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Zootopia Thread: Thankful for Fantasy Edition

Pastebin: pastebin.com/iYDU8g2T
Booru: zoo.booru.org
ZTArchive: ztarchive.com
Desustorage: desuarchive.org/trash
Previous thread: archive.b-stats.org/trash/thread/6462590
Current TT Theme: Fantasy/Mythos [[SUBMISSIONS ARE DUE TODAY]]
More information on TT: derpy.me/trashthematicthursdays
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first for sheep
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>>6470093
already a good thread
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bune?
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>sheathes mop
>better luck next time I guess
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>>6470093
>>6470102
>>6470108
Sheep are fluffy and soft <3
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>>6470108
>remmy all day every day.png
What a descriptive file name!
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>>6470108
That's not 9.5 inches...
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>>6470126
Thanks!
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Anyone know of any stories where Judy tries to express her feelings for Nick only to have Nick react really badly and basically reject her saying he prefers them as 'just friends'
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>>6470102
>>6470108
>>6470119
Speaking of Remmy, what do think's going to happen to him after Bellwether, now that he's an official member of the pack?
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Shilling for new thread my entry, a fic and relative draw:

Tails of another time

http://pastebin.com/0PshngVv

A little fable about a fox and a bunny and their journey.
Any comment, critique, suggestion or simple (You) is welcome!
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>>6470140
Here. I accidentally made his dick overly massive in this one.
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>>6470147
Here's a (You)
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>>6470142
I've asked for stories where he shoots her down, but I've been told that apparently all such stories end up with Nick actually having feelings for her and just being scared of them, and eventually he embraces them.
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>>6470164
That's the problem with Hyenas, they literally look a like, right down to their junk
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>>6470198
>aardwolves are hyenas
I mean, I GUESS
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>>6470108
>didn't shear his pubes
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>>6470206
You gotta have a landing strip man.

>>6470198
You're thinking of spotted hyenas. And also hyenas.
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Gonna re-shill my TT Entry in this thread as well.

The Savage Play
http://pastebin.com/a3Tqijbx

A ZPD detective investigates a strange play being put on for the impoverished mammals of Happy Town.
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>>6470190
No matter how many times I see that, it always looks like inflation.

y̶o̶u̶ ̶g̶o̶t̶ ̶a̶n̶y̶m̶o̶r̶e̶ ̶l̶i̶k̶e̶ ̶i̶t̶?̶
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>>6470142
>nick
>not desperate for his savior
never ever buddy
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>>6470194
Which sucks, why can't they be close friends rather then lovers? Hell I mean I think having Nick trying to coax the younger Judy through confused feelings for him she mistakes for romantic love would be awesome. Basically any story where Nick shows his age would be awesome, most write him like a clown or 20 year old
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>>6470221
>You gotta have a landing strip man.
That's not a landing strip, that's an entire airfield! Now get back here and finish the job!
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Reposting my TT thing, also taking requests.
No lewds.
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>>6470142
http://pastebin.com/F7ZKfgt6

This, I guess?
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>>6470232
How about this then?
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>>6470226
Sorry man. The only inflation I dig is minor cum inflation.

He's just super fluffy.

>>6470236
But I'm lazy.
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>>6470241
Patch dressed as a witch.
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>>6470221
>You gotta have a landing strip man.
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Happy Thanksgiving to those who celebrate it!
We canids tend to get a bit...possessive when it comes to food.
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>>6470316
>tfw you forgot this image
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>Judy learns about the fox incest meme.
>Tries to be supportive.
She fucking hints that she would "be okay" watching Nick and his mom fuck.
>Nick tells her that the meme is spicy like the guatmalen insanity pepper.
Internally, Judy sighs a breath of-
>Nick asks whether she would still like to have a threesome with him and his mom.

And thus did noble Judy Wilde take part in a partially awkward incestual threesome and end up liking it. She would say she enjoyed the mothering aspect of Mrs. Wilde and how she is actually into mommyplay; But really, she just liked being sandwiched between Nick and his mother.

>CAPTCHA: Public Traffic
Mrs. Wilde may have been around the block a few times, but she is most assuredly NOT the village bike.
Now you want to see some "public traffic" you should see Judy's mom. Now there's a woman who's been around the entire county. She's seen more traffic than an inner-city ringroad!
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Could someone give me the link for the ZT census thing please? I can't remember it.
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>>6470255
Nah, it's cool, m8; Just thought I'd ask is all.
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>>6470351
ztgcensus.tumblr.com/submit

also included the roller to cheat the cooldown system :x
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>>6470241
Sky(e) and Jack at an amusement park.
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>>6470316
>grazing strip
>whole pasture
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>>6470241
Judy as Link saving her foxy Zelda from a powered up Bellwether Ganan?
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>>6470364
This, on a roller coaster with Nick and Judy behind them, both Skye and Jack looking bored while Nick and Judy are screaming
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Okay, so. Otto [Last Name]. Age unknown. European Mink and professional psychiatrist.
Home is on Olive Street, works on Troop Street.
Has a (likely smoking hot) secretary named Samantha.

Also a twink mink shrink.
This has been fun.

>>6470354
You're a swell dude anon. I'm afraid I don't have anymore though.
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>>6470232
I would love any story that shows how mature Nick can be; yeah he had some childish moments in the movie (touching Bellwether's hair) but outside of dangerous situations he did keep his cool or was trying to annoy the hell out of the bunny cop that was blackmailing him. He's a 32-33 year old who is living on his own and had to make his own money. He probably knows the value of the dollar better than the average person, knows how harsh life can be, and has seen people at their best and worst. If that doesn;t mature someone...

>>6470246
I mean, that is less of them being friends and more of the usual "There is no way they feel the same."
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>>6470399
>Both Otto and Violet are psychiatrists
>Each are attractive as all hell
>Neither of them have any interest in each other outside of professional courtesy
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>>6470413
>I would love any story that shows how mature Nick can be
That would require the 13 year old girls who write Nick to know what being mature means.
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New TT blind read through!

Gary's got a problem: Larry's been feeling blue. But Gary has a solution! He knows exactly what to do! So Gary sets off to find a bun, goes up to the first he could see, and invites him to have some naughty fun! Gary forgot an important rule, didn't he? (The fuck am I rhyming for?) Come check out Gary's Mistake by FoxyProf!

Text here:
http://pastebin.com/EQADvS0i

Blind read through here:
https://soundcloud.com/comicanon/garys-mistake
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>>6470145
Marty will mutate into the living incarnation of "I TOLD YOU"

Hopefully his new packmates will for once stretch out their paws to support him and show some comradery after entire sheephood will be blamed for the EWEil done.
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>>6470141
I'd love to see a sheep nudist just walking around town wearing nothing but the wool.

But because it's long, she's legally wearing clothing. Ultimate loophole, you know?
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>>6470334
MODS MODS MODS
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>>6470318
I've seen so many bad thing happen to Canidae in green and stories, that I think what she needs is some gentle lewding from the striped kitty.
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And reposting for the new threads!

Not many have heard the rumors about The Savage Play. Strangely enough, even fewer have seen it. When Tim's partner invites him to a special showing of it in Happy Town, he doesn't know what to expect. What will his research reveal about the dreaded play? What is behind Hastur's mask? Is the most fantastical element of this story that people actually went to see a theater performance instead of just spending the night watching Netflix? Find out in The Savage Play, by ChillyJackal!

Text here:
http://pastebin.com/a3Tqijbx

Blind read through here:
https://soundcloud.com/comicanon/thesavageplay

Lt. Judy Hopps has to warn the other cities about what has happened! What has happened? A demonic invasion! The city has been shackled, and the guard has been demolished! Will she be able to gather adventurers to quell this blight? What will the demons do with an entire castle worth of sacrifices at their disposal? Have the sloths working at the Department of Manual Wagons noticed that they're under attack? Find out in chapter one of What Profit the World for a Lost Soul, by FoxyProf!

Text here:
http://pastebin.com/SKNB6bBF

Blind read through here:
https://soundcloud.com/comicanon/what-profit-the-world-for-a-lost-soul-ch1

Next up on my to-read lists are Raccoonfag's Fool Me Once, and A_Signature's Tails of Another Time!

Thanksgiving dinner is coming in close, and I'll be spending it with my family, but the good news is tomorrow I'll have lots of time to catch up on reading!

Link me any stories that you would like read!

>>6470318
WHY DOES LUCIUS NEVER CHEW?!

HE'S A WOLF, NOT A DUCK! EAT YOUR FOOD PROPERLY, LUCIUS!
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Lurker until now.

I'm thankful for all of the great threads on /trash/. It's amazing how the fandom is still going strong after eight months, and I love all of the content creators that made it happen.

The fanworks created here have hardened my resolve to create my own. I hope that I can start soon on next TT, but as university application deadlines loom closer, I hope to also write strong essays for my application.

Anyways, I hope this Wilde ride never ends, and to the shitposters, content creators, and lurkers: happy Thanksgiving.

>sorry if i'm being too emotional or weird; this is /trash/, after all
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>>6470241
Gideon and Judy hanging out
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>>6470566
Happy Thanksgiving, anon! I'm grateful for all the lurkers like you!

Kick ass in your university applications, buddy!
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>>6470566
aaaawwww
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>>6470555
Why do you have a pair of giant testicles on your chin?
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>>6470566
Happy Turkey day anon! Have a (You)!
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>>6470566
Im thankful for all the (you)s and that you appreciate my art
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>>6470622
ITS A BEARD AND YOU GODDAMN KNOW THAT!

I'M A TRAVELLING LOREKEEPER AND I HAVE A TOME OF STORIES AND A POINTY HAT AN A BEARD!

SHUT UP! WORST TT EVER!
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>>6470647
VRBit vs. Carcola for best face reveal of 2016
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>>6470243
I remember when this was posted and the immediate reaction to it was "Judy Savage? Dropped."

I thought it was kind of funny, if a little sudden with Nick's reaction.
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>>6470642
I really do love your art, TGG.

I'm sorry I get you confused with Visiti all the time.

(Also if you see this Visiti I apologize that I get you confused with TGG all the time)
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>>6470528
This isn't Canidae though
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>>6470622
He is a ballchinian!
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>I hope that I can start soon on next TT
amazing, nothing makes me happier than this.

happy Thanksgiving, anon!
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>>6470693
...
Not sure whether I still want to see tender loving ministered to the plump wolf who has been drawn though hell.
...
Or I now want to tease the fat wolf's prick out of his sheath and nuzzle into his fluff. Holding myself against his warm fur as I idly stroke him closer to climax.
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I'll be back later, everyone! Going to go be a family bun and eat some carroturkey!

I'll be back later tonight! Remember, I'll have all tomorrow for read throughs if I don't get to yours today!

>>6470672
VRbit blind read through of The Savage Play when? :D

>>6470701
NO ITS NOT ITS A BEARD BALLCHINIANS ARE MORE HERETICAL THAN SNEKS!

Take care everyone! Eat a bunch and drink too much and know that I'm thankful for you! Also don't discuss politics at the table because that's super rude!
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>>6470417
>

>>6470566
You're wonderful anon. I hope to see anything you create.
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>>6470784
>>6470775
>>6470792
>>6470796
G A Y A N T E L O P E S
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>>6470145
Charlie will G-Man him to safety and they will see each other up ahead.
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>>6470775
>>6470784
>>6470792
>>6470796
Goddamn I love these homo hoofers.
Any fics or greentexts about them? And can someone drop the NL comic of them?
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>>6470286
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Hey guys I'm new to this general. What should I know?
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>>6470806
>Pitch
I got it!

Lovely draw!
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>>6470806
Awesome AND punny! Thanks a lot dude!
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>>6470241
Molly ticketing an illegally parked car, please.
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>>6470811
That depends. What do you think of this bunny?
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How is going the TT anons?
Submitted your work? Feeling that sense of freedom when you have finally posted your entry?
Some drawings and fics you liked?
Also have sushi Nick because why not repost him
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Happy overeating and getting drunk day everyone.

>>6470647
Nyeheh.
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>>6470811
Judy is for Nick
Jack is for Skye
Bunanon is for Red
Remmy is for pretty much every member of Pack Street
Canidae is for mayor
Patch is for creepy
Badgers are for reporting the news
The VRbit is not for lewding

Also we're basically a hugbox/content creating machine at this point, so if you want to start making stuff, you're in the right place.
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>>6470145
They will have to hide him from the angry mobs of Preds looking to lynch every sheep.
They wreck his apartment to make it appear as through he's already been kicked out, and hide him in one of the other's apartments. This person will have to masturbate heavily to stop sensitive noses smelling out lamb.
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>>6470811
Look at the Pastebin in the OP.
The first link of the Pastebin is also the ThreadJournal, very useful, you should read it
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>>6470806
Why not Watch?

Wait...
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>>6470566
Pretty much this. If it weren't for Zootopia generals on trash I'd probably be still lurking on /mlp/. Now the only problem is how will I get off this ride?
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So.


How was everyone's Thanksgiving?
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Heyyy, anyone remember this story? Probably not because it's been like two weeks! But here's more of it!

>>6250276

>Nick moans as he finally wakes up
>Without even opening his eyes, he reaches for his bottle of liquor, grabbing at nothing but air
>Rolling over he opens his eyes, confused at not seeing his whiskey
>Eyes slowly glance up until he sees Judy, apparently she had brought a chair over to sit on while he slep
>He closes his eyes and falls back into the couch, covering his eyes with his paw
>He lets out another groan of pain
>He feels Judy’s hand on his shoulder
>He weakly tries to shrug it off
>“No. Go ‘way.”
>“Nick…”
>He winces at the pain he could hear in her voice, at the worry for him
>He didn’t want her to see him like this.
>“Nick, I can help you.”
>He tries to roll over further, bury his face in the couch
>“Something went wrong between you and Becky. I’m an expert with siblings, but please, you have to tell me what’s wrong.”
>For a long while, Nick didn’t move
>But neither did Judy.
>Finally he turns over, looking up at Judy, wincing against the bright light
>His head was filled with pounding pain
>But also shame.
>He manages to sit up, still holding his head
>Judy helps keep him steady as he does
>He lets out a groan, trying to massage his temples, deal with the pain first.
>“Hrmf. First: water, pills.”
>Judy nods, after making sure Nick was steady and sitting properly, she heads off to find some water and some painkillers
>Nick was left alone to gather his thoughts.
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>>6470919
It fucked up my sleep schedule again that's for sure.

Otherwise it was fine.
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>>6470739
This reminds me of my niece
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>>6470919
Family all circlejerked about how wonderful the GodEmperor will be over they next 4 years, skipped all the political ranting to teach my little brother how to play Bloodborne. It's good to be home.
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>>6470841
>Badgers are for reporting the news

You're god damn right
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>>6470919
My thanksgiving was great, it was also over a month ago.
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>>6470952
This just in, Badgers are super lewd! Bun buns too.
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>>6470926
>Nick drown his sorrow in alcol
Damn, poor doggo. Continue greentexter, I'm intrigued
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>>6470958
Whoever drew this is god
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>>6470958
>Fargo Judy
>implication that she's heavily pregnant
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>>6470919
Had a mental breakdown 3 hours past midnight

Had another mental breakdown at about noon

I'm relaxing and feeling alright right now.
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>>6470919
>Ate a lot of food
>Drank everyone's wine
>Wrote a bunch of crap with a friend of mine

I think I'm developing a drinking problem.

>>6470969
CEASE AND DESIST
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>>6470960
WHAT'S WRONG WITH YOUR FAAAAACE
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Oh also if Clunkbot's here, (I think he is) sorry if the story was less than you wanted, I know you were super excited for it and I apologize if I let you down.
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>>6471000
Nice trips. I actually just got here. Post it.
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>>6470981
It's the best way for bun to protect against the cold
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>>6470919
No thanksgiving in my country.
Posted my TT, I hope to get at least one opinion or two on it.
Heading to bed.
Goodnigt /ztg/
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>>6470999
Hes canadian
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>>6471011

Here you go sir.

>>6470223
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>>6470919
Not american so I'm just chilling overdrinking with a coffee liqueur because why not. Thursday's for drinking!
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>>6471033
This is based on The King in Yellow, right?
Hot damn, I'm reading it now.
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>>6470983
Are you certain that what your having was a mental breakdown? I don't think they're something thats recurrent.
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>>6470984
stay away from alcohol man.

Please.
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>>6470841
>Remmy is for pretty much every member of Pack Street
Remmy is for Betty.
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>>6470958
When will stream anon stream Fargo at a reasonable time?
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>>6471051
Indeed, VRBit already did a blind reading and gave me a thorough critique earlier tonight too.

https://soundcloud.com/comicanon/thesavageplay
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Hi guys, Happy Thanksgiving. I'm going to post my TT entry shortly. Hope all's been well! I'm still getting things back in order after meeting Comic and DoujinAnon and others last week.

>>6470528
>>6470744

>from the striped kitty

Who? What?

I'm glad you want to be Kind to Canidae, though!

>>6470566

I'm thankful for you, anon.
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>>6471074
This senpai
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>>6471011
Hey Clunk, A_Signature her, also posted my fic.
I hope you enjoy.
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>>6471074
>not Anneke or Charlie
shit taste senpai
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http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Fanfic/PackStreet Looks like someone made a tropes page for pack street
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>>6470919
Hasn't even started yet.
The turkey's still in the oven.

Fucking ridiculous, I know.
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>>6471064
I've actually been thinking of doing that. I got drunk last night too. I know it's the holiday's and all but I think i should cut back

>>6471097
I'm about halfway through. Would you like a critique?

>>6471135
Heyo! Link it to me and I'll give it a read.
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>>6471110
>>from the striped kitty
Stevens. Though at this point I'd accept anyone letting her bawl her eyes out without judging her.
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>>6470919
It was pretty great! Shame it was a month ago.
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>>6471058
It's hyperbolic to call it a breakdown.
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>>6471154
There you go
>>6470147
Sorry if the pun Tails/Tales seems to be taken by your work, but it has some sense in the story
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>>6471110
Comic is for Otter, right?
>why am I shipping actual people
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>>6471154
serious man.

I am addicted to alcohol and hate myself. Please stop.
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>>6471154
If you wanna critique go ahead, I'm not gonna stop you dude!
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>>6471011
Hey Clunk, are you one of the contributors on Comic's late Noir thing?
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The Fable of The Wolf and The Lamb

"For ages, brothers and sisters, we have been the subject of myths and legends most detrimental to our positive image as a species. That is why tonight, as part of a special cultural enrichment meeting, I shall treat you to a version of Aehop's fable, The Wolf and The Lamb.

Now now, don't groan - I understand your consternation. That such moral tales are devoted to the decrying of wolves and wolf behavior is unconscionable. If you'll care to indulge my background as a professor, I can tell you this: a recent study by one of the University of Zootopia's best cultural anthropologist has found most fables and legends surrounding wolves to be apocryphal. Reginald McPacken, one of our own members, and so very trustworthy. Little Red Riding Hoof? False. The Three Little Pigs? Utter propaganda, sewn by our detractors.

The Sacred Order of The Bared Fang will not sit idly by while society dictates that wolves are so foolish and villainous. That we would be caught after consuming six goats and forgetting a seventh, cut open and sewn up with rocks, then cast into a river?

Preposterous. Research, my dear packmates, has shown that at most the nanny goat in that tale had three kids.

Now then, with that out of the way, why don't we get to story time, eh? Just speak to a server if you need your wine topped off, or a fresh cigar."

(1/3)
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>>6471223

Long, long before Zootopia was even an idea in the minds of the greatest predator and the meekest prey, it is said our forefathers walked on all fours. Absurd, I know, but this is the most common explanation for the skeletal structure of our early ancestors. Anyhow. It was a cold autumn day, and winter was fast approaching. A great wolf was following a stream in search of food, and he came across a sheep, fleece yellowed to doubtless reflect the impurity of its vile mind.

"Murderer!" The sheep immediately shouted, to which the wolf was taken aback.

"Why, good fellow, do you lay such accusations upon me?" The wolf replied, seating himself before the sheep, who breathed hard and heavy and ragged with disapproval of the proximity.

"You have murdered before, if not with your claws, then with your fangs. No wolf grows to adulthood without murdering many a sheep and consuming their flesh." Again the sheep bleated in a condemning tone.

"Oh, but you have me so misunderstood, good fellow. How do you know me to be a murderer? Where is your proof? I have no blood in my jaws, no meat in my belly - truly, I hunger so if you will listen to its rumblings - and no flesh nor wool on my claws.

Grumbling, the sheep walked around in thought as if debating how to most expediently defame the wolf.

"Fine then, what about your pack and the way you encroach on the grazing land of sheep?"
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>>6471238

At this, the wolf began to sense the crux of the issue, and bowed his head. "I do extend my sympathy for the slights you have perceived, but you can be assured I and no wolf of mine has been near your grazing land. Do you not, in fact, find yourself far, far removed from your own land? Where is your herd, good sheep?"

The sheep shook his head angrily and all but foamed at the mouth. "Do not think to cajole me, criminal!" He shouted, before calming himself with a drink of water from the nearby stream.

Inclining his head, the wolf waited in silence so as not to disturb the imbalanced prey.

"Why then have you muddled this water so?" Asked the sheep, smirk of self-assurance apparent on his snout.

The wolf, quite surprised, looked down at the water and saw it flowing toward him. He had been walking upstream all along.

"But good sheep, you have come from upstream, and I from down. I walk against the current, and so any water I might muddy does not disturb you nor any other sheep of your herd."

"I don't care! If it was not you, then it was your packmate!" Snarled the sheep, before attacking the wolf full-bore.

There was little the wolf could do. He yelped but was unable to run, brave and noble being that he was. He could do aught but defend himself, and with a quick snap, the sheep was dead, bitten at the neck.

And so, that day, the wolf found a meal, and when he returned to his pack, he told them:

"Any excuse will serve he who imagines a tyrant."

(3/3)

TT entry by Canidae, as told by Lucius.
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>>6471171
Will read after I finish with The Savage Play!

>>6471186
I know, I'm going to cut down

>>6471197
Alright, critiques incoming in another post.

>>6471218
I did not write any Noir. I did critique (kinda) some of his work.
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>>6471118
Oh god... I fucking love feral stuff...
Please tell me there is more, anon...
...pls....
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>>6471299
Mechanic, you gotta do some TT stuff someday. I wanna see you do something thematic.
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>>6470243
Thanks Anon, not exactly what I had in mind but it satisfied my craving for some drama. Is there any more, or was this just a one shot story?
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>>6471299
That reminds me, there was an AU were only Prey evolved into fully sapient species whilst Preds were left behind, evolutanarily speaking, and left even as ferals in the wild places where Prey don't roam, or as pets.

Whatever happened to it?
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>>6471340
That sounds fascinating.
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>>6471094
>Tfw you'll never be conned into going to the naturalist club with Nick and have him answer your whines about needing to cover up by having him wrap his soft poofy tail around you

Reality sucks
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>>6471299
I thought I had an image close to those other two, but all I found was this
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The Savage Play: Critiques:
>>6471197

>a meerkat and kangaroo
A meerkat and a kangaroo,

>they talked about local gossip.
Talking about gossip is redundant in my opinion. You could just as easily say "gossiped"

>I'm the meerkat, my name is Tim Kent,
I'm the Meerkat. My name is Tim Kent,

>The two of us sat in silence,
I thought you guys were loudly gossiping?

>break it.
Change this to "break in" or something, because this sentence doesn't agree with subject very well.

>into to see a play
Wander by and see a play.

>somehow still
Don't say somehow. Change this to curiously.

>"Tell you what, we'll go after work and check the place out. We'll make sure it's safe, not just for us but for the cast, and if it is then sure."
This is a great place to insert some stream of consciousness about what a great compromise this is.

>Ignoring glares from various predators who made Happy Town their home, we made our way inside and to the box office.
I'm going to assume that this is a predator filled place, but make sure you make it clear that the predators are NOT happy about prey cops and why. This implies something hella big.

>hooved hands.
Pick one. I'd go with hooves.

>she pointed down
pointed us down the hall unfolding behind her.

>walking into what could only be described as a chaotic mess of set pieces and staff scrambling around
This is one of those phrases that's normally commonplace, so I'd rephrase it.
>That could only be described as chaos. Wolves stringing together lights, a tired looking silver fox painting strange backgrounds etc etc

>"Ah, yes! My name is Rhoda Styles, and this is Tim Kent."
It would be more logical if they also stated that they were cops.

>I tried not to laugh,
I tried not to laugh, but I had to.

> it made me a bit uncomfortable.
HOW did it make you uncomfortable. Show, do not tell.

>I swallowed nervously and somewhat reluctantly shook
The verb-adverb structure of this sentence makes it awkward to read.

Part 1 of ???
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>>6471155

Gentle lewding? From STEVENS? He'll be about as gentle as a bulldozer, anon. If she's going to get gentle lewding, it's not going to be from a guy who very dearly wants to rape her.
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>>6471074
Sheepdog is the supreme ship
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>>6471307
I am getting better with original stuff.... but I'm not nearly as good as others... and, to be honest, still embarrassed when I do it...
... however, I may soon try my hand at a TT submission though...
>soon
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>>6471409
Remmy is a communal resource.
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>>6471409

my dik is the suprme ship tht rams ur boicunni tite harbore kuk kys boyo
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>>6471346
It really does. Unfortunately all I can recall is two (three) stories and a few pics I didn't save.

>Judy meets a feral Nick in the wild. Tames him with blueberries. Eventual shenanigans lead to him and Judy being best friends fur-ever.

>Since Judy is so small she gets assigned a PRED-unit. Nick Wilde.
>She goes on her patrols with a frighteningly intelligent, to her, fox.

(>Judy fucks/is fucked by the fox.)
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>>6471409
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>>6471396
>implying that's a bad thing

Stevens, it's better for her to not remember who you are instead of remembering you as the Spaghetti Staffer.
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>>6471432
I'm a RemmyxBetty shipper but I'm 100% ok with this
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>>6471439
you know, this makes judy look like she is haunted by weirdass fucking disfigured monsters and she is just trying to cope with it
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>>6471396
I just feel bad for the guy now. Although, now that he sees how the sausage is made (puns) I figured he'd swear off from politicians.
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>>6471396
My hopes and dreams were that he would be a decent enough being to NOT rape an already-traumatized wolf that has been gang-raped and tortured for an interminable amount of time.

Though if you wish to have Stevens take advantage of a vulnerable Canidae, that's your perogative.
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>>6471438
I've got this, which is close.
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>>6471424
Mech, you're a treasure. None of us will care terribly much if at all if an original work doesn't look as good as one with a reference. It means you're improving as an artist, and if there's one thing I've seen this general really wank over, it's self-improvement. Good stuff.
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>>6471432
This.

Remmy is public property, as long as that public is Pack Street.
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Oh yeah, I got a myth. It's called "in zootopia you can be anything you want"
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>>6471390
>"You walked out kinda fast so Mr. Haltur couldn't give you your free ticket properly."
Something about the ending of this sentence feels off. I feel like you could spice it up a tad
>Mr. Haltur wanted to personally invite you to the show, but you ran off so quickly, seems like he never got the chance.

>Most of the search results for "The Savage Play" brought up a strange mix of websites discussing obscure plays (as expected) and another kind of site, ones dealing with the paranormal and supernatural.
Okay, so your prose is built around a first person narrative, but it reads more like third person.


>His research sequence
I really feel this could be spiced up a whole ton if you didn't treat it as exposition, but instead a conversation. Maybe he expands upon his anxiety by inviting his partner to coffee and then SHARING this research with her.

>I looked down at my ticket and felt a deep dread coming over me.
Right, show, do not tell.
>I set down the ticket with shaking paws. I needed a breath of fresh air. I felt winded.

>We both arrived in casual clothing, as it seemed inappropriate to come in wearing full uniform, and we assumed the people of Happy Town wouldn't care if we showed up in something fancy
Not if he's ostensibly going as an officer of the law it's not.

>I gave Rhoda a sheepish smile and walked out, turning away from the bathroom the second I made it out the doors and heading to the halls leading to the backstage area.
>and heading to the halls leading to the backstage area.
I would just straight up re-write this part.
>Turning away from the bathroom the second I made it out the doors. I quickly paced down the halls leading to the backstage area.

>The back stage of the Pinegreen Theater was as dilapidated and worn out as I expected, stepping over small holes in the floor and loud creaking boards as I examined the various props and costumes left back there.
FINDING myself stepping over small holes in the floor

Part 2 of ???
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>>6471486

Oh, I think you might be getting a bit mixed up, anon. Canidae is always a "first-timer" in drawings or fics, those sorts of things don't contribute to her canon... Sort of like how Nick and Judy can have a first kiss in a million different fics.

So every time Cani is being traumatized and taken advantage of sexually, it's her first time.
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>>6471439
Judy looks like she's wearing a sentient mask of her own face.
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'member? i member!!!
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>>6471509
Jesus
Little hustler did this just to distract them from the mouse picking their pockets, right?
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>>6471252
pretty gud, pretty gud
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>>6470837
I want to eat that nick [spoiler]out[/spoiler]
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>>6470384
Allrighty then.
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>>6471548
>house party two

I'd rather not remember.
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>>6471424
Please please please get a set of drawing pencils

It's driving me crazy. I mean you're more than skilled enough, your art as it is is awesome. Having the range of different pencils is great, I can never go back to just using a #2
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>>6471424
>>6471595
Yea, a good #4 and #6 will let you get darker values. They're not expensive.
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>>6471548
hey!!! idk why people are upset about this...
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The Cute Fox

There once was a cute fox. He was so cute that everyone died.

The End
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How are you doing /ztg/?
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>>6471509
Who cares if you can't be what you want? Least as a fox I'd know I'd look good... if a bit mangy due to being dirt poor
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>>6471515
>uncomfortably off feeling
What makes them uncomfortably off?
>They were grotesquely configured, with blah blah blah
Remember, you're not telling the audience what to feel, you're making them feel a certain way.

>As I explored behind the stage I stumbled across copies of the script for the play itself,
Where and how? Did he find it laying on a vacant chair next to some horribly eldritch costumes

> act 2
Some consistency errors here that are triggering my inner copyeditor. This would be "two"

>"Shame. Another audience unable to handle it's greatness. Guess we'll need to try again next year."
"He said to no one in particular.

>"I don't think so, Carcola Haltur! You're under arrest for inciting a riot and turning the people in this theater into savages!"
He has no evidence for this besides spoopy stories.

>"No mask. No mask."
AWESOME CONCLUSION

So my overall thoughts: Very true to the mythos, and you KNOW I love my Lovecraft stuff. I have some issues with your prose as I've noted before. It's built around being first person but at times it's third person and the transition is very confusing. There were some issues I'd like resolved, and very, very few style errors.

Some logical issues come in the form of him arresting the director on absolutely no grounds. It just doesn't make any sense. That part felt very rushed to me.

Any other comments you have about my edits, please tell me. I'm happy to do this.

- Clunkbot

>>6471171
Do you want edits/critiques as well? I'll read this in a second.
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>>6471526
>endless virgin rape
I'm not sure this makes it any better.
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>>6471570
>Desmond and Molly in the background

Eyyyyyy

You're good people, Waga.
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>>6471611
>He was so cute that everyone wanted to explore his mouth
ftfy
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>6471548
i don't, were those good times?
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>>6471526
Sounds like the set-up to some horror story.

>Canidae remembered every single time she was raped.
>Every time her father whored her out.
>Every time Stevens held her down and...
>She remembered everything.
>She wasn't sure whether it was the stress or what, but she couldn't let anyone know. Not this close to the polls.
>If anyone, anyone at all, found out about her hallucinations were she imagined herself being raped- She would never win.
>So she endured.
>Pushed those problems six feet under and got on with her campaign.
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>>6471570
>all the qties ships

yesssss
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>>6471548
I MEMBER!!!
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>>6471602
....NEVER!.... I will use this pencil until I die...

>>6471494
Very well... fair enough...
I will attempt to make an attempt (kek) next month... be on the lookout
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>>6471548

>>6471650
this isn't how you quote a post, anon. it was different, before major dramas and times were nice and comfy. not saying this thread isn't leaning towards turbocomf, but everything was new and fresh back then. good old times and all that.
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>>6471390
>>6471515
>>6471627

I'm glad you enjoyed it even if it ended up being a mess, I admit right away that I did end up rushing it a little bit and it shows. I'll definitely go through these more closely and fix it up. Thanks so much for the critique too, I genuinely appreciate it dude and I'm happy you enjoy my work.
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Errhmhmhm, why not...both?
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Hello everyone, brother of tea here and I wish you all a great TT and Thanksgiving! We don't celebrate Thanksgiving here, but I still wanted to express my thanks towards everyone in this thread. You are a great bunch of people and make this whole board something really enjoyable. Thank you!

>>6470566
Sweet, it's always nice to get new people to partake in content creation.

>>6470919
Like every other day, with college work. I hope everyone else has/had a better time.

Oh yeah, I drew this little piece for TT. It was quite fun. Hope you like it.

(and btw thanks again to the guys who gave me encouragement in response to my little rant in the thread previous to the last one, you gave me a huge boost in confidence to draw again. You rock!)
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>>6471648
Fuck exploring his mouth, I want to ride his rocket or have him explore my mouth with it
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Anyone got a quick warm up request?
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>>6471687
my god, it looks amazing
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>>6471628

See anon? Some good can come of it >>6471656

In all seriousness, that is pretty compelling, anon. I like it.
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>>6471687
Its so nice looking, we need more watercolors... Amazing, really expressive and unique.
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>>6471699
Patch showing Canidae her collection of food paintings.

>>6470286
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>>6471699
Bun bun shearing her fox
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>>6471699
Nick eating Judy for thanksgiving
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>>6471699
Judy trying to "fix" Nick's wardrobe.
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>>6471025
link pls
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>>6471699
Nick and/or Judy striking a remarkable pose
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>>6471680
>I'm glad you enjoyed it even if it ended up being a mess, I admit right away that I did end up rushing it a little bit and it shows.
Well rest assured, I did enjoy it. Always like my Lovecraft shorts from you.

>Thanks so much for the critique too, I genuinely appreciate it dude and I'm happy you enjoy my work.
Oh you're welcome man! I'm happy to do it. I have to do work like this for work anyway, so it's natural for me. Been too long.
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>>6471650
>>6471679
member? i member!!!
2/10
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>>6471718
What is compelling exactly? The simple soul singled out of all creation to suffer endlessly?
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>>6471730

Suddenly all I can think about is that Problems with Interspecies relationships picture by Eric Schwartz where a cat is going to 'eat' a rats dick and she has it in a hotdog bun while putting mustard on it and the rat looking extremely uncomfortable at the roleplay gone too far
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>>6471687
This is really pretty, dude
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>>6471754
remember the drama of yesterday?
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>>6471768

That's it. That's exactly it. There is also a degree of urgency.
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>>6471682
Because that's incest, Anon. And incest is wrong unless it's between foxes.
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>>6471807
Someone post a link to the discord pls
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>>6471699
Nick Judy Mrs. Wilde Stu and Bonnie sharing thanksgiving dinner with all the buns looking uncomfortable as Nick and Mrs Wilde wolf down turkey like savages
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>>6471816
https://discord.gg/MAyr4jK
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>>6471819
Ha! Thank you, that is one cutie foxy.
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>>6471832
>>6471807

Wow, what a fun group of people.
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>>6471894
More pocky hijinks
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>>6471832
shit, wtf just happened???
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>>6471809
Well. I suppose you're right. All Canidae needs to do, in her mind, is survive until after the elections then she can get the help she needs without a scandal.

And then none of the treatments work. She keeps on having the dream- No. Not dreams. They're too real for dreams. So she changes to a diet of knock-out drops to give her dreamless nights. And it works. But eventually her dreams bleed through in patches of colour, sound, taste, touch. So she ups her dosage and the cycle chases after itself.

And then she starts waking up in her dream-worlds.

What is real and what is not? She's been committed 3 times now. Which one was the real one? Was Stevens her husband or the man who threatens to take her down with him unless she submits completely? Which one was the real one? Is she insane or sane beyond all comprehension? Which one was the real one? Is she lost or is she finding herself again? Which one was the real one? This one? Or that one?
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>>6471807
>>6471832
What was the drama this time?
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>>6470147
Adding this to my reading list!

>>6470223
This too. I should have plenty of time tomorrow to sit down, get comfy and draw/read.

>>6470241
This is cool! I always like seeing some of this non-western fantasy stuff.

>>6471509
This is sadder than it should be.

>>6471822
Love this! Makes me want to try drawing the characters in armor.

Maybe I'll combine my obsessions and do a heretical WoW/zootopia crossover that everyone will hate.

Sorry if I missed anything! Skimmed through the thread pretty quickly. I should/might have something for TT during the weekend if everything goes well. Hope everyone had/is having a good holiday!
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>>6471917
There was an argument about trans, and everything went to shit...
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>>6471946
So scout is a boy? Or...was a boy
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Way to ruin TT, asshole. As if it couldn't have waited until tomorrow at least
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>>6471730
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Wew lad do I love drama. This is all totally necessary information for the thread!
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>>6471946
Well it was only a matter of time before that got back to thread, huh.

Yeah, I'm trans, male to female. If you have any questions you can DM me on Discord, or ask here I guess but the thread isn't really the place for a QA session.

And yes, that's why my tits are small. They should max out at around B cup by the end of next year.
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>>6471135
A_Signature, my dude (or my duddette). I just got finished reading your fic

The beginning is kinda forced, but it needed to be for the story to unfold. By forced I mean, "obviously thing happens in this fashion in order for thing to happen" so I can't exactly fault you for it. It's such a minor part of the story but I was just nodding my head and going "of courseee"

I LOVE the tone. Mostly told through dialog, I really like the old ancient eastern setting it's in. I especially love Skye (I've heard so much about her so I guess this is my first exposure to her).

Overall, you did a fine job. Put this on AO3 my man.
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>>6471819
>she left his tail
Favorite fox part confirmed
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>>6471964
seems like it...
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>>6471703
>>6471720
>>6471796
Thanks, I appreciate it!

I'll see to it that I do more of these, they are a great change to digital.

Good night /ztg/, have an awesome day and eat/drink responsibly!
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>>6471982
>"It's turkey day, gobble gobble."
>"Geez, Judy. Way to kill my boner with that Gigli shit."
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>>6471985
I dont really care.
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>>6471946
>>6471997
Congrats! This means...absolutely nothing. Go fuck with TLHG.
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>>6471985
well i have to say. that's feel a bit strange...
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>>6471982
She looks so concerned. What's planned for Christmas?
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>>6471999
Sleep tight, bunner

More of these would be awesome. I'm a total sucker for watercolor pieces
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>>6472027
He boxes her up for 3 days and opens her up on christmas
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>>6471985
I literally do not care what anyone's gender is.
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>>6471382
That's a terrific drawing, but that sheath looks really gratuitous, considering how wholesome the rest of the pic is.
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>>6471985
I don't see why that is anybody's business but yours. Don't listen to what the assholes have to say
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>>6471982
>Alec furiously masturbating in the distance
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>>6471985
I guess that explains the perceived bitchiness. Dudes are raised differently
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Hope everyone's having a lovely evening!
Now if you'll excuse me, I'm going to pass out for awhile. At least until it's time for pie..
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>>6472040
Here, you big baby
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>>6472012
What the fuck goes on in that thread? Is it just pedophiles? I've never seen the show.
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>>6471920

You're a quite talented writer but what I've read here, anon. Good stuff!
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>>6472062
It explains a lot about me if you consider it.
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>>6472072
Whoa, nice edit. Very clean.
...you're not the original artist, are you?
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>>6472062
>raised differently
They're also, you know, born differently
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>>6472073
Pedos and people with bad taste in cartoons.
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>>6472085
No, but it's easy when you see what colors and technique the artist used for the fluff there.
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>>6472072
Nice one, anon.
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>>6470919
Friends and family think I'm drinker than I really am. Bout to go Black Friday shopping with some people since I can't game while I'm tipsy
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>>6472064
I love your drawings, but I get a vibe of inflation from so much of your work...
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>>6471985
He,he,he... what a mess!
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>>6471754
still not clear on why this is 2/10 desu
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>>6472086
I don't wanna go full Tumblr up in this bitch, but I think 75% of any perceived differences between boys and girls is social
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>>6472040
On the topic of sheaths, how do canids in zootopia take a leak? It's gotta be pretty hard to hold on to that little thing, especially since canine penises aren't as 'pivotable' when not erect.

Wow, that's a couple sentences I'd never thought I'd type.
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>>6471997
Discord spy
Comicanon
More stuff on him god damn it
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>>6472126
I disagree, but that topic isn't for here to discuss.
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Here's the drawn half of my tt. Still working on the written portion, I'll repost this with the full story and explanation


>>6471675
Well, I tried.
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>>6472127
I've wondered the same thing, with sheaths in general. Maybe they have to sorta lean forward a bit? Or just go behind a bush and lift a leg lol
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>>6472155
>filename
Gek
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Hey guys, Raccoonfag here, reshilling my TT entry for the evening crowd.

>Fool Me Once. by Raccoonfag

>Having arrested a coyote for petty theft, Judy learns a valuable lesson in trusting tricksters.

http://archiveofourown.org/works/8641576
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>>6472159
I already love it
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>>6472127
diaper.s
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>>6471997
can we please stick to TT?
btw, what do you guys think of the prologue in Watership Down?

http://www.dailymotion.com/video/xyucbo_watership-down-frith_shortfilms
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>>6472164
Sup Raccoon.
Hows your son?
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>>6472159
>>6472171
Me too
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>>6472179
I think it traumatized me as a child so I don't want to revisit it as an adult
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>>6471299
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>>6472179
shits cash

i think mead made a reference to it in one of the JiD comics, which was pretty cool
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>>6472179
I watched that movie every month as a kid because my Blockbuster was shit and never restocked their cartoon section.
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>>6471812
How is it incest?
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>>6472161
>naturalist club bathrooms are just some bushes, trees, and a sandbox
>and there's no telling what's happened in the mud pit
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>>6472180
Oh he's doing fine.
Although I'm still sorting out the stajknasdijko habbjknadjk

Ahem. The "stamping habit".
Playful scamp just loves to stamp my keyboard while I'm typcdsjklnd
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>>6472164
Well well well, if it isn't my old pal. I left you some kudos, friend
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>>6472127
I actually brought that up before a few weeks ago. That's a problem most mammals would face. I argued that evolving a bipedal posture would go hand-in-hand with a humanoid, fully external dong.
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>>6472207
You fuck, I snorted my fucking wine up my nose
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>>6472155
>I'm not a lesbian, I just like how you fit in my arms.
>That's pretty gay. Like, Remmy sticking his dick in Wolter's butt levels of gay.
>Shut up and sleep. The sun's coming up.
>So close the blinds.
>No. I'll block the sun with my body. I'll be the mighty shadow that blots the sun.
>Fine. Just don't let it shine in my eyes.

>>6472194
You know exactly well how comforting lewdly the Canidae, and jerking off her father at the same time is incest.
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>>6472211
Well thank you kindly!

>>6472216
Ah, far more elegant than milk out the nose.
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>>6471687
Is that your art? Because it's fucking incredible. Are the watercolor effects digital or is it a scan?
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>>6472131
Only discord drama I heard was him getting drunk and him flirting with Inky
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>>6472291
The one kink in that rumor is that Inky doesn't use discord and stated as such several times in the past.
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>>6472164
You have cute paws ;)
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>>6472159
It's terrific, tho Al doesn't strike me as the mage type.
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>>6472291
Inky doesn't use the discord so that would've been thread drama. Also
>Drunkposting
I'm one of the cool kids! Turns out being cool < being a dysfunctional adult
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>>6472131
Comic is fucking embarrassing when he's drunk
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>>6472127
>>6472161

Ever try and take a piss with a massive boner? I'd argue that'd probably be harder then trying to take a piss when you got a sheath. Least most sheaths peel back some and you can angle the flacid tip. When you have a boner, try angling that thing. When it happens to me I have to lean forward or if I'm desperate sit backwards on the john
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>>6472300
Well, uh, thanks.
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>>6472229
Excuse you, I'm not her father, I'm her father FIGURE.

(so it's okay for me to fuck the daylights out of her, right? Right?)
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>>6470243
WildeSavage version of this pic when
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>>6472354
I'd pay fucking money for that
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>>6471982
>"I don't think this is what our 10,000BC ancestors did"
>"Shush Judy"
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>>6472306
>>6472313
With all the cringe he puts up online there should be a goldmine on discord.
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>>6472181
Thanks, I hope the story doesn't disappoint

>>6472303
Actually I wrote Al as Aragorn/Warrior and Betty as Gandalf, hopefully it will make sense in the writing. Oh and it is a lotr crossover
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>>6472320
Counterargument: pic related.
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>>6472110
>a vibe
I thought that was kinda Lucius' thing? Idk.
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>>6472388
Alagorn.
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>>6472345
I can't believe Bunanon has a dick
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>>6472384
How far does the cringe go beyond the first time with the fake drunk typing. Most recent time he just responded real poetically and the few times in between just lots of sad posting.
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>>6472384
I don't know what's worse, his readthroughs or that people actually ask for them
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>>6472407
His cover's been blow! Abort! Abort!
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>>6472411
Definitely helps me get over that pseudo crush/fetish I had for her. God damn does it help.
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>>6472394
This is just silly
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>>6472320
Can you even piss while hard tho? I can't, at least not without forcing it a lot, to the point I'm afraid I'll damage some part of the plumbing.
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>>6472425
>>6472414
>>6472384
I like Comic. Why do people dislike him?
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>>6472434
Go back to the Discord, SAL/Michael.
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>>6472450
Because we're not autistic.
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>>6472451
That was SAL, probably.
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>>6472450
Shit writer, shit editor, spams and blogposts, gets free art all the time regardless.
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>>6472434
Is this really a surprise though?
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>>6472458
But... I'm autistic anon...
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>>6472442
I can piss while hard
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>>6472458
>>6472478
I rather like his writing/editing. At least someone is doing it, right? On those grounds he contributes to the thread.
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>>6472478
And you've done... What, exactly, for these threads?

I mean, besides bitch and moan.
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>>6472498
I wish he didn't. We have Clunk back, we don't need Cumlick anymore.
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>Hmmm I have so much to do
>I think I'll write some more of my fanfiction

>Wow I've got nothing to do
>Not gonna write that shit is for nerds.

wew lad
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>>6472490
No, because I don't care. God, this is what I thought an anonymous image board was for, so we could get away from these little personality problems.
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>>6472164
Now that's just silly.
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>>6472513
Good thing your opinion doesn't mean anything, baitfag
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>>6472513
meh. Here's your (you)
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>>6472495
I-is my dick broken?
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>"I can be your fantasy..."
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>>6472536
No
What the fuck
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>>6472513
Clunk here. Comic and I both edit for different things. From what I can gather, he's extremely plot and story oriented. Because of my work, I'm much more about semantics and writing. I'm working on my overall plot/story editing tho.

Also I have 0 intention of competing with/taking Comic's place. Like I said before, I like him and I'm glad for what he does. I just want to offer my editing skills. I think both of us are important if you're looking for edits. It's just been awhile since I've been at it.

>>6472536
Hey das me

>>6472547
>or yuor debil
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>>6470926

>Judy ended up trying to help Nick more than he had expected
>After she had brought him water and painkillers, she left him be long enough to make some food for him
>Long enough for the pain to start fading
>Too long apparently, as he stared at the plate of blackened scrambled eggs.
>He didn’t know how she had managed to overcook them so thoroughly
>Bless her, she did try in the kitchen though; and Nick had to thank her for that
>He put a spoonful into his mouth and had to mentally rescind the thanks
>He pushes them aside, pretending to still feel nauseous from the alcohol
>Leaning back in the couch he starts to tell her about his meeting with Becky to distract from the eggs
>How it had started awkwardly, but well
>How it had quickly descended into a shouting match where she walked out and slammed the door
>Judy listens intently the whole time.
>Finally he finishes and looks to Judy to see how she would respond
>She mulls the whole situation over a bit first before opening her mouth
>“I fought with my brothers and sisters a lot growing up. While I can’t say we ever got quite this bad, I did learn a thing or two. Let me be blunt: you messed up Nick.”
>Nick’s ears drop, he knew that already, and it hurt to hear it from Judy
>Judy notices the reaction and quickly tries to soothe things over
>“That doesn’t mean that all hope of a relation with your sister is lost! But it does mean that you’re going to have to be the one to step up and fix it.”
>“That’s what I was trying to do in the first place! I’m no good at this feelings stuff. What do I do?”
>“You start by apologising. Becky was hurt that you left, hurt that you didn’t talk to her for years. Of course she started acting out. And when you came back into her life and berated her for it, of course she was going to say something hurtful. If she really meant it though, she wouldn’t have given you a chance in the first place. Go to her Nick, be the other brother she deserves, I’m sure she’ll listen.”
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>>6471570
Thanks Waga!
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>>6472558
if it makes you feel any better, I only use the discord when someone posts a link
Read >>6472560


Comic does good work. I like to think I do good work. There's nothing wrong with having two voices. I HOPE he picks up on shit I miss, and I hope I pick up on stuff he misses
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>>6472538
I can also piss while hard, but I don't think you're necessarily supposed to be able to? I mean it sort of makes sense, and it's probably one of those things where there's variation between people since it doesn't really matter.

Had an apropos pic but I can't find it so here's a bun instead.
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Yo Tangerine. I'm waiting for that story so I can critique it
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>>6472560
Not Comic, but he's said multiple times he wants other people to do what he does. He even helped Canidae do readings by submitting his fic to her.
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Hey guys! It's me the polarbear anon guy. Well I'm not dead, so that's something! I still owe the money, they decided to not kill me and gave me an extension and all that. But they did laugh at me... A lot. In a way I'm closer to my dream of being a comedian.

I got fired because I hid in my house for so long, so I guess I need to find a job.
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>>6470831
I think I fucked up the proportions.
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>>6472593
>He even helped Canidae do readings by submitting his fic to her.
Twice. And he ends every readthrough by asking anyone listening to give their thoughts on the piece and to say if they agree/disagree with his suggestions.
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>>6472593
Well shit, I'm back on my game. I'm feeling it tonight. I used to edit a TON for the thread before I dissapeared .
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>>6472602
Can't you be a comedian?
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>>6472602
Sell drugs
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>>6472602
Wait what?

Catch me up on what the story is?
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>>6470960
source of image?
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>>6472606
That's just stupid on the part of the mouse driving that car. Like a rhino getting back in his car with groceries or anything will see that.
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>>6472606
I like it!
have a (You)!
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Hey, Ksy if you see this were sorry, please rejoin.
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>>6472632
>Can't you be a comedian?

I could, in theory. But that sure as hell wont pay off the $2500, let alone the bills. There don't seem to be any jobs that I am qualified for, or don't involve my phobias. So I might just have to give it a shot.

>>6472675
>Sell drugs

Speaking of phobias. Getting stabbed to death in an alleyway by a junkie, is pretty high on the list.

>>6472694
Sure thing buddy! I borrowed a ton of money from the mob, $2500 to be exact. I thought if took improv classes, I could follow my dream of becoming a comedian and make some good money in the process. But now I'm just depressed and in debt. Apparently that happens a lot in Zootopia. They call it the Zootopian Dream. Or something like that anyway.
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>>6471494
source from image?
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>>6472606
>car gets stepped on
My caaaaaaaar!

Do you think any police officers are allowed to just pick up mouse cars and put them elsewhere?
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>>6472763
What phobias do you have?
>improv classes
Do those normally cost that much?
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>>6472763
>Speaking of phobias. Getting stabbed to death in an alleyway by a junkie, is pretty high on the list.

You can't let fear hold you down man

You gotta make money

You gotta h u s t l e
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>>6472606
>The angriest little car
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>>6472808
Stealing rodent cars is so easy.
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>>6472763
>a fucking polar teddy scared of being stabbed in an alley

holy shit
You couldve said you didnt want to do anything illegal but fuck, dangerous?

only more pathetic if you were an elephant. Ive seen opossums doing more dangerous shit without flinching
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>>6472606
It's still a cute. I love it!
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>>6472811
>What phobias do you have?

Blood, drowning, all forms of social contact.

>Do those normally cost that much?

No. I did get a tad bit carried away.

>>6472813
>You gotta h u s t l e

I have no charisma and I'm sure the mob wouldn't appreciate my hustling on their territory. And I'm sure exactly where that ends. From what I know they control the entire city.

>>6472882
>a fucking polar teddy scared of being stabbed in an alley

Well there are such thing as other polar bears. And I never said I wasn't pathetic either. I am pretty useless at about everything.
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>>6472808
>Not "WHAT HAPPENED TO MY FRICKIN' CAR?"
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>>6472950
>all forms of social contact.
>I have no charisma
How did you go through improv classes? And why?
> I did get a tad bit carried away.
Im sorry, how does one get carried away with improv classes? This is weirder than you having mob contacts.
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Unfortunately the only ones who can utilize those parts are rodents.

Maybe I can write something where Judy and Nick are investigating a case with a large car thief who only steals small vehicles and melts them down for scrap.
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Discord.

That is all.
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>>6473049
*deep breath*
rrreeeeeeeeEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE-
*deep breath*
-EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!
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>>6473069
cuck
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>>6471252
"So much of our beloved fables and fairytales are pure prey propaganda! Are these really the sorts of morals we want to pass on to our children?"
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>>6472950
>>6472991
I'm also wondering this
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>>6473086
This Order of the Big Dong is intriguing me more and more.
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>>6473049
Discord voting for new Mods, good bye Ksy and BD
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>>6473086
We both know the sheep are in control of how everyone sees preds, especially canines. It's a deliberate tactic to keep us down.
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>>6473135
Who is Ksy?
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>>6473091

>How did you go through improv classes? And why?

I'm never that nervous when I'm telling jokes. Plus my fears aren't crippling when it comes to thing I really want to do.

The why is pretty simple. I've always wanted to make others laugh. Wanted to since I was pretty little. Improv just seemed like a good place to start as any.

>Im sorry, how does one get carried away with improv classes? This is weirder than you having mob contacts.

First off I don't really have mob contacts. My cousin does, and I didn't question who I borrowing my money from until it was far too late. I don't know why I trusted him, but I guess the chance of following my dreams got the better of me.

I didn't just spend the money on classes. You'd be surprised how expensive polar bear sized body pillows are.
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>>6473160
Drawfag. Non-prolific drawfag
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>>6472519
2/10 bad b8 m8
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>>6473119
They mostly just get drunk and read children's books. For the betterment of lupine kind!
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>>6473161
Tell us a joke
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>>6473086
Love the sheep
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If I get dubs I will reveal a horrible secret about myself
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>>6473166
Post some of his art?

Maybe he'll come back to the thread.
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>>6472411
i can't believe it, bunanon has mental illness???
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>>6472707
That's why they pulled all the way back to the curb. They though that it wouldn't get stepped on AND that they wouldn't have to worry about paying the parking meter. Unfortunately for them, Molly had the height of eye to see it back there.
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>>6473142
Know is half the battle, my friend. Fight the good fight! Help us lift the hoof of oppression!
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>>6473128
>shitty face that looks more like a dog
>but dct and cum on her belly

Fuck it I'll take it.
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>>6472591
Right, right, right!

Here it is, my first real contribution to this thread as a writer! It's WildeHopps, it's rated PG, and it's neither finished, nor titled... but I think it's pretty good so far! In this fic, Nick and Judy take a trip to a farmers' market in town, as part of a day out together.

http://pastebin.com/f1fmDz92
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>>6473212
>Tell us a joke

This thread.
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>>6473323
>tfw got cucked
Smug fucking ice cube bear...
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http://archiveofourown.org/works/6617626/chapters/15289993

For the people talking about WildeHopp's collateral damage last thread, there is this fic.
Honestly Nick kind of...not disgusts me here, but...I don't know. There are just things you don't do, and confessing out of the blue to someone in a relationship is one of them.
Also, this is concerning Judy in the story, if you like someone, just fucking tell them. Dropping hints is one thing, but don't assume they aren't interested until they outright say so. Is it really that hard to ask someone out?
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>>6473284
"Knowing", rather. Urgh, ol' Lucius has had a few...
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>>6473161
Could you do manual labor? If a furniture store would hire a stoat, they could use someone as big as you. Or do land scaping. There's a hyena that has social anxiety and does her job just fine.
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>>6473369
It's alright boss, drink the pain away before the sheep take that away too.
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>>6472768
found it

http://bark-box.tumblr.com/

Be warned, it's mostly generic furry stuff
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>>6473311
Nice dubs. Anyway, critique incoming.

>it forced its way out of hers
It did? The word did? I THINK I know what you're getting at, but it's vague in this sentence.

>may not have truly lived at all.
He may have not truly lived at all.

>words that had come to mind.
That came to mind.

>Nick was reaching to push buttons,
Reacing to push buttons makes this feel very "physical" when we both know it's not.
>Nick was gunning to push some buttons
>Nick strove to push her buttons, and tonight was no different
You feel me?

>But knowing Nick
>But though this dumb bunny
Try to avoid starting sentences with "but", especially one after the other.

>She stopped herself again, which Nick was paying just enough attention to for him to notice.
She stopped herself again. Nick was paying just enough attention to her to notice.

>but what a carrot farmer like Judy did know was how long until that rain comes, and how hard it would fall, with pinpoint accuracy.
>But what a carrot farmer like Judy did know was this: How long until said rain comes, and how hard it would fall, likely with pinpoint accuracy.

>Such expertise amazed even Nick, who couldn't believe that Judy still didn't know what a Doppler radar was.
Wait, is she making it vocal that it's going to rain? Is she telling Nick?
>Such expertise amazed even Nick
Don't be afraid to show, not tell. Show it through his expression, body language and action.
"Wow Carrots, you're like my own little weather channel." Nick remarked.

>bestow us your blessing.
Bestow on us

>With all of his vigor, he ran to catch up with her, though not fast enough to get there before the crossing light switched, allowing Judy to begin crossing the street.
How does she not notice Nick is tagging along, unless she's doing it on purpose?

>but too
but she too

Part 1 of ???
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>>6473410
>Smug fucking ice cube bear...

I try my best!

>>6473410
>Could you do manual labor?

Well I could. But those kind of jobs don't exactly give me the type of money I need. Then again most jobs don't, so I guess I could give another look a little farther out.
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>>6473491
Dude, go to Otterdam and sell your body

Otters would cuddle the shit out of your plushy bear flab
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>>6473369
Wooly bastards will have to pry this glass out of my cold, dead claws!
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>generic
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>>6472563
I think this is the right one

keep going.
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>>6472606
Hm, only really on her head. It's a little too horse-like there.
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>>6473475
>Not a word was spoken the rest of the way; the only thing heard between them was the warm summer breeze.
I'm actually starting to wonder what the point of this prolonged silence is. It feels very out of character for Nick not to at least say something, or speak up. No sly remark? No little quip?

> She thought she knew better how to defuse situations such as these, but today she was slipping.
I must have missed something. What's the situation. That they're making awkward small talk?

> forteen
Fourteen
Also my inner copy editor is demanind all numbers above 10 be figures.

>stuttered for a moment before coming
Before coming what? What's coming?

> Nick had been read like a book: Judy seemed to know exactly what was on his mind, as if she responded to a question he had not yet asked.
This is fine and dandy, but to the reader it needs to be made clear that something like this is on his mind. Also
I'm not trying to be petty but is this:
>What a concept! Nick could hardly believe that any mammal could take such a freedom for granted.
Justification for Nick having been read like a book?

>Nick had been read like a book
Is telling and not showing. Make it apparent to the audience that Nick is getting megarekt

>so it was a surprise to her.
Not just a surprise, I imagine her clutching her ears in anguish at how loud the trains are.

Overall: It's very well written, easy to read, full of clever dialog and very few things I 'd edit. There are some points in your telling and not showing where you go as far as to lose the reader entirely. I hope I've highlighted those portions for you. If you have any comments of questions, feel free to let me know.

- Clunk
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>>6473471
>http://bark-box.tumblr.com/
Thanks
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>>6473505
>Dude, go to Otterdam and sell your body. Otters would cuddle the shit out of your plushy bear flab

Dude, you're a genius! I'll be swimming in cash in no time. Well of course I'd lose the last bit of dignity I'd have left, but if I'm posting here it's there's probably very little to begin with. I don't have flab though, that was rude and uncalled for.

Well anyway, I'm going to hit the sack. I'm going need some sleep if I'm to find a job anytime soon.
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>>6473607
Sleep tight ice cube
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>>6473607
>Well anyway, I'm going to hit the sack. I'm going need some sleep if I'm to find a job anytime soon.

Night my arctic friend
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>>6473569
Huh, someone's actually capping my shit. I'm actually kind of surprised.
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Post what you're listening to, thread

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=DrYVx9BHpUk
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>>6473673
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2-BtquTKw78
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>>6473657
Our cappers are diligent, unthanked creatures
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>>6473687
This always reminds me of my parents growing up. Good song, anon.

>>6473694
This desu
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>>6470072
>>6472547
>>6473673
>fantasy

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=miSMxBP42W0
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>>6473572
And I also forgot the tail, I think I fixed both.
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>>6473673
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=QQPSMRQnNlU
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>>6473734
I'm sorry. I just can't handle 80's glam rock.

>>6473773
>Massive Attack
First of all I fucking love you. Second of all, GREAT song.
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>>6473673
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Xg9aQvjMS60

why did I eat all the food ugh
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>>6473795
It's a day for gluttony man. Listening now.
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>>6473657
I would be surprised if I missed yours.
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>>6473819
Damn, that's quite a collection.
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Hey fuckers, are you ready for Zootopia 2: Sing Edition?
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>>6473673
Going back and forth between this scene and the song itself.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=NXB6slJSbL4
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>>6473835
...
Chumpy?
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>>6473837
It's a cool scene, butt how many fucking bullets is in that dude's mag?
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>>6473835
Not really interested.
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>>6473847
No
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>>6473858
>>6473847
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>>6473773
>>6473783
https://youtu.be/2ZCUtnuAXg8
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>>6473853
I tried counting. It's mixed. He fired 11 or twelve until he reloaded and ran out on 10.
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>>6473835
>>6473875
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>>6473875
God damn you. Now THIS is a fine MA song

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=93UelQGyKs8

>>6473878
Eh, seems fair. That scene was cool as hell, watched the whole thing.
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Boney_m, hope things are going better for you.
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>>6473891
Honestly I think it adds to it. It could imply he had a low mag saved, rather than running out on 12 and the next one firing 20.
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>>6473735
How did this go un(You)'d?

This is fucking adorable.
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>>6473891
That reminds me, the video is slightly related to us.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=oOwU-nTokFU
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>>6473735
fuckin animals, man, I wish I could be comfy while doing crazy bullshit like this
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>>6473735
Giraffes sleeping are an adorable piece of nature.

>>6473741
Looks great to me!
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>>6473910
Very fair. I concede.

>>6473944
The city?
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>>6473835
WE THOUGHT YOU WERE DEAD
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>>6473959
The monster.
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Who here /justgotbackfromeatingwaytoomuch/?

I feel like Lucius probably does every day!

>>6473673
I'm listening to more scritchity scratchity schootchawootch!

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=XjJhnHt_JwE

>>6473607
Sleep tight, polar bear!

>>6473735
AAAAAHHHHHHHH!

(She's not as cute as baby Hugh or Percy but don't tell her that.)

>>6470776
I like seeing professional bun and professional tube. Shows that the content of their character is more than what's under their clothes and what they do under the covers.

>>6470806
Patch is mad because she doesn't like being made into a stereotypical monster. She's more avantgarde than that.

>>6470919
Great! I cooked and ate a ton of turkey and argued about whether esports were actually sports!

I'd rather argue about that than politics.

>>6471223
>>6471238
>>6471252
This was awesome! I was looking forward to a story like this!

>>6471570
...I like Jack and Skye but I also love roller coasters. If they can't get into theme or thrill rides then we can't be friends.

>>6472606
I love pics like this: normal life in Zootopia, yet so weird when you think about it.

>>6473086
Ah man, and a great pic to go with it! Love how the style changes in the bubble.

Alright! I think I'm caught up! What's next for tonight? What's everyone thinking? Who here /stillworkingonTT/? I can't wait to get back home and work more on Noir!
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>>6473835
I don't recognize this style. Artist?
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>>6474060
Not still working on TT, but finding out that my month old greenie is being capped inspired me to work more on it.
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http://baronpuddinsplace.tumblr.com/post/153613392881/what-is-happening-to-me-falling-falling-into
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>>6474060
>giving out (You)s like turkey cuts
you better not be cheap with the gravy!
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>>6474074
the devil
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>>6474060
Soup comic.

>I'm listening to more scritchity scratchity schootchawootch!

This sounds like a Ninjatune beat
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>>6474060
VR happy turkey day again!
but, I didn't know raboots could eat meat, even if it's poultry...
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After a year of drawing at least 10 hours a week, should I be able to draw kinda gud shit?
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>>6471687
Ahhh! I missed this one!

Its absolutely lovely! Love the water colors and the linework!

>>6474097
I'LL GIVE OUT (YOU)S TO WHOEVER I DAMN WELL PLEASE!

I'M CRASHING THE (YOU) ECONOMY, RIGHT NOW!

HERE WE GO, RANDOM (YOU)S TO EVERYONE!

>>6474108
>Ninjatune

I fucking love Ninjatune! Mr Scruff got me into them!

Oh man, I love Mr Scruff. His music and mixes are so goddamn bouncy, yet relaxing! And he used to own a tea store that had the BEST TEAS EVER but he stopped selling them online...

>>6474122
Its carroturkey! Tastes exactly like turkey, if they were made purely of carrots!

>>6473311
Random (You)!

Hello! Would you like me to add this to my reading list?

>>6472675
Random (You)!

Selling drugs is not cool, unless you're a pharmacist chipmunk. Then it's perfectly fine!

But he's a polar bear so he doesn't fit that criteria. You know better, anon.

>>6472193
Random (You)!

That's still a great movie to grow up on! The company also made Plague Dogs, which was really, really good, but really, really sad!

>>6471819
Random (You)!

I love Nick's eyes. I don't think he understand why this is all happening.

Neither do I, really.

>>6471509
Random-- wait, this is a TT submission!

This is really amazing! Poor Nick...

Man, you're getting really good at drawing fur. I love how scratchy it comes out! And mad respects for a traditional artist!

>>6471977
Random (You)!

AHHH, ITS CUTE!

Finnick's secretly really grateful. I bet his fur goes to shit in those costumes he wears.
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>>6474160
Who the hell wants a cereal-themed doormat?
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>>6474182
>tfw you want a cereal-themed doormat

They're sweet, anon. Surprisingly sweet...
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>>6474182
Of Lucky Chomps? I want
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>>6474175
>I fucking love Ninjatune! Mr Scruff got me into them!

Glad to hear you've got decent taste in labels, Comic.
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Does anyone else ever write random stupidity into their stories, only to erase it immediately?
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>>6473475
>>6473578
Thank you kindly, Clunk. I've fixed the spelling and grammatical errors you pointed out, but I think I would prefer to discuss the questions I have in person.

>>6474175
Hello! Would you like me to add this to my reading list?

I appreciate the offer, but I'll have to politely decline. I think I would prefer to have the work completed than in the state it is now.
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>>6474313
Half my writing time is spent doing this
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The minute I touched my bed I suddenly became exhausted...

>>6474326
No worries! If you would like me to do a blind read, send it on over when its in a good state, either privately or in the thread!

And if not, then I look forward to reading it for pleasure when its done!
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>>6474313
That's called the editing process, anon.
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>>6474350
>The minute I touched my bed I suddenly became exhausted...
I think that calls for a VRBit sleepyhead.
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Goodnight thread. Sleep well

>>6474350
Do it Comic. Together with your edits and my edits, we can be...EDITORS

No but seriously, I think it'd be awesome to have two eyes on something.
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>>6474373
The design of this armor is kinda... interesting/weird,
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>>6474373
That armor won't protect you from the GIDEON HOLOCAUST
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Any Pack Street stories besides the main one and the other two in the pastebin?
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>>6471985
>sudden flashbacks to every interaction and it's correlation

But seriously, you seem to get hung up on what people think. Whether they care or not, you have no obligation to provide any explanations.

I'll stop shitting up the thread now.
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>>6474382
Yes, you are correct...

Three recordings done today while also cooking and celebrating with family was more than I expected! And tomorrow, other than going to the gym, I don't have anything planned!

That means Raccoonfag and A_Signature are gonna get their fics read. They're gonna get them so read!

>>6474392
Goodnight... Clunk, I think! Because you're an editor and you're not covered in pie so you can't be Canidae and you're not pushing the cart so you can't be Heavy!

More editors! More! Everyone should be editors, and everyone should ask every editor for edits! Its the best way to get feedback!

>>6474373
Whoa... Blackguard Gideon...

Love the purple sword and the helmet in the off hand!

Man, this TT was comfy as can be... What else would a TT be?

Goodnight, magical and wonderful /ztp/ threads! I'm thankful for each and every one of you!
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>>6474417
http://archiveofourown.org/works/8186273
Comicanon recommended this one.
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>>6474417
I've never checked the pastebin
http://pastebin.com/FFJAgcua
The Way Back by Otterly. Anneke and Remmy late night soujorn from her pov,
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>>6474442
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>>6473942
>>6473952
>>6473958
>>6474060
I come back to several (you)s. Thanks!

Just got a new tablet installed and now I'm testing it out. Not used to the pen NOT coming with an eraser. That'll take some getting used to.

Here is giraffe to celebrate.
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>>6474522
>braces
>on them thicc giraffe lips
no wonder she's easy to trigger
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Does Nick's mother have a canonical name?
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>>6474522
You know, it's kinda funny. We have two prominent female giraffe characters in the general: one is a hardcore tumblresque anti-pred speciesist, and the other is a poster child for pred-prey interspecies relationships.

The dichotomy is interesting.
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>>6474579
Really makes one think
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>>6474600
>one has her mane cut short and wears makeup
>the other lets her mane flow long and goes au naturale

It does make one think, actually.
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>>6474522

My favorite little preycist!
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>>6474573
I'm gonna say Mallory.
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>>6474665
Nicely colored, CA.
God I love Reply's foxe and bune family life.
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>>6472563

>Nick is practically shaking
>He has not been to this side of town for quite literally years
>When he left he thought he was never going to be coming back
>And yet his feet seem to know right where to take him
>Past the dilapidated apartment buildings
>Past the shady alleyways
>Into a residential area, where all the buildings looked like a sneeze could blow them over
>He didn’t know how to find his sister
>But he knew who would know
>His mother
>In the same house, with the same number, exactly as Becky had said
>He stared at the two-storey building
>He could practically watch the paint peeling from the walls, and the shingles falling to the ground
>It looked the same as it always had, and yet somehow so much different
>Smaller, it seemed.
>He checks both ways before crossing the street
>With a deep breath he steps onto his childhood porch
>For a long time he just stands there
>Unable to make the leap to actually knocking on the door
>His sister had slapped him, how would his mother react to seeing him for the first time in five years
>Would she be mad?
>Happy?
>Frankly he wasn’t sure which would be worse.
>Rubbing his face with one paw, he raises the other to knock and…
>And…
>And…
>And he can’t do it
>Without thinking, he bangs his head against the door, angry at himself
>A familiar voice, tinged with new age, but ever unmistakable answers
>“Coming!”
>He feels his heartrate skyrocket
>His irrational brain telling him to run and not turn back
>He had to force his feet to stay still
>He was sure he looked a sad sight, stiff in fear, tail tucked between his legs
>The doorknob turns and the door opens
>Mother and son look at each other, time feeling like it was frozen as recognition quickly leap into her face
>Without a word she wraps her arms around Nick
>She squeezes him tight, like she was trying to make up for all the hugs she had missed over the years.
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>>6474684
Me too

It's v comf
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Well here's my TT entry I guess.
How's everyone doing on turkey day/night?
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>>6474752
Fuel

Fuck

That's really fucking good.
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>>6474752
>>6474761

What they said =D
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On one hand, kinda disappointed that Gerard used the "lewd" meme so piefox wouldn't be boning country sheep.

On the other, this is just so fucking cute.
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>>6474752
That is a sicknasty pic Fuel, buns in armor! Foxes too! Also I'm doing good though my turkey night was weeks ago.
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>>6474752
Nice and grizzled
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>>6474752
>those shadows
Fuel if I eat you will I gain your talents?
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>>6474752
Great job fuel!

My family did turkey day yesterday because of scheduling, so me and dad went to go see Fantastic Beasts.

Maybe it's because I'm not used to it, but almost every fucking place was closed so we couldn't get anything to eat other than theater hotdogs. Even fucking McDonalds was closed.
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>>6474752
I don't have anything to say that hasn't already been said but I still want to give you a (You). Good job.
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>>6474773
Could you have some decency and next time upload it the censored version, please.
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I am trapped in my grandmother's internetless, doily-filled home until Saturday and not being able to upload my TT contribution is killing me.
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>>6474865
>Kung fu master opossum faces off against ninjitsu trashpanda
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>>6470919
My grandmother was hospitalised
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>>6471627
>>6471989
Hey Clunk, sorry if I am late as Hell, being on the other side of the world sucks.
And, yes, the beginning is a little forced. I tried to go for the usual fable way of setting the environment, creating an ad hoc situation in which the protagonists move and interact.
I'm happy you liked it. And I'm honored to be the first exposure for you to Sky(e). If you didn't see them, I suggest you go searching the works on Skye of Reply and Mead mainly for the stories and Iji for the art.
I don't have an AO3 account so I guess that it will remain on Pastebin only for now.
>>6471747
Probably the anon is not on thread anymore but I'll be damned if I don't shill as much as I can >>6470147

Now looking at all the posts I lost, whoosh!
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>>6474873
But how are you sending this?

>>6474920
Yikes. Hope she's okay.
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SAD NICK HASN'T UPDATED FOR LIKE 4 FUCKING MONTHS FUCK FUCK WHER'S THE LEWDSSS
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>>6474949
>Hope she's okay.
Well, my dad managed to fit a Trump joke in with his army-style "satirical berating of the patient" while she was whimpering in pain, so.

I bet she blames herself for this, too
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page 9, just in case

NEW BREAD
>>6475019
>>6475019
>>6475019
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>>6474720
Aw shit.
I love Mrs. Wilde, and I really hope they delve into her character when Twotopia gets made.

>inb4 letitgo.png
>inb4 inb4 >1 billion dollarydoos
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>>6474993
Well I certainly know a thing or two about family members being idiots.

Hope it turns out okay anyway.
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>>6474417

http://archiveofourown.org/works/8169614
http://archiveofourown.org/works/8186273

try these authors
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>>6475085
>Discount VRbit
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>>6475085
You ever get that feeling [spiller]OF DEJA VU[/sprobo] where you absolutely love somebody but hate their every attempt at communication with you?
I mean, fuck, the man sacrificed everything to raise me but his social retardation is at such a high level that I am reminded of-Chris Chan at times.
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>>6474752
It was great, how was your night?
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>>6471985
Well, some of my conversations with you - both in and out of character make more sense. Also... I feel like somehow I already knew this. I can't explain it. Maybe because you remind me of myself so much.
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>>6474134
no one cares
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>>6475112
You mean like for example when you have to explain that you're being sarcastic, even though it's painfully obvious to everyone else?

Been there done that.
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>>6475196
Yeah. I'm not perfect. I've only been full time since like... June.

>>6474439
You're right. I just want to be well liked though. I'm not good at it, but I prefer it.



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