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First for Judy did this to him.
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cuck
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>>5893875
fuck off
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>>5893883
>cuck off
ftfy
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What are your plans for Halloween?
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Can someone post that 4chan would fuck nick pic?
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Hey everybody do me a favor and each and every one of you come to my house and fluff my pillows and put a not-to-hot damp rag on my forehead and put the lights just right and tuck the blankets in all around me and cook me hearty soup and put a little lemon and honey in my tea and gimmie a smooch on the top of my head and tell me I'll be okay in the morning.

Or if you can't do that post music.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=S5mLVPbmR10
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>>5893925
I'd do more than that with you, bun bun
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>>5893897
sit at home and play overwatch
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c u c c
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Can someone post that "4Chan wants to fuck nick pic"?
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>>5893897

quietly long for death
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It's the return of me, Jack Savage!
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>>5894042

that bun is too white
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>>5894042
Sky nuzzling mpreg!Savage's belly when?
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>>5893925
Get well soon bunners. I wish I could give you a hug.

Here, have a comfy pic of Judy taking care of a sick Nick.
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>>5894098
How about never?
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first for fat wolf
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mistereanon here
depressed today

dont know if i should bother with my becca series anymore

its kind of my pet project, taking a hated oc and doing my damndest to write her well and actually turn her into a solid character instead of a sue

which is as hard as you expect

but apparently people are looking at the titles and the fact its about becca and just
fucking off and not bothering to read

so fuck it, right? if no one's gonna read it i shouldnt bother
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>>5894116
I like the pink hair better.
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>>5894119
Well I enjoyed them, and I'd read more.
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>>5894119
You should get Comic to read them. Hes a way to get readers and comments.
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>>5894215

i dunno, he's busy...
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>>5894164
>mid bottom

yes
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>>5893925
Aww, poor Comic.
Fall weather kicking your butt too, huh?

>>5893393
Was great, 10/10, would do again.
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xth for pizza friends will always be J U S T F R I E N D S
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>>5894232
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>>5893897
Nothing because I'm a friendless NEET.

However, my state's local comic con is 2 weeks after, and I've got a nice Joker (batman) cosplay set up. Might even bring my Nick cosplay if I find a Judy there.
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>>5894232
>implying
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>>5894247
>>5894249
>not platonically dating and screwing your friends platonically

what are you gay
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>>5893897
Probably watch one or two horror films.
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>>5893812
>>5893846
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>>5894227
I've come down with a bug.

>Nurse Raccedfag

Haaaaaaaaaaaaaa.

>>5894119
>>5894215
>>5894224
I'd never say no to doing a reading. I am busy, but so long as people can forgive me for taking a few days to go through my list, I'd never say no to a read.
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>>5893925
>Comic sick
>Not feeling too well myself, probably flu
Let's be ill together, bun

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=AMGXq9_IQBQ

>>5893894
>>5894042
And still I have strength to do this stupid thing

>>5894119
I liked them misterE. Obviously such a title will be problematic for many readers, considering the subject, so they will not even try to read. I suggest you leave it as it is, your pet project, writing chapters whenever you feel like it. In the meantime, to not become burn out by it, you can write other fics.
Also the Comic idea is good.
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>never on when majority of Burger artisits are on due to timezones
>have to use ZTArchive to catch up
>see last thread Gud, Nobby and Inky were on doing request
>this begins playing

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4N3N1MlvVc4
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>>5894284
What are you fuckin' gay?
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>>5894331
>those eyes
This picture makes me sadder than anything else I've seen on 4chan.
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So, what's the furry trash equivalent in ZT? People who shave off all their fur and get their tails cropped? Constantly argue with people online over whether or not "My Little Human" counts or not?
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>>5894232
>>5894277
>Horseback rides
Yet another reason to date a horse.
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>>5894286
>I've come down with a bug.

Well that sucks to hear. I'm just on the mend from the cold that'd been kicking my ass lately, so I hope you get over yours soon.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=s_Tc08tIBR4
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>>5894450
I wanna say the word should be "Humies" but then I read that in an Ork's voice.
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>>5894513

STOP THE HUMMINS
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>>5894119
I just read them. Neat and entertaining, but I get the feeling you're kinda pushing the character onto the reader, y'know?
Like, if someone introduces(and keeps on presenting) a character--even a protagonist--casually and in a good realistically paced dynamic with everyone else around him/her, the character will be easier to relate to.
People will lower their defenses, so to speak, and let the character into their hearts, because there isn't some figurative stage (or narrative focus) that throws the protagonist into the viewer's/reader's face.

(Think of it like this:
Instead of going "Hey! This...This is an OC! BAM! FOCUS on it, because it's INTERESTING!" rather go with a real casual and almost laid-back presentation along the lines of "Check this setting out! Kind of cozy, huh? ..oh yeah by the way there's this hyena character who's kind of intense sometimes..")

I know it might sound absurd, but it's actually a very core principle in dramaturgy.

tl;dr
Sometimes, making the protagonist "fade in" more with the background/others, actually makes her stand out more, in being more likeable and relatable.
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How many women in Zootopia has Nick seen naked?
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>>5894450
There's been jokes about "skinnies", but considering that furries at least base their sparkledogs on something that exists, and both humans and primates are so far verboten in the Zootopia lore, I'm more inclined to imagine Zootopia has scalies as their furry analogues.
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>9.5

>diameter of testicles

never forget
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>>5894534

unfortunately, it does feel like i have to push her

when you're starting off with someone so universally reviled you're fighting a hell of an uphill battle

plus its not like i know how to write or anything

Pack Street: Hindsight was a fluke
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>>5894423
>hell is warm
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>>5894479
I'd rather ride the horse on his back if you know what I mean
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alright, who's ready for a trip to russian ztg?
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>>5894564
NO NOT AGAIN
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>>5894598
So many lynxes and jumpsuits...
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This is what I spent a few hours on.
Not studying.
Not schoolwork.
This.
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>>5894423
Wh-

well thanks for ruining it for me
(No seriously, thanks for pointing it out. Made me feel human again)
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>>5894450
Avo's put on some serious weight.
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So who thinks Remmy is gonna survive the reveal of Bellweather's plot?

Me, I'd put his odds at 1 in 3.
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>>5894672
Marty is gonna hawk him for life
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I want to draw a zootopia.
What should I draw, thread? No OCs this time, I want to draw canons right now.
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>>5894694

>implying he survives
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>>5894631
Well, at least it is a good thing. Bravo.
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>>5894698
>Maurice
if he's too OC for you
>Bogo barking orders or in riot gear
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>>5894698
Zootopian mice manning cannons
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>>5894564
They're better when they're woolly. Like big ol' fluffy yarn-balls.
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>>5894703
Naaah its bad haha I couldve done better.
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>>5894698
Jack Savage humping a bunny shaped sex toy.
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>>5894698
Bogo, and his twin.

...-cuz, buy one ge-

...no? Okay.
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>>5894698
Nick and Judy doing whatever the roll of this post dictates
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>>5894715
WOW
No wonder he felt fine while mouthing off at Al
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>>5894672
I get the feeling that if and when it rolls into part of the prose-based story, there'll probably be a community-comes-together moment, like some other preds in the area sees Remmy and gang up on him, only for his ass to be saved by his neighbors showing up and standing up for him.
But knowing Weaver, it could also go another direction entirely.
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>>5894737
>petting an animal

HOLY FUCK THAT IS LEWD
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>>5894713
No it has to be either Nick or Judy manning cannons, anon!
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>>5894715
ideal for skeinny dipping
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>>5894719
Then do all the things you have to do and then make it better
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>>5894737
>>5894755
>petting an animal
But that already happened in the movie with Bellwether.
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>>5894164
That middle bottom image is kinda off...
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>>5894631
FIRST TEXT
GOES ON THE LEFT
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>>5894737
sewe
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>>5894631
That poor Gud. Strangled to death by his mother.
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>>5894698
Try new ships.
Gideon and Gazelle
Judy and Yax
Nick and Priscilla
Weaselton and Bonnie
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>>5894631
Nick is way too cool with this.
Its not the weirdest idea she's come up with, is it?
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>>5894567
I see.. Well, if I were you I'd first and foremost throw what everyone else is saying out the window, and search myself for how I feel about the character and her role in the storie (or other stories, potentially!).

..then--provided I liked her enough to invest time and creativity in her--I'd start considering developing her further.

Some tips regarding this might be to expand the cast, thus creating a natural way for the narrative focus to ease out onto others (thus making her interesting because of her merits, instead of the story's focus being on her).
Another thing could be to keep the current chapters as introductory chapters--possibly after some editing/shuffling/scrapping/whatever you feel is best--and continue the story with going back in time to an earlier Becca.
I.e. the current chapters are the status quo, but serve as prelude to her real story, the prequel to the status quo.
(Doing this not only gives you kind of a "free pass", so to speak, but can often jumpstart some rusty creative gears, getting the idead flowing again.)

Don't worry, bunner. The world would be poorer without you in it as a writefag, so never stop.
(Or do I need to remind you what to do when you need inspiration/motivation~?)

>>5894286
Get well, Comic!
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>>5894631
I want to hug her fat belly.
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>>5894779
There.
>>5894802
I can imagine not.
>>5894799
Nah just rando antelopes.
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>>5894754
if remmy doesn't get the everloving shit beaten out of him at some point I'm taking my yarn balls and going home

because apparently thatsmyfetish.jpg
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>>5894853
What if he was beat to a pulp THEN AL POWERBOTTOMED HIM?
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>>5894119
Yeas, you are here.
I've wanted to tell you that your
"Looking through glass" series
is great and you should make more.
Maybe it's a heresy, but
Remmy/Carrie is a great ship
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>>5894698
Gideon Grey
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https://discord.gg/kxeXGqg

Hey guys, don't wanna ruin the thread, but the old link had some issues. This new one won't randomly kick you anymore. Sorry about that, we wanted to test the "Temporary Membership" feature as a way to vet people, but it was just confusing and annoying them. Sorry!

Lurkers can now lurk without getting kicked.
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>>5894880

been working on it sporadically
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>>5894755
You say it like it's a bad thing.
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>>5894938
i want this nick to fuck me
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>>5894911
I'm so fucking glad, right now
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>going where no mouse has gone before
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>>5894976
In the butt?
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>>5894989
nah that happens all the time. Mouse doctors are the best doctors to check that part
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Evens go to the gym
Odds rest cause your sick
Dubs thread request
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>>5894119
I've been reading them, and enjoying them.

Matter of fact, I never had anything to do with this particular character until you started writing this stuff. With the way you write her, I actually kind of indentify with her a bit. I hold myself to pretty high standards at times as well, and if I feel like I haven't met them, I tend to beat myself up about it. I see a little bit of that in her character, at least in your stories.
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>>5894624
Actually, yes. Their thread was created on 08/Aug
this isn't what I expected though
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>>5895039
oh lordy. I'm going to assume that was made by a local drawfag
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Well, it seems I can't stay awake for much, the flu probably got me. I wanted to do much more tonight, but it seems I can't.
Good night /ztg/, stay comfy!

>>5894954
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rbBX6aEzEz8
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I WATCHED ZOOTOPIA AND DIDN'T EVEN GET A BONER WTF
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>>5895065
there are pills for that
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>>5895065

not even in the naturalist scene?
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http://www.strawpoll.me/11456208

>vote
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>>5895065
You're watching it wrong.
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>>5895064
Sleep tight bunner
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>”You need a what now?”
>“I need a place to stay.” Nick repeated, an uneasy smile on his muzzle, “At least for a week or two, some time for me to find a new apartment.”
>Jack stared at the fox, giving him a look that screamed ‘explain, now’.
>Nick sighed, “Alright look, the owner of the place I was at raised the rent again, and I simply couldn’t keep paying. So I cut my losses and left, and now I need a place to crash while I find someplace cheaper.”
>”And you have no one else to turn to? What about Hopps? Or that fennec friend of yours?” Jack scowled, arms crossed over his chest.
>”Are you kidding me?” Nick barked in laughter, “Carrots still lives in that shoebox apartment of hers, there is barely enough room for her in there. And Finnick lives in a van, not the best place to crash.”
>”What about your mother? She would gladly take you in.” continued the soft-spoken bunny, searching for other options.
>The fox grimaced, “I love my mom, I really do. However, if I move in with her she will try to set me up with some vixen. She still leaves monthly messages asking if there are grandkits on the way.”
>Jack snorted, turning his gaze away from his friend.
>The two stood in silence for what felt like a hour before Nick spoke up, “If you are really uncomfortable with me at your place Cottontail, I’ll find-“
>”No,” interrupted Jack, “it’s fine, you can stay with me for a bit. I do have a guest room you can sleep in.”
>Nick grinned, “Great! Thanks buddy-“
>”But!” the bunny turned back, raising a finger, “I got one rule. One single rule; if you break it I will find a way to hide your body.”
>”The fox raised his eyebrows, sensing the seriousness of the threat, “Okay…”
>”My room. Is. Off. Limits.”

Cont.
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>>5895065
have you talk to your doctor about it ?
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>>5895065
Well, that is our job
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>>5893925
Oh! H-hey Comic!
I just got your message!
I'm writing, don't worry about that!
I'm just busy trying to adhere to your schedule!

>>5887761
Wait, no please! I-its not like that! Don't encourage him!
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russians seem to be gay for nick too. they also seem to be shipping jack with some lynx oc. I suppose it's their local bunanon because their post always receive a lot of replies. also, found weaver, zhan and replyanon's art there.
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>>5895077
I fapped to the trailer before the movie was even out. That panther was too lewd.
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>>5895105
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>>5895012
Explain this.
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>>5895147

There's porn of her now!
And a male version of that porn too, strangely
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>>5895065
are you attracted to males or females?
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>>5895065
you disgust me
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>>5895148
he's not a real doctor he got the diploma online
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>>5893846
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>>5895165
Wait a minute

That skunk isn't groping a single boob!
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>>5894139
Hi Canidae
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>>5894331
Is there...
Is there more?
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>>5895152
The worst storytime EVER in my Stream.
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>>5895039
couldn't resist, man
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>>5895173
>humans
females
>furshit
both

I wish the characters talked about their paws more
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>>5895216

oh, a pawfag?
we have some webms you should see
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Be back later everyone!

>>5895140
>busy trying to adhere to your schedule

Let's have a quick language lesson:

What is the difference in the meaning of the sentence "I'm busy trying to adhere to your schedule" and "I'm busy adhering to your schedule"?
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>>5895178
I still wouldn't mind being examined by him
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>>5894119
Didn't you literally name it Becca's Super Pseudopeepee Adventure or something? What the fuck were you expecting?
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>>5895212
My god.
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>>5895211
This is your goat.
>>5895012
This is your goat on Discord.

Any questions?
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>>5895252

i was expecting people would have enough faith in me as a writer to NOT TAKE SUCH A RETARDED TITLE SERIOUSLY

but i guess nobody thinks that highly of me
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>>5895173
Why does this artist draw Gideon with like a dark-grayish wattle under his chin? What the fuck is with that? It's not just this artist, actually, I see it all over the place
but why

why
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>>5895257
(I will never NOT be a fan of those monocular visors) Good night for real this time
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>>5895266
He does have that, and is not and illumination issue.
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>>5895216
>Pawfag shows up when my internet is out
Fuck my life
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>>5895266

Because Gideon had it. He's got a mild double chin with a bit of "scruffy chin" coloring.
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>>5895266
It's in his concept art.
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>>5895266
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>>5895193
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>>5895276
I bet Remmy's are bigger.
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>>5895289
Sleep tight bunner!
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>>5895266

Because Gideon is a fat hick faggot who drinks a beer, farts, then rapes you. And then smacks you on the ass and gives you a pie and sends you on your way with a bit of Southern hospitality.
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>>5895303
It's really disgusting
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>>5895334
Now I'm pictunring him in Deliverance.

captch CAMPING 2200
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>>5895353
If you remove some weight and add some smug, it's like a completely different fox
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>>5895096
Oh, I think I know where this is going.

I like it.
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>>5895334
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>>5895334

>implying he would let you leave

he would break your legs, dude, like Kathy Bates
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>>5895262
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>>5895096
>That evening the two arrived at Jack’s home, a two bedroom house that Nick couldn’t help but be impressed with despite its rabbit size.
>”How did you manage to afford something like this in Savanna Central? Does being a workaholic ‘secret agent’ pay that well?” teased the fox as they entered the home.
>”Haha, that joke truly doesn’t get old.” Jack snarked back, “Even if I don’t work in the field, being part of the FBI pays well enough.”
>Nick would have continued to joke, if the smell inside Jack’s house didn’t slam into him like a brick wall.
>He stepped back, taking a moment to regain his wits as the tantalizing scent of a female bunny assaulted his senses. “W-wow, that’s strong, no wonder you wear so much odor blocker.”
>The fox turned to his friend, smirking at the horror-struck face on Jack, “With a lady friend who leaves the air like this, I can see why you weren’t interested in Judy. Here I thought you might have been gay.”
>The rabbit blinked, before shaking his head and motioning for Nick to follow him, “No. I’m definitely not gay.”
>Nick chuckled, “I can smell that.” He raised his paws up in peace when Jack turned back to glare at him.
>Jack opened up a door, allowing Nick to go in to look around the somewhat plain room with a small bed and desk.
>”My room will be at the end of the hallway; remember to knock and do not enter.” Warned the rabbit.
>”I hear ya Cottontail. I don’t think I would want to go in there anyway. As good as this doe smells, I can only imagine what your den smells like.”
>Jack’s ears practically glowed red as he scowled at the smirking fox before slamming the bedroom door shut.

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I want to smooch the pie fox
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>>5895369
Except it's still Gideon, who is the worst.
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>>5895406
>A-Ah'm really sorry 'bout alla this...b-but I really can't letcha tell anyone n'ruin' mah business. You understand dontcha?
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>>5895424
Same,

but I also wanna blow enough air into him, turning him into a giant fox beach ball while I do.
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>>5894709
Well, first come first serve, I guess, and he is technically in the movie.

Smiling moose detective coming right up. (because I'm pretty sure he's smiling in the movie?)

>>5894713
Duke Weaselton as Tubezilla and Judy as Bunra and the brave mice who defended Little Rodentia from the kaiju threat. I'm on it.

>>5894721
>Jack Savage
I said no OCs right now, anon. :^]
>>5894723
4/10 gave me a chuckle.

>>5894801
Been there, man.
I drew Flash/Yax back in June.

>>5894888
The sacred 8 trips demand I do this as well.

>>5894737
And I can double up in it with this. Oh boy!
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>>5895424
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>>5895453
>Yax is a good enough bro to let a sloth enjoy himself
What an awesome fella
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>>5895418
>Becky (Skye) Wilde hears her brother's voice in the apartment, and pops her head out of the door to Jack's room.
>"Nick!" she yelled, and bound out the door, completely nude.
>It had been so long since Nick had seen his sister, he forgot what she smelled like-
>But with her glistening, chest rubbing against his face, he'd never forget again.
>The smell would haunt him for the rest of his life.
>Along with ther nipple piercings she had, which were pressing uncomfortably hard against his mouth.
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>>5895453
add Judy to the Gideon Grey drawing Beav.
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>>5895334
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=YoXGg4tWdmg
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>>5895441

We really need to greentext this, especially if he's going to be bashful the whole time.

>N-now Ah made you this here pie a-an' Ahm' fixin' ta let you have some, but first Ah gotta hobble both-ah them legs.
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>>5895453
>Been there, man.
>I drew Flash/Yax back in June.

I know, that's why I suggested new ones that didn't include that.
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>>5895424
I wanna whisper loving things to the piefox
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>>5895296
It's okay, there's plenty more pawfags in this thread than you might think
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Goodnight.
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>>5895374
And here I thought I was being sneaky. Kind of. Maybe. I suck at foreshadowing.

>>5895481
I got a laugh out of this.
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>>5895450

Well yeah, who doesn't?
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>>5895547
Gud night goater
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>>5895547
Sleep tight gudder
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>>5895547
nighty night!
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>>5895511
Yus.
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>>5895547
Have a good night cutie goat, may the Ted be with you.
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>>5895547
sleep well
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>>5895547
>ReplyDoll
I think someone has a crush. Night.
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>>5895581
Is this the birth of a new OCOTP?
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>There will never be a comfy green w/ Betty, her son, and Remmy
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What if Gud....

/IS/ REPLYANON!
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>>5895262
These shops always creep me the fuck out.
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>>5895608
Remmy Cormo in
"My Wife's Son"
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>>5895620
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=trPOVkRMq34
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>>5895620
Can't be, Gud has never replied to anyone.
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>>5894897
https://discord.gg/PuebKbq

i'm a fuckup

this one works

sorry

that's it for posting about it now.
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>>5895645
>>5895608
>Remmy and Charlie Cormo in
>Honey I Fucked The Kid
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>>5895547
>>5895581
>>5895602
>typing up post about how I ship reply/gud
>see this
FULL SAIL AHEAD QTS
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>>5895645
These days, cuck jokes just write themselves.
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>>5895547
We love you gud. You're an awesome person. Sleep well.
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>>5895620
>>5895650
I think gud replied to Reply, wich would make him ... a fucking samefag.
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>>5894631
What
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>>5895675
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>>5895718
Social Disruption.
Maybe even Honey doesn't even know.
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>>5895706
>>5895645
Wait, hooking up with a single mom makes you a cuck now?
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>>5895165
>>5895195
Baby skunks are cute. CUTE!
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>>5895765
t. cuck
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So here's a question:

If I wrote a super grimdark wartime fic set in ZT proper, how many people would let me kill their OCs in cameos?
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>>5895765
If you're taking care of another man's kid, yes.
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>>5895233
One is better for me?

Look, j i'll take requests after dinner, i promise!
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>>5895647
>Look at the black parts
>Filling with points
>Probably MangaStudio
Does Gud use it? Because the filling he usually does is solid monochrome
Also didn't Reply say that he was from another fandom and he migrated recently?
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pretty sure gud uses sai
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>>5895796
Is it death by dicks? Because if it's death by dicks, maybe.
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>>5895812
Wait how the fuck do you do that in Manga Studio
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>>5895821
If by that you mean to imply that it is dickish to kill someone, then absolutely.
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>>5895796
Kill any of my characters.
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>>5895786
>>5895803
If anything you're cucking the kid's father, because you're fucking his woman now. You're not a cuck because someone fucked the woman BEFORE. That's like, retrograde cucking. You might as well argue any woman who's not a virgin has pre-emptively cucked you.
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>>5895803
Huh, I never knew being a stepfather makes you a cuck.
So what's the proper response, then? Murder the kid when you marry their mom? Never date single women? Only fuck virgins?
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>>5894761
I kinda wanna bury my face in those
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>>5895840
I was thinking choking on cocks
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>>5895418
>For the next week, Jack’s attitude towards Nick switched between cold to outright ignoring the fox.
>Even in a professional setting, the bunny would give the shortest of replies, giving Nick no room to fit in his usual smart talk.
>When Judy spoke up in concern, Nick explained the situation, though even he was confused of where exactly this frosty persona came from.
>When at home Jack would retreat into his room, only coming out to eat.
>If it wasn’t for the constant smell of doe in the air, Nick could have swore that he was alone in this house.
>On that thought, he hadn’t seen hair or tail of this ‘lady friend’ of Jack, and would have thought that maybe there was no doe if he didn’t hear moaning coming from his host’s room one night.
>Did she sneak in through the window or something? Why the hell didn’t she just come through the front door?
>”Whatever,” Nick muttered to himself, waiting at the end of the hall for Jack to come out. It was nearly time to head to work, and for whatever reason the bunny hadn’t come out for breakfast.
>The bunny didn’t eat dinner last night either he remembered. Jack barely muttered a ‘good night’ before heading straight to his room.
>The fox checked his phone again before sighing, walking over to Jack’s room and knocking on the door.
>”Hey buddy, hurry up! We are going to be late!”
>When he heard no response from the bunny, Nick was tempted to break the single rule given to him.
>”Rabbit, what the hell?” Nick continued, knocking harder on the door, pausing only when he heard a pained groan from the other side.

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>>5895850
Actually the stepfather very much is the cuckee, because it's the original sense of the term. Look up the cuckoo bird's nesting habits, they're nasty bastards.

>>5895861
CAN'T DUCK THE C U C K
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>>5895796
Kill me, I long to be freed from this southern hell.
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Time to vote Thread!
http://www.strawpoll.me/11456208/
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>>5895871
Damn, the only time I don't have the screen about OCs and choking on dicks. Have a link
https://desuarchive.org/trash/thread/3617907/#q3618775
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>>5895909
>Actually the stepfather very much is the cuckee, because it's the original sense of the term. Look up the cuckoo bird's nesting habits, they're nasty bastards.
No, that's not the same. That only applies if the eggs are laid after the couple is together, i.e. another man impregnates your wife after she's already your wife.
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>>5895084

>>5895952

fucker read the thread.
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>>5895983
Hey, don't blame me if the analogy doesn't hold 100%. I just cuck'em as I see'em.
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>>5895871
>>5895965
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>>5895642
I'd like to think that Nick would be his power top and that's not the face of a power top.
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Here's a thought:

Since you weren't dating or married to the mother at the time, the original dad hasn't cucked you.

Since they are no longer together, assuming she didn't leave him for you, you aren't cycling him either.

Unless she's cheating on one or both your asses at the time, it isn't cucking.
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>>5896035
being alive is literally being cucked out of the sweet embrace of death
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>>5895845
Oh, with pleasure. Where they livin', these days?
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>>5896035
sprinkah go back to tumblr and stop trying to write plots
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>>5896027
>mfw nothing you actually put effort into gets noticed
>your off-handed mobile shitposts get reposted and will probably outlive your presence in this fandom
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>>5896053
Who?

Seriously, do 4chan people have a lot of stepdads, or something?
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>>5896046
But aren't dead people lifecucks?
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>>5896102
better a lifecuck than a deadcuck desu
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>>5896048
Hill Street and regular/southern Savannah Central.

Go nuts.
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>>5895880
>Was he sick or something? Since when was Jack Savage sick? He rarely saw the buck take a day off.
>”Jack... you alright there?”
>When another groan was his answer, Nick decided that it was time to fuck the house rule, his friend’s wraith be damned.
>He opened the door, entering the bedroom, “Jack, do I need to call in sick for yo-“
>Nick’s next words were caught in his throat by the completely overwhelming smell of doe in the bedroom and the sight on the bed.
>There, curled up into a ball, in the middle of the bed was a female bunny with no male in sight.
>His eyes trailed over the lean feminine figure, noticing the black stripes, the white fur, the tight top and panties.
>Nick’s brain barely had time to register any of this, of the fact that there was very attractive bunny girl in place of his friend, when a moan came from the doe.
>In record time, Nick was by the rabbit’s side, placing the back of his paw against her head.
>”Holy hell you are burning up.” Nick backed up as he pulled out his phone, “Looks like neither of us are going to work today, huh buddy?”


>Later that night, after a full day of playing nurse for the sick rabbit, Nick found himself in the living room going through apartment websites.
>He couldn’t focus on his computer though, his mind still reeling from the fact that Jack Savage was a doe instead of a buck.
>He went through his memory, trying to find any point that would have gave away such a fact.
>Jack used products to hide his -her, Nick reminded himself- scent, she spoke softly, almost girly at times, and she was a pretty boy.
>Nothing solid, but when added together made for a strange picture.
>Nick felt his ears heat up when he realized that the smell of doe, the scent he had been finding alluring this last week, came from Jack.
>And the sounds from that one night…

Cont.
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>>5896053
Sprinkah just needs an editor.
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>>5894631

>>5894825

This got a chuckle from me. I wish that more people did stuff with Honey as opposed to Jack.

>>5894827
Second, but no stuffing/inflation shit for me thanks.
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>>5896367
Motherfucker

I swear to god if she's in heat I'm gonna fucking fight you

Bunnies don't have heat.
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>>5896433
...That just registered after I posted that. Shit. No heat. Just a sick bun.
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>>5896079
sprinkah is a fancomic artist. he and uzrfrndly made a fic where judy dates with jack while nick mopes around until she gets pregnant and he dumps her ass (questionable, considering how the comic portray it). judy makes a theatrical show about how she is sad, nick says "i love you judy, i wish these were my biological kids but i want to be their father anyways" and she replies "thanks. i'd like that". the title doesn't help (this is what true love looks like) when the "true love" seems like both nick exploiting judy's fragile state and nick being loved just because he's helping her, spineless sulky nick made matters even worse.

when people pointed out that was kinda shitty, both started defending it as "not every family is perfect but people still try to make it work and be happy". cuck spam started which made matters worse, now he keeps extending the comic with stills and written on-the-fly dialogue to try and make it less weird.

the comic alongside with several other fics with similar themes made the cuck meme spiral out of control and now whenever there is a single mom and a interested party it gets tagged cuck.

cuck

by the way adopting is cuck too.
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>>5896392
Man I barely know what JACK is.
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>>5896479
>that picture

as someone put once "this isn't Judy, just some bitch in Judy's skin".

It really boggles my mind you can write everyone so out of character and enjoy massive following providing it looks half-decent.
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>>5896479
I seriously had never heard the word cuck before 4chan.
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>>5896505
You know, it's kinda sad to say that "Jack is actually Jill" trap thing that's been going on is the most personality that Savage has that actually is interesting.

Honestly, the only thing about Savage that isn't just "jack a cuck" shit was weaver's Archer/Get Smart interpretation that died a sad death in favor of making him generic Bond clone #1853895 and Mead making him an emotionally compromised agent who basically destroyed a country because his love was wacked by one guy.

>>5896515
I knew what a cuckold was, but I didn't realize that it was a meme here because of reasons I don't really want to know.
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>>5896479
We got one good response comic from Ciwi that fixes everything though.
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>>5896586
dotaluit, not ciwi
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>>5896606
F
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>>5896606
I miss both.
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>>5894715
I just started to research how much semen a ram could ejaculate to see how viable my idea for a green where Remmy fills a Pred up with goat-jizz would be; Then I caught myself.

Is that insanity looks like?
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So, what character from the movie would be the most adept at autofellatio?
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>>5896657
ciwi is alive and well though, they took requests few threads ago.

though I don't think I've heard from dotaluit in a longer while. Their last contribution was /fit/ TT I think?
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>>5896668

well, now i want to know, too...
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>>5896673
delet this
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>>5896586
>>5896606 this.

>>5896678
dotaluit left after comic shat all over their comic.
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>>5896562
desu i prefer weaver's actor one. mead one has the meadtm seal of boohoo love interest is ded alongside with the even worse implication of jack being a such a fucking super agent bunny capable of nuking a fucking country while judy struggled with the mammal inclusion initiative to be a cop.
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>>5896709
you need to substantiate your baseless claims, sweetheart
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>>5896673
what in the effing eff am I effing looking at
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>>5896678
Wow, I keep missing ciwi so much, I thought they left.

On one hand, that's good that they're still here and doing stuff.

On the other, I'm sad/pissed at my schedule that I keep missing the chance for a request from them.

>>5896709
I don't remember there being any drama between dotaluit and comic after Miserable Losers was posted.

Shit, nearly everyone on the thread seemed to love it at the time; the backlash didn't come till much later.
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>>5896732
Donut Steel
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>>5896731
Comic is vocally a fan of Sprinkah and hates WildeSky(e). He's in the thread, ask him. >>5896376
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>>5896376
i got his editor right here.
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>>5896732
homeshit/cancerstuck r34
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>>5896367
>The sound of footsteps tore Nick from his thoughts and caused him to turn around.
>Jack was now in a pair of pajamas, loose enough to hide the figure underneath.
>They both knew it was an attempt in vain.
>There was the silent tension between them, the awkward stillness as either party tried to figure out how to begin this needed conversation.
>The doe began first, her voice lighter than usual, “I guess I should say…thank you. For taking care of me while I was indisposed. For that, I won’t murder you and bury your body in the Nocturnal District.”
>Nick snorted, both at this new tone and how, even as a girl, Savage was still so eloquent.
>”You’re welcome Cottontail; I was surprised to see that you’re mortal like the rest of us. Carrots takes more days off than you, and I can count the ones this year on one paw.”
>Jack gave a half-smile, before sighing and sitting on the couch opposite of Nick, “I have some explaining to do, don’t I?”
>”It would be nice, especially since I am still half convinced I imagined this morning.” Nick said as he put away his laptop.
>”Do you usually imagine me as a female?” Jack questioned with a smirk.
>”Even if I did, it would have paled in comparison to the real thing.” quipped back Nick, causing the bunny to scowl and her ears to blush, “Just calling it as I see it.”
>”Ignoring that for now, the Jack you knew was the result of a dumb bunny’s idea of making the world take her, or him in this case, seriously.”
>Seeing Nick’s confusion, Jack continued “This was before the Mammal Inclusion Initiative, Hopps was lucky to be born at the right time and to finish college around the time that bill came into effect.”
>”I was a few years too early, and I knew they weren’t going to let a bunny into physical law enforcement. So I went for the next best thing, being an FBI agent. A desk job, sure, but I was still making the world ‘a better place’ as Hopps would say.”

Cont.
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Rams don't cum that much, it's comparable to humans.
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>>5896820
even fucking google agrees
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>>5896851
it must burn
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>Nick stepped into the room to find Judy sensually kissing another rabbit
>"No Judy I love you"
>"I'm sorry Nick"
>the male rabbit leaves
>"Nick you dont love me enough"
>"Judy I love you mostest of all thinks and more-er than anybun else"
>"How do I know"
>"I raise your kids for you b/c ur pragnent"
>"Ok Nick I love you most too now"

How's my greentext, comic? Amy here.
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>>5896851
Flash wih a flamethrower laughing all slow when ?
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>>5896875
That really activated my almonds, anon.
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>>5896756
A lot of the attention it got was from comic pulling a Wishgranter. The fic itself is cuckier than True Love. It puts Nick in an even worse position as an alcoholic who hates his job and who has a son who hates him.
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>>5896507
Words require a greater time commitment to take in than images, for one reason.

This isn't necessarily to hold up one medium over the other as superior - it's just faster and easier to smile and nod at art.
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>>5896709
which comic?
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Here you heathens.
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>>5896934
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>>5896731
>>5896709
http://desuarchive.org/trash/thread/4513533/#4515390

can't find the avatarfagging with Madge that was the discussion
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>>5896952
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>>5896952
Oh yea! I remember that one now.
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>>5896953
>mfw this depressed doe artist never came back
I hope they're alright
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>>5896944
thicccc
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>>5896944
You are being too kind to me with all these gifts of pudgy badger babe.

If you keep this up, I'll have to get on my knees and beg you for Honey/Nick lewd.
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>>5897021
>implying I haven't been debating that all day
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>>5896953
Few days after that, and comic went apeshit.
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>>5896684
>>5896845
Well I gave into the insanity and using the (http://goatdocs.ansci.cornell.edu/Resources/GoatArticles/GoatGeneticsRepro/GoatSemenNuti.pdf
http://www.netdoctor.co.uk/conditions/sexual-health/a12002/semen-and-sperm-quality/) as my main source I've deduced the following:

>Goats have a smaller and lower seminal volume compared to humans (1-1.5 ml vs. 2-5ml)
>But they have a greater concentration of sperm (~4E+9 per ml vs. 0.02E+9 per ml)

And thus Remmy would jizz a smaller amount into Betty's tight doggy cunt, but it would have a thicker, gluey consistency.

I have also learnt of a condition called hyperspermia and if needed will simply say that is a genetic condition of Remmy's if I really need him to fill someone up.

Though now I realize I have no idea on the refractory periods of goats.
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>>5896963
Look at all those cute little cuckers
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>>5897076
I love you.

You are my personal hero.
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>>5897021

would you accept honey/judy shipping
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>>5897067
Fuck you. Comic has said he regrets writing the fucking thing because people like you try to make up shit like this.
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GREENTEEXTS! Come and get your GREENTEXTS!

I'm offering any flavor you want, just come up and ask!
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>>5897087

can't be longer then the reffractory period on dogs
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>>5897124
>I would accept Honey/Judy too
>I would accept Honey/Judy weaver pics
>I would accept Honey and/or Judy weaver pic
>I would accept new weaver pics in general
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>>5897067
>"comic shitting up on a content creator"
really, bud. of all the people frequenting this board I cannot imagine comic
>going apeshit
>bashing someone for their work

I'm going to hit the pass button here and ask you to bait somewhere else.
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>>5896724
>mead one

That was literally an adaptation of a greentext written by someone else, m8. Mead's "real" Jack has just been having cute couple stuff with Sky(e).
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>>5897140
Judy visiting the fox side of town and cant tell Nick apart from the others. All foxes look the same to her.
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>>5897171

oh
so you wouldn't accept honey/judy fics?
well, okay, i didn't really want to write them anyway
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>>5897140
gazelle dealing with break up in the highschool wildezelle au
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>>5897134
I don't think it's wrong to criticize ML for how bad it was; but there's a thing called tact.

When I talked to him about and gave reasons why I never really liked ML, I tried to be calm and fair about it.

Then there's assholes who just cry out "THIS IS SHIT!!1" just to be obnoxious and shame him to make themselves better. It feels like more of a way to shit on him that doesn't involve mentioning his dog.
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>>5897186
You misunderstand.

I WOULD be interested in weaver Honey/Judy fic(s); but if I suggested that he should do it, all the anons hungry for Pack Street would rip off my head and shit down my neck.
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>>5897076
Grivaire, I love your work and your style, but you have a habit of drawing all your character's heads the exact same way. Any canid (or general carnivore) is just a snout, triangular ears, and a lot of fluff for an outline. There's no difference between the way you draw one character or another because they all have the same shapes and signifiers.
Seriously, your stuff's great, but you gotta work on character design, man.
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>>5897256

weaver doesn't do fics outside of his own personal 'things' though
he wouldnt write a canon and a fanon character together
unless, MAYBE, that fanon was an oc of his
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>>5896824
>”However, being the young dumb doe that I was, I was convinced that I chances at getting that job were slim even with perfect grades and requirements. So, to get every advantage I could get, I went to the shadier parts of Zootopia and got a new male identity forged for me.”
>”Jack Savage came to be as Jill Savage disappeared- do NOT laugh.” The bunny now known as Jill glared at the grinning fox.
>”I’m sorry Ja-Jill, but you didn’t even change your last name?”
>”That name is part of the reason why you make the ‘secret agent’ jokes isn’t it?”
>”Point taken.”
>”Moving on, of course the identity didn’t hold against the head of the FBI but he was impressed enough with my efforts that he didn’t mention it to anyone else.”
>”I got a job as a Behavioral Analyst and respect from my co-workers, all at the price of everyone thinking I was a male.”
>Nick blinked, taking everything in, “And you’ve kept up this identity for…”
>”This will be my eleventh year at the FBI.”
>”Over a fucking decade…” the fox muttered to himself, before his eyes shot wide open, “And the reason why you didn’t want me here is because this is your safe haven.”
>Jill closed her eyes and nodded, “Correct; here at home I could stop being male. I can stop being Jack and return back to being Jill.”
>”Why didn’t you ever come clean?”
>”At first I was still in the mindset that I would have more respect as a male than a female. Later, when I realized how stupid that sounded, I told myself ‘soon, I’ll come out soon.’”
>”Eventually it became a routine I didn’t break. What would mammals say, what would my friends say if I came out and said ‘Hey! I’m actually a doe!’” Jill threw up her hands and leaned back against the couch.

Cont.
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>>5897134
>>5897223
For all the criticism he dishes out he can't take any.
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>>5897195
>>5897176

If no one else submits any ideas, i'll be choosing between these
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>5897329
>PAY ATTENTION TO MEEEEEEE
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>>5897385
well, to be fair, it might be how he genuinely feels. Whatevs.
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>>5897385

>>5897329
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>>5896944
Holy shiiiiit this is my jam!
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I've got a poll for you, anons.

http://www.strawpoll.me/11464821
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>>5897471
>choose one

how about you choose my fucking dick you fucking homo
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>>5897483

well i'm certainly not going to produce content for ALL these options
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>>5897471
Ok these are ok but what about Honey semidomming a mostly gay Gideon, turning him bi?
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>>5897503
Gideon is for Mrs. Wilde.
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>>5897503

but how would they even meet, anon?
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>>5897140
Remmy and Betty making out, and Al walks in on it
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>>5897511
Bar. Church group trying to turn gay people straight.
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>>5897511
Through Nick after Gideon comes out.
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>>5897385
He can't handle criticism. Every fic he posts is anonymous, and he never asked Clunk or Canidae to read his shit.
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>>5897538
>>5897557

well, the poll's been made, so its too late now
and im not just saying that because i dont want to include gideon
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>>5897263
Oh, you're definitely right, yeah - I mean, for this particular drawing, Al *does* have triangle ears and I tried to give him a slightly wider muzzle than my usual wolves

But as a general thing, yeah, I'm pretty guilty of same-facing for canines. I suppose part of the problem is that I'm not very good at conciliating the artstyle of Zootopia with what animals look like in real life - and in the case of Pack Street stuff, with how Weaver draws them (very stylized).

I'll try and work on it, yeah. And thanks for the criticism, by the way - I know there are lots of problems with my art, but it's good to know which ones seem to bother the most
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>>5897570
who are you and I cannot believe people are using henrietta
not that I mind just its surreal.
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>>5897599

well, that would be spoilers.
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>>5897564
I think you're unfair. Knowing comic, he was probably too embarrassed to.
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>>5897508
>They have a deal
>Gideon never asks who Nick is and why she screams his name when they fuck
>In return, Mrs. Wilde lets her claws out
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>>5897280
>Nick stared at her, before smiling “Well, I say you are actually a very hot doe.”
>Jill turned towards the fox, “…What?”
>”You asked what would your friends say, and that is what I said. You are actually a very hot doe.” Nick repeated with a straight face.
>The bunny gawked at him, before she started giggling. Her whole body shook as those giggles turned into laughter.
>Nick grinned as the rabbit calmed, slowly coming down from her laughing fit.
>”Hahaha, thanks for that. I needed it.” Jill wiped a tear from her eye, smiling at the fox.
>He waved his paw, “No problem, watching you sulk was making me depressed.”
>Jill smirked at Nick as she laid down on the couch, staring at him through half-lidded eyes, “Whatever Wilde.”
>The two relaxed in silence before Nick picked up his laptop again, causing Jill to blink, “What are you doing?”
>”Searching through apartments so I can get out of your fur.”
>The bunny snorted, “You don’t have to, you can stay here as long as you need to.”
>Nick looked up, “Really?”
>”Yeah, just help me pay utilities and food.”
>”What changed your mind? You wanted me to leave as soon as possible bef-oh. Right.” Nick corrected himself after a look from Jill.
>Jill closed her eyes and sighed, “You know, this is nice.”
>”What is?”
>”A friend knowing about me, about Jill and not Jack. It’s…a weight off my shoulders. Just don’t go telling anyone.”
>”Don’t worry,” Nick made a sliding motion across his muzzle, “My lips are sealed.”
>”Mmm…”
>”…So does this mean your rule still stands?”
>”…”
>”…Cottontail?...Jill?”
>Nick smiled as he realized the bunny fell asleep on the couch and chuckled to himself, “Guess that answers my question.”
>The fox picked the doe up, taking her to her room to let her rest. He placed her on the bed, took an unconscious sniff of the bedroom, and left, closing the door behind him.

End.
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>>5896694
>Panel 1
On nights where he can't sleep, he counts carrots!
Nick: "G'night..."
>Panel 2
"One carrot, two carrots, three carrots,"
>Panel 3
"One Carrots, two Carrots, three Carrots..." (TN: he stopped using a counter used for inanimate objects and is now using a counter for people; there isn't really an English equivalent)
SFX: もん もん mon mon = uneasiness? Hard to describe
>Panel 4
CAN'T SLEEP
SFX: ごろん ごろん = rolling rolling
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>>5897625
I really enjoyed that anon.

Good job dodging around that heat setup.
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>>5897625
Well. I started this green with the intention with lewd FemJack/Jill AU, then I came up with this. I swear it is Drying Off all over again.
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>>5897176
Winner!
This will be silly!
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>>5897625
>>5897280
>>5896824
>>5896367
>>5895880
>>5895418
>>5895096
someone cap this please
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>>5897692
Thank you, you are a treasure
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>>5897699
It can still be lewd. It's not too late.
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>>5897602
Weaver?
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>>5897749

since when does the rusemaster do strawpolls?
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>>5897625
This was a good green.

But better watch out for salty anon who's going to be a dick just because he can.
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>>5897705
Hope this is up to par?
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>>5895376
source?
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>>5897757
When it's a female oc.
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>>5897761
Sorry for disrupting your hugbox with my opinions about not liking what you like.
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>>5897765
thanks mate
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>>5897587
This is always the pic I seem to come back to. Even though the artist drew the characters in his own more realistic style, he maintains what makes each character unique. Al's got a very sledgehammer-shaped head, and even though Weaver draws smooth outlines on him with no fur, this artist draws the fur but still maintains the features that define Al: the shape of his head and snout, the form of his eyes, the broad tufts of his cheeks/back of the head, and the sort of mini-cowlick on his forehead. Your fur outlines, comparatively, are very distinctive - they're part of what makes your style "pop" right at a glance. But they're also sort of shapeless in that picture, and everyone's head as a result becomes a sort of cloudy ball. The excessive "tuftiness" of the fur works well on some characters, like the Ozzy you just posted, but maybe not so well on more sleek-furred characters, like say Avo or Al.
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>>5897792
i-i didn't post that
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>>5897818
Oh Anon, you and your dragons.
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>>5897818
You got imagecucked.
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>>5897818
That happens sometimes.
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>>5897791
I actually appreciate you voicing your opinion - while I disagree with you I believe nobody should be exempt from criticism because it fosters narcissism and lack of perspective.

While I don't think your argumentation was strong, it takes a lot of balls to voice unpopular opinion and I respect that.
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>>5896694
source?
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>>5897699
Oh, shit! Popo, you did this? Sweet!


It makes sense that Nick & Jill wouldn't do lewd, right there, right then. Not when they're both still getting used to their new status quo.

But after they spend time with each other more, I can imagine Jill feeling things she thought she'd never be able to again. Maybe she sneaks into the bed in the spare room where Nick's sleeping and snuggles up to her.

And maybe Nick starts getting conflicted about his friend. He'd masturbate one night and imagine Jill, then feel like an asshole for 'betraying' both Jill & Judy.

And then maybe when Jill, Judy and Nick start drinking wine over at 'Jack' and Nick's, the fox confesses he's fantasized about 'another doe' because he feels like pond scum, and Jill comes out because she wants to take the blame off of Nick, but Judy is okay with it.

After all... she doesn't mind starting a burrow sharing policy between the three of them...
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>>5897694
Honestly halfway through writing this I realized this could be taken as a heat setup, when everything had a different intention. The scent being a tell for FemJack, the sick bun just being an excuse for Nick to walk into the room, and the moaning...well I'll leave that for the sequel.

Glad you enjoyed it.

>>5897738
That is for a later greentext.

>>5897761
>>5897791
>>5897837
If someone doesn't like something I wrote, I would like to know why. Either they simply didn't like it, or there is something I did that could be improved on. My third greentext literally caused the thread to go into flames because one anon said someone was out of character but didn't explain, in which everyone got into an argument over reviews and criticism.

>>5897765
Thank you!
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>>5893925
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4Tr0otuiQuU
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>>5897818
Scalie detected.
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I want to give Nick a belly rub
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Also, check out this vintage beaver.
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>>5897977
I want Nick to give me a belly rub
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>>5897625
I like how even if haughty Jack is still likable.
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>>5897977
>not wanting to shovel heaps of food down his gullet first
something something something shigging and digging
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>>5897977
Don't forget to grab him behind the knot.
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>>5897977
I want to sit him on my lap and jack him off
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>>5897891
It sounded like a personal attack, you have failed to provide any reasonable arguments and seemed you have a beef with comic personally rather than the fic itself.

You also used aggressive language such as describing comic shitting on dotaluit (which isn't true), saying he "dished out criticism" which isn't true either because he appreciates other people's work and his comments most of the time really hit the nail on what needed to be improved and generally tone and vocabulary you use show you as a frustrated angry person with a personal grudge.
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>>5898044

a-anon, that's his weak spot.
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Hey fuckers I made some trash grimdark for you.

http://pastebin.com/2Kvrdm5Z
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>>5897791
>hugbox

Bitch, I told you that I didn't like ML, and told comic to his face that I didn't. I didn't call him shit for making the story even though I thought it really was pretty awful.

But I wasn't an asshole about it. I didn't try to claim bullshit like "comic's fic was so bad it drove a CC away, he's a cancer" like you did.

>>5897837
Yes, everyone should feel free to express opinion, even if it goes against popular opinion.

I stayed quiet when people were loving ML when it came out, because I didn't want to be a pooper and only talked to him. I can't find the exact post where I first talked about it, but I did find another where I did talk about it in August.

http://desuarchive.org/trash/thread/4822044/#q4826954

Post >>4826954

But if people just use the "criticism" to outright attack because they don't like the creator, then I'll call a jackass a jackass, even if I share the sentiment of "I didn't like it" with him.
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>>5898083
That's the point.
Grab hold and don't let go.
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>>5898101
RIP it off, slap him across the face and the devour it, vomiting midway while he passes out due to blood loss and shock
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>>5898044
And squeeze like there's no tomorrow
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>>5897977
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>>5897999
Damn, that is vintage.
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>>5897880
Honestly, I haven't quite figured out where Judy fits into this. The way this green went doesn't suggest at all that Nick and Judy are together. I was thinking of leaving Judy out of this as just a friend, and have Nick and Jill happen in some event like have Jill be able to feel "like a female" with Nick, since he is the only one that knows about her.

>>5898068
Wait. What? I am confused, I never said anything about comic or any fic. Just commenting that if someone has something to say about my greentext, I welcome it. Even more so if it points out errors/things that don't make sense.
I think you are confusing me for someone else.
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>>5898090
I'm almost a little disappointed. That conversation had a lot of flavor and worldbuilding that I was enjoying. You could have gone somewhere interesting with that that wasn't grimdark.

As for the "twist" or whatever... meh? You didn't do anything interesting.
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>>5898193
Well, it's the first part of something I think. I dunno.
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>>5898136
>>5898101
>>5898083
I really liked that green where Nick knot-fucked Fangmeyer full.

Maybe someone should write a sequel where Fangmeyer returns the favor and bring him gently to multiple orgasms.
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>>5898180
Good times.
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>>5897999
Alternatively, just put him in a suit with his badge on his belt.
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>>5898224

you mean http://archiveofourown.org/works/8000323 ?
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>>5898222
Nice trips.

I dunno, I just feel like I cared far more about the conversation those two were having than some war or whatever.

I'll read more if you write more, because I'd love to see you interest me. I was just giving my opinion on it,
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>>5898266
And it's appreciated. Dialogue's always been my forte, with Actual Fucking Plot the stumbling block. "oh no a war" isn't revolutionary for AFP, but it's something.

Necessarily there will be more worldbuilding (wild speculation) and I'm hoping to go a little buddy cop at some point. Assuming I come back to it tomorrow, which is a coinflip.
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>>5898311

this ship pleases me
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>>5898311
Any ship other than Remmy/Charlie is heresy
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I want to cum inside of Nicholas Wilde
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i must go for now, anons
but remember to vote
you know deep in your hearts you want more honey

http://www.strawpoll.me/11464821
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>>5898407
Remmy belongs to all of Pack Street anon.
There is only one of them and they have to learn to share.
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[Hey fuck you I never did a greentext story but I wanna.
So have this Honey X Nick EXPLICIT SMUT you heathens. Set during WildeTimes AU or whatever its called.]

>Late after closing, Honey and Nick were walking around the back of Wilde Times as the badger looked overly excited to show the other something which she deemed ‘very important’.
>The two approached what looked like a tube leading down into the water, as the badger began to climb down into it, pulling the fox along behind her with a tight grip on his wrist.
>At the bottom, the two would exit through a hatch leading into what seemed to be an underwater bunker, full of provisions and even a few cots, much to the fox's curiosity.
>The bunker had glass windows leading outwards, though due to its location there wasn’t much to see outside in the murky waters, surprisingly though none of the windows sported even a tiny leak.
> “So… it's another bunker? You already have one why would you need a second, and wait when did you exactly do this?”
> “It’s for all of us! Well, all of us at Wilde Times of course. Come on what if something goes wrong while we’re at work, we are WAY too far from my original one…”
> “But when did you make this?”
> Honey began to go on about the bunker and how it worked, only to see Nick begin to inspect a panel next to the hatch that led outwards. Before she could even speak up he went to push the large button in the center.
> “H-Hey Nick wait!!! You can’t d-”
> ZZzzzap, the badgers shock collar would cut her off as she tried to yell to him, only to watch him push the button. And with the push, suddenly the hatch slammed shut nearly causing Nick to jump through the ceiling.
> “Great now we’re locked in.”
[CONT]
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>>5898190
> I was thinking of leaving Judy out of this as just a friend

Ah, cool cool. Nick will still wind up with a cute bun girl either way.
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>>5898440
The worst times are when the twins take him out on a walk.

Dual leashes are just a terrible idea.
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>>5898450
> “Wait wait LOCKED IN?! How do you unlock it?!”
> “You see we, well, can’t unlock it that’s not how it works?”
> Nick began to grab at the hatch, his collar going off as he tried to pull open the hatch.
> “Nick relax just, it’ll only be for twelve hours. It’s on a timer you know!”
> “Oh that's ok TWELVE HOURS? Why would you set it for a timer and not be able to unlock it?”
> Honey walked over with a sly grin, patting Nick on the back as she pointed to the timer on the wall.
> “Well duh, if someone inside was actually under sheep control we would be able to stop them in the time.”
> “Didn’t you say this was only for the four of us?”
> “Hey, Finnicks a liable suspect. Anyway, we’re fine I’ve tested this out we’ll be fine, we just have to wait until the timer goes off.”
> Nick just gave her a glare before groaning, walking into the center of the bunker looking around at the numerous boxes lining the shelves.
> Honey would just walk over to him and lean on the fox, grinning a bit as he gave her another look.
> “So what should we do until we get out? I have a ton of movies, snacks, I swear I stashed some games in here..”
> She trailed off into a ramble as Nick opened one of the boxes and began to dig through, until he would go a bit red.
> “Honey seriously?”
> He held out the box, showing it to her as it was filled to the brim with boxes of condoms. Honey just would chuckle a bit.
[CONT]
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>>5898484
> “Oh Clawhauser told me this one he was all ‘well even when in a bunker someone should practice safety’ so I thought he’d throw a hissy fit if when we were in there weren’t any.”
> “Did you even tell him you were actually- didn’t you say this bunker was for the four of us?”
> Honey would just stay quiet as she shrugged, Nick just walking over with a deep grin, pulling out one of the boxes.
> “Don’t these things not last very long?” he said, with a wink.
> “Actually if stored r-.. Nick are you implying what I think you are?”
> Nick didn’t say a word, as he would lean right up to her face. Though, Honey only took him in and pulled him into a deep kiss, their collars beeping as their heart rates began to slowly climb.
> The fox kept the embrace as he would pull her over to one of the cots she had set up near the wall, both of them falling down onto it as he would rest on top of her during their kiss.
> They would lose track of time during their kiss before the badger felt him rubbing his tenderloins against her, pulling back from the kiss.
> Nick climbed down, reaching to unbutton her pants as she would huff at the feeling of his paws rubbing along near her already moist crotch.
> Honey would lean back a bit as he would pull off anything covering her bottom half to reveal her quite soft rump, and her wet folds waiting for him to make her move as she looked down, only to suddenly feel his cold nose poking right at her crotch.
> Nick would huff as he nuzzled right under her soft stomach, feeling her ass-cheeks as his muzzle went right up to her crotch. His tongue would push right up to the cunt, a slow drag bringing it from the base near her rump all the way to the tip as he began to lap.
> “D-dang I forgot.. how good you are at this..”
> Nick kept slurping away along her folds, using his free hands to unbutton his own trousers as his red thick erection flopped out eagerly.

[CONT]
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>>5898505
> He stood up, opening one of the condoms and sliding along his fully erect member as his eyes met hers.
> “Might as well use one, see if they work. Can’t have faulty supplies.”
> Honey only chuckled at this, giving a bit of a groan.
> “Oh come on Nick, just do it already. That was terrible.”
> The fox just smirked as he would reach over her soft paunch, pushing his covered rocket right up against her folds as he would shove it right up to his thick swollen knot.
> Slowly he began to thrust, yipping a bit initially as Honey just drooled and dug her sharp claws into the cot below her in pleasure.
> Slow thrusts became quick humps as he would huff and groan with each push against her. The two would move back and forth, rocking the cot as their motions would cause their heart rates to only climb even further.
> “D-dang Honey… we should… get locked up more often..”
> “Better… you than anyone else!”
>The two groaned and moaned together, slowly building up to their peaks as their collars would beep slowly with their exertion.
> Of course the two ignored their devices as Honey just would wrap her legs around Nicks waist as she held him close to her.
> Nick would grin at this, leaning over her as much as he could as he would thrust harder, attempting to tie himself to her as he smirked in arousal..
> Back and forth, humping in rhythm as Nick would almost get it fully inside, just grinning before looking right at her neck.
[ONE MORE AFTER THIS]
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>>5898528
> Her collar was about to go off… and she noticed his close as well. Before the two could say anything suddenly they felt a large surge go through them.
> bKrrrrrrzzzaaap, both of them jolted as their collars were pushed past the limit by their love-making, causing both to fall clean off the cot, Honey on top of Nick.
> “I… did you also..”
> “Finish? Yes… The shock was it. Why did we wear these inside here?”
> “What, not into this?”
> Honey just pulled herself off, laughing a bit as he was bright red with embarassment. Nick would follow, just leaning up before being pulled close to the large badger in another kiss.
> “So, how long have we been in here?”
> “Fourty minutes…”
> The two looked at each other, shrugging a bit.
> "I have some movies we can watch."
> "...Yeah sure lets watch something."

[DONE. Maybe next time ill just write out something and link it here].
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>>5898450
>>5898484
>>5898505
>>5898528
>>5898545

Nice. Short but sweet with my not-so-guilty pleasure ship.

Hope you or someone caps this.
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>>5898545
>>5898572
Here you go.

Hope it's up to snuff.
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>>5898681
>>5898572
I still don't fully understand writing it out like this, is it even good this way? :y
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>>5897700
Thanks!
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>>5898721
Greentexting is a totally legit way to write stories here. I usually have better luck with greens than traditional prose myself.

It's a bit easier to read with the green arrows than trying to get paragraphs in a limited character post.

>>5898681
Thank you.
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>>5898311
I think it's just now hitting how uncomfortable I would be in Remmy's position.
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>>5898817
Ya done good! he's a very surly fellow
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>>5898545
>"would"
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fukkin', I don't want to discount the one anon's feedback, but is there a better time to post my shit to get it looked at?
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Welp, I leave you all with this doodle as I head off to bed

Sleep tight, /ztg/
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>>5899018
Looks like our greentexter is a roleplayer.
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>>5898930
Good. I've done my job.

>>5898481
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>>5899018
Man this is why im gonna stick to drawing porn. I can't write haha.
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>>5899035
THIS SHIP IS TOO MUCH
IT'S MORE IMPORTANT THAN WILDHOPPS
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>>5899035
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>>5899042
oh no

but also

oh yes
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>>5899032
Post it over and over. Shill with a picture. Give a better description of what you wrote.
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>>5898817
>badge says SAD

KEK
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>>5899042
Perfect. Thanks for drawing that.
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>>5899080
'k.

http://pastebin.com/2Kvrdm5Z

POSSIBLY the first part of a fic too late for last time's TT. War; what is it good for? A backdrop for lots of speculative worldbuilding.

"a little disappointed... grimdark... didn't do anything interesting"
-Anon Weekly
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>>5894119
I enjoyed your stories. but the joke titles need to stop, not becuase it's losing you readers (which it is) it's just that the joke...
the joke just isn't that good.
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>>5899035
>>5898311
>>5897121

I don't know the specifics but someone draw some Remmy x AL where Rem has to bear his neck to Al.

I NEED it
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>>5899035
>not 9.5 ramrod

DROPPED
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>>5899183
remmy with a shapeshifting cock when
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>>5899176
what emotion is this image meant to convey

what is being communicated, here
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>>5899199

these are the wrong questions to ask
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DOOK WUZZLETIN!

Not one of the requests, but I just felt like drawing him. First time doing so as well, I think.
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>>5899035
>realistically sized cock

fuck yeah
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>>5899261
Tube dudes are adorable
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>>5899261
Huffalump Officer Francine x Dook Wuuzletin when?
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>>5899314
That would be like watching a cartoon slinky spiral inside to fuck the cervix
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>>5899348
They don't have to be doing it.

They could be eating some Hunny instead.
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>>5897625
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>>5897176
>>5898744

>Judy was patient as she rode in the back of Finnick’s van. The ride was long, even considering the lack of traffic.
>”Yeah a’ight. This is Nick’s place.” Said Finnick as he pulled over the van, stopping in front of a heavily tagged apartment building.
>”If we’re gonna move his shit, go get him and tell him to come down and speak to me.” He said as he turned off his van and kicked his feet up.
>Judy nodded as she opened the door, then slammed it. As she looked around, she saw so many Nicks!
>Tall ones, short ones, ones wearing Gazelle fashion. It was very overwhelming!
>”Hey Nick, are you ready to move your stuff?” she asked the first nick she saw on his phone.
>”No, He’s inside getting dressed.” Is all he said without turning his attention from his phone.
>Judy apologized as she felt blood rush to her cheeks and she ran in to escape the awkward situation. However… there were just as many Nicks inside as outside!
>”Uh… Nick?” Judy asked to the first one she saw.
>This Nick just lifted his nose, adjusted his purse, and then stormed off.
>Judy blushed a little more as she turned to a Nick more casually dressed. “Uh… are you… Nick?” she asked to the fox leaning against the wall.
>He sighed as he turned to face her, and he said “No, wrong guy. Go upstairs.” He said briefly before going back to idly leaning against the wall, casing the room.
>With an awkward chuckle, Judy leaves and she heads into the stairwell.
>Today just wasn't her day. All of these Nicks and she can't find her Nick!
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>>5899314
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>>5899484
fucking beautiful
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>>5899484
>Signed it
>Used the fill tool and covered my signature.
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>>5899477
Funny. thanks!
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>>5895433
>Gideon, who is the worst.
I have headline that says otherwise.
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Give me encouragement to write my TT. I can't to get started
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>>5899522
You mistake is now my opportunity!
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>>5899552
Hmm.....
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>>5899583
Many glories be to Hanver!
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>>5899569
im goin 2 encourage ur prostate
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>>5899569
D͔͓̝̯̝̖̻̩͘ͅo͚̜̤͡ͅ ͖̣̥͓͖͎͙̀i̻̯̳̥̯͈̤t̷͚̼͞.̪̦͎͇̘̘̯̰͠ͅ
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>>5899583
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>>5899615
It turns out the baked vote 100% gideon
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>>5899623
u cn encourage my prostate nytime bb <3
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Gay Fags
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>>5899757
the best kind of fags
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I dunno i needed to finally do an official ref of her.

Well official for me.
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>>5899378
...Is that good or bad?
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so uh

i guess "review time" is over for the evening then
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>>5899879
wot
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I'm gonna hit the hay. Drawing Fournier was such a pain, I really don't want to deal with the other requests right now.

Drawing Weaselton and the spelunking joke were relaxing, but not enough to make me want to draw a cityscape or a pick with three characters all petting each other. I'll get on it tomorrow.
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>>5899477
>She quickly reached the third floor, and there she saw a Nick in a hogwaiian shirt.
>"Oh thank carrots I found you!" she said, prompting this Nick top turn around. The annoyed look on his face was enough though, she could tell it wasn't her Nick.
>She silently sped down the hallway, until she arrived at Nick's room. She knocked as hard as she could, as fast as she could.
>"Who'se that??" asked thje annoyed voice from within. As the knob turned and the door opened, Nick was there, and his expression instantly lightened up as he saw Judy.
>"Hey carrots! Found the place alright?" he asked as he stood aside for her to walk in.
>"Heh, yeah... uh... I may or may not have confused multiple foxes with you.." she said, head lowered in shame. "We may or may not have to deal with that.."
>Nick smiled, before he started chuckling to the news he was hearing. "Oh Judy, I knew you would confuse me with them! I told Nock and Nack to guide you here."
>Judy stared blankly at him. "Am I that obvios of a speciest?" she asked, confused as Nick chuckled again.
>"Oh no, I know we all look alike. I mean, where do you think we are?" Nick asked as he gave her ear a playful pet.
>Judy nervously laughed as she bent down to pick up a box, with Nick's help.
>Judy was given some dirty stares as she helped Nick load Finnick's van, but at least she wasn't banned from the Nickatorium.

THE END
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>>5900059
Nice, thanks
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>>5899805
There is an art book pdf floating somewhere with different refs you could use! You'll have to ask for it though.
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>>5900115
Nah I based this off of mixing the artbook refs to get it sort of to be an idea id like without going too far.
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may as well check >>5900000
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>>5900049
sleep tight beaverer

>>5900028
das cute, but I don't think Zootopia has litters.
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>>5899821
Good.

Was it not clear?
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>>5900157
>das cute, but I don't think Zootopia has litters.

so you are saying that bonnie and stu literally went through 276 pregnancies ?
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>>5900059
Imagine it.

>A building full of Nicks
>Staring at you with smug looks on their faces
>One of them licks his lips and adjusts his tie
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>>5900105
I'm glad its satisfactory, Anon.
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>>5897329
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>>5900236
Well its sad a lot of Nick's get abandoned. Perhaps one of them wants to go home with you and live life comfortably.
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>>5900269
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>>5899933
>Honey feigns lunacy to keep people away and have reason to own a bunker
>its actually the safehouse for Jack, Skye, and the rest of Mammal Institution 6
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>>5900229
Yup. That's 23 years worth of 1-month terms, puts bonnie at 40 and change, seems to fit.
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>>5900229
That'd only be like 23 years if Bonnie is kept in a state of constant pregnancy.
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>>5900326
>>5900342
First, Judy is 24. So no.

Second, why would gestation length stay the same but not litter size?
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>>5897564
>bitching about someone posting anonymously on an anonymous board
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See? Remmy is best with a small cock.
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>>5900411
>spiderman here to fanfag for comic
actually fuck it, spiderman IS comic, it makes so much sense
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Hey everybody! Finally got home!

What did I miss? How did the conversation about pred-scare time Zootopia go? Who dropped what fics? What drawings happened? I wanna know what you all've been up to before I jump into some writer's workshop!

Here's some music:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=aO_ieHtLNOc
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So when did shitting on Comic become the trendy thing to do? What the actual fuck?
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>>5900451
I did a greentext that was kinda eh about Honey and Nick banging and also did a comic.

And other stuff happened I guess.
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>>5900441
Don't be stupi--

>>5900411
>>5900451
Well, that's quite the timing of arrivals.
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>>5900455
Oh dear god...

...please don't tell me filename?
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>>5897564

Actually the first fic I read was one of Comic's.

https://soundcloud.com/user-759976853/tender-by-comicanon

He asked me to read Miserable Losers a few days ago, so I might give that a try soon to see what all the fuss is about.
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>>5900411
>>5900451

showed up so soo after another....

>>5900441
you may be onto something.
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>>5900480
Oh fuck, that was completely unintentional and I'm sorry. Forgive me.
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>>5900451
I drew Fournier and Wasleton.

And Wesleton spelunking.

And...I know I said I was going to bed, but I'm hungry so I'm gonna stay up a bit and eat.
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>>5900455
It's just one guy with a stick up his ass.

Just like OC the OG.

>>5900451
Hey, there were two greens. A "Nick discovers Jack Savage is actually Jill" and a nice little Nick/Honey.

Nothing else of importance.
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>>5895263
Because you set yourself up for failure you fucking idiot.

"I'll take a bad character who isn't mine, throw up a joke title, and expect people to take me seriously and be upset when they don't! lol this'll work!"
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>>5900028
>pregno bunno

cute
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>>5900157
Having them deal with a bunch of kids at once is funnier than dealing with them one at a time
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>>5900406
That's 23 years of pregnancies when Judy was 5.

>Second, why would gestation length stay the same but not litter size?
That's a good question, but it's what Fru Fru's pregnancy seems to say. The timeframe didn't allow for 9 months, so it's implied the gestation time is the animal's. The dialogue strongly imply there's only one baby on the way, so no litters.
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>>5900604
shrewtgun wedding.
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>>5900604
Yes it does, judy was gone for 2-3 months, and Fru Fru looked 2-3 months along.
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Judy demanding pets
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=0IxZ_pw3CRU
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>>5895263
MisterE, you shouldn't feel down because one of your series didn't catch on.

You have written more shit in a week than I have in the last 2 years, with ease.

People love most of your work.

Hell, there are still people waiting for more Carrie/Remmy that they're willing to overlook the heresy of non-Betty, non-Charlie shipping.

You are a good writer. Don't let what should be a small trip in the road turn into a facefault.
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>>5900451
Hey comic, i made a greentext! Did i do good?
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>>5900625
>Fru Fru looked 2-3 months along.
wut

She was rounder than a ball, I can only see her as on the verge of full term.
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>Its a Miserable Losers episode

I promise I'll go through the thread after I cook some dinner. Lemme just say that it was never my intention to make people mad with the fic-- honestly, I wrote it because people seemed bummed out and I wanted to try and make something for them. Please please please share with me your gripes and concerns and criticisms and tell me all the words I wrote that you absolutely hated, because any and all feedback is much appreciated-- can't write anything better if I don't know what I did wrong!

And heck, if you really didn't like it, have something absolutely, 100% different as a palate cleanser:

http://pastebin.com/16LV1uH5

Its about Jumbeaux the elephant in a cyberpunk Zootopia! Its fun and its action packed and there's even a cameos of characters like Pizzacolt and Mead's chipmunk! Absolutely no relationship drama!

And again: never meant to be bait or anything. Sorry for any negative feelings it sparked.

>>5900411
>>5900441
>>5900478
>>5900488
Naw, not Spidey. I dunno how to 4chan enough to do something like that.

I did draw him a Spidebadger once, though.

I even wrote up a theme song for it. I bet its still in my archives...

>>5900472
Ooh, I can't wait to check it out! Love comics-- or is that not obvious? <3

>>5900545
That Jill storyline is popular! Very interesting. I definitely need to dive in.

>>5900498
No problem, buddy! I go back through the threads anyway, so I'd've seen this sooner or later.

I think its a few people who have strong concerns about me and my work, and I hope they don't feel like they can't share their opinions. I'd love to know whether I should do things differently!

>>5900534
Ahh, your Fournier is awesome! And your Duke is super cute!

Looked like your Fournier was a big change in style. Bet it was tough!

Sleep tight, badger! Dream of wood.
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>>5900717
>badger

I didn't mean to Raccoonfag-meme you, beaver...
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>>5900717
Ill probably repost the comic once the new thread starts so keep an eye out.
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>>5900769
Can do!
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>>5900782
easiest Halloween costume - just take the VR headset off
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>>5900451
Comic, sorry if I bring uncomfy questions, but I must unburden myself of this doubt.

What's the real deal between you and Dotaluit?
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>>5900717
and you are?
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>>5900717
>Naw, not Spidey.

Whew, that's a relief.
Nothing I hate more than showing up to a Halloween party in the same costume as someone else...

>>5900761
Oh he had it coming at least once.
Trust me.
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someone tell me what to quickly doodle before i go to bed
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>>5900937
Nick slipping on a wet puddle for no reason.
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>>5900937
nick looking at judy lovingly when shes not paying attention
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>>5900937
Mrs wilde telling nick that he's too old to keep fucking his mom.
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>>5900717
>I even wrote up a theme song for it. I bet its still in my archives...
I cannot believe that I almost dumped all my fics and my grad school work, but this thing got saved.

Spidebadger, Spidebadger
If there's a villain, he will catch'er
Spins a web, digs a burrow!
He's the mustel-rachnid superhero!
Look out! Here comes the Spidebadger!

Is he strong? Listen bud:
he claws through steel like its mud
He's stop crime at any length,
Crushing evil in his super jaw strength!
Look out! Here comes the Spidebadger!

He'll be fiiiiiighting crime, whether its day or its night
But he prefeeeers the day, because he has poor eye sight!

Spidebadger, Spidebadger
Friendly Zootopian Spidebadger
Fills the bad guys up with hate
They know this badger is one they can't bait
Look out! Here comes the Spidebadger!
Look out! Here comes the Spidebadger!!!

>>5900828
dotAluit, I think!

I love their art, and their comic was half the inspiration for Miserable Losers. I dunno if they ever read it, though.

I have the flighty thought that I'll post ML on AO3 once I get some time to get my hands bloody and do a thorough edit, plus when Sprinkah is done with their comic, and dedicate it to them both. I dunno, seems a nice thing to do.

Whenever they post, I'm always happy to see them. Loved their TT submissions and their comic about shock collar judy, and their sleepyhead Jack/Skye picture is one of my favorite favorites.

I saw someone say that I wrote ML as an insult or something to them, once. If that's what this is regarding, no. One of my biggest concerns with ML was remaining true to the source materials as close as possible, out of respect for the authors. It painted the way the characters were portrayed, such as Judy being unfair and Nick being oblivious. I just wanted to put a story forth in an existing AU, is all.
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>>5900952
THIS
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>>5900937
SIGN THIS
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>>5900846
Gazelle is basically perfect. Dedicated, peak physical fitness, excellent ground strokes. And she's so tall.
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>>5900937
Mrs. Wilde inflates herself and lets young!nick play with her like a giant ball
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>>5900976
youre not my dad
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>>5900717
>>5900903
Oh come on, just because I got in on the joke one--er...

Seven times.

Totally uncalled for.
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>>5900937
Mr. Big or Frufru on a polar bear's head controlling him Ratatouille style
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>>5900864
>Gazelle in a turtleneck
fucking unf.
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VRbunRaccoonfagBeaver threesome when
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>>5900884
Hello! My name’s comicanon, and I’m the VRbit! I do readings of people’s fics and upload them to soundcloud!

You can listen to some of my past read throughs here:
https://soundcloud.com/comicanon

Some of them are blind reads, which is me reading the fic without knowing anything about it. That way, the author can hear my instant reactions about what I’m thinking through a fic. It's sort of like a blind play test with a video game! At the end, I give my summary, thoughts and feedback for the piece.

Others are audiobooks, or me reading the fic in a radio drama style. It's sort of an acted out supplement of the work meant for entertainment purposes. I'm going to be reading Water Under the Bridge in this style soon!

And the reason I’m the VRbit is because I rolled a bunny as my Zoosona, and I work in VR, so someone called it a VRbit! I thought it was super cute.

>>5900903
I know what I'm going as!

>>5900937
>filename

You're too freakin' funny, Visiti!
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>>5900937
Nick getting dubs.
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>>5901026
That muzzle looks like you could snap it in two like some sort of candy bar.
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>>5901007
Call me, we need to talk about your tumblr.
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>>5901075
>asians have squinty features

thats racist
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>>5901075
BREAK ME OFF A PIECE OF THAT NICKNACK BAR!
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>>5901026
>Mulan AU

I really like the idea of Judy dressing up as Jack to go to war
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>>5898311

>forcing people to dom you

my joke fetish is now real??????
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>>5900937
Quickly doodle?

....A nude single of tigress Fangmeyer?
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it's 5 am and I need to have a drink.

How was your night, /ztg?
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>>5901008
Aww, you know I love you, you waffle-tailed river-mouse.

>>5901061
Nice Hugh costume!
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>>5901144
Hey man, joke fetishes are important.

They make the world go round, and bring forth a hearty laugh.
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>>5900967
Did you ever blow up at anyone in the thread about Miserable Losers?
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>>5901176
The night's still young here in Burgertown.

It's goin' alright I guess.
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>>5901106
have a (you) you bastard
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Alright its page 10, how long till new thread?
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>>5901187
>Nice Hugh costume!
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>>5901176
Can't complain, pretty comfy atm. What's up with you? What's kept you up and drinking?
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>>5901061
finally... my question has been answered, I never knew before if vrbun and Comicanon were the same person... (by stupid it may seem) now you answer me, thanks...
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>>5901176
Eh.

Had to clean my bathroom, but other than that, the night's been pretty chill.

Nice art & greens were posted tonite.
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>>5901224
Bloop

>>5901260
>>5901260
>>5901260
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>>5901176
It's 11, i'm going to sleep and hope to not wake up
Goodnight
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>>5901250
I didn't know this for a while either, don't feel bad.
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>>5900189
I can never tell with >>5899378 as it looks either excited or scared.
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>>5901277
Keep hopin, man
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>>5901087
What did he mean by this?
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>>5894119

Hey MisterE, saw this and I wanted to let you know that I have always liked your writing.

Some things that I might do differently:

Maybe go back and edit the titles to something less lolrandom. They're good stories, but anything called "electric boogaloo" is not going to be taken at full value.

Now on to the content. Please accept the caveat that I just noticed your third story, and haven't had a chance to read it. You stated that you are trying to make her into more of a solid character. What is your game plan for this? The reason that /trash/ hated her is because she's a Mary Sue, and she throws her dick at anything and everything.

Set aside the point that she's going to get slapped with a harassment lawsuit for half of the stuff she's done. Why is she so sexually compulsive? Was she abused previously, and she's repeating the cycle? Was she neglected, and that was the only way she found that she could reliably get attention? Does she have some sort of personality disorder, or maybe she's got the assburgers and can't read other people's emotional state?

Instead of more random bar crawl adventures, maybe take a look at what else she does in her off time? What does she do if she's forced to be subdued, like a day in court or at an official function? What is her family like? Maybe she has a second job? The great thing that I've found about the TT event is that it gives you something semi-random to crystallize a story around, maybe try one of those creative writing prompt websites that give you a random Noun-Verb-Adjective combo, and try to come up with something that uses it.

Sorry, I hope this is helpful in some way. Like another Anon said, maybe set it down for a little while, come back later when it starts to itch and you have something that you're DYING to put down on paper.
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>>5902068
Take me.



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