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>>11520627
I've suddenly become a very strong proponent for banning books.
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>>11520652
Fascist/Communist.
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>>11520641
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=R1UY3JgjWRI
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>>11520639
> Time To Snooze Edition
Can do!

stream is over and it's time to sleep, stay comfy and have a goodnight /ztg/!
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>>11520669
Night Trashy, thanks again for the stream.
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>>11520669
Good night, Trashy, and thanks for the stream
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This was a crazy day, possibly one of my favorites to look through.

Ciwi, the amount of love you gave to people is inspiring. This will be a moment of thread history people revere to Zootopia 5 and beyond.

And RSB updated! I can't wait to read that.

>>11520669
Sleep tight, streamer!

>>11520658
The people cannot be trusted not to lewd the VRbit when they have the freedom to do so. So long as there is a one percent chance that someone could be lewding the VRbit, we have to treat it as a certainty and do all we can to stop it.

Goodnight, magical and wonderful /ztp/ threads! I hope when the regime takes over, you have a friendly overseer who watches your every moment to ensure you never lewd the VRbit.
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Anons, here's a challenge. Write at least five lines of greentext about Pack Street. Except it can't feature any commonly discussed ships. Lesser known ones or no shipping only.
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>>11520687
You have a good night bun bun, I hope you have a calmer day so you can kick back and bask in the threads glow.
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>>11520687
Good night!
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>>11520692
>Have an idea for Wolter/Finnick
>Don't have the talent to write it

F E E L S Y .
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>>11520750
then write the shittiest green you can muster and let's see if we can do something with it
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So,

I'm going to shill Kitsunegari again, but I've got to admit something.
Having worked on in since the 26th of March, 2016, and being as close as I am to finishing it, I've gotten impatient towards the later chapters.

But I'm going to finish it, then go back at a later point to rewrite / edit some of the later chapters.

Anyway:


http://archiveofourown.org/works/10201733/chapters/22646174

https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11862965/1/Kitsunegari
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>>11520772
Alright, will do!
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>>11520104
yuh
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>>11520821
Yo nobby
I need to ask
What would you do if Rose panched you?
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Some kind of disease or bio attack or just unexplained phenomenon sweeps through the Predator population of Zootopia where they can no longer get by on bugs and fish - they crave sweet mammal flesh, and as their condition worsens they eventually need it to survive.

How does Zootopia react?
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>>11520821
This is a cool bat dude, now how much did all that stuff cost him?
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>>11520821
oh thanks so much Nobby, really appreciate it (although i don't think you knew what a slouch hat was)

Of course I'm not complaining, I really appreciate it Nobby, I hope you have a comfy night
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>>11520781

You know that your Ao3 version of it is still showing that it is updated on the day you made it? FF auto updates but Ao3 requires the creater to tell when it will update.

It would explain why noone has seen it at all. Since it's still in the bowels of when Zoot was still new.
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>>11520833
Wake up and stop watching shitty horror movies.

(Was expecting it to be something with humans.Thank fuck it wasn't)
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Theres been so many frilly Nicks recently, but where are the frilly Judys?
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>>11520874
I ask myself the same question every day :(

More importantly, what about them being frily together?
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>>11520781
what are your opinions on re-writing old chapters of a fic?
I mean it's good for new readers since it fixes any issue you may have had but somethings tend to get lost when you do that.
I read a fic where one character was portrayed as cold during a scene which greatly increased the impact. But when it was re-written, a few details were changed to keep her more in character which resulted in a less exciting plot point.
Are you re-writing for the sake of grammar issues, typos, etc or do you plan on retconning some stuff?
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>>11520886
I like you anon.

You're asking a better form of my question.
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>>11520855
Wait a god damn minute, it...

...

...You mean I can just keep manually setting the publication date to the current day of the month and it'll always be on the front page results?

And if I don't manually set that date, it will always remain in it's exact chronological order, regardless of how much I...

...

...Why the fuck won't Ao3 just automatically record the date of the last published chapter and auto bump it up the...

...I can endlessly game this broken fucking system they have, can't I?

No, I'm not gonna do that, I'm just modifying the date this one time, and modify it again on the next chapter I publish, but I can theoretically just have it on the front page, eternally?
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>>11520934
Yup. I assume it's for the people that want to set the date to show it or something. Like something youtube can do? I think that's a thing.

And people have done it a few times. It explains why there have been a number of fic's that have updated to the front page. And have been kicked down overtime, for to only see it back on top out of nowhere.
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>>11520887
I look back a bit horrified at some of my first works.
The worry is that I'm rewriting (mainly grammar and clarity) from the last back, which means my first work will sit there looking a mess for a while before I get to it.
Had a lot of help from Comic, and still trying to push out new greens and TT.
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>new chapter of "Under Grace" was posted today
oh wow, i was certain it's dead

Speaking of fanfics - does anyone know, if Grizzlyfag is still active? I wonder if "Savage and the Savage" will be continued.
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>>11520887
I've been editing out typos this whole time as Comicanon has pointed them out. I have not retconned anything yet, but going on for a year and a half + now, there were things I forgot along the way.

Biggest priority I have at the moment after finishing Kitsunegari's last chapter is going back to a character (Eva Belette) and giving her more to do.

I'm keeping the original draft available online, I'm not going George Lucas on my baby, I'm just going back to do my job.
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>JudyViolet bondage pic from Alec
YES
E
S
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>>11521004
The ship is called UltraViolet
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>>11520934
>>11520962
Wait, what I'm finding myself lost in this conversation is the idea that you have to keep changing the chapter publication date.
Like, looking at one of my ongoings, the publication date is set to Aug last year, while the update date was March this year.
So when I posted a new chapter in March 2017, wouldn't it have been bumped briefly on the fic list on that specific date? Or are you implying I have to modify the publication date for the prior chapters to the same date as well?
Sorry if this sounds like a dumbass question, but it's late as heck here and I'm at the peak of a snot-on-brain headcold, so my reasoning and thinking is not at top performance.
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>>11520801
It has become a screenplay.
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Hey guys, it's me, ColonCapitalT.
I wanted to say sorry about last thread, with the whole card thing.
Sometimes I feel like I'm being left out on purpose. Idk if it's some spite these thread have against me, or something like that.
I also want to apologise to Ciwi (even if he wasn't around) because I know the feeling of like you owe someone something, especially someone anonymous.

Take care.
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>>11520962
That is actually a boiling crock of pigshit and about the dumbest, most guaranteed-to-be-gamed system they could have implemented.

There is nothing holding me back from just leaving it firmly planted in the top results but my own...

Wait,

If I set the publish date ahead of the current date, would it stay as the first result until 12:01am on however far into the future I go?
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>>11521030
do whatever you need to get your idea across.
just be clear that your not a writer and just wanted to get you idea out there.
if it doesn't work, congratulations! you didn't lose anything and got you idea out there. that's better than nothing
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>>11521044
even if it did, peple would eventually catch up to the gig and hate you for it, thus backfire at you horribly
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>>11521004
post more UltraViolet
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>>11521028
The best why to see it is if you go to whatever fic you want to see. Go to the "Chapter Index" then click on the "Full-Page Index"that shows you when each chapter was updated. But individual and only if it was chosen by the creator. I forget where exactly it is, but it's a option during the entire editing phase of each chapter where you can then set it where you want it. But if you don't the date defaults to when the last one was posted. (Or to when the entire fic was first started. cant remember.)

So in your case. You only need to modify the post recent chapter that you are working on, to it's date that you want it as. The entire fic will then bump to then.

>>11521044
Yes, sure. It has been gamed before, but the most I ever seen (In the Zoot fandom, fuck if know if it happens in the others.) is like I see it pushed like 3 to 4 times. And only over a day or two timeframe. Mainly when people post really fucking late and it's passed over for obvious reasons.

But I have a feeling that if an author starts bumping their fic to high hell and back. Like >>11521147 says. It would be a FAST way to annoy and piss off the fic readers. Like a "This person is constantly bumping their fic over and over again? Not even a new chapter but they just want people to always see it? Fuck that noise. Ignored!" And then that author and fic will forever be forgotten about, as a person that wanted attention."

>>11520982

>When the names of those fic's date the pic terribly.

It's rather comedic that almost all but 5 or so of those fic's are pretty shit to.

I honestly rater enjoy most of their fic's. But they have like 5 going now and not one of them is finished. And I doubt they will ever be. I am just waiting for another one to be started and forgotten about.
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anyone have a link to the cards? I wanna see some progress!
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>>11521040
Who? I mean really. I haven't ever heard about you before now. And I have been around here for a year now. Do you have some stuff you have worked on before to show us?
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>>11520626
https://vocaroo.com/i/s03EVCBEp4WE
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>>11520821
You still taking requests?

Could you draw Velvet in this outfit?
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>>11521147
>>11521179
Wasn't planning on doing it, still tested out the "setting the publish date a month into the future" theory and thankfully, that doesn't work.

Still questioning if changing the date would send emails out to followers but regardless,

I'm not doing that, just annoyed it could be done in the first place.
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>>11520982
>Looking through all those fic titles
>The Inner Voice

I almost forgot about that thing, did anyone even like that fic?
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>>11521062
Done. Here it is in full screenplay format: https://ufile.io/zjri6 .

Wolter Is Definitely Not Gay. One of my favorite podcast moments jumbled up, edited, and turned into a script.
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does zootopia have a crest or something? would like to something more than a 'z'
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>>11521292
there's the flag
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>>11521292
not as far we know. There are no flags on any state buildings like the police station or the city hall.

There is a flag in the mayor's office, but the pattern is not visible
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>>11521297
>didn't want to draw a stereotypical z
>offical flag is literally a 'z'
kek
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>>11521277
I liked it because of how fucking out their it was. Nick was a fucked up angsty dude. Judy was so fucking bland and nothing and and needed to get slapped across the face with what was happening to even understand it. That bunny OC that got involved with Judy was nothing also. It gave me many laughs at how over the top everything was.

That sequel cliffhanger was just the icing on the cake. It was so nothing and the author promptly forgot about it and tried doing something else that also never was finished.
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Cute tapered dicks.
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>>11521305
>>11521310
>Big bun au!!!
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>>11521303
But it's not just a Z, it's a Z inside a circle! With laurels!

You can also use the police badge. It's a pretty neat design
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Reposting for the nice hours
>The scratching of keys on a lock and a voice peppered with curses lets Allison know Jean just came home
>Whenever he had a bad day he could never find the keyhole
>Finally letting himself in, he stormed past her and planted himself firmly on the couch and let out an exasperated sigh
>Allison knew this sigh; he must’ve had a really rough day
>When she asked how his day was, she was prepared
>She knows how Jean can get, how his co-workers constantly get on his nerves
>And as he begins to spiel about how incompetent they all are, how slowly they do things, how inefficient they are, Allison struts over to him and the couch
>”Ah, honey; oh jeeze; that’s so daft; why would they do that?” she would respond when he would tell her about each mistake they made
>She knew it was best to just let him get it all out
>As she sat down next to him, she took his hand and wrapped it around her waist, enticing him to lean on her shoulder
>As he began to drone on and on, she saw his eyelids droop slowly as his rant became softer and stumbling
>Before long, he was sound asleep on her shoulder, drooling slightly on her cardigan
>She loved that about him; once he got close and comfortable on her, he’d just doze off right there in her (admittedly) pillowy body
>Getting nice and comfortable, she kissed his forehead and bid him sweet dreams, before closing her own eyes to rest

Written by Paranon
Art by Whaleoil
Characters by Whaleoil
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this one wasn't a request, just wanted to draw a dommy bunny

>>11520829
fall on the ground and die

>>11520845
$945

>>11520847
bruh I've never even heard of that
the only slouch I've ever heard of in headwear is for a type of beanie
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>>11521288
>strange link
not familiar with that site and I'd rather err on the side of caution.
Sorry anon, not downloading it
If it's an audio file, upload it somewhere with playback options (soundcloud or vocaroo. even youtube would work. Just upload it as private and post the link)
If it's a text file, use pastebin.
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>>11521433
and a sloth here too

I'm gonna snooze up for now, later
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>>11521433
>945
Holy fuck

>>11521446
Well, goodnight Mr Slothu dude.
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>>11521433
hey man don't sweat it
i kind of realised that unless you're an Aussie or a Kiwi you'd have no fuckn' idea what it was, but I loved the cute bat dude you did anyway, I hope you keep it up man
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>>11521446
Rest well snoozedude
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>>11521443
That's okay. Here's a link with no download: http://www.plotbot.com/screenplays/wolter_is_definitely_not_gay/screenplay


It looks like SHIT on Pastebin, but here's that link too. https://pastebin.com/HT1n7LvR
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>>11521454
600 for phone
300 for top
45 for hat
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>>11521463
Woof i thought it was all for the clothes. Phone included its not too bonecrushing but still up there.
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>>11521376
It alright.
The art's too anthro for my liking.
My problem with the story is that there is nothing much that can connect it to zootopia.
No mention of the feral animal dynamics demonstrated in the movie, nothing involving nighthowlers or pred/prey relationship, no size-play or interspecies undertones.
Stories like these work for established characters but since you're using OCs, it's hard to give it a pass.

>>11521433
Are dick pics with strap-ons a thing?
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>>11521505
seems that Akiric has found a new pairing to ship
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>>11521503
>Are dick pics with strap-ons a thing?
yeah
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>>11521503
dickpicks with strapons are a thing, they're super dope imo

i love em
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>>11521553
"Aw jeez what am I doing"
Well for one, you're stretching a short story into a marathon
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>>11521611
Next page will be him standing in line to buy the coffee and juice, then another of him fumbling for change, making small talk with the cashier. That's when the Kaiju attack and this comic turns into the best giant robot versus monsters story ever. Everything up and till that point was just a ruse, a set up.

Damnit I love giant robots.
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>>11521683
Chics dig giant robots
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>>11521462
Well, it's definitely rough. At least I understand what you were going for.
The guys are high, drunk, and are discussing what qualifies you as gay after Wolt tells his story.
The dialogue is hard to follow in the first part. Can't tell who's talking to who. It gets better towards the end, tho.
The cut-away to Betty is a nice touch.

Overall, it's okay. Nice work, anon.
You could've easily written this into a green instead of a screenplay if you just knew a few tricks on how to write-in dialogue.

Using the first line as an example:
instead of:
>WOLTER:
>One time, a friend of mine? He put a hundred dollar bill across his penis.
you can turn change it to:
>"One time," Wolter said, "a friend of mine? He put a hundred dollar bill across his penis."
Or you can add more details as to how he says it to emphasize the setting:
>"One time," Wolter said slurring his words "a friend of mine? He put a hundered dollar bill across his penis."

I'm an amateur writer at best, so I can't really help you that much. Send it to comic if you want to flesh it out.
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>>11521683
How much I hope fro something like this..
But the next pages will probably be:
>Go to vending machine, search for some change
>Put money in the machine while reflecting for the nth time how he will live now that Judy is a mother
>Take the tea and coffee (yes, a whole page of that)
>Meet Jack Savage
>Jack Savage being an obnoxious, horrible mammal
>Other ten pages of dialogue between Nick and Jack
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>>11521505
>>11521508
I still don't like boobs on gazelle
I prefer her lanky appearance
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>>11521747
>it hurts because it's probably true
I know the artist wants to end that story but, god, they're taking their sweet time.
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>>11521611
I don't even know why's that, SPRINKAH himself said he got tired of the story.
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>>11521779
>SPRINKAH himself said he got tired of the story.

He was done jerking himself to the thought of Nick the doormat.
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>>11521040
Yeah, I can understand but not sympathise. Have some decorum because posts like these won't make you feel any better or change things, instead ruining the excitement and fun for everyone else.

Your first response should have probably been making something for someone else instead of bringing down other people. Giving is receiving and all that.
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>>11521784
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>>11521784
>>11521796
>reminds me of the early days of zoot fanfiction
Oh how thirsty I was back then for zoot that I would literally read anything
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>>11521721
>The guys are high, drunk, and are discussing what qualifies you as gay after Wolt tells his story.
>The dialogue is hard to follow in the first part. Can't tell who's talking to who. It gets better towards the end, tho.

Fuck! I was worried about that. Like I said in my earlier post, this was transcribed from a podcast I really like. And like I said in my first post, I'm not a good enough writer to make a four person conversation seem coherent.

Here's the video if you want to see the actual IRL conversation I was adapting: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8pHuK5moaO0

Which link did you use to view it? The first or the pastebin one? The pastebin one looks a w f u l because it doesn't allow for formatting.

>The cut-away to Betty is a nice touch.
>Overall, it's okay. Nice work, anon.
Thanks! That's better than awful at least.

>You could've easily written this into a green instead of a screenplay if you just knew a few tricks on how to write-in dialogue.
>"One time," Wolter said, "a friend of mine? He put a hundred dollar bill across his penis."
>Or you can add more details as to how he says it to emphasize the setting:
>"One time," Wolter said slurring his words "a friend of mine? He put a hundered dollar bill across his penis."

That seems like it would get repetitive after a while if you aren't really good at mixing things up. I could do that for a few sentences, but not two pages of four different people doing stuff.
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Just a moment of your time for a short survey.

Based on your previous experiences, Ciwi is

a) the best
b) the best
c) the best
d) the best
e) all of the above
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>>11521829
>Ciwi is
reply
dotaluit
weaver
all of the above!
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>>11521040
this is kind of embarrassing man
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>>11521822
I used the plotbot one. The pastebin looked fine but it was harder to read.
And yeah, it takes practice avoid sounding repetitive. Comic comments on that a lot during his readthroughs.
I appreciate your efforts, anon.
If you wanna practice dialogue start with two people. if you wanna continue writing, ask around for critique.
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>>11521853
Thats crazy talk! Its impossible! But wait... if you take all the names, mix them together... it becomes an anagram that spells out their names!

Replydotaluitweaver!

You might be on to something here.
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goats commit suicide on a daily basis and it's killing them
help save them and donate one request
1 request = 1 goat saved

>>11521829
e)
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>>11521890
I request goat meat, rare or medium
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>>11521890
Let's save this goat!
Weaselton lazily sunbathing
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>>11521890
Young Skye?

Or Bogo with Judy on his chest pocket and Nick around his neck.
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>>11521890
I want Honey saving a goat.

Specifically a ram.

Specifically Remmy.
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>>11521890
Judy and Nick in full swat gear
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>>11521890
Finnick riding on Gud's head and yelling "I'M ON A GOAT!"

https://youtu.be/avaSdC0QOUM?t=40
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>>11522020
buddy you know the way straight to my heart
>>11521890
seconding the fuck outta this one, guddest boy
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nick
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dies
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because
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Of
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>>11521890
If you are up for something lewd, Skye in a similar pose to this, if not, Skye in a baithing suit.
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cuck
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And
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naturally
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Lewd
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Judys
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P h a n t o m here.

Hi.
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>>11522135
Fuck you phantom
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SWATFOX WAS RIGHT!
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>>11522136

Good.
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Good job, anons
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>>11522155

can we submit this for GTT?
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>>11522185
It's not green
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>>11522114
>>11522117
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>>11522199
how about now
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>>11522240
fuckin gek
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>>11522185
Submit the screenplay and have different people read each part.
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>>11522240
>>11522273
cant wait to hear the in-depth discussion they have about this piece
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>>11522139
>discord admin and swat were toxic shitposters
whatever, discord was a mistake, hope they stay away from the threads though
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>>11522349

Calm down buddy, Discord is doing its job, its users aren't.
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Is it bad that I submit to Greentext Theater but never listen?
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>>11522399
Full disclosure, I don't listen to them reading my stuff at all. It's just too nerve-wracking listening to someone read aloud stuff I've written, but I do listen to their comments afterward. It surprises me how close they get with some of their guesses, and sometimes they make me laugh by analyzing a single throwaway line for twenty minutes. Even if you don't listen to them read the actual green, you should give listening to the comments afterward a try.
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>>11522399
I only listen but never submit or join to read.
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>>11522399
curious.
why do you submit your greens if you don't want to listen to their critique?
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>>11522399

a little bit. in my opinion.
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>>11522459
I have pretty bad inattentive type ADD. Or some other mental problem that makes it impossible to do anything non essential that takes longer than a week or two. I know from years of trying that I'm not going to stick to it and improve if I listen to what they say, so I get the pain of critique without the benefits of improvement. No money for treatment either.
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>>11522503
That goat has a huge dick.
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>>11521912
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>>11522005
>>11522100
inspired by Fuel's cutest Sky(e) design
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>>11522483
Do what I do. Participate in the 5/5, submit your 5/5s to GTT, and chuckle as they overanalyze everything you write.
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>>11522019
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>>11522505
Awesome, thanks!
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>>11522022
I'm sorry this is super sucky
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>>11522519
I always knew Honey was secretly a sheep-lover
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>>11522515
I don't want to fuck with them though.
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>>11522483
>I have this made up thing I can use as a convenient excuse for anything
there's nothing wrong with not participating in things you don't find interesting, but at least own up to your decisions
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>>11522540
Who says you're fucking with 'em? I don't mean "write garbage just to make them read garbage." Participate in the 5/5 earnestly, but also submit the 5/5 because it's funny to hear what they think.
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>>11522515
I think I have the shortest 5/5 ever made.
19 words in total. I wonder how much they can overanalyze that.
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>>11522561
They analyzed the second line of this green for...oh, ten, maybe fifteen minutes.
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>>11521890
requesting a sad martina contemplating suicide
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>>11522545
>I have this made up thing
It's real enough to be in the DSM.
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>>11522100
Thats not Nick, its some fox OC that just looks like him. Nick would never degrade himself like that.
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How do I make Violet look less like Judy in glasses? Ear markings is but a one minor detail.

Anyone got side by side comparisons or group pictures? Tips, suggestions, references anyone?
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>>11522568
i was there and i didn't realize they went on for 15mins on that one line. tho if i remember right, it was mostly discourse about how mood rings work.

gonna submit my short-ass 5/5 and see how much they can glean from it. the story is pretty straightforward tho, so i'm sure it'll over quick
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>>11522640
This is the only side by side comparison that I found.
In short:
-Different grey for fur (colder color)
-Rounder head
-More elongated body (since she's taller, longer legs, less ass/thighs)
-Different shape of the ears?
Not many differences
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Need some luck, /ztg/?
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>>11522594
My hard science friends made fun of me for going into psychology
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>>11522028
>>11522020
bleh
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>>11522698
I need a lot of luck anon. Job interview in two hours. Help me
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>>11522697
Brothers and Sisters? Where's the buncest?
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>>11522640
based the comic strip, violet is taller, has whiter fur, and has a rounder head shape than judy. especially the top of her head. and ot appears she also has a slightly thicker neck than judy. other than that, she doesn't have lighter fur around her eyes
>>11522697
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>>11521194
Here's something I did recently. Currently a favorite of mine.
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>>11522719
oh hell yeah
dig this
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>>11522697
To be honest I find going Fuel's design choice (her having a different head shape) the most effective way. He does that constantly (his Skye fur is upward, her ears different than Nick, eye shape, mouth behavior, etc) which normally means the character are pretty different than normal concept version, but at least it manages to make them unique.
I think it's like drawing Jack with a more square/manly facial features (thicker nose bridge, jawline, forehead) and the hair tuft to make him more discernible than a judy with stripes.
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>>11522524
>"To battle my deathly steed!"
thanks dude. ever try doing a comic? you got a good sense of humor
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>>11522761
Any pics?
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>>11522758
Martina is happy and carefree, not sad and suicidal!

delet
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>>11522778
Something like this for Jack?
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>>11522778
not him but i think this is the only fuel violet?
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>>11522778
Skye head shape.
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>>11522795
There is also this but it's harder to discern
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>>11522791
whats the context for this?
i love the interactions here
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good job thread, you have saved a gud goat today.

>>11522765
Thank you anon, I did some comics before, but I might consider doing more, they are fun
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>>11522811
https://soundcloud.com/comicanon/jack-savage-bunny-investigator
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>>11522814
we love you gud, stay safe, find happiness
chase your dream, m'dude
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>>11522698
>that picture of Nick with judy's toes in his mouth.
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>>11522811
jack is a goofy private detective and skye is his dry humored secretary.
listen to the whole thing for better context >>11522820
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>>11521796
You missed the cuckumber.
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>>11522825
anon what are you talking about, it's me, Usuck
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>>11522849
Why must we bully the fox.
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>>11522872
I love you Gud.
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>>11522872
So...who swallows?
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>>11522872
now i understand why my gut was questioning the difference in style, heh.
y'know, this is a learning opportunity for both of us.
lord Byron's first commandment: SIGN IT
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oh gee look at the time, I gotta go for today, have a good one thread
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Dick! I need...dicks!
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>>11522841
This one?
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>>11522937
have a good one usuck
sorry about the mistaken identity
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>>11522949
yes :v
who drew that, btw
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>>11522961
my boy Sted/Hladilnik
i asked, unfortunately he did it as a joke, he doesn't have plans to revisit zootopia content as of right now
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>>11522961
hladilnik
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Guys I really have to know was there example of Disney taking legal actions agains online porn artists? If I have a patreon should I be worried and refrain to use the terms Zootopia/Nick/Judy?
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>>11522975
mux their names in porn and you should be more than fine; write it off as parody if some autismo threatens to report you or something
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>>11522983
I have it on freaking every page on top that it's a zootopia fancomic (no patreon yet, but some of you suggested that I could start one)
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>>11522945
I give you.... Tiny bun dick.
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>>11523004
Fred Perry is an established artist who I THINK actually sells prints of his stuff at cons. You're a no-name (not meaning that as a slur or anything, just that you don't have the visibility he got over 20+years). You're fine, Rob.
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>>11523004
don't worry about it, mate
just keep doing what you love
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>>11523025
>>11523004
Also, since it is an online comic and not like a movie, they won't give it as much notice. Fred is just a long established professional artist so he just covers his ass instinctively.
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>>11523025
calling someone a no-name is still pretty harsh, anon
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>>11522636
But Nick totally would degrade himself! Just this picture of Nick is evidence enough.
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>>11523042
We knew what he meant, bit hard to find another way to say it;
insignificant,
unimportant,
nobody,
low volume,
small time,
They're all words that could be taken either way.
I mean the best (least) descriptive I could think of would be;
Minor.
>any other ideas?
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>>11523042
It is. I'm sorry, Rob. I was just saying that since you naturally did not have the exposure of a cheesecake/porn artist who has been in the game since the 90s (and who actually sells hard copies of his comics from his own press), Disney wouldn't be going after you.
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>>11523025
>>11523042
it's okay, non taken, I too would describe myself as a no-name in regard of "adult" comics, that's why I haven't made a patreon yet. Don't want until I have nothing to present.

>>11523026
>>11523033
I guess I'm just paranoid, don't want the mouse coming for my ass.
>I heard you make money of our property... ha-ha
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>>11523128
>>I heard you make money of our property... ha-ha
>Sick him Pluto...
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>>11523128
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>>11523042
he's right though. not dissing robc but disney would have higher chance to see a massively famous furry artist that span over several fandoms and have his own original stuff getting money than some minor furry artist who drews only one IP.
in this case it is good.

i'd sooner see disney going after politically message charged cartoons of certain controversial opinions with high fidelity to original work art style than of that. as someone who works with media, if someone is too good at mimicking an official art style start using it for bad stuff that can actually be mistaken for official stuff (unlike porn), it gets pretty dangerous.
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>>11523128
Difference in scale in a patreon and selling the comics individually. Even Disney will ignore the former. Not so much the latter.
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>>11523144
I wonder if Disney sent a stern letter to Trey and Matt for this one?
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mlem
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>>11523279
aaaa
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>>11523293
gay foxe
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>>11523293
Skye is the best cuddler. Even better than Betty.
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fuckin' GAY

for an anon in the previous thread
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>>11523305
Time to le
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>>11523313
AVE THEM ALL BEHIIIIIIIIIIIIND
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>>11523115
Considering I was born in 91, it would've been hard for me to be indeed, It's true, that's why I don't mind the term.

>>11523142
KEK!

>>11523147
Wonder of Zaush is twisting out the characters like that so he can protect himself with the "parody" stuff in case someone shows up in his doorstep.

also, Yeah I can see why that would be more important from a moral point of view, but then again, they have anything to gain there financially, so there question comes if there is a pont in legal actions where there is no profit from it
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>>11523300
>Even better than Betty
Let's not get too rash now anon
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>>11523305
get with the times, alec
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>>11523305
Thank you alec
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>>11523305
my zoot porn folder is getting pretty big... should I orginize it by artist or by theme?
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Having the time of your life?
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>>11523339
Good fucking lord of all things to find in these threads.
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>>11523364
SHUT THE FUCK UP STU
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http://pastebin.com/iYDU8g2T

Hello /ztg/, OP pastebin has been updated, working on a new structure, might wanna check it out, to see if the Table of Content is more clear now. Added some new links, like the other pastebins, the discord link, a Zootopia resource link for artists, a new section for comics, separated from the gallery/compilation. Now comics will have the Complete/Ongoing status. Still need to work on the fanfiction zone. Fanfiction readers changed to Audio readings.

If you want to add a fic to the pastebin, reply here, send the link with a little description and a few tags. And we need help building the F.A.Q section, so any help, questions and tips are welcome.

Looking foward to see some TT entries too!

>>11522814
Goat is never safe. And good doodles

>>11521829
e)

>>11521433
dang good bunny
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>>11523356
Organize it by time taken to orgasm.
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>>11523305
>Frotting
YES
We always need more frottage
The ZPD wolves, Nick and Finnick, the meerkat and the mongoose...

>>11523412
You're a very good dude, HC.
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Which Zootopia character or OC would share my near complete hatred for the Drow?
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>>11523438
I will need to do some research for dat
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>>11523412
>the discord link
NO.
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Tell me what you like about Nick.
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>>11523477
Oh, fuck off.
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>>11523468
Doofus the Downie Donkey
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>>11523495
I like his ass
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>>11523495
that fluffy tail, obviously
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>>11523320
>there question comes if there is a pont in legal actions where there is no profit from it
You act like Disney haven't done it before.
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>>11523495
that deep down he wanted to be a good guy and while he was hiding behind a smug "I'm better than u" attitude, he actually was looking/waiting for a sign or a person to pull him out from that miserible life his self-loathing created. He was ready to turn his life around and become the partner of someone he knew for >2 days. And he is in his 30s... it gives me hope that I too can find someone to spin my life around
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>>11523520
I'm not an expert on disney lawsuit, are there examples where they didn't mainly pursued financial compensation
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gud draw more tarrot cards you layz fuck.
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>>11523412
>Nick was a surrogate father for Skye and Jack, she had ten kits.
>Ten. Nine of them were vixens, and one was a really effeminate tod.
>Judy and Jack's surrogate kits were divided between four does and four bucks.
>The stripes were the dominant trait, from Jack, as well as Judy's grey coat. The does and bucks look indistinguishable to both of their parents; biological and adopted.
>All of them, every single kit of both species, were bundles of energy and creativity.
>And it was almost impossible for Nick to tell the bunnies apart, as well as the foxes.
>It was adorable, sometimes.
>He and Jack would joke that either of their little vixens could be jumping between houses and they'd never know.
>Jack would sometimes ask which was the tod, and Nick would embarrasingly say he could only tell by smell, and that it was almost the same as his sisters.
>They decided to just move in with eachother, and create a burrow of their own in Zootopia.
:v
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>>11523550
I'll draw your hand in mine you fuck
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>>11523575
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>>11523584
That's why it's so good.

>>11523592
As hard as he tries, Gideon can't ignore the fact that he'll grow up to be a kissless virgin.
Unless Armasyll's around.
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>>11522791
plz dont bunny your bully
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>>11523627
Not Armasyll, but I'd smooch him
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>>11523627
I'd put him on a weight loss diet, have him exercise every day, shave his head, trim his stubble, and then maybe i'd do something with him :v
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>>11523646
Sounds a lot like that buff Remmy you like so much.
It's about time you got thicc, though.
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>>11522791
>beep

Collared AU?
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http://aoimotion.tumblr.com/post/165298060994/alone-aoimotion-zootopia-2016-archive-of
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>>11522791
I'm surprised people haven't seen this or know about the play. Wasnt it a huge thing?
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>>11523672
>play
What?
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>>11523687
radio play. a term used for the thing comic did.
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>>11523687
>>11522820
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A good morning to you, thread! And a good morning shill:

http://archiveofourown.org/works/10523451/chapters/27367011

I had plenty of time on the ship, so I got a Reichstagsbrand update out of my voyage!
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>>11523643
source?
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>>11523759
Its good to see you back man
Now go through every thread you missed and catch up
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>>11523759
Awesome!
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>>11523759
aw hell yea ttm
back on land for a fair amount of time?
Rose has been going absolutely ham since you dropped those supplies on her, which is really a gift to us all haha
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>>11523497
hurr durr let's bring more drama with the shittiest people of the community, plz Kill Yourself cunt
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>>11523854
UH
UH OH
UHHHH OHHHH
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>>11523852
Stop motivating me to become an artist
I closed that door ages ago
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>>11523871
Do it, anon, I believe in you.
Share your art with the world
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>>11523871
there is a window over there.
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>>11523669
very feels-ie oc last of his kind saved by protag that have reprocicated feelings but not really typical romance cuz i watched tons of dorama and animoo
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>>11523793
Thank you, and no.

>>11523837
Thank you!

>>11523853
Yeah, a few months at least. That's good to hear, too. Rose is real good people.
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>>11523890
REEEEEEEEE

>>11523891
No there isn't. There's just you, but I'll hold that hand of yours.
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>>11523871
do it
for bellwether
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>>11523906
>Rose is real good people.
Anon, is this missing a comma?
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>>11523094
>Implying the fox in the picture is Nick.
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>>11523928
"X is good people" is a turn of phrase. I'm saying she's a good person.
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>>11523928
it's an expression, "X is good people" is a folksy way of saying "this is a good person"
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>>11523937
get out of my head, harry
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>>11523937
>>11523939
I've never come across this expression before.
Interdasting.
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>>11523954
>get out of my head, harry
No,
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>>11523967
also link https://mega.nz/#!iIQDTA4Y!hckFsMaVOlJHtBea2vCrYQ0Han_V2Fy5kwm1q9raIVY
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>>11524187
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>>11524366
I already have.
Just some porn, and that one comic they did.
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>>11524366
That link has all zoot stuff from xnirox
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what draw?
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>>11524429
jack and judy sucking nick's dick
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>>11524429
Meerkat and mongoose frotting
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>>11524429
Sky(e) riding a large dildo
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>>11524429
muh dik
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>>11524429
Judy x Bellwether
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HOLY SHIT

MEAD DID ME A FUCKING SOLID

THIS IS SO AWESOME I CAN'T EVEN PROPERLY DESCRIBE IT

THANK YOU!
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>dat feel when you uploaded something on dropbox so you could work on it on a different computer and now it's time and you find your upload didn't go through

fuck
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>>11524447
I'm loving these
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>>11524429
Remmy holding Charlie's paw.
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>>11524488
Is Mead doing all the cards or something?
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>>11524518
Second. Almost nothing non-lewd with these two
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>>11524488
now that is a GOOD ambigram.
mead, top fucking notch work.
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>>11524440
>>11524442
>>11524458
>>11524471
thank you!
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>>11524563
fuck it, i laughed.
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>>11524525
No of course not. Ciwi is.

>>11524550
Thanks but I'm still cheating!
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>>11524605
So wich ones do you have planned then?
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>>11524488
holy heck
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>ballplay is best
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>>11524764
sunny sucking fox dick ?
zeke cuck ?
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>>11524787
it's judy and nick
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>>11524764
this is disgusting. Thank goodness I'm straight.
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>>11524429
Nick x Gazelle
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>>11524790
looks like a bun boy
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>>11524640
Should do one for Pho as I just realized he hasn't gotten one yet! Aside from that I just do these as inspiration strikes.
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>>11524429
If non lewd, draw Bellwether making fun of Lionheart in prison
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>>11523792
nobody knows
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>>11524791
that's nick and judy you moron

hyenas don't have knots
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>>11524808
Nick and Jude*
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>>11524808
sunny and nick otp
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This bun is gay
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cuckie coo

cuckie coo
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>>11524847
You're gay.
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finally getting around to reading more of Boney_m's pack fic
as someone who's just had a bunch of shit going on and hadn't gotten to it, if you haven't yet it has my highest recommendation.
currently halfway through chapter three of Inadvertent Seduction and dreading finishing it because i'm enjoying this so much.
any really standout Boney writes anyone else enjoys that they'd recommend beelining to after this one?
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>>11524881
I've long accepted I like seeing cum erupting from cocks. Your point?
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Someone help this poor goat

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>>11524899
>I like seeing cum erupting from cocks
Was that really enough to make you gay?
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>>11523669
Oh yeah, Jack basically rescued Cynthia Skye from a concentration camp and eventually got her into the agency.

Why is she so pissy towards him?
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>>11524899
Are there girls who like to see cum erupting from cocks? I mean I'm not gay, but male orgasms are so much more visually exciting than female orgasms.
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All this talk about gay. Isn't this a zootpia thread?
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>>11524518
>>11524538
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>>11524956
>does liking cumming dicks make you gay

I know this if 4chan, anon, but the Nile is a river in Egypt.
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>>11525075
Nick is gay for Bogo's cock
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>>11524897
>Not linking a goddamn thing
You can thank this anon for not increasing your views boney
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>>11525075
just finished inadvertent seduction, i'll concur with homo anons today
zootopia is for gay
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>>11525090
Thanks!
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>>11525090
That's cute
Good cutedraw my man
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>>11525092
It's unusually specific, anon.
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>>11525090
>hoof and paw holding
So, the rise of hitler begins anew.
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https://sexbad.tumblr.com/post/165295848920/cuz-why-not
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>>11525110
http://archiveofourown.org/works/9616475/chapters/
inadvertent seduction - Remmy + Martina

Boney's works
http://archiveofourown.org/users/Boney_M/pseuds/Boney_M/works?fandom_id=7782412

i think i'm tackling rabbit clan's fox next, personally.
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>>11525090
who drew dis
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I love you anon
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>>11525257
<3
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>>11525257
I love you too anon!
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Slow hours are delicious.
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>>11521462
YO this is actually my preferred medium for non-zoot stuff!

Okay so, critiquing it like it was an actual scene in a screenplay, you don't actually NEED this line
>Somehow, through a combination of beer, weed, and one of REMMY's lame jokes, they have begun talking about sexuality.

Readers love catching up with shit (that's why Aaron Sorkin starts a lot of his movies in the middle of an argument or conversation) and they'll pick up on the tone after the first few lines of dialogue.

Placing Remmy's second swig of beer later would be funnier.

Not bad overall. The cut to Betty is funny.

I do agree with the other anon, though. This could have been made into a green and it could have worked. I don't know about your actual writing abilities so I might be assuming a lot, but with stuff like making a four way dialogue coherent, you have to remember that the audience is just as smart as you. If you give them enough cues to show who's talking then it's pretty possible to get through a big, long four way conversation without a single "he said" (don't actually do that, though).
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>>11524447
Who disappointed you, Bailey?
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>>11525168
more peeing please
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>>11525661
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>>11525178

Rabbits clan fox still my favorite
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>>11525734
ditto... Im dying for the cont
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>>11525157
Silly Nick, you don't have to wear a Toupe.
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>>11525734

It's good, but it ends too abruptly. It needs a sequel
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Aggie Anon here
Internet in my apartment going to be turned off for a few hours, ill remake the aggie when its up
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This thread needs more hot and sexy females.
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>>11525839

do what you gotta bunner
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>>11525090
>>11525183
pls
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>>11525661
>"Did you really claim my sheep Betty?!!"
>"Yes. Fuck you."
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>>11525661
dose vulf hev dewlap?
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ICantBelieveItsNotHeresy if you're here I wanna thank you for your work, it's largely the reason I haven't left the fandom.
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>>11524447
Sad Bailey makes me sad
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knowing zaush this pic implies a wolf gang killing Judy and skinning her while turning Nick into their bitch which role he happily accepts
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>>11525962
Or maybe it's just generic furry stuff.
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>>11525962
>a rabbit clan's fox 2
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>>11525962
>>11525979
>yfw A Rabbit Clan's Fox "fanart"
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>>11525962
>thinking Zaush actually gives a shit about Zootopia enough to draw a themed pic for it
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if someone were to make a new zoot based comic, would you rather it featured nick and judy as the main characters or ocs instead?
i feel like ive seen mixed opinions on that.

asking for a friend
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>>11525999
>implying Zaush paid attention to Zootopia anywhere past his comic
At least try, dude.
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>>11526036
>i feel like ive seen mixed opinions on that.
There are people who like one over the other, but the vast majority are fine with either so long as the quality is good
Best bet is to work with a writer/artist to get feedback and then share it with the thread
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>>11526036
Nick and Judy. Noone likes OC-centric shit unless it's quality.
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>>11526036
Either way, you're going to have to make it quality. Don't cut corners,especially with Nick or Judy.
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>>11526036
Depends, it takes time to get a liking to new characters, while everyone loves Nick and Judy.

Like borba demostrated not every story can or should be told with Nick and Judy however.

And as packstreet doesn't have much knowledge outside tumblr and /ztg/ it shows that not everyone will sit around to get to know new characters.

What people don't like if Nick and Judy are used as bait to listen to new characters, like that mercenary comic, that changes topic with each chapter.

It's hard to tell.
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>>11526036
does he want it to be popular? do nick and judy
if he doesn't care about popularity and just wants to tell a story, it varies depending on the kind of story. using OCs only works if they emphasize ideas/events established in the movie. the nighthowler incident from someone else's perspective, dynamics of interspecies living, etc
if it's porn, do nick and judy

how about telling us the comic's general plot?
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>>11526039
I don't even think he watched it. Maybe once, half-drunk so he remembered a few details, and obviously he's been checking out production to stea... I mean... reference stuff that zootopia fans would like
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>>11526036
OC comics have been done before and are being done now. Shorty Squad, Things Just Happen, Pizza Pals and Little Hustlers.
Nick and Judy comics have been done before and are being done now. Mead just finished a giant one.
So long as its in world, not shit, and isn't absolute shit, were fine with it.
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>>11525922
I'm sure she appreciates that you care, anon.
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>>11526270
what au is this gideon
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>>11526307
Shitty donutsteel OC
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G E T. O F F.
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>>11526339
You're so cute. I'm taking you home.
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10
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>>11526354
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>>11526339
>>11526347
G E T. I N.
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>>11526270
I would remove the hair, it sticks out like a sore thumb
As well, his fat is a bit too localized. Gideon is sort of round all over iirc, rather than having a big belly
Very few Zoot models have weight other than Claw so Im not sure where to point you for references
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>>11526036
I want
>a good story
>something I already know, at least a little (I don't think I will be interested in "Jerry the hyena in zootopia"
>good art

Jack x Skye would be good

I'd really love to see more sensible Nick and Judy comic if someone can come up with a good plot

I'm not saying other OCs are bad, hell I might even like some of them but I don't think I'd be invested in shorty squad or pizzapals if they're not drawn by their actual creators.
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What do you not like and how would you change it?
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>>11526363
*remove the hair or keep it uniform color
It being a different color throws the balance off
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>>11526389
/soc/ dumping doxxer spamming leaks and shitting the thread
not have the guy around and cut down shitstorms and drama by 90%
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Think of the story you want to tell. Do Nick and Judy work? No? Think of other characters from the movie, even side and background characters. Do they were? No? Then sure, go with OCs.
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>>11526389
>What do you not like
A_sig's guarding of the exit.

>how would you change it
Try escaping while he's asleep.
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>>11526404
but muh coat tails
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>>11526389
I'd remove Gideon and all Judeon art
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>>11526419
Hes not the only guardian bitch
Now you get back in the thread and you stay there
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>>11526419
Just ask him for some bondage play, he'll be all over it. Cover him with cum and then you're free.
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>>11526435
He's the only one that MATTERS
You can't contain me REEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE

>>11526436
Would he see through me if i tried?
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>>11526451
>Would he see through me if i tried?
Play it cool, he can't resist a good time.
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>>11526472
I see. I still feel like I should have a backup plan, though.

Anyways, thanks anon.
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>>11526493
Squirt ink into his eyes and run away, its pretty much the best backup plan.
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ARE WE MAKING IT TO 1000 POSTS THIS THREAD?!
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>>11526542
Outlook not so good
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>>11526499
Nice.



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