/ZTG/ - Zootopia General: Pretty Bune EditionPastebin: pastebin.com/iYDU8g2T Thread journal Backup: https://pastebin.com/GiLL5kAS ZTG Creator List: derpy.me/ztgcclistArchives: www.ztarchive.com / desuarchive.org / archive.b-stats.orgPrevious thread: https://archive.b-stats.org/trash/thread/11520639Previous thread: http://www.ztarchive.com/trash/thread/11520639Previous thread: http://desuarchive.org/trash/thread/11520639Current TT Theme: Roaring 20's (Submissions are due Sep. 14)More information on TT: derpy.me/trashthematicthursdaysTT Archive: t3event.tumblr.comTT Pastebin: pastebin.com/gudYsYHL
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>AU where Nick and Judy are sent to Bunnyburrow to investigate the suspicious case of Gideon falling into a wood chipper but no one really seems to care so they rule it an accident in their report and move on
>tfw no one to get coffee with
Size difference is pretty cool.
>>11526506Agreed, there's too many small animal OCs here.
>>11526503I'll get coffee with you anon
>>11526503go get coffee and send one to a someone who is also alone there
>>11526503I'm sorry, anon. I'm more of a tea guy.Or cocoa.
>>11526503theres a bun with coffee right here >>11526479
>>11526503How about a Pepsi™?
>>11526581how about nick rimming judy after giving her an anal creampie?
>>11526581Pupsi? I prefer Dr Pupper.
>>11526581People have to have already made a pregnancy meme version of this, right?
>>11526605How about Nick in bondage, wearing a vibrator that Judy's controlling?>>11526618Dr. Pupper tastes like wet dog.>>11526643Idk
>>11526503Crazy tinfoil hat theory: There is no Judy Hopps, she is a figment of Nick Wilde's imagination; an ideal version of what he wanted to and still aspires to beShes honest, committed, brave, not phased by how people perceive her to be or even demand she be, compassionate, she never gives up, and still has faith in the city and its motto. Most importantly she made it into something very much like what Nick was driven fromJudy Hopps is basically Tyler Durden and Nick is Cornelius
>>11526479Does anyone have more of this?
>>11526662This post of insanity inspired by the mental image of Nick passing a coffee to an imaginary friend only to drop it on the ground like in Fight Club
>>11526662>Nick is CorneliusSounds corny.
>>11526677There's no more, not yet.
>>11526677knowing the artist, the dialogue is gonna be absolute shitstill at least somewhat hype
>>11526780As much as I appreciate a good plot for my porn, this is a case where we don't need to be here for the dialogue.
>>11526803Sounds like the author's incredibly full of himself too.
So anons, what're you doing during these slow hours?
>>11526897Listening to music, reading up on rules for games and such.https://youtu.be/52Gg9CqhbP8
Remember when Ciwi made 5000 CC cards
>>11526897drawing
>>11526897thinkin' of nick's buttalso working on my TT
>>11526942Remember when Boner_M wrote 9000 pounds of fic
>>11526960Remember when Comic released 4000 hours of audio
>>11526886>an artist>with an egoStop the fucking pressesThat said, I haven't heard anything bad about Fred, has he done something douchey recently?
>>11526897finishing my card
>>11526994Remember when Weaver sucked all our dicks?My doors were locked and everything, but there he was, under my desk
>>11526994Remember when Nobby drawstreamed for 8000 hours
Judy hops beer label
>>11527014Weaver's already a fast boy, so when he's also thirsty, there's no stopping him.
>>11526886>>11526780Are you guys being ironic? I mean, I've been following Fred Perry's art since I can remember looking for porn on the web and I never found the dialogue shit or offputting. And I haven't really seem or heard him so I don't know if he really is like you guys are telling us now. Is he full of himself? Hard to believe from someone doing such lighthearted cartoony porn
>>11526780>>11526886I used to be a Fred Perry/Gold Digger fan way back in the day, and it's kinda sad to see his decline in the last decade.Used to be that he'd have the occasional in-joke or nod to a piece of pop culture that he liked; now it seems that a ridiculous chunk of his dialogue and such are full of memes and references long dated by the time an issue is published.It would not surprise me in the least if I was to pick up a recent issue of Gold Digger and find it to be about Gina hunting for a legendary golden fidget spinner in the ancient temple of Damndaniel while dealing with a competing party of relic hunters based on the cast of Steven Universe.>>11526996Supposedly Fred is a super nice guy. I've never heard anything bad said about him as a person.
finished another sketchbook
just gonna repost this right here...
>>11527086>Gina hunting for a legendary golden fidget spinner in the ancient temple of Damndaniel while dealing with a competing party of relic hunters based on the cast of Steven Universe.Maybe I'm autistic, but I'd be giggling like toddler if it existed as some weird tongue-in-cheek development
she sleep
>>11527100That is awesome! Only the face is a tiny bit off. Never would've guessed it's Judy if not for the title, the big snout makes her look too... maleIf you guys forgive the edit:It's base could be lower, and overall shorter.Also the eyes and the ears could be a bit bigger too.Again, please take no offense to it that I touhed your drawing, just felt like I give a little suggestion with showing what the image would looks like if we implement my tipps:
>>11526503Here's a Nick for you to have coffee with Anon
who drew this
>>11527165Drem of caching Mr Whitman
>>11526479holy heck, who is the artist and is there more
>>11527301Lofi and this is the only other zoot pic they've done.
>>11527210Nik luv coffe
>>11526897fackin ure whore mam
>>11527350Rude! Mrs Wilde is a kind and gentle soul.
>>11527324That is damn fine work thereI'll still check out their stuff regardless
>>11527350Thanks for bringing some fresh ass, anon.Don't worry, I've got lube and a general idea of where your prostate is.
>>11527061>fair trade cocoaHow am I supposed to enjoy it if it isn't the product of brutally exploitative labor practices in third world countries?
>>11527133Much closer to Zoot styleContinue like this
>>11526479So then, who thinks this is Jude and who thinks it's Judy?
what have I missed in the past 4 months
>>11527463everything
>>11527061Is that an actual thing, or just somebody dreaming?
>>11527463Wasn't there a version of this where he sticks his tongue in her ear and it comes out the other side? Does anyone have that one?
>>11527463I would check the thread journal in the OP for startersbut a shit ton of stuff
Anyone know the source? Also, the language is in Russian (I think), would be nice if someone knew what they were saying.
>>11527484ye
>>11527463Tons of artTons of writingCC's came back, lewds were drawn, lewds are being drawnOtterly's still a hoRose's still a nerdWeaver became a fast boiCiwi nutted everywhere, recovery efforts are still continuingThere's far too much stuff.
>>11527520>Rose's still a nerdzero proof of this
what draw?
>>11527541Jack Savage and Skye as kitsJacks trying to stop Skye from being bullied
>>11527541Foot
>>11527500>ready?>I was born ready>one~>continue, carrots >two~
>>11527536She thinks zoosonas with glasses are cool.She's very much a nerd.
>>11527559Rose is the Chaddest person here
>>11527541Sleepyhead Honey?
>>11527564Alright Rose, you can stop now. It's ok.
What if Weaver got a tablet
>>11527541Violet in a shirt
>>11527541>>11527606Violet not in a shirt.
>>11527619so like a t-shirt?
>>11527564Rose fucked my gf once
>>11527199Mmmm that's to stylized in a direction I wasn't going for, I wanted her face to look fiercer rather then its usual cutesyWhile I understand where they are coming from its kind of too far in a direction I don't really want
>>11527682Rose came over to my house and beat me up and stole my boyfriend
>>11527728Rose used a glass on my table without a coaster once
>>11527557Awesome! Thanks.
Rose claims to not be a nerd, but does nerd shit anyway. Interesting
>>11527133>>11527212who drew these
>>11527567
>>11527775Finnickfagand I think Lou/Visiti?
>>11527775The Bailey was drawn by Finnickfag.
>>11527766Rose once made us all comfy with her draws
>>11527749
best ship
alright folkswho are some ccs who havent gotten a card yet that you think deserve one?my tablet is ready to go!
>>11527777Godly quad sleepyhead
>>11527777Nice quads for a nice draw
>>11527806Pandaanon, may he rest in peace.No, he's not dead. Just ded.
>>11527806trashweaselHenriettaRaccoonNAH
>>11526677The next page was attached when this was posted 2/3 threads ago.Nick changes channel...
>>11527777Das a damn cute badger! Thank you very much.
>>11527782>>11527783ty friends :v
H-hey guysRose i-is really n-nice and f-friendlySh-she helped me after I f-fell down the stairsI fell down the stairs...
>>11527806pho raccoonfg NAH FALKE (draw some of his oc or something) visiti arma paranon
>>11527806>me, armasyll :v
>>11527806aestheticanonakella, but he doesnt have a sonafalke but he has the same problem
>>11527846She helped you down the stairs?
>>11527806Pho Ciwi Trashweasel
Rose poisoned our water supply, burned our crops, and delivered a plague onto our houses
>>11527846Rose might be the biggest bully we have, but she is a very lewd skunker so it evens out.
>>11527086>Supposedly Fred is a super nice guy. I've never heard anything bad said about him as a person.Can confirm that he is extremely pleasant to be around and very supportive to up and coming artists.
>>11527863>SHE DID?
>>11527867>Rose>Skunkwut
>>11527806PhoNikoluBate
>>11527883>Nikolu>BateOh yaSeconded
>>11526803>>11526886Be newblook for zoot porn find cartoonSCORE!don't care about others opinion of the artistFOUND PORNdiscovers Wan>OK, I take it all back.
>>11527874No! But are we gonna wait around until she does?
>>11527083>Is he full of himself?I have no idea who this guy is, but the panel where he's bragging about what a badass he is makes him look like a cunt.
>>11527877>Jee, how is taht your parents let you have 2 zoosonas?
>>11527821I was going to do Henrietta (Candycrow Albino Weasel) but someone already claimed it. >>11527859Sona less people would be just drawing something off of their work. That was my plan for Falke's.But I felt that someone who only enjoyed his one pieces and never read his long running fics with actual developed original characters wouldn't be able to deliver something good. Akella could be just his car fetish, but once again, I don't know much about cars.
You know even though Roses are very pretty to look at we shouldn't forget that they are also covered with thorns.
Rose killed my firstborn to bathe in his blood and then she kicked my dog
>>11527927Nice I'd buy her a beer.
Rose calls clips magazines
I heard Rose was a furry
trashweasel hereone last shill for this chapter, this time while the sun's still out>January Hymn>"You know, most cops go their whole careers and never get one. A big case, I mean. Smart to get yours out of the way so early.”>Judy meets her old hero, and Nick takes the next steps in building his new life. >But what do you do after the big adventure is over? Life in the city isn't exactly like Judy expected.http://archiveofourown.org/works/9535553/chapters/27330630After her conversation with Fournier at his retirement party, Judy has a rare day off with Nick.(The previous story, June Hymn, can be found here: http://archiveofourown.org/works/7132508/chapters/16195550)also, please consider writing a short lil something for our collaborative Thread Journal entry!https://docs.google.com/forms/d/e/1FAIpQLSd3ig7fbWf7_a-5ljhNva4miLVlAbGkbX97a-LEQkozy_1b_w/viewform?usp=sf_linkno right or wrong answers, just write what's on your mind
>>11527970Blatant fucking lie
Rose is an AI created to bully us
R O S E I SM R W H I T M A N
Rosebud....
>>11527986heres whas on my mindyour cute
Last I was actually active in these threads was when Weaver made the comic about Judy and Nick in the car. I come back and see you guys are still as comfy as usual, and I respect that. You guys are one of the better communities
>>11527877Red panda is fake rose! SkunkRose4life!
So long as were Rose memeing, does anyone have the ProtoJudys she drew a few threads ago? They were really cute.Also any updates on her 80s TT? Heard she was doing something big for that.
>>1152804095% of us are comfy most of the timeTheres one or two dedicated persons who trolls around this and two other threads stirring up drama but its shocking how cool people here are with each other
>>11528049
I heard that Rose was an intergalactic war criminal.
>>11528049>>11528060
I heard Rose was in a prison gang
>>11528060You a bestSpunky punky shoots-first ProtoJude is cute
>>11528049>>11528060>>11528073btw, was there more than these 3?
>>11528049>Heard she was doing something big for that.Not big. Just had an idea and was excited, then I got caught up with other things.
>>11528004This explains everything...Real life took time from me, so, sadly, I can't post my TT entry today...So I say goodnight /ztg /And you can't escape. I don't allow it.
>>11527396
>>11528087Hope you have fun with the idea when you come back to it>>11528098Night tubular goose
>>11528098Sleep tight tuber!
>my tt theme won>i havent done anything yeti am a disgrace
any gay today?
Since its a day away, what are people hoping to see from others this TT?Im looking forward to anything not "prohibition" or "rumrunner" related, not because Im against the ideas but more because Im interested in seeing what people do beyond the obvious
>>11527606>>11527619compromise
>>11528240This is an interesting fashion statement
looking for writing requests.trying to learn to write without a muse, so don't expect quality.
>>11528250Judy and Nick end a late stake and get breakfastbut theyre both pissed at each other for some reason, your choice why
>>11527806prester totally deserves a card, imo
>>11527897
>>11528178Here ya go
>>11528284Oh, good call
>>11528250Samurai Judy having tea with Ogre Nick?
>>11528250Clawhauser's day
>>11528250Nick finds Gideon nudes on Judy's phone.
>>11528060>>11528073>>11528083I don't think the buns should have guns. They're too jumpy.
>>11528029oh gosh
>>11528327
>>11528250Remmy invites Betty to see a scary movie in his apartment during a thunderstorm at night. Scared wolf shenanigans occurs
Rose is nothing but a low-down, double-dealing, backstabbing, larcenous perverted worm! Hanging's too good for her. Burning's too good for her! She should be torn into little bitsy pieces and buried alive!
rose smells
>>11528402Heavy Metal is pretty great.
>>11528402Alternatively, she should be tied down and stimulated until she's numb and distant.
>joined a "super serious" raiding group this morning>invited to their discord, super serious categorized channels for raiding, strategy, theory crafting, and general chatter>oh god what have I gotten myself into>did a test run, we were all chill and it went along fine, parsed wellNow how is this Zootopia related you might be thinking up to this point.>"Alright Anon, you're a cool guy. We're giving you full member access to all our channels">"Gotta warn you though, a lot of us here are into some freaky stuff. You can ignore it if you don't wanna get skeeved out.">Suddenly more channels appear>Porn channels>Filled with FURRY PORN>Specific channel for Zootopia pornI am the happiest I've ever been, in my life. For the first time in a long time I feel as if I belong.
>>11528417Hell yeah it is.sorrysospooky
>>11528437>super serious raiding>everYou're never going to get Cutting Edge, anon.
>>11528437I wish i had an experience like that. Glad it made you happy anon!!
>>11528327>>11528343That was pretty quick coloringWhat takes the longest for you, sketching, inking or coloring?
>>11528414>good
>>11528433Sorry if this is a stupid questionIs this actually a thing? Can girls be stimulated to cum so many times they lose control, or is it more like guys where the first time you cum shit gets uncomfortable to stimulate?
>>11528414like butterscotch and java beans
>>11528554I've cum like 8 times in a row or so before, but sometimes it gets incredibly sensitive after just one, to the point where stimulating it basically just makes me writhe uncontrollably.It's weird.
>>11528554if i were to write a zootopia fic answering this, it would include a breakdown of sequential orgasm and an explanation on the different types of female orgasm. in short, kinda. i assume you're doing research for your next piece of zootopia content, anon?
>>11527847>>11527821is NAH's sona the sleezy yeen or that beaver?if the latter, do ya have a ref? >>11527862ref for pho?>>11527883ref for nikolu? didnt even knew they had a sona yet>>11528284>>11528295ref for prester? the CC chart says silver fox but the picture link looks like a hyena, sosummary of this post: im bad at remembering to save references
>>11528554It can happen for both, really. All you need is a bit of overstimulation.
>>11528554fem herepersonally, i can cum once MAYBE twice. its really sensitive after each one and you gotta wait like 30 sec-1 min.after thats its just rubbing skin. doesnt feel special.then again, i could just be unlucky
>>11528612>is NAH's sona the sleezy yeen or that beaver?Sleezy yeen.>ref for pho?Not sure but he is a High cow.
>>11528612Nah was a beaver but now he is the sleazy yeenver.
>>11528327>>11528343Looks good!!
>>11528599>in short, kinda. i assume you're doing research for your next piece of zootopia content, anon?I'm tying my girlfriend up this weekend and was thinking of strapping a hitachi to her, wanted to know if that would be pointless or just a hipponese manga fantasy
>>11527210Aww
>>11528639>>11528652I think the best summary is that vaginas are weird and everyone is different.I didn't know how sensitive mine got until I was with my girlfriend the first time
>>11528554As a guy I can go two or four times with a minute break in between each before it feels a bit sore/overdone and my swollen turgid flesh feels limp and numb. It's usually just plain dry cumming after the second. From what I've read I'm probably just very lucky.
>>11528652No offense anon but maybe the zootopia thread may not be the best place for sex answers
>>11528652There's a point of numbness and overstimulation where it can sometimes cross over into almost annoying, yes.
Would traditional Hyena families be more disappointed in a dainty daughter?
>>11528554Having a guy cum multiple times without stopping is one of the most common things that will ruin a fic for me. Once from a handjob, then again from a blowjob, then anal, etc...
>>11528554I'm a guy so take my word with a fucking grain of salt, but here's my experience based on fun times with my significant other:>benis in vagooShe can cum multiple times before either of us feels the need to stop; we've gone so long a couple times her orgasms reached into the double digits, and even then we only stopped because both of our nethers were getting tired out rather than it becoming "too sensitive"... That, or I'm terrible at sex and she lied about cumming at all, which would be really fucking sad.>VibratorShe usually stops after one; says she's too sensitive afterward.>CunnilingusSee vibratorSo based on that, I'd say that it might be possible, but it'd be due to OVERstimulation, or possibly specifically clitoral stimulation? Like I said, not a sexologist or a person who owns a vagina so I'm not exactly an expert.As for whether or not it can happen to guys, see >>11528698; can verify
>>11526585>>11526955>>11527061>>11527073>>11527555img source?
>>11528735Yeah, I never understood that in fics>Cum in a girl's mouth>Immediately turn her over and fuck herNot indicative of reality>Cum in a girl's mouth>"Holy fuck that was amazing haha ok how about we like watch half a movie or eat some food and in a bit more than half an hour I'll be ready for round two?"
Reminder that cute boys come in all shapes and sizes.
>>11527210source?
>>11528805but you're the cutest!
>>11528805well said anon
>>11528790It's because that's what H-Doujins do, and that's about the extent of most nerds' exposure to porn with a story.
>>11528805
>>11528790Some of us last longer and harder after cumming first.
>>11528865I want a fic where Nick and Judy have sex thinking all the porn stereotypes about bunnies and foxes are true and slam straight into the brick wall of reality
>>11528515Probably inking?I think if I set aside a day for each, pacing won't be a problem.
>>11528883second this
>>11528790It's a pacing thing.If they stopped after every orgasm it'd get really boring really fast.
>>11528883I kind of want this tooAwkward sex and learning the boundaries between playing roles and being honest about what you like about sex is my fic fetish
>>11528877That's actually a technique done in most porn shoots to make the guy last longer. It's easy to spot because when the money shot happens it's more of a pathetic dribble instead of the real deal.
I just finished reading Pack Street, how often does Weaver update?
>>11528962He hasn't updated in a long time but when he picks up writing again usually he pops a chapter out every two weeks
>>11528962>updateOh, my sweet summer child...
>>11528961Anyone have any experience or knowledge of the porn industry? I would actually love to read about an OC rabbit or someone doing shoots and dealing with the industry and riding off of Judy's popularity
>>11528946How about buffering, is that a thing?>kek.
>>11528961>>11529014Adding to this. Many producers caught onto people noticing this.Nowadays the scene is actually a mashup of the before and after the guy initially cums with footage of the first cumshot tacked on the end. Sometimes the money shot is shot at an entirely different time or day altogether.
>>11529014And zoot related
>>11528820Drew it myself!Kinda miffed that the scan doesn't show the colors of the marker very well though.
>>11529017It's not a thing I do, no.This is a low priority project, and I don't think there's going to be anybody busting down my doors in anticipation if I don't get an update out.
>>11528962He's currently on a long hiatus so don't expect an update any time soon
>>11528865This is incidentally why so many fanfic writers have such a shitty grasp of consent.
>>11529050Sorry anon, it was based on a joke I came across somewhere;>Couple having sex, guy suddenly freezes mid stroke and holds perfectly still, girl looks up and says "what are you doing?">Guy answers "It's called buffering, I see it all the time on porn sites..."
when will weavergive me back my husbando
>>11529086Sorry, Remy's gonna die next chapter. My dad works for Weaver.
>>11529086He finished Tiger Oil a few days agoI think hes going through some IRL stuff
Dora.
>>11529041I'd love to read a series about thisMaybe Jiji Vixaine could be the MC if people wanted a fox character and set it in the past instead
>>11529102>A____ble
>>11529117>A____bleEmoticons are getting weirder every day
>>11529096W H A THAT>>11529102WHAT
>>11529102Kind of pissed that she used a toy but I glad she was a good enough friend to help relieve him.
>>11529096>I think hes going through some IRL stuffHes suffering from depression due to a lack of jennies with dick suckan lips
>>11529138read the last two panels again carefully.
>>11529138>>11529164T I G E RANG
>>11529138My interpretation is that she used a toy because he was drugged and this felt less like taking advantage of him. But when it wears off and he's still showing interest, she puts the real thing on the table, which is why she makes the offer at the end for a real fuck.
A girl masturbating a guy off with a toy is a really hot idea tho
Got a project in the works. Hopefully out real soon. Here's a little teaser of the cover.(And yes, I know it's not zoot proportions. I work with what I can get.)
>>11529207>TenderThat sounds familiar...
>>11529164>read the last two panels again carefullyI know what she meant but the chances of that becoming true is slim to none. Kind of wish that it actually happened now in the comic
>>11529207That jaw and mouth bother me intensely.
>>11529186Especially because she undressed (mostly), tucked it between her thighs so it'd feel like fucking her, and let him lie on top of her while he used it.
>>11529220Fic that Prester John wrote way back in the day. Was good.
>>11529207>>11529220I forgot to change the fucking filename. And here I was trying to be all subtle. Fuck it, it's posted now, people have seen it.
>>11529231
>>11529267Oh noNot thisI'll even take the gays
>>11529244Your secrets are mine!>i still have no idea what this is
>>11527712Not that anon. But you do know that edit makes her actually look like Judy?Your "artistic style" is harming the character and what it's supposed to look like. And it's not just this picture.But fine. Keep going and never improve.
if you like nick you're gay I'm sorry I don't make the rules
>>11529303Are you attempting to ascend to the court of salt and tears, anon? It's working
>>11529207>And yes, I know it's not zoot proportions. I work with what I can get.That's too bad, I just can't get into animal faces on human bodies stuff.
>>11529321What if I only like him for his lithe slender body and his fat knot?
>>11529303ztg at its finest
>>11529207>TenderYessssss>Non Zoot proportions in the cover page... apprehensive yesssss
>>11529303
Reminder:
>>11529340Sorry anon, but you appear to be hopelessly in love
>>11529366Fuck off, hateanon!
>>11528612>ref for nikolu? didnt even knew they had a sona yetPretty sure Nikolu is a king's cheetah but I don't have refs
>>11529366Is this a preemptive shit post or a reactionary shit postCuz I call people idiots regardless of any pointless labels the thread throws around, and I refuse to be lumped in with these people
>>11529207I'm really digging it and never mind non zoot proportions. Can't wait to see more
>>11529394Fuck off, hateanon!
>tfw you ask a simple poll-ish question to the thread and no one pls responds>>11527453
>>11527453I think it's JudySharper face outline might just be a way to poof out the fur
>>11527453It's Judy. That's just how Lofi draws.
>>11527453>>11529474Going from the general physique, that looks like a Judy.
>>11529102is best girl
>>11529207Promise me if you can you'll get someone from the threads to redo this when it's all done, I'm sure other artists here would be willing to help
>>11529043>weaver will never draw Nick & Judy ever again>weaver will never draw Honey again>weaver will never draw Shepard and Dawn again
>>11529574I don't know, it seems a little rude to do that to an artist we have no contact with to redraw it for them out of "the goodness of our hearts".
>>11529596drew em just last week
>>11529606This was last week?Coulda sworn that this was drawn at the beginning of August...
>>11529606>drew em just last weekWeaver I think this was like two or three weeks ago
>>11529606this one
>>11529637I love that judy
>>11527453It is probably Judy but it is a bit more masculine looking; the rear and the hips aren't as round and wide as I think they should be, and the cheeks are a bit more angular. Their other picture >>11527324 has the hips curve more noticeable.
>>11529637And then she found the drugs?
>>11529682
>>11527061fucking incredible, source me>Fair TradeBourgeois appeasement! Worker ownership is the only acceptable solution.
>>11529637FUCK i snorted>>11528612prester_john from NAH
Would you rather see more JudyOR
HelpI don't think I can write Nick anymore. Ozark is too fresh in my mind.
>>11529728It's nice to see Cain but he is super straight and we don't know much more about him than his unquenchable thirst for milfs.
>>11529728WhyNotBoth
>>11529728Don't know why but damn I like how that bunny looks
>>11529728Would love to see a series of Cain stories where he tries and fails to get milfs
>>11529789>tries to hit on Molly through her ankle radio>gets a ticket instead
>>11529081Ah, cause buffering is also a think in comic making. Having several finished pages in reserve that you can release on schedule in case there's a delay in production.
>>11529829>Hits on possum mom>All her kids are there>He's only a few years older than them
First time I seriously used Copics.Also, Judy is a swol bunny.
>>11529873Stronk bun
>>11527481>>11529706>>11528774https://mobile.twitter.com/pixelkitties/status/908036296815378432/photo/1Looks like an actual Judy beer label
>>11529855Sounds like a good orgy.
>>11529606
Any draw requests?
>>11529919Remmy and Ozzy playing basketball.
>>11529919Molly out grocery shopping, please?
>>11529911Is that some Mrs Wilde?
>>11526886The art is on model, they seem in character, I dont care about the artist's "ego"
>>11529919Jack giving Nick a blowjob with Nick passed out.
>>11529919Aftermath of a dumb dart battle?
>>11529919Cop Nick chasing down vigilante Judy
>>11529919Judy with a big hat. I mean a BIG hat
>>11529911Adorable>>11529941I think that's actually Nick's sister by Visiti
>>11528277>>11528325https://pastebin.com/0fdrwAESZero confidence in this piece, but here ya go. I'm not fond of writing when I don't feel inspired, but I feel it's something I need to learn to do as a writer.
>>11527520>Weaver became a fast boiWait, I'm a few threads behind, what happened?>>11527806Dunno if TGG was done yet, but he's way underrated.
>>11529919Lewd Judeon.
>>11530002>I'm not fond of writing when I don't feel inspired, but I feel it's something I need to learn to do as a writer.SameReading now
>>11529919A certain African Wild Dog giving someone covert oral below a table
>>11529997Ohh, Becky? That's funny
>>11530016>fast boiOne of his streams, while he was gaming he got a speed upgrade. I can't remember if he called himself a fast boy or the chat did, I was really tired that night. Thirsty boy as well.
>>11530016>what happened?nyoom
>>11529919nick going on a date with himself
>>11529997I figured Nick had given his mom his old phone. I did that when my mom's phone broke.
>>11529911Won't she be surprised when she gets a nude pic from her
>>11529911REPLY PLS CONFIRMWHICH FOXE IS THIS?THANK
>>11529237>Tender>Fic that Prester John wroteAnon...https://pastebin.com/CvhRMETm
>>11530124The best one
>>11530016>what happened?He did a few streams, started playing subnautica, and forgot to drink his water.So he has to swim a ridiculously long distance back to his base, gets dehydrated on the way and starts dying, gets inside, finds his water and drinks it right before the last tick kills him.I've never seen a cursor move so fast in my life.
>>11530002Not bad, made me laugh.
why doesnt Weaverjust hire someone to ghostwrite pack street
>>11530208Because his country's currency is inflating out of control
>>11529740Watching Zootopia again won't help?
For fun, here's a fucky way to anthropomorphize an animal.
>>11530264Well ain't that some shit.
>>11529740Go fap.
>>11530208Get Poke to write it.All remaining character development in the second half will get rushed and pushed aside for a bloody murder mystery
>>11530264That's pretty neat.
>>11530327maybe a murder mystery is exactly what pack street needs
>>11530264this is why i dont understand why some people have such a hard time with zoot proportionsits literally just real life animal proportions, but standing. there 0 reason for it to be hard they just gotta google a pic of the animal. god damn.cute shit anyway, dude.
>>11530264That looks like shit though.
>>11530208Because they wouldn't be able to keep up. Weaver is a very rare species of fastboy
>>11530208Because weaver thrives on attention from people asking him for updates.
>>11530354very fast and VERY thirsty antelope shitposting at incredible hihg speeds
>>11530264That is so freaking cool...
>>11530352It's only to give a general shape idea. That's why you draw over it and adjust afterwards.
>>11530344Technically there is a mystery in Pack Street, it's just that we already know the answer and outcome of it and no one on Pack Street is involved in solving it.
>>11530347Some people are stuck in a style. I know for me, I always draw their legs longer than the movie because of how I've learned human proportions. Also Nick's extra long neck gives me trouble too.
>draw like shit>demotivated>can't even force through it because it's not smut
>>11527806wait what about Alec?
>>11530374The savage thing that the mayor is behind?
>>11530383Oh yaSeconded
>>11529102>Hook in the 6th panelGoddamn you Weaver
>>11530386Bingo.But beyond that, it could still be possible to introduce some element of mystery to the second half.Perhaps Remmy finds himself the target of harassment by an anonymous citizen and he tries to figure out who it is.[spoiler]It's Anne. Not because she thinks he's part of Bellwether's plot, but because he still owes her a slider[/spoileroonie]
>>11530148>I've never seen a cursor move so fast in my life.this is the power of mouse drawing
>>11530374Im wondering exactly where Pack Street goes from herethe obvious answer is that Remmy will have to deal with the racism pointed at him for being a sheep now, but what then? Is there something that every story will have lead up to or will it just end abruptly after Weaver decides hes done with it?
>>11530347Do you draw?
>>11530376some people are still learning to draw.
>>11529911>She starts sending lewd body shots of herself.>No thing above the bra line, no crotch shots, but plenty of stomach, ass, and paws.>Judy can't tell they're not Nick.>Then, anal play starts happening.
>>11530409Hey, any animal can draw just as fast as any mouse can.Didn't you learn ANYTHING from the movie?
>>11530264shit now i feel like i gotta start overbc that looks way better than the mess ive been working on
>>11530410Remy goes toot toot on his whistle and breaks down crying and the rest of the pack hugs him and makes sure he's safe. Then when Dora gets released from hospital they have a fish party and the story ends!
>>11530409>this is the power of mouse drawingI guess I'll just have to take that power for myself.Also, how've you been?
>>11530430>She knows it's Becky all along
>>11530411yup. im a known cc. didnt even draw animals in any sense until i got here and had no problem.i understand maybe taking a few drawings to get used to it for each species, but there are some people who have no excuse at this point. seriously. you have all the refs in the world, from real life pics, to screenshots of zootopia, to OTHER PEOPLES ART of zootopia
>>11530347Oh, I wasn't trying to like assume it was easy to people to visualize.It was to be a way to help show a way to think about the proportions for those who have trouble visualizing in their head how it gets put together.
>>11530445Then Remmy wakes up from his 3 day coma
>>11530458well, i'm sorry i'm not good enough for you. i will leave. how long have you been drawing?
>>11530458Well then you should understand things like balance and anatomy, and why just having animals standing on their hind legs is stupid.
>>11530450gettin by i guessthanks
hey hey gay gay
>>11530410>the obvious answer is that Remmy will have to deal with the racism pointed at him for being a sheep now, but what then?Well I mean, then it'll end. After Remmy not only completely understands the pack and their struggles but has helped the mammals within it, he'll have two options. He'll leave or he'll stay.
>>11530465>putting words in my mouthnice. all im saying is you have a bunch of references and a bunch of people willing to help you. even the artist who draws bailey is finally starting to do zoot proportions after just a little bit of explanation from nobby. ive been drawing for about 2 years and ive been here a little less than half a year i think. >>11530480okay? i agree. its an animated disney movie about talking animals, its not really meant to be realistic. sorry, i dont see how realism is relevant.
>>11530487No problem.Anything for our fastest boy.
>>11530458I don't believe you're an artist, after all you would know the struggle of things like this and you wouldn't be a piece of shit looking down on others because you've made your 10,000 mistakes. Post your shit.
>>11530504Third option:He's the only one who can pilot the Mecha to protect Zootopia from the Reptile menace
>>11530504he'll leave, but there's a one year timeskip and afterwards he comes back to Pack Streeteveryone's moved on with their lives and have realized that they're better off without Remmy therehe gets depressed until a surprise visit from someone who may or may not be his daughter fills the void left in his heart, leading to some wacky shenanigans
>>11530521same, see>>11530480
>>11530528I mean that's also really cool
>>11530376You know, this picture is another perfect demonstration of the size difference between Nick and Judy. She barely goes past his armpits, her entire arm is the length of Nick's forearm, and even with her ears up they barely reach his chin.
been thinking of Anneke, lads
>>11530584I reference this one often
>>11530551>he'll leaveAnd go where? He's got no herd, his family doesn't want his ass, and he's got no money.Most likely, he'd just get shot if he took that route.
>>11530462Hi Tempest
>>11530626I hope you realize that I put no actual thought into that and the entire point was to reference the plot of Season 4 of Bojack Horseman
>>11530617>people thought gideon was taller than nick>everi still gek to this day, and i'm not even a fox
>Gideon and Nick voices in Latin American Spanish are the same as Goku and Vegeta respectively.
>>11530644It's fine, anon. It got me thinking about possible branching endings of a pack street dating sim.Yes, I know Armasyll's hard at work on a rapey one.
>>11527728rose came to my house and broke my legs and used all my art supplies
>>11530674I didn't know thatKek
Rose came to my house and drank all of the water.
Why doesn't Remmy just become a male stripper for Pandora? He'd get loads of tips for being "exotic" and he has a rape whistle.
>>11530691Rose killed my dog and made me bite the curve while she put on heavy boots as punishment for not making my payment on time
>>11530642>>11530625I'm not that anon that was going at you, but seeing this makes me regret that I didn't let you know how much I appreciated how hard you're trying and how well you're doing.Hang in there, you put in a lot of work and it shows.
>>11530264What program did you use?
>>11530674>Nick loses his tail via pie throwingI like it
Rose made me soup when I was sick then left the stove on and my house caught on fire
>>11530724I use Clip Studio Paint for almost everything.
>>11530706
>>11530749rose made me soup then dumped it on my head and gave me a wedgie
>>11530715Pack Street already has male escorts who are very popular within the community
Rose changed her zoosona to something that's equally as cute but a lot less fluffy
Rose once praised some art I posted and gave me some helpful advise on how to improve
>>11530674>>11530753Good shit.
>>11530617That one has the slight issue of Judy being a little bit ahead of Nick, making her look bigger. Though, even then, she is still small compared to him, and jumping up a little. >>11530651I can understand why some do that; partly the stereotype of the fatter guy also being taller to make up for it, as well as we never see Nick and Gideon side by side. And, in the case of those who like Gideon and Judeon, they have to make Gideon better than Nick in something.
Rose looked me in the eyes and told me she loved me, but betrayed me for my evil twin brother
>>11530762Rose made me soup and I ate all of it and I thanked her for nursing me back to health and then she texted me with pictures of her shitting in the sauce pan and sent the pictures to everyone at school and now my nickname is "Tommy the shit eater"
>>11530722i'm not, but i really appreciate your kind words.
>>11530786How about this?
Rose once aborted my unborn child
Can we stop all this memeing about Rose already? We all know Rose came into my house, destroyed my kitchen and robbed me of two of my family members. I don't need her entering my dorm again and licking all my stamps from my stamp collection. Make it stop!
Post music from your favorite movie
evens- finish reading about the amishodds- sleepdubs- do a five minute draw request
>>11530794Rose souped up my car, and then totalled it. Can't believe she bragged about it to some random red panda.
SHE CAN'T KEEP GETTING AWAY WITH THIS
Rose fucked my dad and became my new mom
Rose told everyone at school about one of our faggot classmates named Tom eating shitsoup while we were trying to enjoy our anti-bullying picnic
>>11529964>>11529949
>>115308222 and a half finnicks
>>11530822Nice dubs, how about a sleepyhead?
>>11530822/r/'ing Nick doing pushups with Judy sitting on his back
Rose unironically enjoys every TV show you hate.
Rose recently described a video game as "The Dark Souls of X"
Rose is a 26 years old kissless virginthis is a fact...
>>11530822Judy in a big hat.
>>11530832who drew dis
>>11530832Dart wars are the best wars, thank you very much!
>>11530832MY FETISHFINALLY
Rose made me ride her strapon and made me keep quiet while she drawstreamed
>>11530832Damn
>>11530832Oh my.
Man, Rose just came into my room, made my bed, and then shot my cat.
>>11530832ThatWasUnexpected
>>11530820https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=GXkIQcqflfs
Rose told me we were going to the park then drove up to the vet instead
Rose attended every horror movie test screening in the last ten years filled out every response card with "needs more jumpscares".
>>11530866thats fucking hot
Rose murdered my entire clan
>>11530820https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=mWyB447vNjg
When I was a kid I thought I heard Santa and went to check but it was Rose going Nyo Ho Ho and drawing very cute penises on the walls with my crayons and I was grounded for a month
>>11530845ROSE UNIRONICALLY LIKES THE NEW TOP GEAR?!
Rose is actually a lily.
>>11530902BAKANAREEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE
>>11530906Un fucking forgivable
>>11530820https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=EaJHFxCYUjI
>>11530674>>11530753I need a DBZ cast now but Zootopia. ...Who the hell would be Bulma and Chi-Chi?Oh god, Travis would be Krillin.>>11530801That is pretty good.
Rose is a girl.
evens- finish card im working onodds- start working on what will probably end up being a half assed TTdubs- start paper due in two days
>>11530820https://youtu.be/qp8qevE-09s
>>11530927debatable
>>11530927
We need someone to get drunk/high so we can tell them shit, /ztg/.
>>11530925I saw another pic of Judy as Bula, WildeHopps of course, but can't find it.
Rose once asked me for tree fiddy
who has the gif of that big tittie girl pulling her shirt up
>>11530927Yeah, no. That's a lie right off the bat.
>>11530927Sorcery
>>11530908IT'S NOT THURSDAY YET WHERE I LIKE HOW DARE YOU POST THIS!
>>11530820https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=JPRh537QyVo
>>11530861Looks like Waga?
>>11530906wtf i wanna smooch her mom super hard now
>>11530958>its not thusrday yet t.burgerland
Rose told me we were going to marathon the first three Star Wars movies and it turned out she meant the prequels
>>11530832This is everything I was hoping for and more. Thank you unnamed artist
>>11530988
>>11530998its always good to see someone using my reaction images
>>11530988we're done here, this is the best one
>>11530988I want Darth Jar Jar to be canon.
>>11530832
>>11529096>>11529102Wait, where is Weaver posting this stuff?
>>11531022here
>>11531022Here, usually
>>11530988You win
Where is Rose anyway? She must answer for her nefarious crimes
>>11531078Hiding from her sins
>>11531078Lurking in her sex dungeon, waiting on the next victim.
>>11531078Rose once went onto a Liberian cooking website to shitpost about herself.
>>11531078Just watching the thread and laughing at some of the jokes like the Star Wars one.Figuring out what I want to do with watercolors, and which watercolors I want to use.
>>11530934Anyone ever read the sequel to the movie/book?
>>11531111quads confirm>>11531129's "watercolors" are mad from sexual fluids
>>11531156I got cancer
>>11531136I have it somewhere around here, got it signed while Beagle was on tour. I must confess I have not read it yet... one of these days.
>>11531136I did. It was bitter sweet
>>11531168hope you make it through
>>11531136>>11531170Heres the link if you want to read the sequelhttps://mega.nz/#!N1VHDIzb!N3Rk6g-x5zvrW7WdzSYHAZc-J-JIRCvFjTgZnRdQQNI
>>11531191Thanks much
>>11530834here you gosorry it took more than five minutesI got distracted
>>11531217Poor Nick, the day must have been harder than usual. Thank you.You have a goodnight drawer dude.
>>11531217Those are some good inks! Loving how this looks.
>>11530856this isnt trueshe kisses karamatsu to sleep every night>>11530942you rang
>>11531169>horse penis>not just a thicker gazelle penisfriendship ended with nobby
>>11530832Nice draw, anon.
>>11531239>you rangSo, when's next the best time to do it?
>>11530856im a 24 yo kissless virgin too
I heard Nobby is a fucking snitch
>>11530832secret twist: jack is actually jacqueline.
>>11531268Rose will give you a rose, then kiss your crush.
>>11531271back up off my homie like that gGANG GANG
>>11531271Only when it leads to better sex. He's a great fuckin' wingman that's pleasant to the touch.
Sketched a culprit
>>1153126827
>>11531271I heard he snitch his whole gang out for some weed
>>11531304That's a damn fine skunker, kindof a bully but still very cute.
>>11531304skunker is goodred panda is the bully
>>11531304thats the one officershes the one who stole candy from a baby!
>>11531156>VildeHoppsEh, I'll go with that.
>>11531265do what
>>11531304Why isn't there more porn of her?
>>11531415be the change you want to seeit's also a daunting task, man
>>11531403Get high and let us tell you shit.
>>11531371why is he sadthis is making me sad
>>11531304a cute little culprit
>>11531436Plug her stinker
when god created nick he only wanted to add a little bit of gay but accidentally gave him an insatiable lust for dicks
>>11531436What kind of porn of this qt skunk girl would people like to see?
>>11531453V is a total bully, she likes to cat call and or shame all the preds working for her family.
>>11531453No one looks happy when they're out doing something strenuous. Especially farmwork.
>>11531473anal
>>11531473Anything anal with the bravest partner in the whole world.
>>11531473Butt plugRimmingMasturbating while fantasizing about lewd acts
>>11531471and that god was...Zaush.
>>11531473Fluffy tail porn.
>>11531436man i just wanna grab this skunk by the tail and use her to satisfy my needsshitty erp aside i've always thought this was the best lewd of the skunk that's been made>>11531462but skunks don't spray out of their ass, anon>>11531473uh rough sex with tailgrabbing
>>11531473Blind folded pet play while taking photos of her
>>11531473Vibrating dildo in her vagina.
>>11531473Pregnancy
>>11531527no
>>11531444yeah what's up
>>11531500I didn't say plug her ass
Looks like anal has the plurality. I like the pregnancy suggestion though, that's one of my favorites. I'll try to have a sketch for tomorrow.Please post the model sheet.
>>11531473Public use sex toy stuck in a stockade or hole in a wall where her face is hidden but her photo is on display
when will welewd the weaver?
>>11531557rose isn't a fan of pregnancy dude
>>11531557Here ya go
>>11531557>>11531571yeah please dont do the pregnancy one
>>11531567>whenbut the question iswhy
>>11531571Alright, like I said I won't do preg with her character. Anal wins.
>>11531582hes a very thirsty boy
>>11531588Youre a cool dude
>>11531567He seems too unlewdable. He's just a pure cinnamon roll...
Goodnight all you lovely anons
>>11531547It's strange how breathing's never an issue for you until you pay attention to it.
>>11531602Oh I forgot. Specific partner or anonymous dick?
>>11531588:(
>>11531614>anonymous dick?This
>>11531555>I didn't say plug her assoh fucking ow anon>>11531607dream good thots, buddy
>>11531616Maybe some other character later, anon. In fact almost certainly.
>>11529997Nicely paced, descriptive, would make a good green for GTT.
>>11531607You have a good night Anon
ozzy lewds where
>>11531650>>11530002Crap, that was meant for >>11530002
>>11530934I need to dig up that AU again
>>11531547In the end, we're nothing but a bunch of brains controlling our bodies.
>>11531641Pregnant DezMol?
>>11531700I agree
>>11531547You're a good person and lots of people appreciate you.
>>11531547I like Gutter Queen
>>11531710fuck you man im a skeleton possessing a meat suit
>>11531611yeah man you've got a lot of automatic processes you're not like consciously aware of. the body's super cool. Even taste cravings is just your body wanting like specific things to keep running dude>>11531710hell yeah manjust a bunch of flesh mechssometimes i think im a little me in my head piloting my body and i make robot noises when i move like pwssh pwssh>>11531722aww thanks man, thats sweet
>>11531710Not even close to true. The body has just as much impact on the brain as the other way around.
>>11531754uhh shit who is that again >>11531757actually you're electricity in a meat suit in a skeleton suit in a meat suitlike the worst turducken in the world!
>>11531757You've simply got a brain you can't perceive.
>>11531771Tell me more, anon.Would that be stuff like reflexes?
>>11531547Taking something by force is still stealing even if everyone votes for it, and they promise to make good use of what they take.
>HOW IS THIS ZOOTOPIA RELATED
>>11531713I don't know who that is.
cuckie coocuckie coo
>>11531788Controlled mostly by the brainstem and everything below. If reflexes had to be processed by your brain, they'd be too slow. But also consider how whatever state your body is changes how you think. You think differently when your hungry than when you've just eaten, for example.
>>11531813We needTiglassesTo save us
do the gay
>>11531813How are YOU Zootopia related?
>>11531837Never!That'd be-Well, homosexual at least!To think, ME enjoying the thought of wondrous sensations as prostate stimulationFah!
>>11531797i don't know what this means but it makes me think of deforestation, like of the amazondid you know that there's tons of mammalian diseases in the forests just waiting to adapt to humans? its terrifying! i love it>>11531813aight concept: small mammals like mice living in shantytowns in the sewers, with most of the police unable to even get there
>>11530192I'm glad, that was the goal.>>11531675>>11531650Thanks! I've been trying to work on my descriptive writing. I've always considered it my weakest point as a writer. I rely too much on character interaction to drive a story.
>>11531861>aight concept: small mammals like mice living in shantytowns in the sewers, with most of the police unable to even get thereI love Ernest and Celestine
>>11531825I see.
>>11531773>>11531773WhutYour possum crime bossYou drew stuff and wrote a story
>>11531815
>>11531885kek fucking nobby
>>11531547Sometimes, I wonder what my organs look like. It's like wanting to see your own skeleton.
>>11531911It's dark in there. Your organs do everything without ever seeing what they're doing. Help them out by swallowing a flashlight every once in a while.
>tfw you have a good premise/setting for a story, but not an actual STORYwritefags, how do u do it??? genuinely asking for help. i think the premiss is kind of school, i just cant come up with a story to tell through it.
>>11531861>small mammals like mice living in shantytowns in the sewers, with most of the police unable to even get thereOr an entire community living in an elephant's dresser in an illegal housing unit
>>11529932
>>11531925premise*cool*kill me this is why i dont write
>>11531887Whose OCsare they?
>>11531923(Disclaimer: nobby is not a doctor)
>>11530625I'm a crap artist, like only 6 months, but I got the idea he was making.But then I've got a good life, no suffering for my art or anything, so I guess I'll never be any good.
>>11531938This looks great, dude.
>>11531931or an entire community living in an elephants anus. the elephant is unaware.
>>11530680it doesn't have rape (yet) :v
>>11531925have you ever talked to comicanon/vrbit about this? he's got 5 things that fundamentally changed how i plot
>>11531963You don't have to "Suffer" for your art man.Don't listen to those who say you have to.
>>11531938two of my favorite things in one imageozzy and basketball!
>>11531982Is the coding giving you that much of a thrashing, Arma?
>>11531938>>11529932Is there a reason you request this?
>>11531986c-can you tell them to me or is it like a secret recipe that i have to specifically go to him for?
>>11531996just trying to get the umph to start working on the a pathing algorithm
>>11531885ah yeahshe's coolshe likes tea>>11531911i dunnoi mean i guess itd look like other peoples organs ? like its just meat.>>11531931>elephant crimelord carrying around a briefcase workshop of mice measuring out drugs and moneyhe's got a little bowler hat, and shades with two round lenses. carvings on his tusks, abd an ornate stopwatch>>11531957ill have you know I personally know less doctors than i do fingers on my hand
>>11532007>>11531986>Comicanon's 5 secrets to telling a good story REVEALED!>Number 2 will blow your mind and make your penis explode!
>>11531938>>11532003holy shit you guys are a giftthese are beautiful, love the comparative stances and expressions, especiallyTruly these two are dedicated to their sport
>>11532020I'm down with this elephant drug lordWhat about a Timothy Leary character? What mammal would that be?
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>>11532003>>11531938>T W O C A K E S
>>11530820https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-WyOAqaTcOA
>>11532003Not really.I just thought it'd be pretty cool. didn't know that someone drew it already, though.
This was a comfy thread
>>11532077not done yetif we get a thousand posts in this thread i'll become a cc
>>11532115no
>>11532115See ya, space anon.
>>11531955That's Desmond and Molly, anon. Chumpy's old OC couple.
>>11532003Basketball is rad!
>>11530820https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vGiPlzcNpws
>>11531861>mice living in shantytowns in the sewers, with most of the police unable to even get thereUnless...
>>11531925After getting into reading (post high school) I learnt that if you have an idea for a story, but not the 'whole' story, just write it like a chapter.We get too used to seeing movies that have a beginning, middle and end, then it's over.Life doesn't finish like that, so you write a 'slice of life', just drop in and start writing the bit you want, usually ending with a twist, and let it hang.Who knows, you may come back to it later.
>>11532052Another sloth?That guy was spaced.
