second part, almost.I stand by what I originally said which is that he was basically not even responding for most of the conversation and when he did it was mostly just to tell her that yes, she SHOULD BE AFRAID!! She literally told him that she only came out to try and get her mind off it and feel better and he does nothing to console her.But I also think like I said already that even though he clearly blew it she understands that he's not really himself either. If he wasn't hurting too he would be able to console her and he'd be in a better mind to do so. So even though he didn't do great she doesn't take it out on him. She knows he's in shock too and obviously isn't mad. She even says they'll try again. But still, she goes home feeling worse than when she left, and that sucks.
Good morning thread! Time to do more practice, maybe i will something later for critiques.>>7523927>That PoseThis is already a good pic>>7524010So, maximum bully or just run?>>7524482Replyanon, you're a miracle, but also a curse>>7525008Thanks weav! this is already a good day>>7525779Good morning a_sig, i just woke up from the weirdest dream. It was half ztg related, i even slept in someone's cc house... this is getting out of hand>>7526962Head and eyes are perfect, maybe you need choose other dress and practice the neck/body part>>7527045I think i get the idea, the head/neck part is not turning, and feels weird.
>>7527873I actually love this line. I don't think he's even intentionally saying "she was one of the good preds," hell, that's a thing WE say. It comes out sounding really awful but Dora was probably the one person who was nicest to Remmy in his entire stay on Pack Street and he's legitimately shaken up that a kind, polite business owner like her, apparently without a single mean bone in her body, can go savage with no warning. But it sounds like he's being a real shithead about it and he probably even kind of is, even if he doesn't intend to be.
>>7525008this is gonna be a fun timethe movie didn't have too much from the perspective of regular citizens living with the savage outbreaks so this was a fun chapter to readalso sad foxe
>>7527888Hi HC!>i even slept in someone's cc houseWhose house?>>7527903Aaaaw, some feelings to complete lunch.Nice to see you, Zhan. Also>the bulge returns
>>7527873That is a normal phrase. Used by humans. Used to describe oustanding members of the society in normal talk.He did not mean that she was a good person...for a predator!And if you mean that he said it in past tense, well that was just his phrasing and he explained himself.>>7527885I agree with you that he should be more caring, but I don't think he really mean to say that she SHOULD BE AFRAID!!He probably tried to sympathise and put himself in her shoes.Saying it will be alright is sweet but sometimes it can do more harm than good, it can sound distant or making someones troubles seem small.And yes she did say that she tried to put her mind off it, but she was the one who started and continued with the conversation. Someone could say that she should have shut up if she wanted to get her mind off it.There is no real right answer.Overall it was a dramatic conversation on topic that hurt them both. Both of them could have done more to avoid it or make it better. Both of them went home feeling worse than when they left. I just hope Annie is alright and that they will have another date soon when they both feel better, maybe just some movie night in Remmy's appartment.
>>7527903This is a sweet pic Zhan, cool on you.
>>7527903>Remmy's look says it all>Why this disgusting pred clinging on to me
>>7527946>Both of them went home feeling worse than when they leftSometimes you have to lance the boil.
Here's a reshill of my fanfic for TT that focuses on the serfs.http://archiveofourown.org/works/9521381
>>7527958what?
>>7527988Sometimes leaving things alone doesn't let it heal, it just causes it to fester under the surface. Digging at it until the badness spurts forth hurts, but it's the lesser evil.
>>7528003Oh, never heard that saying before.But yeah, I do agree. In the end they at least have the topic behind them.
>>7527976The situation you depicted is horrifying, it made me shiver.Good fic, well done Nighthound.
made a little sketch of the mix up scene
>>7528135Holy shit dude the energy in this is intense. It's actually a little unsettling.
>>7528135>gud is a chaosfagwhy am I not surprised
>>7528135This isn't even zootopia related.. it's just Hordes of chaos.I like it.
>>7528135Fuck that is metal as all hell. Unluckily for those chaos dudes it looks like they are taking on Ted's family... so they're fucked. Those devils don't play around.
>>7525784FOR THE LOVE OF GOD POST A SCREENCAP OR LINK TO A PASTEBIN OF THAT GREEN
>>7528114>anxious bleating intensifies>>7528135Oh my. What is the mammal on the banner?
>>7528216Read the filename friendo.
>>7528135>loss.jpg hidden in the imagegod. fucking. damnit.
>>7527922I was on another city, getting wasted in someone's apartment and ready go to a party. It wasn't ztg related, until i got a call, and there was a Hugh's pic on my phone. This dude was checking on his friend apartment. Asked about the pic and he said i was on Inky's apartment, and i was like WAIT, WHAT?>>7528135This is epic, but someone is crying>>7528114Nice pic, also dat Qotsa ref.
>>7528288Thanks! i'm glad someone caught the ref
>>7528286?
>>7528341The runes on the sword.
>>7528343I do not recognize them at all...
>>7528343FUCKINGCHRIST
>>7528365It's a meme of a four panel page from the Ctrl+Alt+Del videogamer webcomic called Loss where the main gamer character's gamer girlfriend has a miscarriage.The runes on the sword mimic the character positions from the comic page of single guy entering hospital doors, guy talking to sitting receptionist, guy talking to standing doctor, and guy standing by his girlfriend laying in a hospital bed.
>>7528388Oh shit...that was years ago, I had completely forgotten about ctr+alt+del....
>>7525695>>7525897>>7525918>>7525995>>7526012>>7526130Read>>7527034>>7527732>>7527748>>7527787>>7527799>>7527810>>7527817>>7527847>>7527868>>7527885>>7527946
>>7528393I'm sure most of us would like to forget about Crtl+Alt+Del, anon. :^]
Anyone have that set op nightmarish pictures of the VRbit gud made in the last thread?
>>7528436images/1486078470673.pngimages/1486079677411.pngimages/1486081616541.pngAnd bonus edit:images/1486086058677.png
>>7523592what sex act did they do, anons?travis is the only one with his pants down, but i don't see any cum dripping from anywhere.
>>7528451this is what you get if you don't bully your bun
>>7528482Clearly Gideon ravaged his body with his mouth and paws before giving Travis his first blowjob, that's why you can't see any cum, it's all down Gideon's throat and his dick was licked clean.
SHARLEON WILL RULE THE WORLD
>>7528482>i don't see any cum>look at Gideon's overallsSure you don't
>>7528497>straight Gideon.>not even with a milf.>not supporting the Gilded Age.
You know what I really miss?
>>7528517beaver drawing backgrounds? I miss that too
>>7528517I miss Boney...
>>7528517Buns want the D
>>7528517You guys. I miss you guys.New A Rabbit Clan's Fox: http://archiveofourown.org/works/7555468/chapters/21620312
>>7528517Oh golly gosh, I really need to go back and read RCF. Great Fic, 10/10, fully support.7/10 too many rabbits.--IGN>>7528527Harsh, man, I'll have you know I--WHOA, HOLD THE PHONE!>>7528541You've returned to us! Oh joyous day!I am absolutely creaming myself with excitement!
>>7528541Holy shit I thought it was a troll post for a second there! Glad to see you're alive Boney!
>>7528541>Why must anons bait my heart with false hopesOH SHIT IT'S REAL!!
>>7528541Boney!Welcome back! I hope things are getting better for you.How's going?
>>7528541AYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYTT, PS AND NOW THIS
>>7528541aww yis, thank you Boney!
>>7528561>>7528569>>7528574Aww, love you guys too <3>>7528577Been in a better headspace this past week, which is where I managed to pull this chapter from. Events IRL continue to be pretty shitty so I can't guarantee this upswell of positivity will last, but I'll do my best to maintain it.
>>7525446>...But nobody came.
>>7525490I mean... I'd be into Remmy's Sunshine Pack Street Harem Shenanigans...
>>7528541He lives!!!
here's an ideawhat if remmy takes the bullet for one of the other members of the pack and is the first prey to go savage just before the nighthowler case is blown open
>>7528541We've missed you, Boney!
>>7528592I'm happy to hear that.Remember that, if you need someone, we are here.You are a good dude.Also your stoat photographer is one of the few tubedudes that I still haven't drawn. I need to remember this.
>>7528603>rest of the pack hiding him somewhere in the building and taking turns to 'soothe' the savage lamb to keep him from being found out and made to 'disappear' like all the others that went savageYou have my attention.
>>7528603>>7528615Go on.
>>7528613If there's anything I think putting a voice to would help with, you guys'd be the first I come to.
>more art>Pack Street>Boney's backa good thread
I want to stay up and read the new Rabbit Clan's Fox chapter and converse with Boney, but I have been awake for a long time and can barely keep my eyes open. I need some rest.Will read the new chapter when I awaken since I'm too tired to be able to enjoy it in its full glory right now.Love ya, folks. Stay safe, alright?
>>7528615which member of the pack would be most likely to have handcuffs (probably as a sex thing) to restrain the savage ram?
>>7528673>Stay safe, alright?Don't tell me what to do
>>7528674Anneke and Wolter would have kinky cuffs. Remmy would break them.Then Charlie would bring out proper police-grade cuffs.
>>7528673I plan to be sticking around for at least a couple days before I disappear into the ether again so hopefully we'll be able to chat later!
>>7528689>"Why do you-">"Don't ask."
>>7528674Anneke and Wolter, possibly Avo too.
>>7528625Good!Speaking of something else, I know that you haven't developed a lot on your zoosona, do you want to try?The more details I have the easier to draw is>>7528693
>>7528674Charlie (because of reasons)and Avo for work,
>>7528734>Charlie has police-grade handcuffs>She got them so she could cuff herself if she thought she was about to go savage
>>7528740Like I said, reasons.
>>7528740stopi don't want to feel anything
>>7528745>>7528740>>7528734so, basicallyfor this plot to work, it would have to take place right before the nighthowler plot is revealed, since you can't hide this kind of news for longhow long would remmy have to suffer, anons? and who would be suffering more... the animal, or people who've grown close to him seeing him die and be replaced with a savage?i know charlie's grown close to remmy, in her own way. she wouldn't have sought him out for comfort if she hadn't.
>page 9Ha ha!Time for fetishes!
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>>7528780downs syndrome face
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>>7528778>>7528780
>>7528763How long did the NH dose last?I mean, they didn't need to make some sort of anti-serum for every afflicted animal in the movie did they?It should eventually leave your system right?
>>7528763After Judy's bad speech, before the nighthowler plot reveal.Remmy's life is finally perfect, and then the nighthowler plot is revealed. Bam!
>>7528808Otterton was savage for months. It seems to be permanent until specifically counteracted.
>>7528808it lasts months at the very least, anon, since judy was away for months and we know that if savages started 'reverting' that damn well would have been newsworthy
>>7528819Think they were being fed nighthowler somehow? Planted sheep cops dosing them up in confinement?
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>>7528715Foosona's aren't really my thing, to be honest. I think of Siarl (pronounced 'Sharl') as more of an OC than a zoosona - he was gonna be the landlord in Winter Snuggles before I decided to cut out anyone that wasn't the two of them, and then I developed him into a full-blown character when zoosonas were what the cool kids were doing.To say a bit about him, in the game of life, he's a spectator. He watches the world go by rather than diving into it. He's also a bit of a loner, partially by choice and partially due to not knowing how to meet people in the big city. He talks to people all day as his job, sure, but they're mostly tourists - Zootopian locals don't go to information kiosks, so it's rare that he meets someone that won't be gone soon. But he's mostly happy.I picture him poking around odd corners of Zootopia, looking for niches he hasn't experienced yet. Little hole-in-the-wall restaurants filled with food he can't even pronounce are his favourite. If he found that graffiti-mural that Remmy likes so much in Pack Street he'd be delighted and probably take like fifty pictures of it.Put a camera in the paws of pic related and you're pretty much good to go. I see him constantly sporting that "what's going on over there?" pose that stoats have.
>>7528778>>7528780This won't gain my interest until Judy is skewered by it.
>>7528541what about fanfiction.net?
>Remmy goes savage because he enters the line of fire of Doug when he's aiming at the "Alpha">Al call everyone to talk about the whole panic and reassure everyone. Even Velvet is there. The room is arranged with chairs in a circle.>Everyone shares their worries and the mood is somber.>Suddenly Remmy starts talking about Pandora and whatnot, "She was alright, she was amazing... and out of the blue she--". Remmy jerked himself up quickly to grab everyone attention and suddenly gets shot by standing in the way to Al.>He starts turning and groaning, getting on all fours. Everyone is slightly disgusted, he starts bleating and stomping his hoof on the ground.>"Cormo?" Al ask, Remmy turns to him and charges with all his might. Al effortlessly raises the ram off the ground with his arm.>"What the fuck is your fucking problem, yarnball?" Avo shrieks. "Do you think you're being funny?" Charlie voice cracks a bit. >"Yeah, nobody here is laughing." Al say while holding the squirming ram. >"Fuck this and fuck you, grazer", yells Marty leaving alongside Ozzy. "You're really fucked up." followed Betty. Anneke, Wolter and Avo dragging a sulking Charlie behind her.>"And I thought you ain't be like this! Fuck you wannabite!" Ozzy wails as he leaves, slamming the door behind him. Now only a scorning Velvet and livid Al holding a struggling Ram on the room.
>>7528838Working on it now, their upload system is a huge pain compared to AO3.
>>7528838>>7528844Done.
>>7528854ily boney, you make reading fun
>>7528808>How long did the NH dose last?Unspecified. More than 3 months considering that's the time between Missing Mammals reveal and Bellwether being caught, and there were mammals before that who were going savage already.>I mean, they didn't need to make some sort of anti-serum for every afflicted animal in the movie did they?Going by the movie, they had. I assume it isn't the case if it's a small dose like biting/smelling the flower.>It should eventually leave your system right?In logic, yes. But this movie goes the way where it completely rewires you until you get something to rewire you back to normal. I doubt a drug this potent wouldn't lead to a quick death by organs failure in a logical setting.
>>7528825Nah. I think Bellwether was just using doses concentrated to retarded degrees.
>>7528869Well either that or Bellwether had sheep orderlies carefully dose the patients.It was so much easier than having Doug break into Cliffside Asylum.
>>7528869Bonnies cousin eats one of them and he eventually reverted without medical attention.
>>7528778>>7528780Tumblr link?
>>7528842Yeah idk. I'd think it would become apparent that Remmy wasn't fucking around very quickly. Quick enough that everyone wouldn't have just left in anger at least.
>>7528909Yes, it's supposed to be absurd. Surreal humor. I doubt anyone would think he was pretending the moment he dropped all fours, even Marty knows he wouldn't pull that kind of shit.
>>7528869I'm doing some research. Natural NH weren't so strong, since Bonnie's brother just ate one and went berserk, biting Bonnie. Maybe 1 day or less.Doug's version is concentrated, it could be 5x, 50x, 500x or even 5000x stronger. The affected mammals weren't treated, because doctors didn't know how to treat them. All of them affected with the same dose. Only one cure was developed for all the mammals, and worked just fine.It would leave your system, but again, in concentrated doses it could take weeks or even months. At least it was not lethal.
>>7528869>>7528884>>7528899But the pill was an extract, it did seem it needs large amount of NH for creation of just one pill.Maybe it was a permanent poison, like a vaccine?
>>7526429Wait, Waga did lewd?
>>7528944Gotcha, sorry I didn't catch that. Exams got me fucked up~
Nekked babby bun
>>7528965You can't simply take a drug and make it more concentrated to make it last forever, that's how you get OD. And besides, getting something this strong would result on such a massive withdrawal the user would blow up after his body processed it.>>7528968Vaccines just simply give you a weakened/deadened virus and your body creates and "caches" the antibody required to exterminate it. It couldn't be that unless we're going on concentrated NH causing an autoimmune disease.
it's a cartoon
>>7529015I'm sorry you had to find out this way anon.
Morning.Will fix this later today hopefully.
>>7529024YES
>>7528541>>7528592Boney, I don't know if you were aware, but people have been wishing you well for... well, every day since you've been gone.Its awesome to see you, buddy. You've made a bunch of people incredibly happy.
>>7529015THAT'S NOT TRUE!NICK IS REAL IN MY HEART!
>>7529024FUKKEN10/10
>>7528904http://saphiroths.tumblr.com/guy draws pretty much nothing but hyper cocks, hyper feet and hyper fat/inflation
I want Bellwether to turn me into a ramI want her to look at me with contempt in her eyes, as she rubs her hands all over my body, causing wool to grow all over me. I want her to take off my pants as the growth of wool causes them to split and tear, exposing the bulge in my underwear. I want her to look at my girth in disappointment, as she rubs it, causing it to grow into a proper meaty ram cock for her satisfaction. I want her to ride me as the rest of my body finishes transforming into a ram, my face pushing out into a snout, and my ears moving up, and my pupils becoming horizontal and dark. I want her to make me her obedient studly henchmen, living only to bring about her plots of domination. I want her to take me to a sheep bar, where I can drink Cudweiser beer, play pool, and chew on the pool table. I want her to take me to my new home, where she visits me whenever she needs to release her pent-up sexual frustration.
>>7529024https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=MTLtFDkyryI
>>7529043>implying Bellwether wouldn't want to be fucked by a wild predator human
>>7529034It was the Medieval TT coming up on my RSS feed that motivated me to finish off the last chapter, even though I ended up having to axe half of what I had and rewrite almost all of the rest of it. I thought that the topic would have reminded people of me a bit and felt I owed at least an ending to ARCF, even if I can't follow through on a sequel. Though I will try.(though the pedant in me has to say that ARCF is bronze age, not medieval)
New thread?>>7529055>>7529055>>7529055>>7529055
>>7529049Hence the transformation.
Now we a chill thread...slowly sinking off page 10 we can all just chill, talk and accept the inevitable.Together.
>>7527903Zhan! Too cute!You are making me want to see these two in bed, comforting each other!
>>7528541Glad to see you back!Will read later, need to go to work.
>>7528778>Decent paws>Hyper shit
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