/ZTG/ - Zootopia General: Soft Snoozing EditionPastebin: pastebin.com/iYDU8g2T Thread journal Backup: https://pastebin.com/GiLL5kAS ZTG Creator List: derpy.me/ztgcclistArchives: www.ztarchive.com / desuarchive.org / archive.b-stats.orgPrevious thread: https://archive.b-stats.org/trash/thread/11925723Previous thread: http://www.ztarchive.com/trash/thread/11925723Previous thread: http://desuarchive.org/trash/thread/11925723Current TT Theme: Handholding (Submissions are due Oct. 12)More information on TT: derpy.me/trashthematicthursdaysTT Archive: t3event.tumblr.comTT Pastebin: pastebin.com/gudYsYHL
Show me a cute boy
>>11930709Here ya go
I like zootopia!
>>11930709:)
masterpiece
>>11930736You're a good person Anon, probably.
Enough of the twink shit. If you're going to post fudgepacking, post beefcakes!
>>11930782
someone repost that pic Weaver posted in the last threadit was really cute
>>11930792
>>11930778Problem is we have very few beefs to cake Anon.
>>11930801What, this?
>>11930778The world needs more fit nick.
>>11930817Oh neat I missed this. Weaver's a cool duder.
>>11930803Which is a damn shame. I feel like there's the missed opportunity of a bear who's a bear, or an actual stallion, or other similar animal metaphors for manly dudes. That's good though. I do enjoy some bogo.>>11930821This is also good!
>>11930817I really like Avo's slimness.
>>11930817>Avo jerks off NAH.png>Avo>PenisAnon...
>>11930825Was there another pic you were thinking of?>>11930841Hmm... who is that supposed to be then?
>>11930864It's one of Weaver's characters Can't believe weaver made him look so cute
>>11930821>>11930827>Inter-shitter got so bad, the author had to put out a recap page because no one could make heads or tails of her awful story telling.
>>11930709
>>11930889I'm okay with this
>>11930888The only good part was fit nick.
>>11930889He's such a Big BOY
>>11930889>Beefcake OzzyI am strangely aroused by this>>11930817Santiago, from Weav's Nan Quest.
>>11930731you stole my bit :(i like zootopia
>>11930889This is the GOODEST boy!
>>11930758>>11930091panther if you are here: do you want a quick redline?
>>11930834not avo its Santiago
>>11930864No no, I wasn't the one asking for the pic, I missed the last two threads and was just happy to see more Weaver stuff..
>>11930960>I missed the last two threadsYou really didn't miss much (unfortunately).Fuel made this though.
>>11930985Sweet! Love Fuels stuff. Thank you Anon.Ya I gave a cursory look and decided not to read up on em.
>>11930985and also this one if you want lesbians instead.
>>11930821Judy's wet dream
>>11931019Nice.
>>11930939Panterwave, if you're here, highest "this" to this post. Always, always accept redlines. The best will hurt. Writers here, we know the comicanon "Hm."IT HURTS. But it's so fucking good for us in the long run.
>>11931019Nice one anon, I assume this one was you as well. What do you go by here anyway?
>>11930888And yet her rabid fans will defend the crap story telling, and call anyone who points it out “haters”.
>>11931044>the comicanon "Hm."im triggered
>>11931050>>11931050>Zootopia HUGEQUEST
Finally fixed the jaw issue, did this for a_sig since he wanted muzzle help
>>11931056Ho boy
>>11931056
>>11931092thanks Rose!
>>11931056This could have been cute... why did you have to add a bulge?
>>11931092This looks real nice Rose, I'm sure it will help some other CCs out.
>>11931120Cause it might be the first in a series. Somebody was asking about the scenario earlier this week.
>>11931056>>11931120This actually reminds me of a horrible moment in my lifeThere was a girl I used to like in Middle School and we once went to the beach as a class tripI was swimming with her and we were talking and I invited her in the water and we were having fun and then I came out and she wanted nothing to do with me and I felt horrible, didn't know what was going onI only later learned I had a huge boner propping up my swimsuit and didn't know that was a thing couldn't back it happen, it might have been my first boner for all I remember
>>11930889>>11931019I'm going to call you 700 for now, unless you have a name already.
>>11931050
>>11931092saved
>>11931151>it might be the first in a series
>>11931152>might have been my first bonerAnon, fetuses pop boners while they're still in the womb. So unless you have a serious medical condition, that's not likely.
sigh
>>11931170Well, I'm liking your work so far. Maybe Zoro works better for you than 700.
>>11931151>first in a seriesIf your making a cub series, literally fucking kill yourself
>>11931151>Cause it might be the first in a series.Please don't keep stirring up the thread with this stuff.
>>11931193But it might have been the first time I wrote learned what a boner wasFuck that was humiliating
>>11931164>>11931200
>>11931092This is super helpful Rose, thank you!
>>11931056>>11931151....TE, is this you?If it isthen why are you doing this?At the same time as your comic? You must know that this is the worst thing you could do.Leave it at this; we are still before seeing underage animal penis.JUST STOP IT HERE.
>>11931243I dun get it...
>>11931264I enjoy those knot paws that are not paws
>>11931266No no no.It'd be after the comic. This is just for the TT.
>>11931264Random indeed. Well, it's nice to see your sketches Fuel.
>>11931289WHY THE FUCK ARE YOU MAKING IT ALL YOU SICK FUCK
Aight ZTG. Odds, I start writing this thing and then go to sleep. Evens, I listen to some music and then go to sleep. Dubs I sleep immediately.
>>11931289For fucks sake.I am telling you, begging you. DON'T DO CUB.Stop at this one pic of Jaguar kid and Judy.Have the hippo camper wake up and it be a dream; you could even have it be a memory. Then you could have him and/or those other scouts find Mrs. Wilde AS OLDER TEENS, and fuck her then and you can show it.Please don't commit community suicide over this.
>>11931264You know, seeing these things, it makes me wonder what type of monsters Zootopia comes up with for their myths and such. What do you come up with when your world consists of hundreds, thousands of different sapient species?
>>11931324Hopefully next time then.Have a good nite.
>>11931238Fair enough. I think I was 9 or 10. I can remember I overheard this other kid at school saying his older brother needed surgery because "his penis was too big." After that every time I got a boner I got really worried.
>>11931266>>11931301>>11931333I think you are wasting your breath anons, in his head everyone loves his work and all naysayers are one shit stirrer.
what's wrong with this bun?
>>11931333Oh it's OK, anon. All the young men in the comic are above the age of consent. Remember it's a flashback to when Nick was a kid. Back before the Zootopian congress raised the age of consent to its current level.
>>11931387Fuck off swat
>>11931380That bun lost her gun.
>>11931387>Trying to justify itYour just digging yourself a deeper hole pedo
>>11931380>what's wrong with this bun?She has huge ears. You've been cranking out a lot of good stuff today Fuel.
Need more lewds of Nick's sexy feet.
>>11931407Something tells me that guy is just having shits n giggles.But I am so fucking tired at TE for the shit he ACTUALLY has said.
>>11931380Fuel?After how shitty the last three threads have been, I'm depressed, and this bun is looking more and more like she has the right idea.
>>11931434Why are we acting like this guy matters?Who gives a fuck if he ruins his "reputation".
>>11931434Who is TE? I don't recall that CC.
>>11931465Fucking read the last thread.
>>11931434>am so fucking tiredPerhaps consider moving on.>>11931465see>>11931056
>>11931463>Who gives a fuck if he ruins his "reputation".I don't. If he was a top tier artist I might, but we have plenty of better CCs.
>>11931473pretty sure that was 2 threads ago now.
>>11931484And last thread, which is still alive as of this moment.
Judy is a little mouse now, and Nick is trying to figure out how to fuck her.
>>11931484This shit's been going on for 3 threads now, I wish TE would leave or an-hero himself.
>>11931505>Nick is trying to figure out how to fuck her.Anal vore maybe?
>>11931509TE's not the one shitposting.
>>11931523>not sheath vore
>>11931538>sheath voreHmm that could work. I'm not usually a fan, but that mouse is small enough that his sheath wouldn't be grossly distended.
>>11931533>posts cub>everyone tells him to stop>continues to post cub>makes new cub>puts a bulge on a childHi TE
>>11931533>>11931550Basically this. He keeps drawing fresh cub so you can't say he's not causing shit here.
>>11931473Heard it was uncomfy, no thanks >>11931475Thanks I saw that, I meant is this CC new? Never heard of him before
>>11931568>I meant is this CC newHe's been here a few weeks, but hopefully not for much longer.
So, WildBurr finally put out the overall plot of Shackled...Long story short, it is Zistopia, but worse. Preds were already collared but, thanks to "Nick" killing a bunch of prey, GPS trackers were installed that would shock them if they left or entered areas without permission. After Nick was arrested, Judy found out she was pregnant with their miracle baby but had an abortion out of spite, since she didn't know he was framed. Nick later learns about it and is rightfully enraged and devastated.Bellwether does her things with nighthowlers, and shows she used the aborted baby to learn how to add predator features to prey. Rehashed version of getting her to confess, to a hidden camera. Savage Nick kills her.Preds basically go into civil unrest, attacking prey. Nick gets ready to leave Zootopia, but talks to Judy one last time. The author never decided if they wanted Judy to leave with Nick or head back into the city to try to calm it down, probably to her death....What the actual fuck?
>>11931550>>11931555I mean, they have a point.We can handle seeing a bit of cub art.The problem is the thread tearing itself apart over it.But the guy is still a peace of shit for being tone deaf about it.
>>11931568>Heard it was uncomfy, no thanksThen why ask?sighHe's new-ish. He's been here for a few weeks. He drew a Nick/Skye and a Nick/Honey.Now he's torpedoing any good will the thread had for him.
>>11931575>Zistopia, but worseI wish someone would make "Zistopia, but better"... this is not it.
>>11931568Been here a few weeks. Done lots of requests. Seems to be the new target for shitpostanon.
>>11931584>That small dickI-I actually think that Nick is underaged and we all didn't realize it
>>11931582>We can handle seeing a bit of cub art.We shouldn't have to.>But the guy is still a peace of shit for being tone deaf about it.He's apparently too autistic to read the room.
>>11931582Most of the thread can take some (I wish I could make italics) cub with a grain of salt.But not when it comes from a person who is, at the VERY least, is accused of actually being a pedophile, and being an ass about being asked to stop.There was a time when Armasyll used to make cub greens and people put up with it before his personality and tastes became apparent.
>>11931572>>11931594Thanks anons>>11931584I asked who the CC was, obviously didn't know it spanned the couple of threads. Someone previously said the threads have been uncomfy but didn't specify as to why.
>>11931594TE, you done like 3 requests. Please either stop posting cub or leave.
>>11931575Where the hell did you hear this? This sounds so nothing and pointless I swear you are bullshiting us.
>>11931627I desperately wish for more relationship building with the Pizza Pals.
Imagine if TE was just Arma, and he commissioned someone to make those draws to shitpost and fuck with the threads slowly.
>>11931592I honestly feel like someone could do Zistopia right if you just remove the damn collars. Keep the darker setting, keep the prejudice, keep Proto-Nick and Judy, but just don't deal with the logical mess the collars create simply by existing. >>11931623https://archiveofourown.org/works/12278634/chapters/27908403Check the comments, the KiltedGuy (WildBurr) responded when someone said Shackled should continue and put out what they had planned for it. What I typed up was a shorter version of what they wrote.
>>11931633I agree they're adorable. Though they're gonna need to figure out a system for lewds as with true penetration he will wear her like a condom.Full body tug jobs are cute and his tongue can probably get some nice work done.
>>11931647Imagine if we discussed something other than this
>>11931657>I honestly feel like someone could do Zistopia right if you just remove the damn collars.That's pretty much just a slightly darker regular Zootopia though.
>>11931380She's got the reefer madness
>>11931670Fuck off TE, everbody in the whole world hates you.
Oof what a day it's been... hopefully tomorrow is better. Goodnight /ZTG/
>>11931657Jesus fuck you are right. Really what is even the point? Shit. It makes me now wonder when this new fic is going to have more cucking/dark idiocy in it?Since I ogirinally didn't even notice that fic's author, was who they really were.I was even rather intrigued by it, but nope.
vixe
Name an active CC you wished would post more, or has the potential to become the next big CC
>>11931727You have a good night man
>>11931666
>>11931730Honestly, does it really matter? They burned their bridges.
>>11931732too lewd
>>11931732Fuel, you are a rare gem in this age of poverty.
>>11931732Too cute lewd Skye
>>11931743Looks comfy, thanks anon.
Someone explain how to improve Zistopia to meAnd I don't mean fixing the outlying stuff like 'remove the pansexual crap' or the 'remove the lesbo fox equating liking prey to being gay'.I mean the overall plot. The council of badguys and their reason got a bad wrap and most saw that as the shark-jumping point but what would you have done? At the end of the day there has to be a bad guy with a bad guy reason for wanting to keep predators collared. So what would you do?Not defending Zistopia at all, this is not a "I want to see you do better or shut up' post. Just genuinely curious.
I'm always exhausted when I come home.Hello everybody!Tomorrow I'll be catching up with read throughs and writer's workshops. If you would like to speak with me tomorrow, let me know a time that works well for you.How about we post some /winding down for a cozy Sunday/ music?https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=TE8y7t3kIQg
>>11931736Bate
>>11931791Giving this a listen thanks. Be comfy bunner
>>11931790>there has to be a bad guy with a bad guy reason for wanting to keep predators collaredThe motivation can simply be fear and prejudice, the same reasons that have lead to genocide in real life.
>>11931755Ya that's right. Just couldn't stop myself from a mild fit of conniptions seeing that for the first time.Just got to carry on and find better thing's to enjoy.
>>11931732>no fortune cookiewhy?
>>11931791Hello lewd bun bun, I hope your work is going well. https://youtu.be/jBjvgjeqZSQ
Let's list things that are deadZistopiaPack StreetShorty Squad DEAD DEAD DEAD
>>11931790Make the villain more personal instead of "secret racism illuminati." I can't recall if we know why Swinton was doing what she was doing in the original, but it seemed more personally motivated than "I want more money." No collar zombies.
well i can't say i'm 100% happy with it but here it is
>>11931790>At the end of the day there has to be a bad guy with a bad guy reason for wanting to keep predators collared.I wish I still had enough faith in people to agree with this.
>>11930731>>11930925I do too!>>11930889>>11931019>>11931050>>11931170You've been busy, Jonstheman! Its always great to see your... uh... you!>>11931092Man this is so cool. People will get a ton of use out of this. Great job, Rose!>>11931380Is that a post apocalyptic punk bun? What was that game that had that pose as the cover... Anyway it looks wonderful! >>11931811Hope you like it!>>11931850Work is going long and exhausting but its always wonderful to know I can come back here and be among friends.
>>11931869Hot damn, that's really good!
>>11931790First, remove all of the filler shit with the punk scene and Judy's sister.Then, give a proper explanation on how forcing collars to make preds go savage leads to mind controlling collars being made.Have Nick's crew be able to do something than just sit twiddling their thumbs at the bunker.Don't have the rabbit majority minority conspiracy shit.Actually use Swinton instead of making up your own shitty villains, and give her a reason to be bad. IIRC, she didn't institute the collars, but she set in motion the sabotage because she hated preds enough that she wanted them forced out of the city.
>>11931869Hot
>>11931859>Good>Sad>Fucking tragedy>>11931869My only thing is that her eye blends into the fur on her face. Otherwise it's superb.
>>11931869I really hope this blasts off some more Anneke and Fin stuff. It's damn hot!
>>11931791https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4uHMnalQYs4sleepy tooGoodnight ztg>>11931869happy dreams for sure
>>11931909>First, remove all of the filler shit with the punk scene and Judy's sister.I liked that though.Sure it wasn't especially important, but it was cute and I don't think it was anything close to being a critical flaw either.
>>11931954Night High Cow
>>11931954Sleep tight, High Cow!
>>11931954You have a good night Mr Cow.
>>11931869Addendum, unless her eye is supposed to just be the white part.For some reason, I thought she had a big anime teary eye with the white as reflection. It kinda looks round to give an illusion like that.
>>11931791>How about we post some /winding down for a cozy Sunday/ music?https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=LuN6gs0AJls
>>11931961I actually feel it was somewhat important in establishing that there are prey who actively despise the collar system and think it's unnecessary, and was even fairly effective in sort of continuing the themes established when Nick was talking about the big party they had when segregation was ended.
what ifJack and Skye ACTUALLY exist in universeAnd Jack really is a spy and Skye really is his field support/technician/engineerBut it doesn't invalidate Judy's accomplishmentBecause they are both Judy's and Nick's adopted kids and told them both they were going to be better than momma some day
>>11932014>eventual incest No anon
>>11931961It was fat that needed to be trimmed.This is the story of Nick & Judy and the conspiracy.You spend about 15 strips about side characters you don't know. If you can't fit Nick or Judy in there, then it doesn't belong.>>11931992But that was done more effectively when Judy went to the hospital and talked to Fru Fru who was a nurse. Or shit, when Judy's nephew drew a picture of Nick as an astronaut and was told that foxes can't be ones and he asks why.Oh yeah, also cut out the family after Nick & Judy leave Bunnyburrow.Don't split your audience's attention between multiple groups unless you can AUTHENTICALLY make them gel together at some point.
>>11931982it's just the white part, anime-shock style. i just happened to also mess up how dark her face is
>>11932038Fru Fru's technically a predator, though. There's just a size requirement before you're legally required to wear a collar.
Hey, happy weekend, everyone!If you like Zootopia (and you should) as well as Weaver's Pack Street (ditto), then please check out "Pack Street: The Next Generation"!You'll get eight chapters-- with this eighth one being brand, spankin' new and only uploaded a matter of minutes ago-- of exploring what happens as our Pack Street friends grow up. Dad Al. Dad Remmy. Dad Marty. Mom Betty. Mom Charlie. Mom Velvet. And more.See:https://archiveofourown.org/works/9917648/chapters/27959976That's the latest chapter!And you can read the whole thing at:https://archiveofourown.org/works/9917648Love all of the support that I've gotten, and please do read this latest piece!
>>11932080pass
>>11932033no, no incest needed, implied, or wantedjust Big sis skye and little bro Jack living out what their mom always dreamed for them
>>11932090And then they fuck
>>11931790First, ditch the collars. Second maybe change the character focus. Less on Nick and more on someone who hasn't experienced Zootopia's subtlety prejudiced atmosphere, someone who's filled with hope and willing to prove herself. Maybe a really enthusiastic self righteous energizer bunny.Next, lets remove the shadowy council, let's make the villain or set of a villains a bit of a twist, someone who you least suspect, maybe like someone who helps the new protagonist at earlier parts in the film. Then make the villains motivation clear and simple and even throw tiny tidbits of why in earlier scenes, little things that you might not see on your first viewing.I feel this is a nice place to start off, using these changes we can really mix up the Zistopia stuff and make it more watchable.
>For all the wealth that she had made for herself with her career, the things she treasures most are the things her boyfriend buys for her.>With honest money, that is.
>>11931044"[Word] [word] too close too close.""Hm. I hate this. Why do I hate this?"He hurts us so good.
>>11932080Damn that Charlie/Marty spawn looks so freaking adorable. I have yet to read these... I really should.
>>11932063Then make the nurse Bellwether.She serves no purpose as part of the Cud Club at all, considering the real bad guy is that llama woman.
>>11932096kek
>>11931986Hello Solaire! Glad to see you rocking with us tonight!>>11932115I don't try to hurt people...
>>11932090 Cuties are for patooties
>>11932087Awwwww...
>>11932137aww don't fret, bunif we didn't like it, we wouldn't ask you toi'm still trying to sell off these surplus wrought iron railings all these months later
>>11932090Good point!
>>11932189What do you call a three gunned bun?
>>11932115I want to hug and cherish that tube FOREVER
>>11932080Good to see you back at it PseudoFox!!!I'm definitely gonna give this a read
>>11932123I'm biased as the author, of course, but I so hope that you check it out. I'd like to think that I described the sweet little tube child with even half-- or even a third-- of the cuteness that he's been drawn.
>>11931986she was the onlyyyyyy woman you ever lovedhttps://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9FxfjJa_24g>>11932206<3
>>11932137VR, what's up?
>>11932189>"Ambush! It was six buns with six guns...">"What if it was one bun with six guns?"
>>11932189It's silly, but I genuinely smiled.
>>11932080I think this is the longest PS fic that I've seen so far and liked. Keep up the work dude!!
>>11932225Great! Thank you!
>>11932189>>11932200Unlewdable.>>11932238Just checking in on everyone! Did a lot of work on the house today, and more physical therapy. I need two more months before I'm back to normal, doctor's say.Looking forward to thinking up ways to help people generate ideas, since last GTT some people said they had trouble coming up with possible concepts for Thematic Thursdays.
>>11932235Tubes are LOVETubes are LIFE
>>11932316Did you read the Roaring 20s TT submissions? There was an interesting one by Otterly, I think, that was about singing in speakeasies. Cool art was made. One story was about mammals smoking weed back when Weed Jazz was a thing.
>>11932345I'm a bit backed up on read throughs due to being sick and for catching up with IRL work when I was sick. But I'm interested in reading them!
>>11932137>>11932316>rockdon't mind if I do!https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rlo9DoVGAtA
>>11932189>"Hey Nick, what's better than a bun?" asked skye while holding Jack's paw>"how about two buns, skye ? Suddenly Nick is holding Judy and Jack's paws>"Bloody hell you cuked me, Nick..."
>>11932316>Physical therapyWhoa what? What happened?
>>11932356Read them!And listen to Weed Jazz while doing so!And feel better soon!https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Lm-L9uMxzQA
>>11932316Hey bun, trashweasel here.Do you wanna do a google doc idea generating stream or something? I was thinking it could be fun to do a stream in which we come up with as many "elevator pitch" story blurbs as possible based on audience input.Like>Okay chat, give me an character and a noun/place/time of day/etcThen we come up with as many story pitches as we can, just riding each prompt's momentum as far as we can.Besides the obvious utility of the story ideas themselves, it could be a cool insight into the initial story generation process for folks who struggle with that first hurdle.
>>11931791Missed you, comhttps://www.youtube.com/watch?v=mNgkxa61eJQ
>>11932437Here's a storyOnce upon a time there was a cute weaselHe was grabbed by huge, strong apex predators with gigantic arms big as tree trunksThe weasel was snuggled foreverIt was warm and soft times all aroundThe End
>>11931056Yes, please continue what you're doing
>>11932482
>>11932392I happened. I was trying for a 3x5 135lb OHP, got 3x3, and then decided it would be a great time to cool down with a bunch of weighted dips.Couldn't raise my left arm above my head after that. Class Three Shoulder Separation from overuse.So since then every day at the gym has been leg day.I'll be better! I know now to listen to my body better.>>11932394Will do!>>11932437I think this would be a ton of fun!Want to do it tomorrow?>>11932469I missed you too!
>>11932530Sure, as long as you don't mind hosting! Just name the time.
>>11932527i have to say, i fucking love the way they hop around. i want a ferret.
>>11932527Too late!Prepare for cuddles!
>>11932546>>11932530alsoComic has 1pl8 OHPhaha holy shit
Wanted to fix this to be less CP.Got rid of Jaguar bulge.Tried to raise the strap on Judy's bodysuit so it isn't low.Wanted to make it less cringy, dunno if I succeeded or not.
>>11932568It does, looks much more innocent
>>11932568>>11932576In total seriousness, both of them being tender crushes of each other to where maybe he popped her cherry, and it was his support that finally encouraged her to be a cop... pushing her over the edge... that sounds rather great.
>>11932592There is a serious reason why weaver made Sunny Day take place when Judy and her friends graduated high school.
>>11932610I'm talking about the paring.Them actually fucking when she's eleven or whatever she is in the very beginning of the film is a different matter.
>>11932546How does 4 o'clock PST sound, buddy?>>11932559Well, now I don't. I only just got back the ability to shampoo my hair.>>11932568Very cute! Alrighty, its time for me to go to bed. Goodnight, magical and wonderful /ztp/ threads! I hope you all come check out me and trashweasel's stream tomorrow and are inspired to join us!
>>11932760You have a good night bun bun, I hope you feel better soon.
>>11932800Bore draws such pretty Honeys.
>>11932760Suits me just fine. Feel free to hit me up anytime before and we can get things organized.
>>11932817He really does>>11932760Another GTT? Or something new?
>>11932760Be well, bun!
>>11932809
>>11932809>>11932944So is Nick an actual psychopath in the Broken Mask series?Like, he was willing to kill that drug dealer straight up and would have if Finn didn't rat him out to Judy.
>>11931056you should stop
>>11932987The series is weird, and I have a feeling that, if asked, a lot of Nick's aggressive behavior (including wanting to kill the weasel drug dealer) would have been attributed to some night howler drug Nick was exposed to that made him lose it when emotional.
>>11933125No. Honey good!
>>11932809i really hate how this artist draws Judy.. she looks like an old bearded man
>>11933125See thru Honey
>>11933151The weird thing is, I can't think of how they could improve it. Like, Judy looks much older, but why?
>>11933151holy shit you're right
>>11933259>Judy looks much older, but why?The shadows under her eyebrows make them look big, bushy, and heavy. the wrinkle above her nose, and the heavy stress lines under her eyes.
>>11933259I'd say the first thing he could do is use a more off-white color for Judy's muzzle.Make the bags under her eyes look less old droopy and more tired droopy.Stuff like that.
Cub
>>11933347cube
>>11933347Cub machine broke
>>11933359timecube
>>11933259It's also the fur line marks he does, makes her look like a sad bearded bun
>>11933125Who draw dis
>>11933372Yeah, I'm guessing he's trying to make her face look fuzzy (even though she's not really) but the way he does it just makes it look like a scraggly beard.
>>11933369omfg i forgot about the time cube. that shit was hilarious and weird. is that site still up? is that guy still even alive?
I see that some people might still be upset over the whole Gid Cucks Bonnie thing what back when.It originally started as I said it did. I wanted more of the picture and couldn't find anything by myself, so I kept posting it in hopes someone might know more.In my mind, it was also a bit of a game as I rushed to try an post it in the newest thread before the other images like bune or important gif.BUT as time went on, all I got from it was complaints and insults for posting it once each thread, and that made me a bit upset, so I continued posting it to spite those people.Seeing just how many times it appears in the archive has made me realize just how overboard I went with it, and I do owe an apology. It started off with decent intentions of just wanting to find out more about the image, even just an artist name, but it did devolve into an unneeded annoyance and shitposting, and I'm sorry I let it get that far.Good morning thread.
>>11933521I'm not upset, I'm just disappointed.
>>11933547Mom, you're not supposed to know about this site!
>>11933557Also how are you going to give me grandchildren if you spend all your time molesting mustelid boys?
>>11933571
>>11933521It's ok dude
>>11933604rose don't feed stray animals, it might follow you home
>>11933598Has anyone ever written Gideon angst over never having a chance with Judy?
>>11933641No, I think it's pretty much just assumed. I've seen a couple of comics about Gideon trying to propose to Judy while she's dating or engaged to Nick, though, because the japanese are fully aware of just how pathetic he is.
please help, it's a quarter to five and i can't sleep
>>11933604Also look at how weird hyena noses are; they're such neat animals.
>>11933654I got some .45 caliber Ambien for you, anon.
>>11933565You don't understand, mom, tubes are love! Tubes are Life!>>11933604>>11933657Thanks, Rose, it's also neat how much sleek their foreheads are, like a slope rather than a bend.Hyenas are so adorable.
>>11933680At the very least you could bring one of them home for Thanksgiving. If I can't have grandchildren, are you at least going to make an honest mammal of one of them and give me a son-in-law?
>>11931092Rose I have no words to say how wonderful this is.You said you were gonna fix it, but you didn't run an extra mile, rather an extra marathon.Thank you, thank you, thank you.>>11933680Stahp lewding tubes
>>11933680https://hyena-agenda.com/
>>11933692tubes are for lewding, would you deny them their purpose in life?
>>11933654is that you, in my window midwestern anon?
>>11932987>>11933065It has to do with the strain of NH drug that Nick was unknowingly exposed to. It comes up later within the fic (Learned within The Savage Dark, and I don't think Akiric has any plans to adapt it into a comic.)It does make his mind go a little haywire though, but Judy is pretty much the only one that can snap him out of it/keep him grounded when that happens.Nick did actually say that he wanted to kill that drug dealer due to everything that happened. (Only after Jack egged Nick on and backed him into a corner trying to piss off Nick as much as he can.) But didn't since Judy showed up, and he isn't held accountable since its the substance that is fucking with him.And Nick's inner thoughts during that entire scene that you are reply to is pretty much:"She still won't leave me alone even when I tell her to? Fine. I'll GIVE her something to be terrified of. I'll show her that I really am nothing more then a savage fox. She'll turn tail and run away, and she will be safe from me." And cue him looking like a monster, but Judy was having none of that.
>>11933746So....why is it that Judy was coming down naturally from her high within about 30 minutes (and being jilled off), yet Nick is still affected like a day or whatever later?
>>11933764different strains of NH
>>11933776In the same bag that was thrown at Judy?Or are you saying that Nick was infected by a different strain at a different time from when Judy went savage and ran away?
>>11933783Nick was infected sometime before the chase, If my memory serves me right
I really dislike Kulkum's stuff, I think he's a terrible writerBut hey, props to those who keep the fandom alive
>>11933731yes please helpim drowning in all this corn
>>11933776>>11933764>>11933783>>11933793Yup different time and kind. They learn later that Nick was somehow infected with it (i think) a few days prior.I don't know if that plot thread ever want anywhere though, or it's coming back in the recent chapters.
>>11933804They still haven't explained who dosed him or how, no.
>>11933793So wait, the drug weasel had the one batch that infected Judy... and another one that he threw at Nick? I don't remember that fucking happening.>>11933804>>Yup different time and kind. They learn later that Nick was somehow infected with it (i think) a few days prior....Is this yet another "important plot thread happens offscreen because it's a retcon" bullshit?Jesus, this is the second time this week I've seen this kind of shitty writing in Zoot works after Inter-Schminter.
>>11933798It's nice to know there's anon nearby, also awake. I messed up my sleep schedule, I'm sorry you're in the same boat.Don't tell me you're a CC too
>>11933817Nick seems to have been infected somewhere off screen before the chase by someone else, as >>11933804 said the plot thread so far has gone nowhere
>>11933822not anymore, my friend
>>11933817I seem to recall it being mentioned that Nick has been getting small doses over time in a targeted attack on him. I might be misremembering a little, but it's still something that has yet to be resolved.
>>11933838Pretty sure this is correct
>>11933829You should start it up again. Beats shucking corn. And maybe it'll help you sleep. Hope you hit the hay soon, goodnight friend
>>11933827>>11933838>>11933844So it is retconned bullshit for drama.Lemme guess, he was dosed when he was at the bar, telling the bartender where Judy would be making her daily run by, huh?
>>11933864They're hardly the same thing.
>>11933692A_sig? Who let you take your gag off? You naughty tuber.
>>11933873It's still weak ass writing.
>>11933888Accidental lewdness
>>11933888oh no my heart>also those trips
>>11933854man, sometimes i really wish i could.i hope you have a good night as well, anon.
>>11933900One was a buildup that paid off in a revelation that lead into a mystery. The other was a literal asspull retcon.
>>11933817This is going to be my last reply for me since it's like 6 in the morning here. So other anons can keep this going.By someone else. We still have no idea. And as >>11933827 >>11933838 say.>>11933864Wow. Calm down. Two totally different things. And get your facts straight.You need to know that Kulkum never set out to do an over arching narrative for when it came to this series.Point A to B (The start of the comic to when Nick says "I am never leaving you") was meant as a one-shot. Nothing more. Just a shot smut thing to see if people liked it and they would start working on other Zoot things.But people asked for more. And Kulkum didn't want to deny them. And this continued story was made as a result. It does have it's issues. And the worst "But wait. What?" moment is Nick's mental change from the end of Point A to B to the start of The Savage Mask.
>>11932243I understood that reference
>>11933904Not that anon but I wonder why some ppl who are frequenters just stop being CCs? Any input from anons? I'm guessing job or other time related reasons are sound, but I hope people don't stop because they didn't get enough Yous or a shitposter made them feel bad.
>>11933918>But people asked for more. And Kulkum didn't want to deny them. And this continued story was made as a result. It does have it's issues.This still doesn't change the fact that it's a sloppy retcon that came out of nowhere.If the I.S. comparison bothers you, then it's same bad writing as the end of Hello Bunnyburrow.
Doggos
I want 2910
>>11933994
>>11933948I remember one CC saying he didn't get much attention from his greens so stopped. But you should keep trying.
Belle dom's Sleazy by Lulu(Sir-Smuts-A-Lot)
I just realized that '2910' is a pun which means 'with Nick' in Japanese.
I’m sorry I stirred shit and told people that it’s sick to make Nick gay yesterday. It’s just a fictional character and doesn’t really mean anything in the end. I let my frustrations and emotions get the better of me and instead of contributing to these threads in a positive way I just made things worse. I am sorry.
>>11933958>same bad writing as the end of Hello Bunnyburrowwhoa dude let's not go crazy here.
>>11933948What you said, I got a job. Takes a lot of time, and more than that, takes the mental energy I used to put towards writing. When I get home I don't want to do anything that takes effort, I just want to try and recharge before it's time to go back to work.
>>11934054fuck off faggot
>>11934062stop sucking kulkums dick
>>11934120But his is bigger and juicier than yours
>>11933948Life pretty much gets in the wayMy job took most of my energy for the day, and I grew a lot more self-conscious about my art and improvement as a result making me stop posting all together. Now I’m just growing more bitter and jealous.
>>11934024>even more OC circlejerkAt least they're both consenting adults
>>11934163>both consenting adultsbut how do you know?
>>11934195Is lulu a pedofile too?
>>11934200fuck you gay bastard
>>11934044Nah, it's the number for WildeHopps>2 = ni>9 = ku>10 = juuNikujuu ---> nikujudi ---> Nick x Judy
>>11934208uh oh
>>11933892Don't make me add you to the list >>11934024Righteous punishment of the yeen for lewding all the tubes.
>>11934240>Don't make me add you to the list
>>11934209Gosh, I just realized that I'm a total fucking retard.
>>11931264Nick with his arms chopped off yet he's somehow alive makes me laugh.Seriously, that expression of his.
Looking at last thread I saw a couple of nice suggestions, but I can't choose. So I ask you anons.Cheetah girl limo driver or Finnick?Pose?>>11933888Wow, this is nice.>>11934296
>>11932278Belated response, but thanks a bunch man.
>>11934240>>11934412shut up fuel's butt slut or i will post more of it
>>11934412
>>11934412>Cheetah girl limo driver or Finnick?Both having a drag race.
>>11934443>>11934450My god, I would kill to see Nemo draw Honey or Gazelle.
>>11934412Have the cheetah girl hit on Manchas.
>>11931575>hybrids>its a shit retarded storywaw unexpected and shocking
>>11932555SAME
>>11934443>>11934450Show yourself if you have a sliver of courage.Then we can begin the lewd off.>>11934454But it is not useful for poses!>>11934469Nice idea
I want this.I need this.
>>11934548Dick cannot enter puss puss.
>>11934552But puss puss can enter dick.
>>11933937Top tier anon
>>119345541. Love is more than sex.2. Pawjobs are a thing.3. Even for what you're talking about, she could turn around and her mouth actually just might be wide enough to fit more than one would think, and it sure would feel great from his perspective.
>>11934563>He wouldn't sound his partner with his whole body.>He wouldn't get penisvored for his true love.Coward, and you dare say: >Love is more than sexTo defend yourself.
>>11934533>Show yourself if you have a sliver of courage.>Then we can begin the lewd off.What you say?
>>11934554>cock vore
>>11934575>vore>VOREI don't care that you're memeing. I'm still bugged.
>>11932592>Nick and Judy visit BB>Judy introduces Nick to the jaguar that she'd been dating on-and-off before the academy.>He's buff.
>>11934587Coward.
>>11933888who drew dis pls
>>11934548Too bad that zhan will never let them be happy together.
>>11934597https://maionart.tumblr.com/post/166101653968/animation-commission-for-judithwilde-nick-and
>>11934588I want somebody to do a comic of this.Fuck, I suck at artistic CC stuff, and I'm still tempted to draw it.
>>11934594No. Just... no.
>>11932592Which then throws into question why Judy was scared enough to carry around fox repellent.
>>11934601I know!Goddamn...
>>11934624She doesn't carry around otter repellent even though they're predators that can possibly go savage. Fuck, she even reacts with genuine surprise and sadness at seeing what happened to Mr. Otterton, and her compassion to Mrs. Otterton was totally sincerely.I think certain predators probably get it way worse than others and have shittier reputations than others.
>Judy left behind a legacy of handsome males that she improved the lives of before dating.
>>11934615oh yeah this is the zootopia general isnt it, i see the problem nowunderage pizzacat cockvore
>>11934654SOMEBODY DRAW THIS
>>11934548tweaked the expression
>>11934654>Judy dated half of Bunnyburrow and Zootopia before meeting Nickwe need some writefag on this pronto
>>11934671Thanks anon
>>11934654>She married Nick, tho
>>11934697But she continued to date and improve other handsome males. Nick was improved and he wants the same for other mammals.
>>11934706>More cuckoldingnah.
>>11934711It's not cuckolding if you both sides are consenting.
>>11934745I would that ewe.
>>11934754That's literally exactly what the fetish is.
>>11934754anon have you been cucking people thinking that you were raping them or raping people and thinking that you were cucking them?
>>11934764>>11934775You guys never heard of swingers?
>>11934792Anon, that's a totally different thing. Sounds like you need to do some research.
>>11934655that's not my fetish :(reported.
>>11934792But swingers was not originally implied. Cuck was. Also this >>11934798
>>11934580That you don't have the show yourself.Maybe it is shyness?Considering the number of lewd mongoose you have saved, I begin to wonder if you have some sort of attraction to the 'goose...
>>11934756Who wouldn't?
http://www.vitao.com/485005Do these Japanese corporate animals make anybody else think of Zootopia?
>>11934807>announcing reports
>11934829>replying to bait
>>11934824Not really no.
>>11934824
>>11934818Gays, probably.
>>11934706>And then there was Jack.>He'd managed to lure the both of them in with a mix of good looks and a twink ass
>>11934846more
>>11934846
>>11934815I have more of it (repost because wrong image)
>>11934875Seconded.
>>11933521So I was right about you not being the artist, but I was wrong about you not being the one reposting it. Well, it's good you apologized at least (and stopped).
even - rinevioletodds - pizzapalsdubs - huslters
>>11934412>Cheetah girl limo driver or Finnick?Cheetah girl limo driver please.For the pose, how about a classic pinup pose, paint her like on of your french girls.
>>11934154Don't stop drawing anon, just draw for yourself for a while, and return to posting it if/when you are ready.
>>11934965>odds - pizzapalsThankfully the board itself has good taste.
>>11934894You didn't answer the question, anon.>>11934989Another good idea.I have to go away from the tablet for a couple of hours, but when I return I'll draw one of these
>>11934815Eyes take a triangular shape in side view, please use references.
>>11931869Truly, god has smiled on us after weathering the storm.
>>11935046Oh, they were actually triangular in the sketch, I might have done something wrongI have to redraw it
>>11933888>>11934607I was just posted 2 days ago as well, so it's like an unintentional TT entry for that artist.
>>11932496Fuck off, armasyll
Feels good to wake up and see everyone having made nice with each other
Tell me /ztg/, what are your favourite, most memorable OCs that appeared ONLY in fanfics? I'm talking villains, detectives, love interests, etc.Personally, I love Elena Zorilla-Gutierrez (skunk special agent from "Earning The Badge") and the trio of goons (Elim, Grigori, Finn) from "Water Under The Bridge".
>>11935046There's no reason to be curt, unless you want to get thrown in the same basket as stirrer.
>>11935107Guess again, retard.
I love seeing all the cool new things you guys create and I hope you all will have a very good day today.
>>11935117Does it count if an artist has also drawn him or her?
>>11935154Fuck off Armasyll
>>11931869>>11935049It is truely a fine ass.
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>>11935114>everyoneWell... most people at least.
>>11935163like as an addition to a fanfic or "a fanart of a fanart"? Yeah, it counts
>>11935198Why does FF* make me want to try eating a buttI think eating butts is fucking disgustingNot going to lie though, I would eat bailey's ass for days How did FF sell me on wanting to put my tongue in a goddamn fucking asshole*(aware it's nobby's take, but her design needs to be credited for the appeal)
>>11933065I guess "pshycotropic duress" would be better than getting Nick's character so wrong, but it's till so contrived and lazy.
>>11935235I like Seth Stoutwell from Raccoonfag, and I also like that whorish male version of Gazelle that I think different people picked up.
>>11935175fuck off Rose
>>11935073This is no good either. Note the shape of the eye and the position of the iris. Look into human anatomy guides too to get the idea as animal beady eyes seldom used in zoot. You should also look into starting doing fundamentals, like drawing ellipses at different angles, which will help you to draw irises properly. Another thing you should focus on is lineart quality because eye is made up of disparate slightly curved lines - again, look up references and tutorials and put some effort into giving it an organic shape, using a single line to draw the bottom half of the eye. In both drawings it's pretty much a plain front view with the eyelid curved the wrong way as the side nearer to the ear should be a down slope.You're a nice guy, but put some effort into the stuff that you do.>>11935139I don't really care what you think, sorry.
>>11935262Hey you do not bully Rose
>>11935271>>11935271>>11935271New thread
>>11935139That's not really curt though
>>11935242I would be hesitant to eat an ass IRL, but if they cleaned it thoroughly, it probably would be OK.
>>11935268Different anon here. It's not what your saying, it's how you say it, you come off as a dick, especially when you say stuff like:>put some effort into the stuff that you do.
>>11935268>put some effort into the stuff you do>this is no goodWhy bother attempting to mask your attacks with criticismJust shitpost and call people retards like everyone else
>>11935312>>11935314uh oh
>>11935268How dare you give A_Sig constructive criticism and advice!You oughta be locked up for your crimes!
>>11935346>you can critique without being an asshole>NOBODY CRITICIZE MY CCSDid you not get enough attention yesterday Armasyll
>>11935314Low key shit stirring is apparently more fun, and more likely to get (you)s.
>>11935045
>>11935312>>11935314>>11935346>>11935371I agree I could have said what I wanted to say in a softer way, but I'm really annoyed he hasn't really improved in recent months, partly because of the haters who just bash the guy and partly because the defenders circumvent any attempts for him to improve, telling him he's art is perfect the way it is so he's kind of sitting in the same place. >>11935345this meme stopped being funny weeks ago
>>11935371if you know there is an attention whore you don't like vying for attention why would you give it to him?
>>11935399>but I'm really annoyed he hasn't really improved in recent months,He has plateaued a bit, but not everyone is destined to be a master, and I still enjoy his sketches anyway.>this meme stopped being funny weeks agoArmasyll will never change unfortunately.
>>11935399maybe instead of obscuring your legitimate criticism with rude remarks you could try being supportive in your critique. that is possible. someone can be shown how to do things better without being berated for trying. you're annoyed he "hasnt improved"? who caresif you want to see your advice absorbed, make it digestible. no-one wants to eat a cake covered in push pins.
>>11935399>>11935503>no-one wants to eat a cake covered in push pins.That's a good way of putting it.If you want an example, look at the way Rose gives advice, she shows exactly what to fix, and never in a rude way
