/ZTG/ - Zootopia General: To Draw Foxes Edition.Pastebin: pastebin.com/iYDU8g2TBooru: zoo.booru.orgZTG Creator List: https://docs.google.com/spreadsheets/d/19heSY9BvV3t0qPa2XJa6q2n7ywyl1Yhckzc1Db-aGF4Anon's Honest Zootopia Fan Fiction Reviews: https://desuarchive.org/trash/thread/31830969/#31831031Archives: www.ztarchive.com / desuarchive.orgPrevious thread: http://www.ztarchive.com/trash/thread/4035632840356328.htmlPrevious thread: https://desuarchive.org/trash/thread/40356328Current TT Theme: Hobbies! (Submissions due August 5th!)Previous TT Theme: SiblingsMore information on TT: https://docs.google.com/spreadsheets/d/14sf_QBuL4E6S11se28Xl9Sp3ohgnrhGYE4SchwSUQjYTT Archive: t3event.tumblr.comTT Pastebin: pastebin.com/gudYsYHL
>>40555011This is the one time I won't be at home in a Friday night
>>40555156I mean that sentiment of that picture is still horrible, But good for you.
>>40557264your average tube is addicted to cocaine
I'll just point out that neither of the archive links are correct.
What was up with that flashback where Lionheart kept accidentally cockslapping Bellwether on her first day of work?
>>40560963Aw man, Nick's expression is so happy and Judy's is a little sly. Great work as always!
Well,I had planned on waiting... I may not have much time left to wait.Here it is,https://archiveofourown.org/works/10201733/chapters/44570182
>>40561568It was trying to demonstrate her motivation, dummy
>>40560966I think I might love Marty
>>40562987For a sec thought this might be Femmy Betty
>>40563011Remmy is basically male Bellwether
>>40559312NOT TRUEDon't listen to this anonAlso may you have a good night /ztg/
>>40563689sleeptight goose
Why do I keep coming back to this, and thinking it's such a brilliant piece of art?
>>40565320because Samur is a good artist
>>40565320>>40565320>samur>50% not zootopia>flatass new lolaI genuinely have no idea, lol
>>40565384flat lola is cuz of samur gross obsession with small undeveloped characters getting fucked by large adult sized ones.
>>40565437What do you make of /ztg/s obsession with flat judy? Hell, all the flat zoot ladies?
>>40565461what do u think
>>40565482I think you think they're all pedos. Which is wrong, yall just gaywads afraid of the beauty of the female form.
>>40565461Having outgrown my Oedipus complex, I'm quite happy to admire the slim lithe form of the more 'tomboy' type character.>>40565437I don't see anything 'gross' about reasonable 'size play'>>40565510What he said.
>>40565535Oh shit, is this Samur? If so, that's pretty cool. I thought you'd avoid this place like the plague after all the trolling
>>40555191Thanks, but this was probably one of the most annoying nights of my life
bunny boobs are best
>>40565535>I don't see anything 'gross' about reasonable 'size play'dont rly care what u see t.b.h. especially when its just zaush lite style stuff
>>40565822pregnant bunny boobs get big
>>40565535>Having outgrown my Oedipus complex, I'm quite happy to admire the slim lithe form of the more 'tomboy' type character.Oof, shots fired at Weaver once again
>>40565900>Oof, shots fired at Weaver once againWell no, Weaver likes big titties, but he doesn't always put them on everything.
>>40565822We need more slightly chubby curvy Violet with big bunny boobs.
You know what I ain't asked in a long time?https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=EyV-WdnJ-1IWhat you're listening to.
>>40566383The sound of my AC as I go to bed. Goodnight y'all
>>40565663Honoured to be mistaken for Samur (and Weaver sometimes), but no, just that not quite so anon old bunstache.
>>40565900Funny, considering he was on the "ban weaver" hype in the exact reverse situation. How the tables turn.
>>40566939That whole discord fiasco was a farce that threatened peoples income as leverage
>>40567050My favorite part was how that pro artist noped the fuck out too
>>40567050>That whole discord fiasco was a farce that threatened peoples income as leverageYou'll never be an artist.
>>40562376>I may not have much time left to wait.What's going on?
>>40565437You'll never be an artist.
>>40567432I mean, everyone noped out of it. most of the content of the thread involved stuff that can be argued is unsavory.
>>40566939Samur seemed pretty even keeled about it actually
Hello!I need greentexts that you've written and would like to be read on Greentext Theater this Monday!TB, Pastebun and one other guest will be joining us! Who will the third guest be? I'm not sure! Someone mentioned I should try asking Jonstheman if he'd like to join, so I'll do that here since I have no idea how to contact him. Jonstheman! Would you like to join GTT?Also here is some music!https://youtu.be/pD_ZoCqpISc
>>40566383https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6yjhpnaSI-k
>>40568820Not sure if you've done this one, but the only other one I've got on this drive is one of my own.
>>40568820Oh my, a rare bun appeared!
>>40562418Yeah I get that part but uh, that's not really a reeason to hate preds in general. Besides, she learned how to duck sidestep it most of the time.
>>40560963very nice, thanks for sharing
>>40568820what time Monday? s
gay foxxo
New trailer for prequel about Bellwetheryoutube.com/watch?v=hnEwJKVWjFM
>>40576108Thats not gay, Link wore that to sneak into a city full of sexy women
>>40576342What happens when they find out he's male?
>>40576646Death by snu snu. Gerudo women are like 8 feet tall
>>40577016Bigger women are objectively worth the risk. I'm not a Major Friedkin fan or anything btw.
*stomp* *stomp* *clap**stomp* *stomp* *clap*We will, we will knot eweWe will, we will knot ewe
>>40577638is this cuck?
>>40577674Yeah I'm sure Lionheart will be heartbroken
>>40577674
>>40577174We need more friedkin love
>>40577674Technically yes, but it doesn’t originate from dishonesty nor involves humiliation so it’s fine.
>>40577674>>40578772no, Judy seems to be involved too so it's a threesome
>>40577016>Gerudo cross-dressing Nick but he's like 8 feet tall>Ywn be snu-snu'd by bara Nick
>>40579149>>Ywn be snu-snu'd by bara Nickew
I want to see an epic fivesome, with Judy getting fucked by Nick, Gideon, Tod, and Robin Hood.
>>40579250remove Judy and we have a deal
>>40579250I could have sworn that someone did that, though no Gideon I think and had Finnick and Tails.Then the reverse with Nick in the middle of Judy’s siblings.
>>40579312Yup, S1m did it, even including underage sonic characters in it.
I'm really feeling down today.anyone got some wholesome wildehopps content?
>>40580699
>>40580837
>>40580900
>>40580699Amadose has all the wholesome wildehoppers
Penis lengthNick: ***Gideon: **Tod: *Robin Hood: ****Penis girthNick: **Gideon: ****Tod: *Robin Hood: ***
>>40581683I agree, it's just annoying that he gets Nick's eyecolor wrong and gave him a stupid nosering
>>40582277This just made me imagine a story where Nick and Judy let some random dude watch them going at it. Still feels kinda wired, but not so bad I suppose
please don'tplease don'tplease don't
>>40582885
https://twitter.com/Hyenahello/status/1420798777384792064
Reminder that Gary and Larry are just work associates.
Reminder:
>>40583974they're also not gay. They have wives and gfs they go home to.
>>40576327Oh deer.
Tubes, from lewdest to purest:
>>40585199terrykristravismartypercycaitlinolliedukemartinaclippers ottermrs ottertonemmitt otterton
I just want a sincere savagehopps story without angst or cuck
>>40579679You'll never be an artist.
>>40585657WHY IS TERRY FIRST I ^N THE LIST?This is toally wrong and inappropriateAlso may you have a good night /ztg/
>>40585657That picture reminds me of the ending of the Golgo 13 movieAlso, I think Duke needs to be higher than Ollie
>>40587962Goodnight Terr bear
>>40585657Why is Marty so lewd?
That time Martina got a boner for a lion while Remmy was spilling his guts over how scared the lion made him feel
>>40585199There are no pure tubes.
>>40555011>https://desuarchive.org/trash/thread/40356328Old news, but here's the correct ZTarchive;http://www.ztarchive.com/trash/thread/40461864/40461864.html
>>40587962he's more famous. The more renowned you are, the more people will see you as lewd.
>>40585657lol, I've been falling behind, I only recognize like 6 of those. Who's Martina?
>>40589424martina this dick in your mouth
>>40587619What about angst from their own relationship? They face the pressure from their families to have kids, or maybe get angry with speciest comments whenever they work together ("Can't have the two rabbits together or they'll spend the day fucking"), or whatever.
>>40589639>Judy leaves Jack for Nick because an interspecies relationship has less expectations
>>40587962>WHY IS TERRY FIRST IN THE LIST?You have been lewd since the very beginning.
Good night, /ztg/
>>40590529sleeptight tuber
Just saw the movie for the first time ever.I liked it a lot.However, I put it off due to being busy for 5 years, so I had a general idea of what it was like due to threads like this. I kept staring at Judy's rear end. Is this normal?
>>40591022Judy's butt is top tier.Boob Judy and Pussy Judy cannot compete against Butt Judy.
>>40591022...kinda
>>40591022You have a lot of catching up to do. 8stgx
>>40555011hey there /ztg/, NeoTT here!tell all about your HOBBIES!or, hobbies mammals in Zootopia you think would have!
>>40590481>picInaccurateTerry has such a massive boner, everytime he gets an errection, he rips his underwear
>>40594827Well, for one I think squirrels and other "hoarder" types would be into cataloguing stuff, like coins or stamps or rocks.
>>40595527You would not BELIEVE how big my porn collection is.
>>40595811I thought you collected semen from every tube in Zootopia in tiny jars
>>40565878>
>>40568820>>40575526seriously, on monday when?most of monday to you is tuesday dawn for me
>>40598724Quote from Comic in the Discord:>I'm thinking any time after 12PM PST and before 6PM PST!Translation Bear said he's open for 2-6PM PST so I'm gonna guess that the decided time is gonna be somewhere in that window
>>40597416Femmy's got them tittos
>>40598808Alright, thank you! I checked the discord but didn't see it! Hope to be there!
>>40600910>Canine dickGross
>>40600943Correct opinions around here
>>40600910I am not gay for this fox
>>40561568He just wanted to see if he could
>>40602099>good, more gay for me
>>40602230Nick will never be your husbando
stop posting tubes
>>40604062Fuck you.
>>40604062
What are you listening to /ztg/?https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=GC5E8ie2pdM
>>40607048https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Krgbx4SYnVg
>>40543582>Terry enjoying a nice slice of his favorite pizza please!Here you go>>40607079>Italian eurodance musicI thought I was safe
>>40607048https://youtu.be/5TbhslL_ASA
So I'm probably never gonna do anything with these ideas... May as well throw them out as prompts for story / greentext ideas.1) red fox & serval couple:Being too big for vaginal, they're mostly stuck doing anal. She gets back at him with oral for d/s since canids tend to have a "presenting" fetish. Which works since her tongue hurts (and he likes it), but after awhile, he starts to panic about his dick getting smaller... Until a doctor straight up has to tell him she's licking his dick down.2) pine marten couple & pouched gambian rat:Answering an online ad, he meets the pair at their apartment. She wants to try out pegging and needs an ass, but her husband's is off limits (in spite of how rough he is on her, himself). It's all a little awkward to listen to while they go back and forth on explaing how he's agreed to let her fuck another dude as long as he watches, makes sure she doesn't get fucked because "It's not cheating if it's the guy getting it up the ass". She starts to have doubts along with the rat until she signals to turn around, bend over so she can tell is ass can handle her dong... 3) two jackals, male, female:Meeting for the first time, she lets it slip that she's into "Feral". Being naked on all fours and animalistic. It's disgusting enough to him that he thinks the meet up is over, tells her off. Then she takes the conversation back before he walks out, explaining how it's less fetish, more lifestyle. Practiced in private, and how wholesome, pure it feels to her. She takes him back to her place, and they start off slow. Eventually he moves in, and falls into it naturally. Waiting by the door naked on his days off, when she comes home from work.4) swift foxes, two males, one female:Kind of like with brown hyenas, female swifts tend to be more assertive, but in a maternal sense. She introduces her new boy to the first one, and without it being some kinda cuck shit. She owns them both, without it being a traditional s/m affair.
>>40608075>I thought I was safehow is that italian?
>>40607048Whenever I get back to writing, later, https://www.youtube.com/playlist?list=PLc8ZJyggYShgDTP0XWirahs1zGkuJCkSCAn Encounter has kind of been a break through for me, but I'm going between that, 12, The 1975 & Is There Somebody Who Can Watch You
>>40568820Any reason why you never have Weaver on your stream?
>>40598848>Femmy's got them tittosNah, them's just ramboobs.
>>40607048https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=RtTYQuO1j6w
>>40610187Image to a fun little story;https://archiveofourown.org/works/14243268/chapters/32844210
gargle my fuckin load
>the fuck you lookin' at
>>40611483>girlew
>>40611483You draw the best Charlies
>>40608525Eiffel65 is an Italian band>>40611483Hi, it's been a little whileNow it's a little lateMay you have a good night /ztg/
>>40611338Gay>>40611483The FUCK are YOU lookin at? Fucking Furryass mangy bitch wanna talk shit about the broncos
>>40608075Thanks for drawing my request! I'm surprised the pizza doesn't have any snake meat on it.>>40611700Sleep tight!
>>40612753>I'm surprised the pizza doesn't have any snake meat on it>The filename explicitly says snake sausage
>>40611700goodnight a-sig
>>40612564
OooooooooOOOOOOOOOO GA
>>40612918I stand corrected then, all is well
>>40611238I love Judy's "Oh, shit..." expression.
>>40608489
>>40617226We can resist, We can..Weeeee!
>>40570399There has been a reading of that, but not with Comic.https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=MAd_WzbEGA0&t=3060s
>>40611483ass
>>40617830good night bune
>>40617409Shoot. I was hoping that was pee.
>>40617415Well, hell... I guess I'll post mine.
>digital pen giving in>open it to check if it's some dirt inside>it fucking disassembles on my handWelp. That's enough drawing.
>>40562987>>40563002>>40563012source?
>>40607048https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-CEP5zz2GX4
>>40619510Yeah, mine's held together with sticky tape!
>>40609386>Any reason why you never have Weaver on your stream?no interest>>40609906>Nah, them's just ramboobs.no that's Benny and Femmy
>>40621401is there any other kind
shitdickin'
how do you guys feel about the cuck shit? personally i am extremely conflicted and am going to kill myself instead of addressing my feelings about it
>>40623188is that fucking Mpreg?How the hell do you feel conflicted?
>>40623236no that's not mpregand im conflicted bc pp gets hard despite all rationale telling me that this is an incredibly emotionally abusive situation. the shaming aspect gets me going, but no longer having active consent to what happens between your spouse and you makes my heart hurt
>>40623188>how do you guys feel about this cuck shit?I think it started as a joke, but when the REEES went around the world, the artist decided to double down and just see how far he could push this.Side note, Nick is beating off to a picture of his mother...
>>40623274>the shaming aspect gets me going, but no longer having active consent to what happens between your spouse and you makes my heart hurtfollow your heart, I think your porn addled brain is just trying to find new things to get off on.do not corrupt what is essentially you for the cheap thrill of a wank
We need a Judy of this.
>>40623274LIterally just fetishize Judy only being fucked by Nick but she also never stops giving him the SPH and in spite of the fact she's just big enough down there for him to knot because she's a rabbit and rabbit dick is so small you couldn't even find a chastity cage that fits or just shift your tiny peepee kink over to new characters like a gay fox and stoat couple.It's not that complicated.
>>40623188I watched a movie and got to grow to like Nick and Judy. A third character even if a bull and a in cuck fetish is still just an OC x main character.It's cringe and doesn't deserve more attention than that weirdo that wrote a 50 000 word fanfic around why his micro-penis human OC is better fit to Judy than Nick
Also I'm blowing off a toe saying it, I don't care, y'all think you're mad about this dumb ugly thoughtless meme comic?The furry-tier delusional sociopath cuckooie shit ain't even my problem.
>>40612753Indeed, like >>40612918 I've added snake in the form of sausageNot many other ways to put meat on pizza
>>40623670I know some other things you can put meat on.
>>40623650who asked
>>40623689BEGONE
>>40623474idk i've always liked teasing and bullying in porn, im not against shaming. but this... it feels abusive, like taking advantage of someone just because they're horny and can't think straight. like post nut clarity doesn't exist if you don't let the cuck cum. that level of control over your faculties being absent is what feels gross to me. this isn't even specific to zoot shit but in general
>>40623851It definitely feels like a "gone too far" moment where something intimate is broken irrevocably
>>40623869exactly. there's swinging and being open, then teasing your partner about their other lays, but this whole "cuck as a lifestyle" just makes me feel gross
>>40623188I am legitimately sick of seeing Nick cuck, it's far too common in fics/comics in this damn community.Especially when it's dumb shit that causes Judy to go into the arms of someone else. Like the fucking borba comics.
>>40624427same, not to mention how out of character it is.Nick is a character that HATES to be disrespected/looked down on. artist's excuse for it to be OOC that "it's my fetish, it doesn't matter, it's fanfiction, it's to entertain me, not the zootopia fans". Erm.. so you are NOT a fan of Judy and Nick then? You just like their character designs? A fanart is something that suppose to be made out of respect and adoration for the source material. If something doesn't have that, it stops being fanart and it's just character design appropriation, exactly like the borba comics.But in all honestly. If enjoy being a dick and play with character like a 5 year old in a dollhouse instead of putting actual effort into the writing, then more power to you, enjoy yourself. I have a bit higher standards even in porn writing
>>40591022Well one does have to question as to why they gave her such a shapely behind ...I do know that there was going to be a scene where her butt would've been too big to fit through a hole, but it got cut out. Maybe that's why?Otherwise, It wouldn't make sense for her rear to be so big unless the film would comment on its size at one point.
>>40623811Me
>>40623650You'll never be an artist.
Unpopular opinion, but I could care less about the existence of amadose's comic. I don't get angry at it, I'm just indifferent
>>40626257I’m kind of the same at this point, though maybe not really. At first I hated it, and I still dislike it, but overall it is just porn at the end of the day and if someone gets off on it then whatever.Personally I’m just tired of Nick angst and shit, and cucking Nick just feels like an evolution of all the fics where he has to prove his love for Judy when there is some other male getting her attention. It is just everywhere and always been a thing since the beginning of the fandom. Hell, I’ll take Nick and Judy having an open relationship and swinging over it because at least that is still somewhat them being equal and Nick at least gets some too.
>>40626456What I'm about to say is going to sound bizarre, but here goes.I think all this cucking nonsense with added relationship angst, the many fics where Nick feels he isn't good enough for Judy, and Judy being uncharacteristically mean spirited towards Nick is a product of Disney making Nick and Judy's relationship too stable.If their relationship had finished up with at least some sort of friction between them, then people would have explored that aspect of their relationship by making a ton of hurt/comfort fics where one of the two or maybe both come to realize how they'd hurt the other, then they'd move forward from there more in love with each other than before. But because their relationship problems were pretty much solved in by the end of the film, people turn to making them do OOC things on order to build angst or create uncharacteristic conflict between the two of them. I'm not saying there's no hurt/comfort fics of these two; just that there'd be more of them if their dynamic wasn't so tightly written. Fanfics in general want to explore angsty, melodramatic matters, and the biggest fight they could ever have between them had already been taken care of, so now all that's left is to create sexual tension followed by either catharsis, or muddying their relationship by humiliating (mostly) Nick. I guess it's considered sexier to humiliate the male lead who's charismatic and normally in control or something
>>40621049>Zoot2
>>40626573Nah, when you explain it like that it doesn't seem bizarre and certainly explains why many stories essentially "reset" their relationship somehow in order to get conflict and drama. The countless stories where Nick lies/hurts Judy because he thinks he has to protect her (when he should know Judy is the last person who needs to be babied and just needs someone by her side), or Judy deciding to give into peer pressure from her family and not date Nick (despite her entire character being defined by following her dreams and desires). Neither one trusting the other despite literally having their lives in each other's hands at some point, sometimes multiple points. Etc.>or muddying their relationship by humiliating (mostly) Nick. I guess it's considered sexier to humiliate the male lead who's charismatic and normally in control or somethingI still hate how Nick is the punching bag so much in the fandom. I've read multiple explanations ranging from "Nick is a jerk in the movie so he needs to be hurt" to "he's an easy character to hurt because he has already been hurt" or whatever, and it still weirds me out that Nick is almost overwhelmingly the hurt party in most fanfics. I get that Judy essentially already went through her gauntlet in the movie but still.
Reject cuck, embrace the big gay
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>>40627494
why is Nick so gay anyway
>>40555011Thought of dusting off my writing with a short green, hope you like this little Hobbies TT entry!Some new interests>My new little friend is the center of attention in the Crowns today.>Ever since Wolter and I talked about lizards my muzzlebook ads have flooded me with local animal shelter post about adoptable little pets.>The moment I saw this little guy, I just couldn’t get him out of my head.>”The resemblance is uncanny!” laughs Anneke>The little white leopard gecko seemed to love the attention as it always turned and crawled towards the person that said anything>Betty even put her cigarette down, as she rubbed the cheek of our new scaly friend “Have you decided on a name yet?”>”Not yet, I’ll be honest this was really an impulse buy. I lack proper equipment to care for him, so I’ll be off to buy that stuff in a minute!” >”What really do you need?” Wolt twist his head>”Well he will need a nice terrarium, around 10 gallon size is the minimum these guys need I think… “ Avo wondered ”aaand a good lamp for heat source, lizards need those too right?”>”And the food of course, there are those things called, mealworms.” I nod.>”Nice, nice, and how big will it grow?”>”I don’t really know, Wolter. Guy at the shelter said it’s almost an adult, but still has a little bit to go”>”Oh, weird, seems like a lot of work, but if you want a little exotic snack, I guess you have to work for it.”>I look at him with a raised brow and try not to laugh “Very funny! Nobody is gonna eat this little guy!”1/2
>>40627900>”Yeah, bro, what the heck?” Anneke looks surprisingly disturbed>”Ah, sorry, I thought you bought him to fatten him up… you know, because” He looks around seeing everyone’s puzzled look including mine. >“It… it’s kinda your hobby to try weird foods, no?”>”*snort* What?” >”That’s a fair point I guess” Our Beta says as she picks up the little white lizard into the palm of her hand. “But eating lizards is kind of a big step from fish tacos”>”Wouldn’t say that, I mean there are plenty of Mammalayzian and Paiwlandish vendors in the city selling snakes and lizards as food. I had some from that mongoose up at Peak street station.”>”Really? Cool! How was it?”>She muses for a second before replies to Wolter ”Meh, a lot like chicken, I stick with fish and processed bugs.”>”Well in any case…” I use the moment to grab a word “…eating ‘weird stuff’ isn’t my hobby you know. I just like eating stuff that originates from predator culinary culture.”>”Well isn’t that a hobby?” Anneke ask while playing with the gecko in Betty’s paw.>”I mean… Is buying clothes that you like a hobby?”>”Yeah, it’s called shopping” Betty remarks, but is quickly shot down by Avo.>”Shopping is when you spend many hours browsing without a solid plan on what to buy. What Remmy does is just ‘having a preference in fulfilling his daily necessities’ I think.”>We kinda nod and mull over the topic silently, as a Betty gives the little critter back to me and finally after a few minutes lets out a sigh of relief.>”I thought the Crowns have a no-pets policy, how did you make Al agree to this?”>I freeze as I stare into her eyes "...shit"2/2
>>40623910>cuck as a lifestyleCuck has a more visceral response because there's this aeasthetic of cruelty or humiliation to it mixed with infidelity, but frankly no matter what fetish it is this is really the point where it becomes uncomfortable.When you're so obsessed your whole life starts to bend inwards around a fetish, affecting your living and working situations, your mental state, your socialization, your overall (outside of sex) relation with your partner, etc. And all for what? So you'll have a slightly better orgasm?No fucking orgasm is worth throwing your life out like this.
>>40630098knot gay
Keep your anus lubed. Because you just never know.
>>40630098This absurd but it's also kind of hotI would like to see more no-strings-attached "jack plays with a lot of REALLY big dicks" art
>>40630770but I'm not even gay. And I only top
>>40560963Love your work. You should do more cub stuff.
>>40627900>>40627921
>>40627921Nice work. Our well-loved tube is getting business.I suggest improving on writing dialogue. The way this conversation moves from one topic to another is a bit unnatural. I think Avo's comment about gecko care is nice. It sounds like she's interested, but for other characters, it's hard to tell how they feel about this and where they're taking the conversation. For example, it's not immediately clear if Wolter is joking or not. Characters seem to introduce side topics that take the conversation on a detour, not develop much of that idea, then return to the main topic about the pet gecko.I think some dialogue writing needs to better match the tone and needs some minor technical fixes. For instance, this is an informal setting, so>Not yet, I’ll be honest this was really an impulse buy. I lack proper equipment to care for him, so I’ll be off to buy that stuff in a minute!sounds a tiny bit too formal. There's also an abrupt change to talking about equipment and some awkward punctuation. I would correct this as>Not yet. Honestly, this was kind of an impulse buy. Oh, and I still need to get all the stuff to take care of this little guy.In some parts, it's hard to tell who's talking, like in the second half of post 1 and the first half of post 2.It also took me a moment to realize who the narrator was. I think you needed to add a clearer hint about who it is earlier in the text.I think having five characters in the conversation is to blame. Maybe no one's getting enough time in the conversation to develop an idea and direction for it.You still have a good scenario and set up for the joke at the end. I want to see the part where Al smells gecko in the lobby. Also, you should convince Comic to use this for Greentext Theater today!
>>40631257Ah man thanks for the cap!>>40631680Thanks for the feedback! Appriciate it!I tried to avoid "XY said" after every quote, since I hate being repetative like that, but I agree that it made the scene a bit hard to follow. And that's with me writing Ozzy and Marty out from it, so I know what you mean.Yeah, I can't really write good in-character Remmy I think, I see how your version fits him better! But I didn't express the narrator too hard because I wanted it to feel natural, how a regular PS chapter progresses with Remmy telling a story.Glad you liked the joke, and that it peaked interest for more! I wrote to Comic and offered him to send the cap in case he needs more GTs for GTT tonight. Regardless, I'm looking forward to it, hope I won't fall asleep and miss it!
>>40630699For anyone interested, DogEar drew this because today (8/2) is both "Bunny Day" and "Panties Day" in Japan>8 = ba>2 = ni>8/2 = bani = bunny>8 = pa>2 = tsu>8/2 = patsu = pantsu = panties
Just getting everything set up, sorry it's taking a bit!https://piczel.tv/watch/comicanonI'm going to get some music playing in the meantime while I get things ready, should be soon!
>>40633681Ack, I hit post way too fast:As well, feel free to send over any of your greens you would like read for the stream! So far I have two, which means we'd have plenty more we can read!
>>40633727Why not >>40627900>>40627921
>>40633792Already got it!
>>40633795do you by chance have a link to all these wonderful VRbit images you've created?
Okay, we're just about to start!Join Translation Bear, TeaBro and Pastebun as we read your greens!https://piczel.tv/watch/comicanon>>40633964I don't at the moment! Those were all stored on my laptop, which is experiencing technical difficulties at the moment sadly! But when it's repaired I can give you a folder!
>>40634311>as we read your greenswill you please read the bumps on my penis and tell me my fortune?
>>40634547If they're green and are in the shape of letters then I guess that fits the criteria for "greentext"
>>40634311related to the conversation
Greentext reading is finished! We have one left over for next time, but for now, we'll take a break before heading into Fresh Hare!Please send questions over for Translation Bear, TeaBro and Paste!https://piczel.tv/watch/comicanon
>>40635920alright a question...have you created any zoot content that was sort of inpired by something you experienced in your personal life?
>>40635920Give us your favorite crackships
>>40635920do you still call the Q&A session 'Fresh Hare'?ad if so, why haven't you changed it?
>>40635920Thanks for the stream bun!As a question... asking for a better name than Fresh Hare!Sadly here is late, so may you have a good night /ztg/
>>40635920any comments on chris chan
>>40635920If anyone was wondering, here's the life hack that this greentext was based on. I only had five minutes, so I didn't have the time to completely think the scenario through.
>>40635920Gideon Grey:Pepsi or Coca Cola?
>>40635920https://youtu.be/Sn7QvnhJgeA
>>40635920TB(ear): you're an American living in Japan, so you obviously have to buy things at Japanese shops. What do you eat at home? Would it be different from what you ate while living in the US?
>>40635920When are you going to finish that project you started working on a while ago but haven't gotten to lately?
>>40635991Better names: The Rachel Meadow Show, or even the Bucker Carlson Show
>>40635920How would Olympic Games work in Zootopia?
>>40635920CONSUMERISM. Have you bought or gotten anything cool recently?
>>40635920Name a content creator who hasn't been around in a while that you miss
>>40635920Favorite horror movie(s)
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>>40626257I think I hate it bc of how much emphasis he puts on it being "totally super consensual and loving" like I'd much rather you just make Judy a terrible person at this point and not try to convince us that it's a caring relationship. It literally started out bc of Judy lying to him and he doesn't ever really get to protest what happens now. This is just abuse at this point
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>>40635920Faveorite game/movie/book/whatever. What's bad about it?Least favorite. What makes it great?
Because if there's one thing Zootopia's Judy Hopps is known for, it's her hatred and disgust of the weak and defenseless.
I liked this greentext
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>>40636475who draw dis
>>40635920Best decade for music
>>40636475I love people making drawings of my text. Thanks!
>>40635920Any headcanons about Judy and Nick’s high school years?
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=XZuWT0hglZ8
>>40635920Is the VRbit a top or a bottom?
>>40636612<>>40636638glad you like it :D
>>40635920Among this panel, what's something only YOU know?
The stream has just ended! Thanks so much again to Paste, Translation Bear and TeaBro for joining!I'll be posting the stream tonight for any and all who missed it! Take care and be well till then!
and the table pic, have a good night thread
Aw Nick, you should share with Judy! She'd like a few licks, too!
>>40627322>>40627336So that's what that crane game toy is. Goddamn. I should nab one next time it's on Mandarake.
>>40639286Oh he'll give her some licks alright
>>40633321Thanks TB for the contest, might draw something of sorts too.
>>40639856Sleep tight bunner.
NEW THREAD pls
