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Zootopia General: Ungulates Edition

Pastebin: pastebin.com/iYDU8g2T
Booru: zoo.booru.org
ZTArchive: ztarchive.com
Desustorage: desuarchive.org/trash
Previous thread (bstats): archive.b-stats.org/trash/thread/5761729
Current TT Theme: Military/War/Law Enforcement (SUBMISSIONS ARE DUE TOMORROW)
More information on TT: derpy.me/trashthematicthursdays
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Foxe
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>halloween is the next theme
CARROT KING
GLORY BE
GLORY
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>>5769536
I'm just a dumb bunny...

https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11843498/1/Zootopia-Hardboiled
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Pastebun Anon here, Scary Godmother started, next shitty Halloween movie is up to all of you.

https://www.watch2gether.com/rooms/tyvr20rknphgjr6rg2
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>>5769279
Bun is not for sexual
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Dat last panel
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>>5769279
>(SUBMISSIONS ARE DUE TOMORROW)
oh it's okay, I've got plenty of time of course I can spend another couple of hours on vidya
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>>5770051
GET OUT OF MY HEAD
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>>5769705
How is this zootopia related?
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>>5770380
How is this zootopia related?
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>>5770380
>>5770411
How is this zootopia related?
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>>5770380
>>5770411
>>5770423
How is this zootopia related?
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>>5770411
>>5770380
>>5770423
How is this zootopia related?
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>>5770380
>>5770411
>>5770423
How is this Zootopia related?
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>>5770380
>>5770411
>>5770423
This was a mistake. It must die
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Reshill for new thread!

Becca And Aafiya's Pseudo-Penis Adventure 2: Electric Boogaloo.

Things get heated between two spotted hyenas, and they later spend some quality time together 'bonding'! You won't want to miss this one, I promise.

http://archiveofourown.org/works/8267707
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>>5770380
>>5770411
>>5770423
>>5770446
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>>5770463
What the fuck is this thread right now?
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>>5770482
zootopia related
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>>5770474
How is this zootopia related?
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>>5770473
>the bra hanging off Bunanon's chest
kek
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>>5770482
Conifer Ontent.
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I WATCHED ZOOTOPIA AND THEY GOT THE CHARACTERS WRONG
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>>5770495

>Ignore
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>>5770520
Delet
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>>5770473
KEK
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Nick is cuter than Judy.
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This thread is a masterpiece
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>>5770520

Oh no! Some untrustworthy fox has hustled this young bunny out of her clothes!
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>>5770534
Factually correct.
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>>5770534
agreed

>>5770541
agreed
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>>5770541
This thread was a mistake. It must die.
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>>5770520
cub thread?
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>>5770473
>JoJo Gud
>Bun bra
>Comic mastermode
>Random Nobby and Weaver in the distance
>Big guy Alec
>Chumpy, Canidae and Tegaki
You're the best ReplyAnon, I'm dying.

Time to go to bed. Good night /ztg/!
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>>5770534
I dony think jes a cutter, but then again it's always the people you'd least expect
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>>5770544
Why you gotta assume it's a fox. Coulda been a deer or shit.
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>>5770534
And Gideon is cuter than Nick
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>>5770511
Are you implying there was a manga before the movie?
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less then 50 replies in and this thread's gone to hell
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>>5770534
yes
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>>5770645
People feeding officer content (You)s...
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ztgcensus.tumblr.com/submit
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It has been 7 months since the movie was released in the US and I still love FinNick!!!!
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>>5769505
>The Shadow Over Bunnyburrow
>At the Burrows of Madness
>The Thing in the Pie
>The Hopps' Farm Horror
>The Call of the Carrots
>THE CARROT KING
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>>5770745
They are very sweet
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does anyone have any cute judies they're willing to share?
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>>5770768
This is one of my cutest, premium material.
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>>5770768
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>>5770744
I was thinking of submitting today, but only if I can draw quick enough
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>>5770768
Just this one, most of my cute pics are Nick based.
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>>5770645
Today was a good day. Usually it takes 1 post or less for the whole thing to go to shit.
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>>5770473
>Sexy Tegaki
W OA H
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Any references of the Hopps house?
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>>5770380
>How is this zootopia related?
>>5770411
>>5770423
>>5770446
>>5770461
>>5770463
>>5770474
>>5770482
>>5770490
>>5770498
>>5770541
>>5770615
>>5770645
>>5770730
>>5770807
How is this zootopia related?
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>>5770856
Yes, but who was the phone??
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>>5770852
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the fuck is happening
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Yo, can I get that discord invite?
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>>5770852
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>>5770473
>vrbit
Lel
When did people decide to turn him into a leather daddy?
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>>5770964
>leather
REEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE
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>>5770964
He's the cute bunny next door
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>>5770964
That's just what he feels like when he reads your stories
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cuck
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>>5770964
This plus when somebody mentioned he was a dom.
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https://discord.gg/Kz43S
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>>5771023
>1:32:30
Shameful
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>>5771049
cucked.
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WAAZAAAP THREAD
DRIUNLK REQUESTS
THRIPW ME YOUR REQUEST Y S
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>>5770942

https://discord.gg/7mYYp
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>>5771178
love nobby's betty so much
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>>5771204
Judy bondage
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>>5771204
A very, super excited fox
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>>5771208
>>5771178

best betty
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>>5771204
Finnick beating someone with a bat.
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>>5771204
Betty mimicking Remmy's bleat
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>>5771204
Finnick screaming at Nick
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Su3ovMsFXMg
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>>5771208
>>5771235
She's a beast of cuteness!

>>5771204
Nick drinking champagne with an annoyed expression while Judy belches and crushes a beer can with her forehead.
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>>5771204
Remmy discovering Betty's collection of sheep porn.
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>>5771277
>Nick drinking champagne with an annoyed expression while Judy belches and crushes a beer can with her forehead.

That's a good image
solid request, anon
i'm not the artist i just wanted to compliment you
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>>5771228
JUDY BON?DAGE
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>>5771315
Close enough
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>>5770641
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>>5771315
hotter than anything Alecs ever done
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>>5771315
oh baby
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>>5771308
You're very kind, I just really like the idea of Judy acting hickish. Its adorable!
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>>5771332
If only I had a chin like that...
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>>5771230
SUPAR EXICRTED FOXDC
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>>5769774
You know, this picture makes me wonder just how long the Mammal Inclusion Initiative has been in place and what exactly Judy's plans were before it came about.
Bellwether mentions at Bogo's office that the MII is "really paying off", meaning either the program is still in its early stages or that, before Judy, it hasn't really been a success until recently. If it is in its early stages, what was Judy planning on doing before it since the ZPD seemed to only accept Megafauna mammals at the time. Lionheart also mentions that Judy isn't just the first rabbit officer, she is also the first officer from the MII program (which is kind of crazy, there has to have been some non-megafauna mammals that wanted to be police officers too.)
So either the MII has been shit until recently (which is hard to swallow) or it has only been recently introduced. Maybe Lionheart has been pushing it for years and Judy held onto the hope that it would pass so she could be an officer?
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>>5769279
I want that Bore to make tender love to me
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>>5770520
>Sixteen year old Nick babysitting eight year old Judy
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>>5771402
I'm sick of this meme
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>>5771245
AE?KFNEµ
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>>5771418
it's not a meme when there's non-meme content
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>>5771397
too bad, he's taken.

>>5771426
Okay, anon. It's time to go to bed.
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>>5771402
>>5771418
But it can be cute!
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>>5770745
I agree, that picture especially.
We need more after-sex related stuff.
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>>5771260
>>5771277
>>5771308
>>5771330
TOO DRUNK RTUOT KKEEP GOING
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>>5771318
cute as fuck
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>>5771426
if you squint hard enough you can make out the pain and anguish of a tortured artist
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>>5771446
You're a cool dude drunken line maker, have a good rest.
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>>5771446
You drinking has gotten out of hand, Bobo.
You're gonna need an intervention.

Or as you French call it "une intervention".
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will this general ever get a get?
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>>5771441
But I thought he ded
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>>5771383
Judy probably didn't care about the MII. It's just that without it, she'd have a march harder time (maybe even impossibly so) getting into the academy.

She's just really lucky she applied at a time when there was a policy in place where a bunny cop would make Zootopia look good.
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>>5771458
KEK
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>>5771426
>>5771458
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=n-9u5xfRyrw
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>>5771491
We got one a while back. TLHG shitposted about us and in here as is their custom.

>>5771496
The sheep is dead. The Chumbore love is eternal.
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I wanna write a story but dont know how to start. Any suggestions?
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>>5771563
Well first thing's first. What kind of story do you wanna write? Clean or Lewd?

Then we pick genre: comedy, drama, feels, horror, action, romance, etc.
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>>5771517
Chumpy the edgy hyena
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>>5771517
>Bore walks alone in a hallway of ghosts.png
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>>5771563
I'll tell you what I've told others
A good story has a basic flow; beginning, rising action, climax, falling action, end.
Start with a description of the person or place where your story starts. Start with a descriptor, or a thought, or a feeling
E.g
>A fridgid gust of wind assailed Judy as she stood on the sidewalk
That's basically it: a description of the person, place, feeling, or action.
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>>5771260
BEAAAEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE
UPM§YIL/§
IM REDRUJN
IM drunK
REMEMBER MUYJGH NAME
BOBOLESIGNR
boboelseifn g
bobolESINGE
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>>5771445
Might want to suggest that for next TT. I don't think a pure lewd suggestion can win, but it doesn't hurt to try.
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>>5771693
this is true performance art
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>>5771693
Good lord
What the fuck, man
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>>5771498
I don't want to say it is complete luck, Judy mentions she has been working for this her whole life. She had to have realized, at some point, that the ZPD only accepted Megafauna mammals into their ranks. As far as we have seen in the movie their smallest officers are wolves which still tower over Judy. Without the MII, she just wasn't going to get in. So was her plan just to keep sending in letters until she is accepted?
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>>5771563
>Judy took Nick small puppy prick and placed it between her pregnant tummy and fluffy dewlap. The old fox almost came right now and then, but managed to hold it in to avoid embarrass. As she worked his shaft, her hands were slowly drawn to the large mound of her tummy, and as she caressed it and moved like a piston along Nick's dick, her fingers slowly slipped to her womanly folds. Every time she'd move, she'd feel Jack kits move inside her, she'd remember the great times she had with him, his trust, his smile, even his touch was enough to make a dim day a thousand times brighter... nothing like the cynical and ever sulking fox whose red prick was sullying her dewlap. As he started reaching his limit, the doe herself started reaching her own limit, and as his seed wastefully stained the grey fur of her dewlap, her legs buckled as she let out a moan that brought tears to the scum standing in front of her: "Jack!"

You carry on from here, no need to thank me.
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>>5771693
Alright, let's move to a new thread because this one can only go downards after this.
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>>5771517
>love
I'm afraid it might be a one-sided relationship these days
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>>5771693
heilig verdammte Scheiße mien sides
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>>5771693
WITNESSED
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>>5771693
Random = comedy!

Nice taste in music, though
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>Caravan Palace
Good taste
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>>5771204
Super late on this but Nick playing piano and singing "When I'm 64" to Judy
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>>5771426
>AE?KFNEµ
is this how people think drunk people type
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>>5771776
>cumpy will return
>one day
>....
>one
>...
>day
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>>5771797
He did, just not here.
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>>5771693
Damn Bobo, chill.
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>>5771797
well, probably not but like
that's okay
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>>5771783
dude
DSHAOUT UP
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>>5771797
I thought that one wasn't a Chombi piece?
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>>5771693
Drunk French people are the most beautiful of creatures. This is a magical journey.
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>>5771852
Kek
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>>5771473
NO
i already rthrew up
so im goof
now im drinkingw ater
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>>5771852
>p
i know rut
$^?
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>>5771441
PTTFDT <
ANON
IM BOBOLESINGE FFS
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Did we just die?
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>>5772061
We've always been dead
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>>5772061
youre already dead
this is hell
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>>5772061
We're all dead.
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>tfw iji will never ever draw for us again
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>>5771755
shoz fdo you knoz i; listening to thqt>
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>>5772090
Best to die a hero
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>>5772061
>>5772068
>>5772077
>>5772089
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>>5772090
Too bad. Leverage, while not the greatest thing ever, was well drawn, and kinda neat.
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>>5772061
yee

rip zoopoopia

couldn't last till fukin la muamba
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>>5772090
do they have a tumblr or something?
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>>5772181
http://zooijiness.tumblr.com/
http://heebieiji.tumblr.com/ (Which is dead, had her NSFW stuff)
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post cuck
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>>5772090
I still see her in the discord, just playing games tho
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>>5772181
http://zooijiness.tumblr.com
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>>5772215
Anti-cuck deployed.
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>>5772090
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>>5772215
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>>5772215
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>>5771377
Yessss

>>5772061
Yessss
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>>5769279
AIY AIY AIY AIY AIYYY
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=sblR0eIRW-I
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>>5772406
kcuc is gnodab
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>>5769279
>nearly ungulate-free Ungulates Edition thread

This thread has got a serious finger fetish.
Come on people, digits are overrated.
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>>5772491
This was a mistake. It must die.
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>>5772491

>>5772504
Xenofoxes don't make mistakes.
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>>5772471
>nodab
fak u
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>>5772324
Wouldn't donk be the cuck?
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>>5772529
No, Donk isn't gay.
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>>5772552
Oh, right. How could I forget
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Has Weaver been on the threads at all today?

Is the Weavis kill¿
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>>5772604
nu pagg sdred wen???:DD
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>>5772496
Most zootopian ungulates have fingers.
Not all of course Mr Oats.
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yknow it always confused me that people say jack is cucking nick when he and judy arent even a couple
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>>5772653
>implying
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>5772653
nice bait
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>>5770762
>Panel 1
SFX: カチッ = kachi = kuhchink (lighter not working)
Finnick: "Tch, Hey Nick, gimme a light."
>Panel 3
SFX: ムギュ = mugyu = noses squishing from snootleboops
>Panel 4
Finnick: "...... What was that just now."
Nick: "Please just forget it."
>Underlying text
Nick wanted to try a cigarette kiss
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>>5772653
that's because wildehopps is canon
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>5772684
le ebin greentext maymay
olololo
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>>5772687
Awww, thank you translatorAnon. That's really sweet.
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>>5772633
Yeah, but more fingers isn't always better. Four makes for a pretty crowded hand, with all those fragile little fingers getting in each other's way.

Best stick with one or maybe even three for optimal aesthetics.
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>>5772677
>>5772692
it's not though. even the creators said they're just friends. it makes me think this place just has a fetish for cucking.

>>5772684
not bait. i'm being serious.
i was hoping for a legitimate answer, but if you wanna be a shithead okay.
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>>5772524
>doesn't know about badong
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>>5772728
Yeah, that's fair. I see your point.
I'm pretty sure ones without hooves only have three fingers.
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>Judy usually asks Nick for a peanutbutter and fluff sandwich in the morning before work.
>Nick, feeling a little frisky after waking up with morning wood,
>And his darling wife telling him 'no sex while Cotton is sleeping over,' decided to add a little something 'extra' to her morning routine.
>He rubbed one off in her sandwich, giving it a nice, creamy center filling.
>Washing up, he brings Judy her morning snack, and Cotton a bowl of frosted oats.
>Smiling to himself, he goes back to the kitchen to grab his own meal, but not before hearing Judy's voice, "You want my sandwich, Cotton?"
>Nick froze, and quickly spun around-
>The little bunny said nothing, instead taking the sandwich, and immediately biting into it.
>Eyes widening, and his mouth in a grimmace, he watched as small ropes of his seed stretched from Cotton's mouth to the sandwich-
>She licked her lips, and then licked at his dripping necter as it seaped from between the bread-
>Judy turned her head, apparently seeing his shocked expression, towards Cotton, and her ears shot up.
>Slowly, Judy turned to face Nick, and he saw a look of horror pass on her face.
>Meanwhile, Cotton's eyes went from the sandwich, and focused straight on his.
>From behind Judy, little Cotton brought her paw up to her face, curled her fingers together it as if he were grasping something, opened her mouth, and brought her paw back and forth-
>She spoke, "Wow, I didn't know pineapple fluff was real!"
>Still facing Nick, Judy brought a paw up to her mouth, and pressed a finger to her lips, signaling him to be silent.
>The little bunny went back to 'enjoying' her meal.
>He nodded, slowly, and quickly went to the kitchen to grab his meal.
>And some napkins, for Cotton.
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>>5772739
>it makes me think this place just has a fetish for cucking.
>this place

m8

i have bad news

no matter where you go if it is zootopia iti s cuking
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>>5772767
>three fingers
Well four.

Oh, you mean three plus a thumb.
I always forget about those fiddly little things.
They're all just extra digits to me.
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>>5772653
>>5772739
Partly because the word "cuck" is used sometimes out of context, and partly because a good portion of the fanbase wants them to get together to the point of having fanfiction always have at least one of them start out with feelings for each other (generally Nick).

However, there is this weird fetish for making Nick suffer/work for the love of Judy so in comes Jack Savage.

There isn't really a legtimate answer honestly.
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>>5772841
I meant three.
Gazelle has three fingers, and so do a lot of the ungulates, like Bogo.

Pigs also have three fingers in Zootopia.

Oats and horses are sort of an anomaly in that they have just a hoof, but I think that's pretty cool.
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>>5772813
ARMASYLL...
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>>5772813
we need more cotton lewds
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>>5772855
ah, i see. thanks for explaining.

i'm not against the idea of them getting together, but i also don't think shipping them with other people should count as cucking unless you're literally setting out to write a story where they're getting cucked. based on what you're saying though it looks like a lot of people go that route. shame but i guess romance fics need some form of conflict.

>>5772836
shame.
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>>5772920
:V
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>>5772885
With Ungulates being such a huge portion of Zootopian demographics,
I imagine most things are built for hoofed fingers rather than pawed ones,
or maybe even built for equines for things that need maximum accessibility.
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Reminder to bully your bun at least once a day
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Does anybody else hate the idea that horses don't have fingers? I know it's technically canon but it's still completely retarded.
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>>5773090
yes
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>>5773079
I think I overdid it. He doesn't believe he should breed anymore. How do I fix this, he's been less energetic
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>>5773090
It certainly sucks for horses.
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>>5773090
Only design I don't like.
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>>5773073
I'm not saying that. It makes sense since horses do have hooves. If you didn't make things with them in mind then that's some sort of abstract discrimination.

I'm just saying it looks like most Zootopian ungulates DON'T have hooves. They have fingers. And the discussion was regarding the fact that the ungulates in the OP image don't have hooves too. I'm just trying to provide an answer as to why.
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>>5773109
Clearly you're just gonna have to let him fuck you for once.
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>>5772949
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>>5773109
Get him hard, stick him in a female bun, no protection. Force him to breed.
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>>5773184
That's rape anon!
Don't rape your buns.
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>>5773202
It's just tough love. He needs to know that you think he's worthy of breeding.

And what better way of doing that than by giving him the gift of fatherhood?
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>>5773090
>>5773114

I'm actually kinda upset that they have fingers in the comic.

It's something unique to the genus, and I don't want to see diversity among mammals taken away just for plot convenience.

>>5773155
Yeah, I can't say I like it when people call those hands hooves when they've got fingers and all.
I wasn't commenting on the lack of hooves in the OP, but the lack of ungulates in the ungulate thread that followed.
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>>5773202
Rabbits can't be raped.
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>>5773159
If that'll make him feel better I'd be willing. Then I'll give him confidence to do >>5773228
Thanks, anons!
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>>5773202
why?
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>>5773238
>I wasn't commenting on the lack of hooves in the OP, but the lack of ungulates in the ungulate thread that followed.
Ah, I see. My mistake then! Guess I went on a long rant for nothing.

>It's something unique to the genus, and I don't want to see diversity among mammals taken away just for plot convenience
This I can agree with. I think it's pretty neat that they have hooves.
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>>5773254
Something something something bunsogyny, fuckface.
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>>5773254
That's racist.

>>5773271
You wouldn't rape a fox, would you? It's unfair!
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>>5773304
Rabbits never don't want sex. Your rabbit probably wants sex right now. It'd be bad to not give them what they want
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>>5773318
Yes, and I also wouldn't pick a fight with a bengal tiger, life is unfair, your point?

Foxes != Rabbits.
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Just skimmed some of the threads from a few days ago. What on Earth was up with that AU of young Nick and Judy?
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>>5772813
cap'd

>>5773360
which one
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>>5773318
I'm not entirely opposed to getting raped.

Especially after last time.
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>>5773360
>>5773377
The adopted siblings AU?
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>>5773397
this?
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>>5773360
You mean the one that's totally adorable?
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>>5771383
>>5771498
>>5771718
Another theory is that Dawn was the one to push for it to either help out the little guy or it was already in place, she just thought the ZPD could use the help of a scared, racist little bunny.
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>>5773377
Ya, this one>>5773397

where Nick hung himself because he didn't want to be a fox anymore.
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>>5772922
Generally most call it cucking when Nick has feelings for Judy, only for her to get with some other mammal (and by mammal, I mean bunny.)

Romance fics need some conflict, but personally I hate it when it comes in the form of a third party aka a love rival. I'd rather the conflict come from how different in personality Nick and Judy are.
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Who is this artist? If they go the comic series route, they should really stick to this guy. Same colors too.
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>>5772653
Yea, but what if they are in a relationship?
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>>5773453
>adorable
That's a strange way to spell Depressing
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>>5773500
i'd love to read something like that actually. if you know any good fics like that send em my way.

cucking seems like a really cheap and weak plot device. it can work sometimes if the third party is used as an actual fucking character, but that's so rare.
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>>5773536
What?
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>>5773502

https://twitter.com/gurihiru
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>>5773577
Did you miss the part where Judy says she hated Nick because he was a fox and Nick tried to hang himself because he didn't want to be a fox anymore? That sibling AU was depressing as fuck
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>>5773657
Can you post them all?
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>>5773657
Anything can be made depressing, especially if the incest, abuse or melodramatic abloo bloo tearjerker Anon's get a hold of it. It can also be made very sweet, I like the idea of them growing up together and being great sibling buddies.
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>>5773657
It ended with them cuddling anon. They made up in the end.
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We entering feelsmode now?

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=hQC6TMazIxk
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>>5773536
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>>5773690
I thought it ended with Nick hanging himself then getting reborn as hopps child.
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>>5773520

but what if its judy walking in on nick with NEGA JACK (seen here: >>5772471 )
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>>5769791
Boy have I got news for you

Reshilling for new bread, DoxFick ch 5 is up
https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12009955/5/Dox-Fick
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>>5773749
When will James show his sisters the full thrust of his love? He seems to get blue balled each chapter.
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>>5773749
hooray!
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>>5773520
I pick the C U C K option.
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>>5773799
That would be the first choice. Nick has to accept her rabbit ways. Respect her culture.
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>>5773812
It's also the second choice. Because his being invited was an afterthought.
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daily reminder Nick is so emotionally attached to Judy after opening up to her about his past that he cuddles her in private any chance he gets and lets go of his affection to her and her alone.

im tired
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Can someone post lewds of Rose's skunk? I know she drew a few, but I don't think she posted them anywhere.
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>"Is my mommy going to be okay?"
>Nick Wilde, the newest addition to ZPD precinct 1, had no idea how to answer that question
>The little bobcat standing before him looked at him with wide, tear glazed eyes
>"She said it was my fault. She said I did this. Is my mommy dead?"
>Never before had he had to answer such a question
>Never before had he been unsure of how to answer
>He crouched down, bringing his paw into the kits
>"The medics will do everything they can, I'm sure that if your mommy is strong, she'll make it."
>Such a lie
>Nick had never had any qualms about lying before, but in the face of such an innocent child...
>As the kit broke down, he brought the trembling form into his arms
>He looked to the mother, laid down atop a stretcher, eyes milky in death, wrists stained sanguine with from opened veins
>A suicide. His first death on the job.
>There was absolutely no way of saving her
>She had died long ago, no amount of medical care could ever bring her back to the world of the living
>And so, he held the little kit
>So full of innocence he was, so unaware of what the idea of death truly meant
>Nick thought back to when his own father had died
>John Wilde died a swift, peaceful death caused by Myocardial infarction in his sleep
>He still remembered the confusion he had felt upon finding the body
>Confusion, terror, and emptiness
>Nick understood what it was like to lose a parent
>And so, Nick held the kit
>He held the kit until both of their tears ceased
>He refused to leave the kit, at least until another member of the family arrived
>He didn't want the little one to be alone

I'm drunk and remembering horrible things. Sorry /trash/
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>>5773888
Reminder that Judy always wants sex, even when Nick just wants to cuddle
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>>5773723
Where's the last one?
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>>5773657
I don't remember the hanging part
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>>5773927
nothing to be sorry about man

stay safe anon
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>>5773927
>I'm drunk and remembering horrible things. Sorry /trash/
I want to hug you
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>>5773941

Was a derivative green:
>>5728221
>>5728338
>>5730116
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>>5773780
he got to blow a load in ch2
I can also confirm that the lewd night of ch3 involved his sisters milking him into a hotel towel, and the at-home shower post ch4 involved a situation very similar to ch2

I'll probably revise this chapter so he gets off too, I wrote most of this while tired and feel I can do better.

>>5773781
>incaseofhollow
y-you found a way to reverse the curse? Jolly cooperation and proper praising restores humanity?
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>>5773941
An anon added to the sibling AU by writing a pretty soul-wrenching greentext in the same thread where Nick tries to hang himself after Judy says she hates him. Unfortunately I didn't save it
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>>5773927
I want to say to anyone who wants to work in EMT, Law Enforcement, nursing, fire rescue.

Be ready for the worst humanity has to offer.
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>>5773927
Sorry you're feeling down anon.

By any chance, are you in emergency services?
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damn, I wish I could draw
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>>5774035
unsure of going judy wilde or nick hopps, on one hand small, close family, on the other, isolated nick in a huge family.
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>>5774106
Start now. Then when the next fandom rolls around you'll be able to draw
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>>5774117
>start now
I know practice makes perfect and all,
but I'm sooooo lazy.
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>>5774117
Yes and no. Army medic.
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>>5774064
I know, but when will he fuck them proper? Can it keep going on with a rub down or grinding?
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>>5774088
You're preaching to the choir. I'm trying to become a cop, and I've heard hundreds of stories. Things don't bother me as much as they used to, but it never really goes away. From what I'm told, same goes for people who actually experience it.

It's funny though. The layperson probably thinks cops have the worst stories. And some of them are pretty bad. But the worst stories I've heard come from EMTs.
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>>5774161
>tfw you practice but still aren't good
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>>5774189
>tfw you know you'd get better with even more practice but you want to be better now.
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>>5774180
maybe the rabbity urge to bone will overtake them on a summer trip back to the family farm :^)
I wonder if the girls will be willing to share?

purely speculation, mind you
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>>5774178
>>5773928
Wrong @, sorry drunk
Military medic whose done some Ambulance work civilian side.
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https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ojydNb3Lrrs
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GUYS

Mash-up of "kit Nick & Judy" and "DoxFick" WHEN???
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>>5774103
I gave two replies to the wrong people:
>>5774267
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>>5773969
Absolutely genius
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>>5774288
stahp
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>>5774324
I thought so. I'm hoping to break into law enforcement after college, but I've trained with firefighters and spoken to a fair number of EMTs. I had a feeling you were some kind of medical tech. All the ones I knew never called a heart attack a heart attack either.

I won't ask what it is you're remembering, but stay strong brother. And don't let the alcohol mess you up further. No shame in seeing a head shrinker if you need to.
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>>5774357
I guess if you lose a hoof you can trade "up".

Anyone know who did this?
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>>5773969
adorbs, Rose
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https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=726VO_ZPHwA
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>>5774437
>trade up

Or down.
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>>5774361
Actually, that kinda piques my curiosity

Not sure if it's good or bad that that doesn't bother me
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>>5774079
This is the first part. There's a second part by a different anon, but I don't have the cap for it.
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Damn... well I know what pic I'm putting at the top of my colour practice to-do list
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I'm trying to write a story about a guy who had brought his wife and kid safe inside of Zootopia while he's being tourtured by a mob somewhere in the north. The only thing that's keeping him alive is the cold and the fear of his family being harmed, but i dont know if it's to dark or strays away from the SM
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>>5774079
>>5774513
Here's the whole thing.
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>>5774584
You definitely don't need to worry about a fic being too dark. We passed the point where that mattered a long time ago
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>>5774630
Yay
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Bun rumps are a miracle of evolution. Firm enough for powerful leg muscles yet soft and fluffy to cushion the relentless pounding they take daily
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>>5774597
Man, I'm glad there was a good end, but still, that really is depressing
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>>5774504
I'd give it a go, but it's most likely just be my previous chapters altered slightly, with find/replace james/nick [bunnames]/judy

Any ideas for anything that'd make it unique?
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>>5774597
Nick then had permanent brain damage from oxygen deprivation
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>>5774669
Pegging
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>>5774695
stil smrter than u kukboi
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>>5774656
>ywn be the bun
canines suck
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>>5774695
pls no
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>>5774669
Nick and Judy don't understand knotting
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Hey, I'm getting back to my heat week story.

Does anyone know who lives where on Pack Street? Betty's in another building I know, but who lives on what floor?

I plan on doing Charlie next, after that perspective is gonna switch and it's gonna get a bit shippier.
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>>5774741
now that's an idea, anon. I'll draft something tonight.
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>>5774756
Can you post the pastebin of the rest? Sounds like a good read
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>>5774756
Marty and charlie lives right across from Remmy, Avo lives... upstairs I think? And Ozzy lives right below him. Don't know about the rest.
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>>5774064
>Jolly cooperation and proper praising restores humanity
I think it's how the threads have managed to live this long, and will stay alive, I hope
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>>5774756
Huh. Good question. Maybe other anons will know, but by all means, feel free to improvise if they don't. We won't hold it against you.
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>>5774771
http://pastebin.com/GbaKvfGP

It's pretty bare at the moment. I caught the green bug, and had to crank something out that night before I lost the spark. It's gonna deal with the whole pack street crew, if briefly for some.
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>>5774782
I thought Ozzy lived above Remmy.
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>>5774783
funny story, I fugred out my summoning issue in DS2. I finally got my friend to admit he had been hacking (nothing malicious, just giving himself souls on a different profile so he could try different builds), but we got soft banned and had to jump through a bunch of hoops to get it undone.

We can't play H&G or DS1 anymore for the same reason, we always play together and he starts tinkering around with source files just to see what'll happen and we get banned.
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singles: sleep
dubs+: write a thing, then sleep
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>>5774874
sweet dreams anon
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>>5774858
In Wool Bully Ozzy says "Then you're up in West 001, huh? You're right above me."
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>>5774909
Ah, I must have misread it.
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>>5774909
That you Anon for your assistance.
The green continues. I'm gonna go with >>5774782 this guy's description.
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>>5774947
And looking back on 'Hard Pressed', Avo lives directly above the twins, so the twins might live on the same level as Remmy?

>>5774936
It's cool, looking through the fics now trying to find out their locations.
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>>5774782
The ambiguity surrounding the layout of the apartment is intentional tho
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any good jams tonight ?
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ClQcUyhoxTg
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Intentional? For what purpose?
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>>5774756
Ozzy is directly below Remmy
Twins are right next to Remmy
Avo is directly above the twins
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>>5775008
these two are great
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>>5775006
https://youtu.be/o9wipZFDoHQ
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>>5775110
Both of them are so damn cute.
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>>5775006
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=U7mPqycQ0tQ
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>>5772471

>The shadow one isn't in a white suit
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>>5774282
You ok anon?
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I... I just need a minute to get my breath back...
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>>5775219
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>Detective Oates, how did you use your phone?
>Well, being a horse, I bought a phone that wasn't designed for raccoons.
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hey zoot friends

I think I'm gonna drop part 2 of this two-parter in a minute, if you guys are up for it
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>>5775497
How's the eye doing, Weaver?
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>>5775512
the eye?
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>>5775497
that sounds awesome weaver
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>>5775497
Always man
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>>5775497
ok
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>>5775497
plez i need it
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>>5775497
Yes please Mr Weaver. I need something to do in this 2 hour break at uni
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>>5775497
I think we should wait another week. Make sure everything's perfect.
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>>5775525
Operation Flashpoint ring a bell, dude? You were there, it looked pretty painful when those bastards tore it out.
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>>5775566
>I think we should wait another week. Make sure everything's perfect.
gotcha, good idea
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>>5775497
Please be the real Weaver.
I need more Pack Street so bad.

>>5775566
Nooo. Perfection is overrated. Do it now.
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>>5775497
Is this a trick.
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>>5775497
body is R E A D Y

>inb4
ITS ALL A PRANK BRO
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Hey guys, Mead here!
I'm gonna be dropping the secret extra chapter of Judy is Dead in a few minutes. Hope you like it!
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>>5775609
Weaver doesn't like ruse updates anymore
>>5775636
Mead doesn't like not rude updates anymore
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>>5775636
2 in one night oh boy.
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>>5775636
>Judy's zombie comes back and demands to know why Nick hasn't died and gone to the damn wheat field yet
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>>5775493
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>>5775636
Oh thank goodness. I need my spirits lifted after that fake Weaver ruse all those minutes ago.
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>>5774659
>>5774597
It wasn't too bad, he survived and was comforted
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>>5775609
>>5775709
>Fake weaver
I wasted my funny joke fuck fuck fuck fuck fuck
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Hey guys, Byron here!
I'm gunna be dropping some stills we have of Zootopia 2 in a few minutes, Hope you enjoy!
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zhan here, I was working on something big and moved to a new tumblr, link in next post
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>>5775537
I love the idea of a tiny rabbit amidst a band of huge animals and no one bats an eye and she's just one of the guys.
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>>5775497
You lovely bastard you!
…what do you think of my writing style? In the heat week thing, I mean. Any advice on doing the characters right?
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>>5775743

>I love the idea of a tiny rabbit amidst a band of huge animals and no one bats an eye and she's just one of the guys.

That's because she murdered fourteen people in six days, and no one dares fuck with her.
(They looked at Nick funny)
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>>5775742
>>5775636
>>5775497

P A N I C
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ANON WASNT A TROLL
NEW PACKSTREET IS UP

http://pastebin.com/HK7Qd6if
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Hey guys, Chumpy here. Just wanted to stop by and say you're all losers. Love and kisses
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>>5775636
Does Nick wake up in a corn field now?
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>>5775802
Not gonna lie I wish that fic was finished
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>>5775497
Oh fuck YES.
…fuck it. Any advice on getting the pack street characters right? For my heat week story green…thingy…
Please lemme have your babies.
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>>5775776
>>5775829
Calm down you thirsty fuck.
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>>5775808
T-thanks, Chumps
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>>5775829
give up while you're ahead, it's much easier to die in silence than to ruin the reputation of pack street!
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>>5775838
God FUCKING damnit I thought it didn't send.

I am thirsty though.
For the cool, crisp flavor flavor of Dr. Pepper.
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>>5775866
Is Dr. Pepper a black man?
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>check packstreet pastebin anyway
>new story
neat
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Thanks for your patience, everyone

Pack Street, Chapter 14:
FALL BACK

http://pastebin.com/KzNYdAJA

On returning home from a nice day out, Remmy is confronted by Velvet Roe and a few others.

I enjoyed writing it, I hope you guys enjoy reading it, and I hope it was worth the wait.

As always, please let me know what you think.
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>>5775882
Nice try, but you won't be ruseing THIS anon.
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>>5775882
>dolphin x coast guard lewd
what the fuck man
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>>5775882
OH SHIT HES REAL
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>>5775537
Where are the others like this? I know there's a Force Awakens one.
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>>5775819
Nick finds himself in a seemingly endless field of soybeans.
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>>5775707
>oh god why are there so many rings?
Why you gotta make a horse feel inadequate, Anon?
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>>5775882
FRA here, holy crap!
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>>5775931
So that's how rings would work for equines.
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>>5775882
It's good, but there needs to be some sort of minor reconcilliation at some point. Also figuring out what's been going on
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>>5775882
nice
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>>5775989
>mfw Remmy
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>>5776007
Nah, doubtful, this is clearly the end of the series and nothing further will be addressed ever.
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>>5775882
>>5775497
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>>5775882
Ohhhh shit. Nice, but now the wait for the next one's going to be even harder!
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TT is military, right fuckers? Let me make you all super fucking depressed.

>Burned flesh had an aroma few who smelled it could ever forget
>Whether it was from an incendiary IED, a flamethrower wielded by non-Geneva convention soldiers, or a simple fire that caught an innocent within
>Smoke from flesh was greasy, thick, and black
>Judy Hopps had never inhaled such an aroma before
>Her fire team partner was cradled in her arms, their mustelid face half melted from the intensity of the flames
>She had done what she could, pouring part of their medics saline over his face in attempt to quell the cooking process
>Unfortuntately, their doc had been redmisted, a 7.62 bullet tearing through his skull as he fought to end the enemy before giving aid
>Doc had split up the med kit before their patrol, evening his burden throughout the section
>Judy had received some saline, a pressure bandage, and a foil blanket
>She put the saline to use the best she could, and wrapped the burned marten in The blanket to prevent hypothermia, his burned limbs unable to provide proper circulation and heat management
>She was woefully aware that he was not going to survive
>The marten, a Cpl. Tubule, looked up at his teammate
>"Sorry... You tried."
>His eyes rolled into the back of his skull, and he gave a final exhale as he passed
>Judy stared
>And stared
>Until the whizz of a round sounded above her ears
>She let him go. He was gone anyways
>Grabbing her service rifle, 2Lt Hopps opened fire
>She was angry
>She was hurt
>And she would not let the mammal whose bullet had ended her subordinates life life to tell about it
>as she fired, only one phrase sounded within her mind
>"kill"
>"kill"
>"kill"
>
>And so, she did
>She left a part of her in the Middle East, one she could never reclaim
>A part of her that stayed with Cpl Tubule
>The part of her that made her who she was
>Her sense of justice
>In the months after she came home, she was known as a voracious LEO
>She never let a perp escape
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>>5774115
source of image?
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>>5776027
>Power Forward
>Fall Back
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>>5776066
here, is reply anon
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>>5776018
Just like Roommates! It hasn't updated in two weeks so CLEARLY Pokemanical and Weaver have abandoned everyone forever!
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>>5775827
No gonna lie I wish you would shut the fuck up
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>>5776066
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>>5775882
I'm gonna be honest: this seems like a contrived conflict to try to deal with the characters getting too chummy.
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>>5775882
>Everyone gives Remmy shit for something he didn't know about
>calls him ethnic slurs
>he finally snaps
>it's his fault AGAIN

Okay, I'm done.
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>>5775882

Welp. There goes my blood pressure.
First, a stuck-up know-it-all pretentious bitch jumps his shit when he's done nothing wrong, hasn't been informed that there's even anything going on that he should know about, and held responsible for someone else's bullshit and lying.
Then they fucking gang up on him when he defends himself against the false accusations.
Then as a goddamn finisher, we move into straight-up bullying.

Fuck that. Fuck everything about that. And fuck you for writing it. I hope you die in a goddamn fire.
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New blind read through!

In the metro of the Zootopia underground, no good deed goes unpunished. Nick now has to take point on a dangerous mission or face the wrath of the striped rabbit! Will Nick be able to escape unharmed? What does the mysterious bunny have in store for him? Are those strange sounds the horrified moans of people who understand grammar listen to me get everything wrong about when to properly use a colon? Find out in Echos of a Megalith, Chapter 3 by AngryCapper!

Text here:
http://archiveofourown.org/works/7745752/chapters/18893681

Blind read through here:
https://soundcloud.com/comicanon/echos-of-a-megalitch-ch3

Whooooooooooo's excited for Thematic Thursday tomorrow?!
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=MpMC2_SCY7w
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>>5776117
>>5776126
>>5776132
ehh, kinda making me not want to read the current chapter :x
i mean, did everyone just grab the idiot ball in this chapter?
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>>5776132
>>5776126
>>5776117
I think I gave you guys too much credit.
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>>5776132
Isn't a good RAGE just so goddamn good though? Anger is addictive. Feels GOOD when you get angry, and even better when you're RIGHT for being angry.
Emotional reactions make stories worth reading. I loved this chapter BECAUSE it made me so Goddamn man.
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>>5776027
>>5775497
>>5775882
TAKE DOWN THAT PRED, REMMY
TACTICAL NECESSITY
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>>5776177
I for one loved it!
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>>5776117
>>5776126
>>5776132
I'm going to be completely honest
There's a chunk in the middle that got lost during one of my drafts and never replaced. It was kind of important.

I uhh
I know this is gonna sound like ass-covering but a whole bit addressing Velvet and Al is just missing and I didn't even realize it.
I think I'm gonna go make some edits.
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Good morning you beautiful people.
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>>5776117
>>5776126
>>5776132
In fairness, Remmy does sink to their level, and say some nasty things. Yeah, it's not right the way he's getting treated, but him flipping his shit was not the way to handle that situation, as good as it may have felt in the moment. While things heave been getting better on Pack Street, there are still some underlying tensions below the surface. I think that this will, ultimately, help resolve some of those, and get both sides to see things from the other's perspective a bit more.
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>>5776230
Fuck you
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>>5776226
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>>5776230
Who let you out of the cuck mines Jack?
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>>5776230
Good morning!
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>>5775882
Well damn, that had some intensity to it.

I can't wait to see how things evolve going forwards.

>>5776117
>>5776126
>>5776132
It's not like this is a one-shot story and there won't be future development, and the characters were never supposed to be rational and without flaws. It's not like they're acting out of character either, what's the problem?
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>>5776245
Thank you! I love you too, anon. Hopefully the night has gone well.
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>>5776226
It's okay Weaves. We all make mistakes.
Like posting two of the same goddamn message in a row…

Edit it, no one knows, and those who do won't care. That's the beauty of pastebin.
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>>5776226
IMMERSION RUINED
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>>5776226
Dude, as a writefag, I have to say:
Even if an integral part gets lost, you must at least give a brief overview of it. When the story no longer has an even flow, you lose the readers attention and fuck your own story up.

Weaver, you're better than this.
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>>5776257
Satan himself, from the depths of cuck Hell, obviously.
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>>5776270
I needed that


What am I doing with my life
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>>5776203
ayy
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>>5776289
He said it was an editing mistake and he's fixing it, what's the problem?
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>>5776203
c l e a n s w e e p

>>5776230
>filename
Heh.
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>>5776177
Go fuck yourself. Every man has a breaking point, and getting called the sheep version of "boy" and "nigger" every single goddamn day put Remmy near his. And then, getting ganged up on by everyone for something he didn't know about and then Ozzy trying to throw him to the wolves (literally) to cover his own ass sent him over. He finally had enough, finally started firing back after getting stomped on by everyone, and he's in the wrong YET A-FUCKING-GAIN? He's a fucking sheep, not a saint with infinite patience. There is a finite limit to how much abuse one man can be expected to put up with.

>>5776267
See above. Remmy hasn't gotten any slack at all, and he's been portrayed as in the wrong for trying to assert himself. This might have gone better if he didn't keep getting treated with outright hostility.
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>>5776308
ITS HOWL MOON
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>>5776354
How was he portrayed as being in the wrong? He lost his shit, appropriately, and is now dealing with the consequences of going too far.

None of which is out of character for him or them.
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>>5776320
Twitter knows. Didn't even edit the filename and I know for sure I ain't gonna change that now!
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>>5776230
source of image?
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>>5776226
it's cool

just uh

hurry along with those edits, i guess
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>>5776117
>>5776126
>>5776132
>>5776174
>>5776354
Super comfy right now! Really feeling the love here!

>>5776289
As another writefag, you're giving off the vibe of an incredibly pretentious asshole and I'd love to see an example of your work if you're so good. I completely understood the flow of the chapter just fine: Velvet didn't have all the information and shot her mouth off in the last chapter, Remmy didn't have all the information and shot her mouth off in this one. "Fall Back."

First of all, I think you're ALL missing that this is Pack Street's very first multi-part story arc. It's not a contained episode; there ARE going to be bumps in the road. I fully expect Weaver to explain what happened instead of leaving us hanging; he's put far too much work into this to just fuck it up and abandon the storyline. Besides, he acknowledged his mistake, so you're either a very dedicated samefag or another shitposter jumping on the dogpile because "hey, it's Weaver, let's just shit all over him and his work until we chase him out of the general so that we can wonder why he hasn't been around in a while". I've seen this happen in other generals, /5N@F/ being the latest, and I'm calling you out for it here because it's a fucking obnoxious trend. Pull the stick out of your colon and cut the man some slack.
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>>5775882
>be ozzy's councilor
>know he tried weaseling his way out of shit and make up excuses to not do things all the time
>call him out on a lie as well right in front of everyone
>still think Remmy is the one in the wrong
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>>5776270
>>5776291
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Does anyone here have any regret posting anything here? It's not as bad as posting cringeworthy shit a few years ago on real social media, at least here you're anonymous and there you can remove some stuff, but man do I feel bad for some of the shit I've posted.
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>>5776419
I think there are at least five or six anons that have posted within the last twenty minutes that have plenty worth regretting.
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>>5776315
The problem is that he obviously noticed a large chunk of his climax is missing, and didn't mitigate it even though he knew.

I love his fics, I won't lie there, but his editing needs work.
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>>5776399
https://www.twitter.com/mtttut/status/786208518160330755/

Here you go.
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>>5776419
I vented about a lot of relationship stuff that I feel kind of weird about putting out there in retrospect.
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Ironic how Remmy like some of use are being.
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>>5776419
>wrote stories about nick molesting/drugging/raping judy's sisters
lol, i don't regret shit
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All right we're back
unfortunately after pushing the story I deleted all my old drafts so I had to rewrite this bit from scratch, so it took longer than I hoped

It doesn't change the whole plot or progression, and it's not a new scene or anything so substantial, but I do believe it seriously impacts the tone, and the character of certain key individuals

The changes are roughly around lines 54-71

Sorry again -- this was entirely an editing error, taken out and forgotten to put back in
I feel really stupid for not catching it and this even got an out-loud read just before being posted so it's on me

here's the link again
http://pastebin.com/KzNYdAJA
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>>5776428
This, criticism is fucking disgusting.
Hopefully, when they look back on their posts in the future they'll realize what assholes they were.
It's Weaver's story with Weaver's style and Weaver's words, and the real brilliance is trying to read it through Weaver's eyes. You can't tell him how to write it.
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>>5776377
>going too far

Oh, I'm sorry, was he just supposed to accept everyone shitting on him constantly? Bend over some more and lick their feet faster? He snapped. He might have said some hateful things, but do you really think all the shit he was getting was any nicer? How the fuck would you react if someone called you a nigger to your face every time they talked to you?

>>5776428
>not instantly taking all of weaver's dick down to the balls
>"plenty worth regretting"
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>>5776354
The point was there is a right way and a wrong way to assert yourself

Remmy bitching at the others was the wrong way

Your eye for an eye argument is coming off as edgy, and I'm sure you have a point, but maybe wait until you're no longer BEYOND MAD about this to explain your feelings.
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>>5776469
cool strawman bro
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>>5776419
Beyond a general sense of wasting time posting while I could be out there living life and finding my Judy, no.
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>>5776419
No

the power of

a n o n y m i t y
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>>5776267

>what's the problem?

You unbelievable chucklefuck, what's the goddamn problem? Are you fucking kidding me right goddamn now? Editing error or fucking not, even with a big fucking chunk missing, go back and look at the fucking bullshit here:
http://pastebin.com/KzNYdAJA
Now pull this page up in another tab or window:
http://liveboldandbloom.com/11/relationships/signs-of-emotional-abuse
And start going down the fucking list, checking them off one by one.

>>5776177
>>5776242
>>5776377

Are you glue-sniffing faggots so busy fighting over the right to lick his fucking smegma that you've totally lost your fucking minds and are actually defending this shit?!
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>>5776463
ty weaver :v
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>>5776384
"意味わからん..."
"I don't get what this means at all..."
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>>5776439
An older draft of a free furry fanfic posted in LITERALLY FUCKING /TRASH/ slipped past his radar and he IMMEDIATELY noticed it. He's correcting it within less than half an hour of posting it, and yet you're acting like this is some unforgivable mistake. I think you're being an unreasonable dick.

>>5776469
Criticism isn't disgusting. Shitpiling on someone for an honest mistake is disgusting.
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>>5776477
No. There is only so many times you can expect someone to turn the other cheek before they have enough.
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>>5776499
Dude, just step away from the computer, take a breather. Goddamn.
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>>5776499
Yes. Remmy has a right to be mad, and to defend himself. But there are healthy and unhealthy ways to do both of those things. Remmy is being unhealthy right now. Everyone involved got upset, and took their frustrations out on each other.

People do dumb things when mad. The one I really blame right now is Ozzy.
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>>5776463
This actually changes a lot.
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>>5776404
>Never said I was good
>Never said I wrote for /zoot/
I had issues with the fact that the story was blocky and awkward in flow at certain parts. God forbid I give constructive criticism and tell a content creator that I like their work.
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>>5776499
>1. They humiliate you, put you down, or make fun of you in front of other people.
Kind of like losing your shit over a chapter of a fanfic being posted and not going EXACTLY the way you wanted, so instead you resort to humiliating the author who admits he made an honest mistake and apologized for it? Like that?

You know, like you're doing right now?

Stop emotionally abusing Weaver, anon.
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>>5776473
You act as if Remmy hasn't shit on them throughout the previous chapters.

I'm not saying you're wrong about the situation at hand, but in the grand scheme he's been just as dickish to them as they have to him.

No one's the good guy in this scenario. They're all just reacting the way they feel they should.

>>5776499
>Being this mad over a piece of fiction.
Jesus christ. At this point maybe the problem isn't with the fic.

I don't know who hurt you anon, but maybe it's time for you to stop reading if you're going to project this much.

Hope you get the help you need.
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>>5776463
Okay, that changes things a fair amount. Remmy should have shut his face, yes, but he had still been pushed to the breaking point.
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>>5776482
>strawman
But I'm serious
Its artistic style
You don't bitch at a painter for not making everything conform to some specific template or a sculptor for not making everything realistic. Why should writing be held to some standard when art is an external display of an artist's own mindset? Weaver did nothing wrong, leaving the bits out showed off the confusion of the scene, the underlying cause of most arguments where people just don't listen or see things from other viewpoints, the situation was tense there, and it's easy for an angry person to get lost in thoughts and only act on bits and pieces that they picked up, or even imagine a scenario and act on that! The original published story was far superior at capturing the confusion, turmoil, and loss of reality that happens with extreme irateness, which Remmy was clearly having.
Change it back Weaver, haters can fuck off.
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>>5776439
>he obviously noticed a large chunk of his climax is missing, and didn't mitigate it even though he knew
what?

>obviously noticed
no
that's the point
I didn't notice until I'd posted it

then I tried to and did "mitigate" it by editing it
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>>5776543
>Never said I was good
Lame defense.
>Never said I wrote for /zoot/
Irrelevant. You could pastebin an example of your work anonymously. You were the one who cited you're a writefag as if that gives you any kind of authority.
>constructive criticism
Constructive criticism helps an author out. Running to join the firefight doesn't.

I was told /ztg/ was a "comfy" place to hang out. Boy, I'm sure seeing it in spades tonight, lemme tell ya.
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Also, Al, don't get mad at Remmy. Get mad at yourself. If you don't want the outsider to go spreading your shit around, don't do it in full view of him in the lobby without telling him it's supposed to be a secret.

You cheating scum.
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>>5776559
>Being this mad over a piece of fiction
No shit. I mean, I'm glad to see Weaver can provoke such strong emotional reactions out of people with his writing. That said, shitting on the author versus shitting on the work and then falling back on the incredibly pathetic "but I'm just a good friendly little anon trying to offer constructive criticism :^)" defense is legitimately uncool.
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>>5776463
Remmy now the antagonist for blowing up right when it was solving itself
dumb goat
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so, the latest pack street

let me get this straight

al does weird wolf shit with betty, in the lobby, in broad fucking daylight, with people watching

then, he gets mad at Remmy for bringing it up with Velvet

even though Remmy was never told this was meant to be a secret

even though this was never even IMPLIED to be a secret, because it happens in public, in broad daylight, with onlookers

and this only happens because Al fucked up in the first place not telling Remmy about Ozzy's deal, which is the only reason Remmy was talking to Velvet in the first place

and when Al's fuckups cascade into each other, he turns into a massive asshole to remmy for not keeping to the secret plan that was not so much as hinted to the poor sheep

am i reading this right, thread? that's what this looks like to me.
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>>5776384
Good choice.
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>>5776463
That added exposition definitely helped drive the point home that nobody was innocent in this scenario; V jumped to conclusions, Al forgot to tell Remmy about whatever Ozzy has, Ozzy tried throwing Remmy under the bus, and Remmy (arguably justified) completely snaps in anger. Without those added bits the innocence-meter was a bit too gauged in Al's favor but now it's definitely a more even playing field.

All that being said, and this is NOT actually a criticism and solely my opinion, but Remmy seems to get way more shit piled on him than he deserves.
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>>5776514
>No. There is only so many times you can expect someone to turn the other cheek before they have enough.
Remmy chose the absolute wrong time and way to "take a stand". It was a misunderstanding, and it was actually ALREADY in the process of winding down/being resolved (seriously, read the edit) when he suddenly jumped out for a personal attack at Al, who not only WASN'T attacking Remmy, but was actually speaking up for him. To top it all of, Remmy's attack was both incredibly racist* and hypocritical, because JUST LIKE VELVET he was spitting at Al for a situation he clearly doesn't even understand or have all the facts on (mistaking Betty's submission display for romance/rape). Now Remmy's slapped the Alpha in front of everyone, like a fucking idiot.

*And yes, they use racist slurs against him too, but never to this degree. With the exception of POSSIBLY Marty, no one's really hauled off on Remmy. Like he says HIMSELF, the slurs are ignorant but not really out of hate or cruelty, but his outburst 100% was. He called them "dogs" and Betty a "bitch" and he meant every ounce of hate he could spare.

He has been dealing with their shit for weeks, which is why him eventually having an outburst is understandable. But the way he attacked, the severity of it, the person he targeted, and the issue he chose to make it over, were all huge mistakes, and are all on him. He blew up hard and on the wrong people for the wrong reasons, and he did it really ugly.

If he'd just kept his head up Remmy would have the high ground, Ozzy and Al would take the blame, as they should, and Remmy would be absolutely cleared. But he chose to use his high ground to punch down instead.
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Good night, I'll see you all tomorrow morning. Sleep well.
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>>5776630
Al is a poor host
Remmy is a poor guest
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>>5776573
>"comfy"
Is there a more meaningless meme word on 4chan?
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>>5776573
>>5776621
it's hard to spot a b8, but there's good examples of some. calm down, it's not like everybody is threatening you
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>>5776654
After spending months here, besides cuck? No, not really.
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>>5776573
Okay, seriously, what the hell? I don't use pastebin, YOU are the one who said that I saw myself as good, and I suggested that he do slightly more editing before he posted. Also, I said I loved his work in the past, work that was obviously edited to no end.

God.
Fucking.
Forbid.
That I give my ideas on how I see his story.
He doesn't have to listen. He doesn't have to care.
It's just a suggestion ffs
You acting like a little white night faggot is what's derailing your own rhetoric of "These threads are comfy"
This is 4chan. Differing opinions are heard, agreed upon, or mocked.
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>>5776655
>anything I don't agree with is bait
By your "logic" all the freakout posts were also bait, though.
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>>5776573
Eh, we're normally pretty chill. It's just a few autists, you know?
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>>5776406

yeah
you don't blame Remmy for objecting to being thrown under the bus

god's sakes, even if your patient is a delicate fucking flower, if they fuck up, you don't blame NEARBY BYSTANDERS INSTEAD
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>>5776648
Sweet dreams anon.
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>>5776635
It also means
>V isn't still mad at Remmy, and actually had a good reason to assume he was lying/knew about Ozzy
>V actually recognizes it wasn't Remmy's fault after all
>Al is in trouble with V
>Al was trying to *defend* Remmy right before Remmy bit his head off
>Al is the landlord?
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>>5776644
Then Al should just jump him know. Crack his little sheep skull and be done with it.

Because you know he's going to just make Remmy's life hell from now on, probably with legally questionable means. Just cut to the chase and get it over with.
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>>5776449
thanks
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>>5776654
faggot
faggot means absolutely nothing here
faggot is both an insult and a compliment depending on context and the condensed form of 'fag' serves as a neutral word and a neutral suffix for creating groups that are then either deemed positive or negative depending on context
you fucking faggot
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>>5776667
>white night
Anon, you should edit your posts some more.
>This is 4chan. Differing opinions are heard, agreed upon, or mocked.
This is 4chan. I heard your opinion and mocked it. What's the problem?
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This chapter is reminding me of shit I'd rather forget. Fuck, why does weaver do this to me?
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>>5776630
No, the real problem is that Remmy is mis-representing this "weird wolf shit" as "you're fucking Betty", in front of everyone.
Remmy doesn't understand the weird wolf shit but he still runs his mouth in accusation. Exactly what Velvet did and the thread gangpiled on her for it.
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>>5776463
Hey, mistakes happen. I've had my stuff proofread by three other people outside myself and they manage to catch different errors that each other had missed.

Anyways, having read the original and the corrected versions, it's surprising how much it alters the severity of that argument.
Really leaves me wondering how things get from here to the original comic where things aren't so... volatile.
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>This was the last straw for Remmy-
>Al was moving towards him, his paws balled into fists, and putting on his usual angry scowl.
>The moment Al pressed his clawed finger against Remmy's chest, Remmy slapped his paw away, reared back-
>And right before he acted, he could see Avo's face take on a look of shock.
>Straining his neck, and throwing himself forward, he brought all his weight and muscle into this one, mighty headbutt.
>Avo dove out from behind Al, grabbing anyone else that would have been in the way, as Al
>Vi shrieked as Remmy struck Al directly in the stomach, and thrown off his paws for almost a yard and a half before his ass hit the floor.
>Al tried to lean up against an elbow, but let out a pained groan and fell back to the floor.
>The entire room was silent after that.
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>>5776630

Everyone is an asshole in their own way: The Fic

I love it
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Remmy WAS in the right and could have come out smelling like roses if he'd kept his cool and explained things.

Instead he crossed the line worse than any of his neighbors ever have and ran his mouth about things he doesn't understand, and now he's possibly made Al and V angry at each other.

When the argument started, Remmy hadn't done anything wrong. By the time it was over, he had.
This one's on him. He did it to himself.
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>it's okay because it's weaver

No, it isn't.
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Gonna post a finished translation to possibly calm tensions in the thread
Hope it works because it kind of gets goofy near the end unintentionally

1 of 3
>Panel 1
Offscreen photographer: "3 2 1 Okay, got i--t!"
SFX: カシャ = kasha = camera shutter noise
>Panel 2
Photographer: "Thanks for that."
Judy: "Likewise! Being on the cover of a magazine is such an honor!
>Panel 3
Nick: "She really is small when she has her ears down like that, huh
It's only natural, though."
"When Carrots gets into some dangerous situation, I'm gonna need to protect her."
>Panel 4
Beaver: "DIE
DAMN ASSHOLE FOX!!"
Judy: "Watch out!! Nick!!"
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>>5776673
>god's sakes, even if your patient is a delicate fucking flower, if they fuck up, you don't blame NEARBY BYSTANDERS INSTEAD
You do if everything suggests it was their fault.
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>>5776741
2 of 3
>Panel 4
Judy: "Calm down!"
Beaver: "GET OFF!!"
>Panel 5
Beaver: "Foxes only put on a nice face as a habit!
My sister was conned by a fox like him, and she committed suicide because of it!"
Judy: "Nick had nothing to do with your sister!"
Nick: "She protected m e ?" (TN: Spacing was intentional, Nick's still recuperating)
>Panel 6
Judy: "Nick's not that kind of person."
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>>5776694
Fine, whatever. You win the Internet argument.

I'm long done caring.
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>>5776699
>Really leaves me wondering how things get from here to the original comic where things aren't so... volatile.
Hopefully the next few chapters are about hatchets getting buried.
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>>5776711
>Betty managed to roll Al onto his back
>Al suddenly began screaming as Vi frantically called emergency services
>suddenly Al's gut started convulsing until a terrible ripping sound was heard
>a strange, eyeless creature arose from his stomach and proceeded to run out the front door Ozzy had left open in his flight fight
>zootopia was nuked 3 days later to contain a hellish nightmare infestation
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>>5776649

remmy is a little wrong
however, al is a fuck-load more wrong
we didnt even know he was the landlord- great way to dodge responsibilities if nobody knows you're the one who's supposed to be responsible, yeah? God only knows what he does and doesn't do, if this is how he is...

>>5776697
remmy does mis-represent this. but everyone's being a massive bitch- from velvet, who should be trying to get Ozzy to be more responsible himself, instead of blaming whoever Ozzy's throwing under the bus, to Remmy, who is at least somewhat justifiably snapping, to Al, who doesn't even try to clear things up and instead throws Remmy the hell out, and the first thing he does when remmy shows back up to possibly appologize is more or less threaten his life

>>5776644
Remmy really fucked up. I just think Al fucked up more by neglecting shit he should have done, letting it get to this point to begin with.

>>5776726
yes, but there are degrees of who fucked up the most involved, i feel.
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>>5775882
>>5776226
>comic reads this
>all weav can do is cower at comic's dominance over his mistakes
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>>5776751
3 of 3
>Panel 1
Judy: "If that's the case...
If Nick really is a bad person,
I'm worse, because I picked him as my partner."
>Panel 2
Judy: "If that's so, then please stab me instead." (TN: "What're you gonna do, stab me?" QUOTE FROM BUN STABBED)
>Panel 3
Judy: "I'm only off-duty today."
"For your sister's sake, I'll turn a blind eye to this."
>Panel 4
Judy: "I'm only wearing this uniform for a photoshoot."
"I don't have my handcuffs or pocketbook on me."
>Panel 5
Judy: "Well that was close, Nick.
You're not injured, right?"
>Panel 6
Nick: "This is bad... I didn't think I had any enemies in the first place..."
Judy: Nick...?"
Nick: "This means a lot of things..."
Text behind Nick: "Handsome, huh" (TN: Author's note? Seems out of place otherwise)
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>>5776744
Is it time for Remmy abuse pictures? Is it time for the little shithead to get what's coming to him?
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>>5776766
Nah man, it's weaver, everyone's too much of a pussy to call him out on bullshit because he'll leave if you do.
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>>5776744

I fucking love that webcomic
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>>5776776
I'm glad I'm not the only one who thinks this.

I actually love Remmy as a character but jesus christ is he a fuck up.
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>>5776781
Yeah man that's Weaver, easily chased away.
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>>5776755
Yeah. In Remmy's skull.
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>>5776762
>Al, who doesn't even try to clear things up and instead throws Remmy the hell out
>Al fucked up more by neglecting shit he should have done, letting it get to this point to begin with
But Al does try to resolve it. He tells Velvet it's his fault and not Remmy's, but Remmy is so mad he doesn't realize Al's actually sticking up for him:
>Al steps up, gesturing with his hands in the air, palms forward. "Hey, all right, calm down. Look, he's right. He doesn't know, arright? He doesn't know shit."

Remmy is so busy taking offense at the last bit he doesn't realize this thing's resolving and Al's trying to help him. Al fucked up, yes, and he's the reason Velvet is "attacking" Remmy in the first place. But he actually tries to step up and take the responsibility for it, and then Remmy fucking sucker punches him and gets him in trouble with his woman.
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>Meanwhile, Charlie was in his bathroom, using his toothbrush.
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>>5776755
>remmy moves out and calls everyone on their bullshit
>they call him out on his
>remmy goes full dawn "the only good pred is dead" bellwether

Its really the only believable story arc at this point.
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>>5776800
can't break what was already broken
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>>5776809
>Remmy is so busy taking offense
I've never seen a more accurate summary of a character in one half of a sentence
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>>5776711
Remmy's gonna get fucking jumped then.
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>>5776463

Eyy! That was a quick rewrite.

I might be in the minority here but part of me likes these uncontrollable social infernos spinning into oblivion where each person who has an opportunity to stop it instead adds more fuel to the fire.

It's like watching a pyrrhic battle in the extreme. And honestly? If this thread is any indication, it's actually pretty realistic when people start getting hot under the collar about something that the people around them aren't necessarily good at keeping calm and de-escalating an argument, especially one based on misunderstandings and misinformation.

If that's what you were going for, kudos, you really hit it on the head. I just hope the fallout isn't too many megatons.
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>>5776781
That literally had nothing to do with my post
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>>5776754
>I'm long done caring.
I guess that's why they call it The CARELESS Friends!
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OH

I JUST REALIZED

WE'VE ONLY SEEN AL'S REACTION TO REMMY'S FUCKUP

JUST YOU WAIT UNTIL BETTY HEARS WHAT HE SAID

I HOPE YOU BETTY SHIPPERS ENJOY YOUR SHIT WHILE YOU HAVE IT BECAUSE YOU DON'T HAVE LONG UNTIL THAT SHIP IS SUNK
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>>5776834
The thread is literally imitating the story.
Life imitates art.
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I don't understand how more people aren't on Remmy's side for this. Entire place is getting ready to shit on him, Ozzy's big ass betrayal, and a simple "he didn't know" is supposed to fix things? His is a righteous anger and Al needed to be taken down a peg. Does the wolf hierarchy just automatically apply to everyone in the proximity, this is bullshit
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>>5776762
>but everyone's being a massive bitch- from velvet, who should be trying to get Ozzy to be more responsible himself, instead of blaming whoever Ozzy's throwing under the bus...
But that's my point, Remmy's mad at Velvet for starting this argument based on misinformation, and then he throws an even worse mistaken assumption at Al, coated with specism to boot, and he's way more of a bitch than Velvet. Remmy's a hypocrite, doing exactly what he got mad at V for doing, only way worse.
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>>5776824
I miss the pre-release and early post-release /co/ threads. Wondering who the villain would be, praying that the movie won't flop, never anticipating a billion dollars.
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>>5776842
>Betty finally gets to try that strapon Avo got her for her birthday.
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>>5776840
Kek
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>>5776842
She finds that sort of assertiveness in prey arousing.
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>>5776842

Practically all ships beside Remmy x Charlie are dead now.
Truly a day of joy
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>>5776842
>She just uses it as an excuse to give more Al shit for being a shitty alpha
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>>5776830
>>Remmy is so busy taking offense
Next chapter name, calling it now.
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>>5776871
Even though I'm not really on Remmy's side in this, I'm glad there are anons that are defending him because scenarios like this need to be viewed from both sides.

Gives perspective.
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>>5776871
Yeah, pretty much. Don't like it? Don't move into a wolf house.

I bet you're the kind of person who tries to serve a Jew bacon in their own house.
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>>5776865

As usual. This time it's actually kind of beautiful in the same terrific conflagration as in the story.

I wonder if people are conflating theirs and others' opinions of how Remmy is treated by his universe with the quality of the work itself; these are two vastly different things.
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How is this zootopia related?
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>>5776886
No, that's probably dead too. Charlie got to watch Remmy call Al a cheating shitbag in his own house to his woman. Literally nobody likes Remmy now. If someone on Pack Street got darted and started attacking him, the rest would pull out their cell phones and start recording it.
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>>5776834
>I might be in the minority here but part of me likes these uncontrollable social infernos spinning into oblivion where each person who has an opportunity to stop it instead adds more fuel to the fire.
>It's like watching a pyrrhic battle in the extreme. And honestly? If this thread is any indication, it's actually pretty realistic when people start getting hot under the collar about something that the people around them aren't necessarily good at keeping calm and de-escalating an argument, especially one based on misunderstandings and misinformation.
Everyone was in the wrong to some degree. Except Avo.

Most of them were going on incorrect assumptions, Al was the only one who tried to cop to his mistakes, Ozzy threw HIMSELF under the bus at the end just to try and diffuse the situation, and nobody who had a chance to cool things down actually did.

It's everyone's fault but when it came down to it, Remmy was the one who crossed the line.
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>>5776809

yeah, but then
after remmy proves to not know shit
he proceeds to run his mouth off about something he's clearly wrong about (betty)

and so later on, when remmy comes home, al basically threatens him hard

its clear that al blames remmy for getting him in trouble

even though al knows remmy doesnt know shit
even though Velvet should know remmy doesnt know shit, since al told her he hadn't been keeping remmy up to date

and you'd think velvet would start listening after she was proven completely wrong about the situation
but from the way Al acted towards remmy, it seems like that was NOT resolved- Al either didn't explain himself to Velvet, or Velvet proceeded to be a headstrong bitch and ignore his explanations, as well as not bothering to actually ask anyone else involved (Betty) who would back him up
jesus fucking christ, why is everyone both incompetent AND an asshole?
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>>5776912
Fanfiction set in-universe

Other than that, not much
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>>5776922

I feel like Charlie would be one to not give a fuck.
But yeah,you might be true
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Remmy is kinda a shitbag?

WHO KNEW?
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Oh, and Al destroyed Remmy's gym bag out of spite. I take it that's Remmy's fault too?
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>>5776532
>Dude, just step away from the computer, take a breather. Goddamn.
Go take a breather through the hole in your skull, fucknuts.

>>5776559
>Jesus christ. At this point maybe the problem isn't with the fic.
You're right - the problem isn't the fic. The problem is eager little fanboys fawning over someone who's got an abuse fetish.

>Stop emotionally abusing Weaver, anon.
I'm not emotionally abusing Weaver, you inbred, tiny-dicked, shiteating, cumstained, basement-dwelling piece of shit - I'm after (You) now for being a pretentious, smug little arse-sniffing cockbiter. Shove your opinion right up your gaping asshole, sit on it and fucking spin, you cow-fisting little felchmonger.
Your parents never loved you, your mom admits that you were a mistake, and your father is constantly ashamed that he's forced to call you son.
Their suicides will definitely be your fault.
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I find it startlingly worrying that some of the people in this thread have difficulty understanding the difficulty between standing up for yourself, and purposefully seeking to wound.
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This is relevant.

http://www.hollywoodreporter.com/news/room-director-tommy-wiseau-star-937339
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>>5776911
>I wonder if people are conflating theirs and others' opinions of how Remmy is treated by his universe with the quality of the work itself
And that's how good art becomes great art.
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>>5776942
You know, there's a difference between standing up for yourself, and purposefully trying to wound someone. Remmy crossed that line.
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>>5776871
>Ozzy's big ass betrayal
Whoa, what? Sorry are you actually buying Remmy's line about him being "thrown under the bus"? THIS ENTIRE CHAPTER IS REMMY TAKING OFFENSE WHEN HE SHOULDN'T. Ozzy is only trying to make up a story to excuse what happened and he knows Remmy will get off the hook because he knows Remmy doesn't know. OZZY DIDN'T SMILE AT REMMY LIKE HA HA I GOT YOU, HE'S SMILING BECAUSE HE'S EXPRESSING TO REMMY THAT HE'S PULLING A FAST ONE. IT'S LIKE WINKING TO YOUR FRIEND. OZZY IS TRYING TO BE FRIENDLY NOT AN ASSHOLE. Al also tries to stand up for Remmy and instead Remmy attacks him. WHY AL? WHY OF ALL THE PEOPLE THERE WOULD YOU ATTACK AL, HE'S THE ONLY ONE THERE WHO DIDN'T GIVE YOU ANY SHIT, ALL HE SAID WAS DON'T BE RUDE AND THAT IT'S NOT YOUR FAULT. WHY ARE SO MANY PEOPLE BELIEVING REMMY'S VICTIM COMPLEX BULLSHIT, HE IS TOTALLY MISINTERPRETING EVERYONE'S ACTIONS AS AN ATTACK ON HIM.
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>>5776726

>Everyone is an asshole - The End

FTFY
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Man

Weaver wrote all this shit and I haven't read a damn word.

Can we get back to zootopia now?
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>>5776935
I'm gonna guess she'll be her usual relaxed self about it, but she'll have a strong point to make if it comes up between her and Remmy, and very likely what she says won't be in his favor.
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>>5776942
well now youre just being cute
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>>5776990
what a horrendously awful picture.

I'd rather talk about fan characters of fan works, twice removed than have to discuss such a heinous creation.
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>>5776736
>>5776781

see the problem with shit like this is that you have people who like it, and the people who don't like it

and if the people who don't like it start to lose the argument they will just resort to W-Weaver DICKSUCKING instead of admitting that they're fucking wrong
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>>5777000
Deal with it.
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>>5777000
Nice double trips
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>>5776942
Nigga you need to calm down. That is an unhealthy amount of vitriol for a fanfic argument
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>>5776982
Oh yeah, Remmy's a fucking goner.

There's literally no way he salvages this shit now. He just made an enemy of everyone in his building. He's not even safe when he sleeps either since so many people can pick his lock.

He'd be safer sleeping on the streets desu. if he's smart, that's what he'll start doing.
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>>5776930
>even though al knows remmy doesnt know shit
>even though Velvet should know remmy doesnt know shit, since al told her he hadn't been keeping remmy up to date
The difference is Velvet VS Remmy was her going "I'm very disappointed in you. You can't encourage Ozzy's bad habits, it's not healthy for him." It was hardly an attack, and Al also tried to clear things up.
Meanwhile Remmy VS Al was extremely vicious slurs and misrepresented shit that is now going to get Al in trouble with Velvet, and Remmy has no desire to clear that up.

As for why Velvet didn't try to hear out the whole conversation, she literally left right afterwards, hard to ask Betty right then.
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>>5776912
How is this zootopia related?
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>>5776930
>jesus fucking christ, why is everyone both incompetent AND an asshole?
Because it's realistic.
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>>5777010
He left a huge chunk out of his story and said "yep, that looks right, ship it!".

Because he knows he won't have to deal with actual complaints without people whitekniting.
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>>5776948
>>5776979
Al's a big boy and Remmy's been getting hammered since he got there. Remmy has literally 0 power and gets mad when some newbie prey mouths off? How hard is it to just tell anyone "dumb grazer doesn't know what he's talking about" and bam, everything Remmy says discredited forever. It's like a toddler mouthing off to a body builder
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>>5777036
How is this zootopia related?
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>>5777061
It's not
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>>5776948
>I find it startlingly worrying that some of the people in this thread have difficulty understanding the difference between standing up for yourself, and purposefully seeking to wound.
Exactly. Remmy could have cleared this up, Ozzy would have gotten lectured and Al would've been left to answer for his mistake. Instead he lashed out in spite.

I want to stress this again, but when have the other neighbors EVER treated Remmy like that? They call him names but it's teasingly at worst, nothing like this. Even Marty's never gone off on him like he went off on Al.
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>>5777071
How is this zootopia related?
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>>5777077
>mfw Marty bans Remmy from the library after this and calls the cops on him to get his books back
>mfw Marty starts hosting the anti-sheep KKK at the library
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>>5776982
Just say Remmy didn't know, don't spin that whole story. Al sets the entire tone of the confrontation so however he reacts is how everyone else will
REMMY DID (very little) WRONG (comparatively)
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>>5777049
>He left a huge chunk out of his story and said "yep, that looks right, ship it!".
Less than 5% according to word count. He said that part got heavily rewritten a lot. It happens. Way to crucify a guy over a mistake he immediately apologized for and corrected.
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>>5777049
Neither does anyone else
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>>5777092

That's a weird dog.
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We should talk about this instead.
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>>5777108
>REMMY DID (very little) WRONG (comparatively)
Not even. Remmy attacked everyone in the room and he went way, way over the line. NOBODY has treated Remmy the way Remmy just treated Al.
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>This thread
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>>5777136
Fuck you this is weaver time.
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>>5777049
>He left a huge chunk
Less than 50 words out of 4000
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>>5777120
i agree
god that image is nice
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>>5777136
That's really cute anon. I love how she's not build like a pornstar, like so many artists choose. She looks really nice here.
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>>5777136
looks more like bonnie imo but still, nice
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>>5777136
Do you draw often, anon? Your style looks sort of familiar. Great anatomy here.
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>>5777144
>>5777110
But lets be real here, that missing section DID change the context and flow of the story by a lot.
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>>5777148
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Here's a tl;dr

>Pack Street: Fall Back

>Remmy cucked himself

------------------------|\
to be continued----\
------------------------|/
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>>5777165
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>>5777173
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>>5777160
im on furaffinity and tumblr but i hope you don't know me from 4chan everyone hates me and my art ha..
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>>5777155
Just imagine her as milf jude
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>>5777178
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>>5777160
I don't think we're disagreeing on that
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all this shota and furry two for one special
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>>5777148
>>5777165
>>5777173
>>5777178
>>5777193
Kinda jealous of him
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>>5777171
Silly Weaver, always with his fetish for getting cucked.
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>>5777161
I totally agree it absolutely did, that's why I wrote it back in as soon as I noticed

The big argument scene is the whole reason this chapter took so long to write -- I spent more time working out the logistics, the specifics, etc. than any other singular part of the Pack Street stories
It got rewritten and reshuffled so many times in drafts that eventually I cut out the bit around the landlord discussion, intending to put it back in, then got sidetracked and forgot to re-add it

The problem is that when I did the final draft read through I was mostly looking for syntax, repetition, glaring problems in dialog flow, etc. The reason I didn't notice the missing chunk was that essentially I'd read the scene so many times and gone over it in my head that it just didn't occur to me it was missing at the time

It's not a very good excuse, because it's not an excuse: I made a mistake, but lacking a time machine I tried to fix it as quickly as I could
It's probably the worst possible time I could've done that too, because while in any other chapter you might miss some jokes or scene-setting, here you miss a significant shift, especially re: Velvet and Al's attitudes towards Remmy

It's my bad, but at this point I can't really do anything further to fix it
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>mfw I didn't read the first edition of today's pack street and thought it wasn't pretty good
>mfw I read the rest of the thread
>oh
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>>5777193
>>5777178
D'ohoho, I ain't translatin' that shit if you paid me

I may be an anonymous shitposter on a hidden board of a Vietnamese basket-weaving forum, browsing a thread about a Disney film that came out several months ago, but I have SOME standards
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>>5777211
Oh, no. Not blaming you for that or calling you a shit editor. I was just pointing out to those two anons that those "mere 50 words" had a huge effect on the story.
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>>5777225

I'm mad!
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>>5777211
It's okay man, I don't read your garbage, all I want is your porn.
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>>5777211
Just as a general observation I think when writing angst it's just way harder to piece everything together and make all sides seem balanced, so even small mistake so or bad writing will vilify oneside or another
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Never Back Down 2: The Back Down
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velvet's a bitch
avo's a bitch
ozzy's a lying cunt
al's an asshole
remmy's also a bitch, and racist

i think we can agree who won here
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>>5777221
>not liking cub porn
shit taste desu senpai
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>>5777025
He's chill with them by the time the Wannabite comic rolls around.
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>>5777264
Unless he pastors them there is really no way that can happen now. Too much bad blood has been shed. Remmy has said things that can never be taken back, dealt damage that can never heal.
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>>5777239
>Oh, no. Not blaming you for that or calling you a shit editor

Well if you aren't going to, I will.

Weaver you fucked up and you're a shit editor.
Don't quit your day job of stick figure porn, writing isn't your calling.
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>>5777250
>Just as a general observation I think when writing angst it's just way harder to piece everything together and make all sides seem balanced, so even small mistake so or bad writing will vilify oneside or another
oh totally
the part I left out was basically:
Al: "Actually he's telling the truth, he doesn't know"
V: "You told me you would tell him, it's the whole reason I'm acting like he's a liar"
Al: "Oops"
V: "Then this isn't Remmy's fault, it's your fault"
Al: "Yes"

cutting that out makes it so Velvet never gets off Remmy's back and Al is intentionally hostile
Short of the blowout itself it's one of the most crucial parts in the entire story I could've dropped
whoops guess I've got brain damage
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>>5777253
Remmy fucks Martina as a stress reliever when
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>>5777280
>writing isn't your calling
Yeah, you're right, it'll never get fans or attention.
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>>5776930
>why is everyone both incompetent AND an asshole?
Because Pack Street is a shithole and that's exactly where those kinds of people end up
that's the whole fucking point
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>>5777253
>i think we can agree who won here
Even Remmy agrees:
>Martina was precious
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>>5777311
>Because Pack Street is a shithole and that's exactly where those kinds of people end up
No, it's the kind of shithole that breeds people like that.
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>>5777310
No NEW fans or ATTENTION OUTSIDE OF HIS SMALL CIRCLE.
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>>5777294
Fuck man. I only read the edited version and still feel like Remmy doesn't have the majority of the blame for this one
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>>5776935
Not necessarily.
Shit'll get fixed eventually. Al/Remmy conflict might just've been set up as the primary antagonism for the rest of the series, but shit'll eventually get fixed.

Charlie's nothing if not smart. I assume she'd seen both sides.
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>>5777280
Hey be thankful he responds at all. He fucked up hard at /5N@F/ with Chapter 40 of Roommates and has ignored them ever since.
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>>5777329
Remmy was born to nice white bread sheep parents
but he's incompetent and an asshole and thus has ended up on Pack Street
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>>5777335
>implying Remmy has a side

what he said is literally indefensible
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>>5777333
Remmy is the only innocent one when the argument starts. But he's the one who steps over the line, too.

Remmy didn't create the powderkeg but he's the one who lit the spark.
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>>5777351
What Remmy said was all technically either true or speculation
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>>5777351
Fucking this.

Name one time any other neighbor has gone on the attack the same way he did. He went farther against Al than anyone's ever gone against him.
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>>5777333
I feel the same way. Tbh the majority of the blame still rests on ozzy's back because he used remmy as a human shield against everybody else's criticism which led to the whole spat. Remmy doesn't have blame for punching Al way below the belt tho
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>>5777333
Remmy is an asshole and if you condone what he does here, you too, are an asshole.
>You'd probably do the same thing in his shoes
Absolutely, but a lot of people are acting like he's not being an asshole with this and that's a problem
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>all this cub shit
>out out out
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>>5776630
You've never met the type of people who live in ghetto ass neighborhoods like Pack Street have you?

I think you're wrong to start with, because EVERYONE was acting like a fuckwit this time. But even if you had hit the nail on the head, things would still make sense.

With people like Al, shit is never their fault. They never own their fuck-ups, and they've made an art form out of making it seem as if the person who calls them out is actually the one to blame. Some of them even manage to convince themselves of their own bullshit.

That's still cause to get pissed off, but you can't really chalk it up to bad writing.
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>Weaver couldn't fucking avoid the fucking EVERYONE ACTS LIKE AN IDIOT AND EVERYTHING ESCALATES FOR NO REASON idea

FOR
FUCKS
SAKE WEAVER
WE WARNED YOU FOR A FUCKING WEEK

AND YOU STILL GOD DAMN DID IT.

AND NOW EVERY FUCKING CHAPTER AFTER IS STUPID FALLOUT SHIT/MAKEUP SHIT/APOLOGY SHIT BECAUSE NOBODY COULD ACT LIKE A SANE ADULT
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>>5777382
He's earned some asshole. Al steals his food so throwing out some speciest slurs is justified in my book
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Last for the best two OCs
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>>5777375
>Tbh the majority of the blame still rests on ozzy's back because he used remmy as a human shield against everybody else's criticism
The problem I think is that Ozzy used Remmy as a shield because he knew that no one would blame Remmy, because Remmy didn't know Ozzy had an obligation. So in Ozzy's mind everyone would say "it's nobody's fault".

Unfortunately, Al didn't inform Remmy of whatever when he moved in, so Velvet thinks Remmy knows, so a whole argument cropped up. Ozzy wasn't trying to shift the blame, he was trying to dissipate it.
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>>5777346
>He fucked up hard at /5N@F/ with Chapter 40 of Roommates

What a ridiculous bitchfest over something so minor that was.
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>>5777413
>Al steals his food
He gave it back.
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>>5777412
>expecting better from a stick figure porn artist
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>>5777333
>Al fails to communicate
>Ozzy is being an absolute dick
>Remmy is flipping the fuck out like some customer at Staples asking where they sell 2x4s
>Violet for some reason defending her patient despite knowing he does shit like this
>bystanders willingly trying to intervene and make it even bigger
the only innocent ones at the end of this were Rex, the sandwich shop employees, and Remmy's gym bag

F Gym Bag
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>>5777393
>With people like Al, shit is never their fault. They never own their fuck-ups
Al literally tells Velvet it's his own fault and backs up Remmy by verifying his side of things.
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>>5777389
i was just trying to kill this thread faster
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>>5777426
Those suckers are in his belly. Unforgivable
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>>5777418
>the original chumpbore
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>>5777439
>Violet for some reason defending her patient despite knowing he does shit like this
She knows that Ozzy's not responsible about this, she doesn't for a second believe it was all an innocent misunderstanding. She just assumed that Remmy was letting Ozzy get away with it instead of doing what was best for him and telling him to go to his meeting. And unlike the last thread assumed, she actually has a good reason to think Remmy knew.
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>>5777456
Oh, right, that. Yeah. I thought you meant the burger.
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>>5777393
I think with Al it was that he never expected ozzy's disorder would affect remmy in any way, so he isn't want to pile it on him when they were still getting to know him, like saying "hey! Did you know that one of your apartment mates has a psychological disorder? Now you gotta watch out for him lol". Remmy would just assume pack street was a total shithole and isolate himself even more. Plus, I think al knew he fucked up at the end
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>>5777439
F gym bag
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>>5777470
I actually did forget he gave the burga back
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>>5777331
Dude, Weaver and Pack Street is literally the reason I come to this thread, aside from the art and occasional crunchy worldbuilding.
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>>5777122
Remmy defended himself against a group that attacked him because they were too stupid to remember that they never told what Ozzy's condition was. This is entirely Al's fault and he had the gall to be angry at Remmy despite having never told him about Ozzy's problems. He's trying to save face in front of Vi and Remmy's pieced it together. He went too far with the bitch rutting scenario but he had reached his breaking point. Literally everyone turned on him without question or sufficient information and that pissed him off.
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>>5777471
>he never expected ozzy's disorder would affect remmy in any way, so he isn't want to pile it on him when they were still getting to know him, like saying "hey! Did you know that one of your apartment mates has a psychological disorder? Now you gotta watch out for him lol". Remmy would just assume pack street was a total shithole and isolate himself even more. Plus, I think al knew he fucked up at the end
I agree with all of this, except I doubt Al didn't tell Remmy because he was worried about burdening Remmy. I think he didn't tell Remmy because Remmy is a shut in asshole and he didn't like or trust him.
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>>5777439
F gym bag
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>>5777483
>Remmy defended himself
If literally all he'd done was defend himself we wouldn't be having this discussion. He went way too far. There's a difference between just standing up for yourself and clearing the air and what he did.
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>>5777463
it's too bad, she's got the gym bag's threads on her hooves just as much as Avo, but not as much as Al or Remmy
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>>5777483
Wait, Al wasn't angry at him. The only thing Al said was to not be rude.
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>>5777311
>>5777329
The chicken, or the egg?

Doesn't really matter. They're all dicks. I think we can agree on that. But isn't that part of the reason why we like Pack Street? These people are completely dysfunctional, to the point where you can never quite predict who is going to do what next and when.
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Biggest asshole of Pack Street
taking all bets: Al v Remmy
go
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If Remmy was just defending himself then Lord Bolton was just taking precautions to ensure his already established inheritance
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>>5777500
Weaver, Remmy a close second.
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>>5777485
I think in this case remmy I'd like to hat for us who is in your circle of friends as your friend friend but nobody knows him well enough to confide in him anything important. But drama in the group inevitably affects him too
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>sometimes feel down about how much time and effort I put into my writing for barely any recognition or feedback
>see the sort of heated response that popular stories like Pack Street or JiD get when they manage to ruffle some feathers, purposely or accidentally

I guess there is a virtue in obscurity after all.
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>>5777482
i'm just here for the greentexts, packstreet, and remmyXcharlie
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>>5777463
The issue that a fucking decent psychiatrist doesn't fucking make assumption and start shit flinging since she should have realized just how fucking quick this could escalate.

The issue is that a fucking decent psychiatrist doesn't hold her questioning and reprimands with a large crowd of people because they're smart enough to know in situations like this can escalate quickly and BE NEGATIVE FOR THE PATIENT

A fucking decent psychiatrist would COMMUNICATE with the people involved with her patient if necessary rather than assume someone else would.

Velvet is fucking terrible at her job and should be removed from Ozzy's case. If I was Remmy I'd fucking report what she did because of how pissed I am. Sure, that'll only make things worse but being thrown into a situation like that by a health care provider is bullshit AND it's clear that Velvet is incompetent at her job when handling Ozzy.

Her connection with Al is too personal as well and is creating a conflict of interests with her patient care.

Fucking get rid of her.
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>>5777500
>Al v. Remmy
>Fawn of Justice

>"Do you bleat?"
>"You will."
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>>5777515
you gotta shitpost at your story's flaws to point attention to it
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>>5777508
Remmy went straight for the the dick shot
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>>5777521
>psychiatrist
>Ozzy is acting like a recovering addict

anon
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>>5777471
Well anon, I agree with you. I was just illustrating my point, namely that the story makes sense no matter how you look at it, with a hypothetical.
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>>5777533
but he was being bullied and had to act fast
just like Bolton got a legitimate brother and therefore needed to kill his whole family
They're both innocent
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>remmy's cute little 4" cock
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REPLYGUY, where are you? Need you on this stat! >>5777528
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>>5777515
I take it to be a good thing, though?

The point of art is to make people react
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>>5777498
Yeah but Al was glaring daggers at Remmy, but was too fucking stupid to realize he never told him about Ozzy. And when he gets one slur thrown his way he throws a bitch-fit (pun intended), but Remmy has to deal with daily slurs like grazer on a constant basis. In short Al's a bitch baby who can dish it out but can't take it.
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>>5777553
thats why shitposting is a art
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>>5777521
What makes you think she's a psychiatrist
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https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=nJ76nuzDWCk
Remmy edit of this when?
"REMMY, NO!"
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>>5777521
I think that's ozzy's been caught in this situation way too many times before by velvet, and that velvet's still a government social worker who needs to deal with the same shit everyday
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>>5777558
>when he gets one slur thrown his way
Do you really think he's mad because Remmy called him a "dog"?
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>>5777558
Everything you just said. A fuckin +
Bitch boi Al can't take anything
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>>5777558
>X can do Y, but you cant do Y to X or they'll get mad or stop
like a person that puts religion before society
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>>5777588
>>5777588
>>5777588
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>>5777538
Anonymous, this is even WORSE if she's someone city mandated rehab worker or nurse.

Health Care providers who pull this shit aren't professional. If you're not professional then you jeopardize the care of your patients.

Look at the situation she created. She's blown this situation into something that WILL compromise Ozzy's mental health because she didn't have the fucking foresight to talk to Remmy and Ozzy alone.
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>>5777572
No he's upset that he called Betty his bitch in front of his deerfu.
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>>5777603
What if she's a parole officer?
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>>5777603
>she's blown the situation

That's not how you spell "remmy and al", anon.
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>>5777558
It would Be like calling each other niggers, Andy then in front of your friends and your crush, you argue and your friend goes wow! Didn't you know anon fucks so and so? And uses contrived bullshit to back it up
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>>5777393

oh, no
i wasnt saying it was bad writing
i was saying everyone was an asshole, unrelated to writing quality
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>>5777628
"Hey Crush, it should be obvious by his blatant personal attacks already, but I just want you to know that what he said was probably misinterpreted."
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>>5777679
And he can do that after he and her have cooled down. The damage is repairable.

But the damage was still done.
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>>5777679
I'm sure he'll tell her as much.
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>>5777698
I'm sure he did.
And I'm willing to bet crush won't understand, because she's probably got a little bit of that prejudice in her herself.
Which is gonna cause her to break away from Al, pushing him further.
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>>5777719
He'll be better off without a prejudiced girl anyways. This was for the best



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