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Jack is cute. CUTE!
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YOU MOTHERFUCKERS ARE GONNA KILL ALL MY LILLIES
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cuck
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>>11285426
I get the joke but you need to diversify
Youve repeated this joke for a month or more
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>>11285443
I don't get the joke.
I see it getting posted a lot, but I have no idea what it means.
Did I miss something?
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>>11285407
>Gay
DELET
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>>11285407
Such lewd creatures...
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>>11285472
no
jack has feminine benis
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>>11285426
>>11285443
>>11285469
It's almost like RPfags don't even care about telling a story and are just here to shove their garbage OC's down everyone's throats.
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>>11285443
Have you seen where we are?
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>>11285469
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=uu_8Vyg_d64

Though how it relates in any way to the content in these threads, I surely don't know
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>>11285502
I don't get this one either.
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>>11285407
Jack can't even look the fox in the eye...his poor gay heart is going to be crushed when he realizes there's nothing behind his boyfriend's eyes.
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>SavageNick
>Not WildeHopps
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>>11285502
I wouldn't be so harsh but he's going to make people angry if he doesn't get creative with it.
>>11285469
He's specist about "hoofers" and thinks they stomp on flowers.
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>Every night.

>God, every night. Every night it was like this. I woke up here, again, trapped in what had once been my pride and joy. But the lights were out, the doors were locked, and the monster was still prowling outside, keeping me trapped. Hostage.

>I couldn't see it, yet. But that didn't make a difference, because it would always come. It was always coming. It was only a matter of time, and time didn't mean much in this place. I stood behind the counter, out of habit more then anything else, looking out into the store.

>The shelves were ruined, toys and marital aids knocked to the floor, or shredded to bits from being caught by errant claws. Every time the monster got inside, it would destroy everything in it's path until it claimed me. I didn't know how much more this place could take.

>I didn't know how much more I could take.

>Slowly, automatically, I stepped out from behind the counter, leaving the register behind to pick up the closest merchandise. I picked up a ruined pack of condoms, and placed them back onto the metal prong they had been hanging on, before giving up. I didn't know why I was trying to… I didn't even know what I was trying to do. Act normal, maybe? Pretend this was okay?

>Pretend this would be okay?

>I sagged, and slowly padded over to the storefront, pressing my palm against the shaded privacy window. There was nothing out there but misty darkness. It felt like every night, there was more and more darkness, and less of me inside it.

>I didn't want to go out there. I tried the door anyway. I knew it was locked even before I tried, and no amount of strength would open it, not for me. I had spent some nights trying. I'd tried everything, and nothing worked.
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>>11285537

>The fur on my neck stood on end, and I knew it was coming. Already? It felt like- No, it didn't matter. Time mattered as little here as everything else, even if I couldn't quite wrap my head around the unreality of it all.

>Hateful yellow eyes glistened in the all-encompassing darkness that was my tiny little world, and I stumbled back from the door. It would stalk slowly at first, but only at first.

>There was no point in hiding. I tried anyway, running into the back, pushing open the employees only door and locking it. It wouldn't hold, but nothing ever did.

>I slumped back against the wall, and waited. It wasn't long until I heard the scratching, the loud and angry hisses behind the door. I could still see the scratches, the long furrows carved into it from every other night it had taken the abuse before it fell. Before everything was the same again every other night.

>A heavy impact shook the door, and I tensed in on myself, curling up. The thing about fear was no matter how inevitable something was, that didn't mean it wasn't fucking terrifying. I was learning that lesson again and again and again.

>One. Two. Three. Splinters flew everywhere as the beast burst inside, the door demolished beneath it. Those glowing yellow eyes, almost neon, glared into my own. They were as familiar as they were alien, a form I recognized and an expression I couldn't.
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>>11285407
This is a damn good bun and fox, you are a true hero Fanart.
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>>11285543

>The tiger strode inside on all fours, claws digging through the tiles in some nightmarish defiance of sense, tail waving low in an ancient expression of hunting.

>The monster was me. And no matter how many nights I suffered, I could never escape myself.

>I pressed myself back up against the wall, closing my eyes. I only opened them again when I felt the hot breath washing over my face, staring into the open maw of the predator before me, fangs prepared to strike.

>They didn't. They never did. The world faded away, my shop falling into the distance from every angle in a way that left me dizzy, leaving me floating in an empty void with nothing to protect me from the monster.

>In a heartbeat, it was gone. But it wasn't, because I could feel it. It was inside me, and I was changing.

>“No. No, no, no, not again- I won't- I won't be this again!” I cried out into the endless night, my words meaning nothing with no one to hear them.

>I seized as I was overtaken inside. The morning had come.
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>>11285526
>>SavageNick
>>Not WildeHopps
Why not all of the above?
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>>11285535
>specist about "hoofers"
Ahh, I see. Don't I feel stupid now.
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>>11285502
>RPfags
idk man, I'm just here to shitpost and post drawings
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>>11285551

Epilogue:

>God damn, did I hate this job. Sure, Lionheart said it was important to find a cure, and it was, but that didn't mean it got any easier.

>I leaned in, tapping the glass of the newest case. The tiger inside snarled, slapping paws against the transparent wall between us, claws extended, but there was no traction to be gained. I raised my clipboard, glancing over at the name near the top.

>“Pandora, huh?”
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>>11285556
>shitpost
Its not appreciated and just serves to cause drama.
Could you chill out man? Everyone's here for a good time, just be conscious of other people.
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>>11285552
I always felt that this scene looks like they are having sex in a steel cage or something.
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>>11285537
>>11285543
>>11285551
>>11285560
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>>11285560
(you)
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>>11285537
>>11285543
>>11285551
>>11285560
have a (you) you goddamn beautiful bastard
now im sad
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>>11285572
Dare you enter... the Bunagon!
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>>11285592
Goodnight you, that is a rad fox and bune.
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>>11285552
'cause it cuck
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>>11285573
>crawling in my skin
I will never not think of this when I hear that song (or read the title): https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=eCiFO7qV54E
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>>11285605

It's cuck
it's cuck
It's cuck
It's in my head

It's cuck
It's cuck
It's cuck
We might be dead
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>>11285572
>>11285591
AU where sex is a competitive sport?
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>>11285605
It's more of fivesome anon, since they are all having sex together.
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http://imgur.com/a/AxTUb
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>>11285643
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>>11285637
Its bait.
FN@F and Roommates threads also get someone coming in and calling anything with a threesome+ "cuck"
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>>11285651
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>>11285552
poly is a plus
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>>11285661
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>>11285552
>Kris was there too
More like Jack was there too. He's relegated to getting the fourth wheel off with no pleasure of his own, as it should be.
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>>11285660
I see...
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>>11285552
she's SO SMALL
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>>11285682
>He's relegated to getting the fourth wheel off with no pleasure of his own, as it should be.
His little bun dick would be good for much anyway, except maybe to that tiny Kris there.
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>>11285704
>she's SO SMALL
Not small enough anon...
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what did he/she do to deserve this, /ztg/
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>>11285795
have smooshy cheeks
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>>11285795
She told the alpha that the aardwolf is hers, not his.
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>>11285795
she told the alpha that she's secretly in a relationship with the non-wolf omega
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Reply sneaking in at the end of last thread
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>>11285839
Ya she's got a great head of hair but... damn Betty is aiming low.
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https://soundcloud.com/comicanon/greentext-theater-8-29-2017

Tonight's Greentext Theater has been uploaded!

And if you'd like to listen to past Greentext Theaters, check them out here:
https://soundcloud.com/comicanon/sets/greentext-theater

Who's ready for a relaxing night in the--

>>11285731
>>11285801

--oh my goodness...
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>>11285867
Do you post these on your tumblr?
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Combined two requests from the last thread. Still open for more. Sfw please.
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>>11285795
She told the alpha that she slam the ram
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>>11285901
That is RAD! Thank you so much, love sleepyheads and badgers!
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>>11285894
I should...

>>11285901
ITS AMAZING AND TECHNICALLY A SLEEPYHEAD!

I have no requests but hope you get a ton of them, Flakjackal(?)
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>>11285416
is he though
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>>11285901
A horse giving a rude gesture.
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>>11285914
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I hate Pack Street
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>>11285901
An extremely shocked horse.
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>>11285947
Ok. You do you Anon.
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>>11285930
Well ya, he is. Just look at him.
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>>11285940
Wo-oah Black Betty, slam the ram
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>>11285962
Don't call "him" cute
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>>11285901
Nick in a high school track race.
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>>11285901
Remmy lying on top of Dora
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>>11285975
Fine fine, he's adorable.
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>>11285901
Jack Savage angry at being called cute
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>>11285952
>collar the horses
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>>11285901
Nick and Judy hanging out
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>世界からニック・ワイルドが消えた
>Google translation: Nick Wilde has disappeared from the world

>>11285731
>>11285801
REPLY, THAT'S DISNEY EVIL
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>>11286017
Sleep tight bunner, cause tomorrow you're going to have a huge bowl of those Lucky Chomps!
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>>11286017
where did he got milk ?
is it real milk ?
is he using orange juice ?
water ?
this are the hard questions
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>>11286038
artist?
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>>11286060
Freshly squeezed milk from an unknown yet reliable source.
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Anyone have that image set of lewd vrbit on the bed?
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>>11286077
bogo's wife cow tits
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>>11286046
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>>11286098
source?
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>>11286094
Little money on the side to help out. Bogo's paycheck just doesn't seem to cut it like it used to...
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>>11285901
How about Lionheart getting elected mayor?
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>>11285975
>https://archive.b-stats.org/trash/thread/11277510
He's pretty hot
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>>11286060
Headcanon is that it is Soy milk, but mammal milk is still something that is sold. Just there are tons of testing and hygienic shit so the price is kinda high and opinions are mixed about it.
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>>11286109
http://aei-sb.tumblr.com/
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>>11286121
oops
didn't mean to link that
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>>11286098
thumbnail made me think canidae just had an ENORMOUSLY HUGE ass.
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Give me a request anons.

I want to start drawing
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>>11286156
Nick and Judy happy you're drawing
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>>11286156
Boxes!
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>>11286124
>mafia ring selling rat milk dismantled by bunny cop and fox cop duo
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>>11286148
I hate when that happens, at least it wasn't something personal.
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>>11286156
I request any animal of your choice posting on an anonymous imageboard
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>>11286156
>I want to start drawing
If you're just starting out, how about a nice portrait of Nick?
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>>11286156
wolter and charlie running a hustle by pretending to be a married couple
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>>11286161
>>11286169
>>11286177
>>11286177

these are some really smart requests.
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>>11285519
This is actually a pretty good song, thanks anon.
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>>11286175
The sheer number of rats that would be required...
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>>11286156
A family photo of the Wilde's
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>>11286243
>tons of mouses attached to milking machines
>including guys
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>>11286270
>>including guys
You've got to make up the volume somehow.
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>>11286243
>>11286270
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Illegal horse milk counterfeiting!
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>>11286242
The fuck? I meant to post this

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=evXQYniwBKw

I'm on one today man, I swear
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>>11286186
any particular pose?

>>11286169
You knew what I was going to draw didn't you anon

>inb4sidewayslaughingweaver
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>>11286323
god damn it
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>>11286323
>5kx3k
m8
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the adventures of gay Jack is one of my favorite things from these threads desu
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>>11286343
I um..don't know how to interpret that
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repost
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>>11286323
Pencil so sparkly.

>>11286355
Box so large.
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>>11286323
>any particular pose?
Maybe this?
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>>11286301
zebras leave more money for the same space
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>>11286320
I'd call that a happy accident anon, I like finding good new music.

That song eventually lead to this one, which is also nice: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=y33iurEFepc
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>>11286138
Thank you
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So Anons, how do you think Remmy would find out about his neighbors secretly being monsters?
[Aside from general curiosity, your answer might get used in a fic. Writer's block sucks.]
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>>11286441
Someone casually forgets their mask then tries to play it off like it's nothing. Maybe a little gaslight then GIANT ROBOTS!
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>>11286111
Always love to see Friedkin.
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>>11286441
A midnight snack devolves into terror as he hears their siren song. Either that or like have it slip in conversation or something. Remmy probably wouldn't do anything, he's really too spineless
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>>11286399
Yeah, I've been on something of an obscure psychedelic/doom rock kick lately, and those boys were my latest find. Damn song has been stuck in my head all week.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=h0SICfgXipI

These guys right here are responsible for it I'd say. Heard a few of their songs in a video game of all places, and before you know it, I had damn near every song they've ever put out.
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>>11286441
>Predators
>"secretly" monsters
Uh huh, sure
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>>11286441
He sticks his dick in someones hole and finds more than he bargained for
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>>11286038
I'm on tenderhooks to see if Reply has a third pic or if I'm going to need to write a story about it...
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>>11286441
He'd drink a load of coffee to stay awake during a double shift. He'd end up gaining more insight in his jittery state, and start noticing things that are "off" about his neighbours.

It would go away eventually, but only the coffee at work seems to reveal it. He drinks a full pot and races home, and sees the Lovecraftian horrors living next door. They act exactly the same.
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>>11286355
It's a bun eating a banana.

A bunana, if you will.

Also turn down the resolution on your camera.
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>>11286323
your signature should be byron, id be hilarious
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Woke up from a 3 month coma
Has Pack Street updated yet?
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>>11286541
Not yet, but we did get a bunch of mini comics.

Dewey is cute.
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>>11286541
Well it'd be best to go back under, I'm afraid it hasn't
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>>11286541
(Also, does anyone have the new one of these that was recently made?)
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>>11286562
yes he is

When are we getting a Dewey comic, Weaver?
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>>11286572
Here ya go
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>It's been a year and 4 months
>Nick still doesn't have a great model being used for porn
Unless I'm wrong, this is an attrocity
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>>11286465
It's been a while since I last got on a kick like that.

The War on Drugs new album has been one of the main things I have been listening to the last couple days: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=xqY2UgyTD1M
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>>11286602
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>>11286602
>>11286612
Continuation
WHEN?!
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>>11286601
I meant the new "oh you" meme somebody made, but that Weaver mini-comic was great.
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>>11286602
>>11286612
>Finnick denies knowing him at all
>Fru Fru is fearful to talk about it
And, most importantly,
>Fru Fru is wearing a wig
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>>11286602
>>11286612
whats the contexts for this
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>>11286603
>>Nick still doesn't have a great model being used for porn
Wasn't that high quality Judy model with clothes on a leaked official model? Too bad the same didn't happen with Nick.
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>>11285932
>>11285952
Whilst out for an evening stroll, Mr Clopton and his beloved were accosted by a ruffian who drew attention to the impractical design of horse hooves. Not willing to allow himself to be bested in a verbal joust, Mr Clopton was quick to provide a practical example in which horse hooves would be more then adequate.
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>>11286627
Ah OK.
My bad, Anon.
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>>11286570
looks odly 3d
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>>11286650
You're amazing. Thanks!
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>>11286650

"I'll shove it up your ass!"
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>>11286606
Well, thankfully, getting lost in the less well traveled corners of the internet seems to be working out beautifully for me thus far
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>>11286649
It wasn't official, it was a quickly made fan model that was made almost immediately.
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>>11286650
Poor hoofers, who would accost these poor stunted creatures so?!
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>>11286570

Ultra erotic set up. But holy shit those character models. True Horror.
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>>11286627
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>>11286650
>>11286669
Getting fisted by a hoofer would be terrible.
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>>11286710
>fisted
>hoofer
Also impossible.
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>>11286710

He probably wouldn't enjoy it, no.
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>>11286677
Sometimes Youtube gets on an amazing autoplay roll, like it did tonight.
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The jester needs to sleep, just a work in progress.
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>>11286646

>>11286602
>>11286612

This post >>11286038
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>>11286738
Gud needs to stop fucking dying
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>>11286738
Oh no, he tripped
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>>11286705
That's the one, thanks!

Who drew that BTW?
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>>11286379
I realised half way through I kind of zoomed in on Nick's Head. And the horrible proportions. So I deided to capitalise on my lack of skill by making it into a meme of sorts.

Maybe one more and Ill try to do>>11286191
tommorrow
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>>11286752
You've gotta find what you're good at in life and then keep doing it.
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>>11286705
Judy seems... displeased
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>>11286766
Rose
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>>11286720
Right, no fists, well how about "hoofed" then?
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>>11286738
Sleep tight, bunner!

>>11286650
Too funny, and I love the story that goes along with it!

>>11286705
I think this will see use...

>>11286738
Can't wait to see your next piece, buddy! Sleep tight, goater!

>>11286770
Heya buddy! Its great for a first drawing! And no worries, a lot of people here are here to practice and get better!
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>>11286770
Thanks anon.
>And the horrible proportions.
You will get better with practice, I believe in you anon.
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>>11286738
Sleep tight and have a comfy sleepyhead to push away those bad thoughts.
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>>11286602
>>11286612
>Judy and Nick get split up in AWAHO
>Nick is sent back to a world where he and Judy were never transported
>He's hounded by his doppelganger and by doppel-Judy, whom he has an inkling is not his Judy but part of him still holds out hope that he can salvage some of the situation by reaching out to her.

>Judy ends up in a world whose Judy was transported and never made it back, but Nick never existed. Her friends and coworkers believe her to be snapping under the stress of her unsolved kidnapping and everybody thinks she's crazy after hearing about hairless things that still kill and eat other animals
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>late summer in bunnyburrow
>the majority of young adult rabbits are enrolled in local agricultural colleges and trade programs
>farms host rotating groups of siblings from different families for training
>groups of friends live and work together for months
>in the hot fields all day and into the evenings
>dorms are not *officially* co-ed
>but in one corner of Hopps dorm #3, there's a quiet group of close friends that has turned bunk beds into a blanket fort
>a blanket fort where clothing is optional and just about anything goes


someone help me I'm putting actual thought into writing this
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>>11286738
Seriously, you worry me a lot of times.
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>>11286811
>>11286822
Thanks,

Anyone got a final request before i pop back to lurking?
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>>11286785
25% of the Unglish language is basically just "hoof".

>Hoofed him in the face
>Hoofed him up the ass
>Hoofed him a piece of pie
>Hoofed him over to the police

I can see how it'd get confusing for non-ungulates.
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>>11286876
You did a Nick, how about a Judy?
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>>11286885
"Hoof" in Unglish is like "gold" in Dwarfish.

Or "fuck" in English.
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>>11286904
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>>11286944
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>>11286885
>Hoofed him a piece of pie
Imagine how gross that would be and they would mangle the pie.
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>>11285643
>ニックは...いいお兄ちゃんにはなれないはね
Judy: "Nick, you... you could never become a good older brother、could you..."

>こんな紳士をつかまえといてよくいうよ
>安心しろ キツネは満月だからって野蛮なオオカミにならない
Nick: "Y'know, they say it's good for you to catch a gentleman like me
Settle down
Foxes don't turn into savage wolves whenever there's a full moon"

>あのね 考えてあげる 兄っていうのはね、わざとらしい親切はないの 自然なのよ
Judy: "About that
Allow me to teach you
A big brother's kindness wouldn't feel forced
It'd just come naturally"
>おれは押し付けがましいかい
>妹扱いされるのがのんなに嫌いか
Nick: "You think I'm being too pushy about it?
Do you hate me treating you like a little sister that much?"

>そうかもね
Judy: "I do, because I think"
>私 あなたのことがすきだもの
Judy: "I, it's because I love you"

>それは、
>いやらしい意味でか?
Nick: "Do you mean that
in an indecent way?"
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>>11286885
>hoof gloves
>hoof shoes
>solid hoof
>cloven hoof
>hoof held
>hoof job

This language doesn't make any hoofing sense.
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Why are Gideon and Travis the purest and most lovingest couple in Zootopia?
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>>11287003

>>11285651
>い いやらしい?
Judy: "I- indecent?"
>ーあぁ、
>間違えた
Nick: "--- Aah,
it seems I'm mistaken"

>ニンジン、おれをオスとしてかっこいいと感じたごとがあるか?
Nick: "Carrots, Have you ever gotten a cool, manly vibe from me?"
>...ないわ ニックはニックってかんじ
Judy: "... No, you give off a very 'Nick-ish' vibe"

>胸がこ高鳴ったことは?
Nick: "Have you felt your chest throb?"
>ハラハラしたって意味ならしょっちゅうね!
Judy: "If you mean my heart pattering then all the time!"

>ご心配どうも
Not sure if Nick or Judy actually: "Thanks for the concern"
>だったらやっぱりおれの部屋は安心だよ
>そこは君の意向を反映するからな
Nick: "In that case, my place should be a relief to you
Since it reflects your intentions"

>変なの あなたの住処なのに
>ならあなたの気持ちはどこへ帰るの?
Judy: "That's strange
Even though it's your residence
if that's the case, where will your feelings return to?"

>君のほうが変だ
>おれの心はどこかへ出かけてうろうろしない
Nick: "You're the weirder one
My heart doesn't go out and aimlessly wander
>ずっとここでじじっとしてるさ いい子だからな
Nick: "It always stays patiently right here
because they're a good kid" (TN: THEY SAID THE TITLE OH MAN HOW CRAZY)
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>>11287055
They live in Bunnyburrow, stupid
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>>11287059

>>11285661
>ひゃーっ!
Judy: "Hya---!"
>早く早く
Either Nick or Judy: "Quickly, quickly!"

>ああもう サイアク!どうして!?満月がでてたのに!
Judy: "Aah, geez! Why!? Even though the full moon came out!"
>君がさっさと仕事を切り上げなかったからだろ
Nick: "It's because you didn't finish your work quickly enough"

>よーし だいたい乾いた
Nick: "Theeere we go, pretty much dry now" (TN: he shook himself dry like a dog in the previous panel)
>カギ カギと...
Nick: "Keys, where are my keys..."
>あーっ
Judy: "AH---"

>ニックずるーい!
Judy: "Nick, that's unfaaair!" (TN: ずるい can mean "sly/cunning/dishonest/unfair)
>ニンジンもぶるぶるーってしなよ
Nick: "You should really shake yourself off too"

>先にシャワー使わせてやろ
>床をびしょびしょされたら敵わないからな
Nick: "You can use the shower first
If I got the floor all soaked, you'd be no match for it"
>着替えどうする
Nick: "What should I do about a change of clothes, though"
>あ!
Judy: "Ah!"

>...乾燥機にかけるわ その間なにか貸してくれる?
Judy: "I'll put my stuff in the dryer
In the meantime, do you have anything to lend me?"
>君が嫌いじゃないならいいけど... たぶんキツネくさいぞ
Nick: "If you don't hate it, it's fine, but...
It'll probably reek of fox, though"
>構わないわ
Judy: "I don't mind"

>パパだったら気絶しちゃうわね
Judy: "If he were a dad, I'd be swooning right now"
>準備しとくから入りな
Nick: "I'm getting it ready, so don't come in yet"
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>>11287055
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>>11287034
oh smurf you
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>>11287055

thats not how you spell 'al and velvet'
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>>11286992
Would a pawed mammal just grab a chunk of pie in their fingers and drop it on a plate?

Perhaps a pie server would be in order, hoofer or not.
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>>11287089

That's not how you spell "Sydney and Artemis".
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>>11287077
>>11285672
>パシャ パシャ...
SFX: pasha pasha... (Shower noises)

>君のことが心配だよニンジン
Nick: "I'm worried about you, Carrots"
>こんな簡単に信用して
Nick: "How easily you put your faith in me"
>いくら動物が進化しようと本能は消せない
>むかし天敵だった奴の寝床の匂いは
>くさくて 不快で こわいだろう
Nick: "No matter how much we animals have evolved, you can't erase your instincts
The smell of the bed of your natural enemy from ancient times
it reeks
it's uncomfortable
it's terrifying"

>おれは キツネはみんな、嫌いな匂いがするんだろ
>自分ではわからないからやっかいだ
Nick: "Because I'm a fox, I give off a smell that everyone hates
Because I don't smell it on my own, it's a huge burden"
>わからないよ
Nick: "I don't understand"
>噓つきの匂いっていったいどんな匂いがするんだ?
Nick: "What in the world does a liar's smell even smell like?"
>そりゃ詐欺師としてだまそうと考えたことは多くあったけど
Nick: "So as a hustler, there were a lot of times I thought I could trick people, but
>幼い時は信じてほしいことがたくさんあった
Nick: "When I was younger, I wanted to believe in a lot of things"

>君にもいつか必ずキツネの匂いに顔をゆがめる瞬間がやってくる
Nick: "Eventually, that fox smell if going to cause your face to grimace as well"
>理性では信じていても本能が危険だって叫ぶんだ みんな、 そうだった
Nick: "Even though you believe in me, your instincts will scream out that you're in danger
That's what it did to everyone else"
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>>11287094
>Perhaps a pie server would be in order, hoofer or not
But how would they hold such a thing anon?
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>>11287098
That's not how you spell "Remmy and Betty."
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Hey, zoopals! Fanart again!

Thought I'd drop one more pic tonight since I've been kind of practicing my speed. Hope you enjoy!
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Goodnight /ZTG/
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>>11287120
That's not how you spell "Betty and Wolter."
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>>11287111
Same way they'd hold anything else.
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>>11287145
That's because Betty and Wolter is not as pure as Sheepdog you fucking n00b.
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>>11287129
You've certainly been on a WildeSavage lewd kick lately (not that it's a bad thing).
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>>11287159
That's not how you spell "best ship we didn't know we needed", best friend anon.
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>>11287129
dang Jack is limber
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>>11287179
Hey there Chum pal buddy ol' friend ol' pal of mine my homeslice breadslice I don't want to have to do this pal friendo buddy Chum but if you don't diddley darn stop that I'm gonna have to diddley darn REEE you.
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>>11286752
Oh my God, he's killed gud, again!
You bastard.
>Come back next week when he does it again.
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>>11287101
Also worth noting that I'll probably be able to do another four or so pages once next thread rolls around

Feelin' kind of on a roll today; those pages were pretty text heavy and it didn't take me as long as I thought it would
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>>11287133
Sleeeeeep tight bunner!
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GAY

COUNTRY

BOYS
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>>11287145
That's not how you spell "Charlie and Wolter"
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/ztg/, it's the middle of the night, and I'm bored. Show me a good, well written fic that I can really get into. Everything I've read so far with the exception of pack street has been poorly written garbage
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>>11287346
Is she asking if he had the baby naturally? Through a woman?
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>>11287368
No, she's actually asking if the baby came out of his dick.
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>>11287380
Not dick. Mpreg usually states that they are ass babies.

Don't ask why.
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>>11287129
>jack be limber
>jack be quick
>jack jizzed in two minutes, god damn bunny slow the fuck down
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>>11287129
Yyyyyyesssss

I love your Savage, fanart. And handsfree is patrician tier
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>Pack Street updates
>But your favorite character isn't in the new chapter
do you think you can handle it anon?
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>>11287355
Have you read Falke's stuff? His main series is nice and long, and extremely well written.

https://archiveofourown.org/works/6528139/chapters/14934682
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>>11287350
I don't care what anyone say these two look cute together
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>>11287531
>Pack Street
>update
fucking kek
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I may or may not have the time to draw tonight when I return home, but if I have it I can make another zoosona portrait like pic related before launching myself on TT.
Tell me who, anons.
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>>11287594
This is for later but we have a drawanon who said they'd like a redline. You up for it?
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>>11287531
yes because I enjoy the story as a whole instead of just waifuing one character and ignoring everything else
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>>11287594
How about one of Rinehart?
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Anon earlier wanted to see me make a ref for my skunk. I honestly spent far too much time on this.
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>>11287101
Small edits
>自分ではわからないからやっかいだ
Nick: "Because I don't know what it is on my own, it's a burden"

>そりゃ詐欺師としてだまそうと考えたことは多くあったけど
Nick: "So as a hustler, there were a lot of things I thought I could trick people about, but
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>>11287712
The effort you put into things is always appreciated!

She's a super cutie!
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>>11287712
I really love that skunker, she's damn cute! If only we had more...
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>>11287712
I half expect her to have her own TV show
>>11287844
Foxbutt is a skunk, though I havent seen him around for a while
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>>11287860
He's a damn cute skunker too, I wonder where he has been? Hopefully rocking out somewhere out there.
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>>11287101
Thanks for doing these translation bear
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>>11287875
Ya, hope he's doing good
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>>11287368
A few pages before this she was talking with Judy about her and Nick adopting kids since they can't breed naturally.

Gideon and Travis are such a cute couple.
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>>11287712
She's a cutie, but so much lewder than the red panda
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>>11287712
that's pretty nice
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>>11287989
I kinda wish Travis had gone into a four legged run there, he's so close! Plus I just wanna see more on all fours action...
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I need pictures.

Pictures of buns getting licked. (But not for sexual.)
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>>11288091
does this count?
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>>11287712
THIS IS RAD

she's hella cute dude
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>>11287712

I love skunk. So pretty.
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ask this bun anything
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>>11288127
Are you a lop? And what do you think of pred dick?
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>>11288127
how do you keep your head upright with big floppy ears?
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>>11288127
If I pull off the mask, will you die?
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>>11288127
Are you been properly bunished? Do you need governmental assistance like VRbit?
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>>11288127
Did you know that if you squint your nose becomes a mouth and your mouth becomes a chin and you look like a cheerful version of those green alien badguys from the Ewoks cartoon?
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>>11288252
Been, being... damn it's time to sleep.

Have a good night yall, hope to see what rad stuff yall come up with in the morning!
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Greentext Theater is done, today was a wonderful day, we even got to see new artists!

Yet another amazing day at /ztp/.

Goodnight, magical and wonderful /ztp/ threads! I hope you're inspired to come up with an idea that inspires.
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>>11288127
please help, i accidentally orderd 50 boxen of doughnuts
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>>11288300
Sleep tight, bunner!
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>>11288150
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>>11288330
>knotsicle
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>>11288127
What do you think of Judy?
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>>11288302
Sleep is for the weak!
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>>11288302
Goodnight bun, may you sleep the sleep of a soft badger.

>>11288309
Thank you, I will try.

>>11288330
You lewd bunner... keep being rad.
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Is it really true that you go to Zootopia when you die?
Asking for a friend.
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>>11288158
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I need more Kris and Nick.
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>>11287628
Sure. Let's see, the lines are pretty nice (though sometimes there is a little too much weight, like her left leg) and the coloring too.
The anatomy, instead, presents some errors.
Like another anon said, she has three-fingered hooves as her hands. The muzzle also as some errors, see pic related. Her nose and mouth are part of the same "piece", that is a little longer than the one drawn.
Her privates are a tad too high, also the lower line of them should be covered by the one of the wool.
Her left breast is a little too high. This would be right if she was arching her back a little more, though.
Her eyebrows are much bigger.
Also there is not a flap of skin between her hooves and the rest of the foot, it is all smooth.
Here, these are the errors that require the most attention.
It is clear that they know how to draw, but they are still not 100% adapted to the Zootopia anatomy.

>>11287698
I've drawn him recently, but since there are no other suggestions...

>>11288127
Hi Mint! Is your Tumblr Brermint, right?
Because I tried to link it here https://justasignature.tumblr.com/post/164688997802/and-here-it-is-finally-my-food-and-cooking-tt but it didn't work

>>11288302
>>11288300
Sleep tight bunner!

>>11288549
Indeed
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>>11288418
please don't
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>>11288360
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>>11288579
Thank you for all you do, hope the artist finds this useful
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>>11288695
Jesus
Blink once for safe, twice for help
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>>11288115
Reminder to do a card
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>>11288579
AAAA THAT'S SO AWESOME!
and yeah, it's brermint.tumblr.com; dunno why it wouldn't link.
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>>11288695
Unrelated entirely, what's your girlfriend's opinion of Nick?
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>>11288127
What do you have done with the fox you met?
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>>11285704
>>11285736
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>>11288871
I thought you'd like that one...
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>>11288844
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>>11288871
The Kris is nice, the background is REEEEEEEEEEEEEE
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>>11288886
>>11289007
Wrong link too
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>>11285736
Where's all the size play three somes with her Judy and Nick.
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>>11288127
You look too gay to be a buck, are you sure that you even have a girl friend?
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So was it Fanart that lewded the chamois?
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How would you let someone down easy?

Would it be better to say you're already involved with someone else?

Or better to say you just want to be friends?
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>>11289209
He'll never know.
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>>11289245
Honesty
best
policy
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>>11289245
Zootopia?
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>>11289245
Just want to be friends is the worst, cause it makes them think they're not good enough to be in a relationship with you. Whatcha wanna do is tell them that you don't like them that way straight up and that while you're willing to be friends, you don't think that a relationship higher than that would be good for either of you.

If however this is Nick x Judy related, you shut your whore mouth and you put them together!
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>>11289267

I hate to hurt someone's feelings
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>>11289280
>If however this is Nick x Judy related, you shut your whore mouth and you put them together!
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I found this old work of mine again while talking up new ideas with another writer. https://archiveofourown.org/works/8000236

I'm surprised I actually still like it. Normally I hate anything as soon as I'm finished writing it (Sometimes literally minutes after), but aside from some spacing problems I really do like it still. Bizzare.
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>>11289287
I do too
That's why I'm honest with them
You tell them straight and they feel bad for a night or you say you want them to suffer for a while
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>>11289308
Thats cool man, try going through old work to see what you think, and do some notes on what you thinko f them all
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>>11289280
>Just want to be friends is the worst, cause it makes them think they're not good enough to be in a relationship with you. Whatcha wanna do is tell them that you don't like them that way straight up and that while you're willing to be friends, you don't think that a relationship higher than that would be good for either of you.

Thanks for your input. My friends say I should be honest and just say the truth but this is a 10+ year friendship. They broke up with their SO and since then have been calling me every day (literally every day for almost two weeks, I haven't answered since last Sunday and have barely texted), not for support but like a SO replacement.

I just got a text that from them that made me realize this will not go away by my ignoring them and I will have to say something.
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>>11289330

What did the text say?
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>>11289310

I guess I would lie if it would make them suffer less. But I guess even if I say I'm attached now, it might still make them think there is a chance in the future where there is absolutely none.
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>>11289347
>What did the text say?

I haven't texted back since Sunday, and they have sent me 7 messages since.

It literally went from "hope you're doing well" to "I picked up a book, I'll let you know how it is" to "I could search a thousand lifetimes and never find a soul like yours."

Now I know I can't sweep this under the rug, and I need to say something.
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>>11289396
>Yo, dude, its not going to happen. Please don't make this weird, we're friends.
>Anyway I need to know if this game is good, you play it yet?
Presto.
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>>11289396
>"I could search a thousand lifetimes and never find a soul like yours."

Oh daaaaaaaamn, I recognize this level of intensity, broken on the inside already and desperately trying to find a lifeline/glue to hold the pieces together. Daaaaaaaamn, I feel for your friend, they're in a baaaaad place.
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>we just call them nighthowlers is finally wrapping up

Y'know. I'm half-surprised the author didn't have a chapter or We Just Call Them Extras where Nick rents out Judy's worn out vag to a family of mice. I mean, it was practically one chapter away from being that Zaush comic
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>>11289408
>We Just Call Them Extras where Nick rents out Judy's worn out vag to a family of mice

I keep seeing this story mentioned and I'm getting really weird conception about this thing, what's the deal neal?
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>>11289396
>>11289405 this
You treat it like its no big deal, then they arent crushed
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>>11289396
Meet them in person.
The impersonality of messages lets wrong ideas to mature quicker.
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>>11289424
Starts out kind of in character with Nick doing things to try to embarrass Judy that backfire on him. To eventually Judy becoming an intatiably horny rabbit slut the same caliber Trisha is (author's horny OC rabbit).
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>>11289439
Naw that'll open the opportunity to let it get weird man
You don't want him crying on someone's shoulder, you just tell them to get it out of their head and thirst for something else
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>>11289407
Yeah, I been there. So shaken in your ability to run your own life that you're desperate to give it away to what few people you're still capable of trusting.
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>>11289405
>>11289407
>>11289436
>>11289439

Thanks for the input anons, I really do appreciate it. If it matters, I'm female and he's male, so I'm trying to get a male perspective on this, on what to say so I don't really hurt his feelings.

Can't ghost him because we've been friends so long. Also we live far enough apart where saying this in person wouldn't be something I'd do. I'd rather text than call to be concise, I'm not sure what I would say if he confessed his feelings over the phone.
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>>11289503
I'll wish you luck
Don't make my mistake, just rip that bandaid off.
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>>11289503

If he really is your friend, he'll understand. If not, well I don't think thats something a good friend would do to another

GL
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>we could realize what this artist likes most about a female, just by looking at this pic
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>>11289640
They have damn fine taste
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>>11289424
The main fic or Extras? Well the main fic is:

>Judy and Nick are friends but Judy wants something more.
>Judy and Nick meet Trisha a OC bunny bartender or something, who immediately starts to hit on the both of them.
>Judy admits her feelings to Nick and Nick rebuffs her. (He actually does love her but was to scared or some shit)
>Trisha swoops in an catches Judy on the rebound and they start a relationship/have sex with each other and stay together.
>Nick finally admits he loves Judy when she is about ready to explode while strapped to a bomb.
>Nick and Judy get together and Judy stays friends with Trisha. But "Gets to still make out with her whenever she wants since she still cares for her."
>And Trisha gets together with a painted dog OC called Delta.
>We later find out she's some kind of crazy amazing sniper or fighter and super fucking special and one-of-a-kind and other shit.
>Judy looks to being dying after being exploded by a bomb this time in the 2nd to last chapter.
>Author only cares enough to say that it's not like he would EVER want Trisha to get hurt or anything. Ignoring want had just happened to Nick and Judy.

Extra's is a bunch of OC one-off stuff and where all the smut the author makes is located. Namely a 4-5 part series with Nick/Judy/Trisha in a 3-way relationship. Trisha acts like a major slut in it, even more so the the main fic.

And another chapter where Nick and Judy are together and they swing with Trisha and Delta.

Some time ago the author took down Extra's since he didn't want people to view Trisha in that light. (He said that that's not in her character, after all.) But later puts it back up anyways. And she continues to act like a major sexed up whore in it and the main fic. Numerous other authors have used her as as cameo for some reason.
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>>11289653
>nay, "tails" should be the best taste!
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>>11289640
but why
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>>11289659
>busty horny bunny
gee, I wonder why they "used" her?
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>>11289670
don't use that as a thumbnail, the proportion is really off in it
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Need u translation bear
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>>11289685
>proto Jude
>with boobs
I have very mixed feeling about this one
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>>11289699

Most concept art with her as a pretty noticeable hump in her jump suit. Leads to either thinking she as a pretty large dewlap, or just breasts. (It's a pretty easy way to differentiate between Judy's after all.)
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>>11289640
All the proportions here are strangely off

>>11289659
And this, anons, is how you DON'T use correctly an OC. You can see the author is more enamored to their own characters than the original work.
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>>11289659
>Well the main fic is:
>(hideous self-insertion Mary Sue garbage)
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Gnite ztg
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>>11289764
stb tight bunner
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>>11289685
Fuck you asshole
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>>11289790

It's okay, anon. It'll all be alright.
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>>11289308
This is a good thing.
Finding old work that you still like, be it writing or drawing or other, is a rare (and pleasant) experience for a CC.
But also an opportunity. Find WHY you like it, what that work has that others do not, and use it to better yourself and your craft.
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>>11287154
He should have used a metal one, not the cheap made put of platic you get for a Quarter and Bug Burgas.
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>>11289819

Seems a lot simpler. No narriration or great exposition on the background, just a simple character driven back and forth.
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>>11289823

for a second i thought you were talking about chastity cages and got really confused
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heya ztg do you have any pictures you want colored?
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>>11289851
Anything that Gud's done is a candidate in my book. I don't have it on hand, but that pic he did of skye in a car filling with smoke comes to mind - does any other anon have it?
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>>11289851

Is smut fine?
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>>11289640
Holy shit I thought that first panel was Nick's dick in Judy's face in the thumbnail.
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>>11289851
This one please, only if you have time of course.
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My cat honks
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>>11289831
Good.
A story, at the core, has only two protagonists, the characters and the environment and the plot is how they interact with themselves and between themselves.
How much space you give to one or the other or their actions is an author's choice, and also a distinctive trait of them.
For example, Tolkien liked a lot the description of the environment. He loved creating a world and showing them to others.
You, instead, prefer to let the characters do the talking, show everything, advance the plot.
While the former style makes it easier to describe the situation (because it is literally what it is doing), it is usually heavier to read. Yours instead should be easier on the reader. However you must find the right "rhythm", otherwise there is a too big disparity between the reader expectations and what is written. The back and forth should feel natural, not forced, the narration should be introduced organically in the discourse. To do this the characters must be well fleshed and psychologically well defined, they must have a natural rhythm to them that they follow continuously along the story. For example, Marty is an angry little librarian tube. His voice is full of energy, he always goes on point fast but his vocabulary is still well researched.
Remember, without much background narration a character must be easily recognizable by their "voice". One does not need to read "[X] said" at the end of the paragraph to recognize that it was X talking.
I hope this can be of help.
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>>11289685
>ウサギってね 愛好家が多いの試してみる?
(TN: This is really weirdly phrased, so this translation could be completely off)
Proto-Judy: "You've got a lot of rabbit fans, want to give one a try?"
>私がそう言って手を出さない男を見たことがない。
Proto-Judy: "I've yet to see a man who could keep their hands still after I say that"

>我慢しなくてもいいのよ?
Proto-Judy: "It's fine if you lose control, right?"
>ほら。男なんてとっても単純
Proto-Judy: "There we are. Men are so simple"

>大人をからかうもんじゃない
Nick: "Don't tease an adult like that"

>面白いじゃない。
Proto-Judy: "No fun."
>なるほど。うちのニコラスとは違うキツネって訳ね
Proto-Judy: "I see. Must be because you're a different fox from my Nicholas"
>続かないーーーーー!
To not be continued-----!
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>>11289851
This one, please
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>>11289975
That was strange and entertaining. Thank you
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>>11289975
>To not be continued-----!
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>>11289920
>it's actually a furcoat Annake made for Remmy
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Would Remmy go 500 miles for anyone of Pack Street.
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>>11290155
500 miles away maybe
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>>11290155

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=VBBFDb0hC4Y !?
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>>11289851

I'll throw my hat into the ring here and vote for this one.
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>>11289886
i prefer smut, but i'll do both

do you know the artist?
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>>11290220
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>>11290220
Did you colored it?



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